Hi Friends , here is the review of My life is ur smile – Ek deewana tha ff by a very sweet writer Dishani
TITLE – Your title is very sweet & I loved it .
CONCEPT – Concept is actually good & full of suspense but still it’s very common . I love how u revealing secrets with the pace of story.Characters are well written & the bonding between them is appreciable.
DIALOGUES – That’s good u are giving importance to each character but don’t give them useless dialogues. Keep ur dialogues relatable .
WRITING STYLE -Your writing style is pretty cool. Try to avoid short forms . Your way of revaling secrets is fabulous . You just have to take care of punctuation.
STORY MOULDING – You are moulding ur story in perfect way with blend of secrets & mysteries . I am loving the way how u holding the suspense & make a tight grip on ur readers.
FLAWS – Use punctuation properly & check ur article before submitting to avoid grammatical mistakes. Try to write some heart touching dialogues & enhance ur vocabulary.
Rating – 7/10
Those who want lot of mysteries with love story , they will surely follow her ff .
Hope u don’t get hurt with ur review . We try our best to be honest .
Stay blessed & Keep writing .
Regards
Hania, Neha & Negisanyukta
5 Comments
Thanks a lot dear it’s my pleasure to read my mistakes and obey that.. I really need this to improve my ff and I’m also new this ff writing so thanks a lot for your favor I’ll try to improve from 7-10?? thanks
First of all thanks for understanding dear & this is not any favour . I like ur spirit & my expectation is more from young talented writers like u . Of course i would love to read how u will improve , so please send me links whenever u update ur ff .Thank you & Take care
Thanks a lot I’ll send my link
Hi dishani01
Are u not in watt pad
I had search in wattpad
Plz tell me and clear my doubt
no dear I’m only in here and writing only 2 ff currently and firstly ..