Hi all, here is the review of Forbidden love by a very amazing writer AMkideewani .
TITLE – I love ur title . Perfectly suited on storyline .
CONCEPT – Concept is amazing . I never watch divergent series but u make me fall in love with it concept from ur imagination . I love the way how u portray emotions in ur ff . You are not rushing with mysteries & story . That’s really good . Chemistry between Four & tris is awesome .
DIALOGUES – Dialogues are on point & beautifully written but still my expectation is more from u . Try to write some heart touching dialogues in emotional scenes.
WRITING STYLE – This is what ur ff is worth reading . Your writing style is very clean, beautifully described. I love the way how u showing a situation from pov of both the leads. I really like how u always end ur chapters on cliffhangers which make readers curious about next update.
STORY MOULDING- I must say it is going in right direction . You have enough ability to make ur readers glued to ur story . There are not much chapters that’s why I don’t tell u more but I know u can manage well.
FLAWS- I don’t find any flaws in ur story except few grammatical errors which are very common. Check ur article before submitting to avoid them . Try to write some more intense dialogues for ur leads.
Rating – 8.5/10
Congrats dear , u get highest ranking in review book till now. Well done.You are free to send me link, I would love to follow ur fabulous book.
I am seriously disappointed with response , you deserve more readers . You are such a talented writer.
Those who love cliffhangers ,mysteries & a twisted love story , they will surely follow this ff . Believe me it’s a worth reading book.
Hope u don’t feel hurt. Keep writing & Stay blessed.
Regards
Hania, Negisanyukta & Neha
5 Comments
Sam meri aur se 9.9 B) hain ….love you naagin.
Aww Bhaggu bhaiyu that’s so sweet of you. Love ya app ki crazy behen????????
Thank you so much for the review and I never knew that someone will like it and would love to read more.
You should read the Divergent series, I haven’t read the second book, but I wouldn’t be able read the third book as my heart would break.
Thank you for the compliments dear???❤️❤️❤️???
I will make sure that I don’t make any grammatical errors and recheck all the parts of the story.
Sure I will send you the link to the latest chapter on PM as well as the other site, where I write this story and other ones?
Thank you for understanding . Glad to know that u like our works . Take care & Stay safe ? . You deserve those compliment that’s why no need of thanks.
Aww so sweet of ya???