Hi guys , here is the review of Swaragini -few shots written by same writer Shivika Oberoi.
TITLE – I think you seriously need to change your title because it is not suited in story .Your story had 100 chapters , so the title ‘few shots’ is not going with story
CONCEPT- Plot is not very different like your previous story the magical one but still it is appealing. All the characters are bold & realistic.Bonding between your characters is always fabulous.
DIALOGUES- Dialogues are good but need to write more realistic dialogues as I say before. You have to write relative dialogues .
WRITING STYLE – I am always a fan of your writing . Your writing style is simple as well as attractive. Every thing in your story well written . You don’t drag anything unnecessary , that’s good.
STORY MOULDING- u really love u how u end the story without dragging . You twists & turns in story is not seems forceful. I read your full story & it is just fab.
FAULTS – Keep take care of grammatical errors & dialogues.
Rating – 8/10
Those who want to read story with a bold female character . Go ahead & read her beautiful story.
Hope u like the review .
Regards
Hania