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Reversed Destinies (RagLak) 1

AstraBy AstraSeptember 3, 201738 Comments8 Mins Read
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Reversed Destinies Episode 1

Hello buddies,

We have seen many fan versions for sR different tracks. But, this track will be completely different..
This track goes back of 20 years..

When Janaki comes to know Shekar has a relation with Sharmista. Now, everything will change.
Janaki is not over reacted but feels sad for the shattered love story of Shekar and Shomi. Then, Daadi enters and frustrates on Shomi.
Janaki tries to prevent Daadi.

Now,

Shomi is standing at the edge of steps. Daadi was scolding Shomi, Janaki holds Daadi.. but she pushes her..
Daadi’s hand accidentally touches Shomi and Shomi falls of from steps..

Shekar, Janaki and Daadi shocks.

Janaki and Shekar runs near Shomi who was lying in pool of blood. Swara who is a two months baby comes there crawling crying.

Shomi: shekar, swara is your daughter.. please take care of swara..

Janaki(in tears): swara is my elder daughter from today shomi, swara is my daughter..
Shomi smiles and leaves her last breath. Shekar cries holding Shomi and Janaki takes swara into her hands and cries.

The screen freezes.

After one year.. Janaki gives birth to a baby girl. They name her Ragini.

Shekar and Janaki have left Daadi and they are staying with Dida now.

Janaki:: Shekar ji, not just Ragini.. but swara is also my daughter.. so, don’t worry..

Shekar smiles.

The screen freezes again..

———(After 20 years)——–

Shekar and Janaki receives Ap, Dp and Laksh. They will sit.

Janaki:: i will bring swara..

Ap and Dp nods their head. Laksh was silent. His phone rings, “Just a minute, an important call..”
He takes an excuse and goes aside.

Laksh was talking in the phone.

“I’m feeling nervous, we came to see a girl..” LAksh is saying.

“Bhayya, don’t panic. You are a boy..!! be strong and talk in modern way.. don’t be sanskari..!!” Uttara says.

Laksh smiles and nods his head.

Then, he hears a shout of a girl, “Ahhh”

Laksh shocks and looks aside…

A girl was wearing dark pink lehenga, a choli has fell on her face… and she couldn’t see anything…
Her legs were trying to balance on skating shoes, she was sliding on legs along the corridor,.. she comes towards Laksh in such a speed, before Laksh realizes what is happening..!

That girl bumps into Laksh, Laksh’s phone falls aside.. and She falls in Laksh’s arms. They both are in filmy pose now… she has wrapped her hands around his neck without falling.

{guys, we have to admit a fact.. how many times we may see this scene in movies or shows.. still we love this scene.. right..!!}

Laksh was holding her in his arms and she was looking at him in shock. Laksh can look at her slightly from that half transparent choli.. her big eyes, small lips and cute cheeks.

“Make me stand, i’m going to fall..” that girl says in staggering tone. Laksh makes her stand, but she slips again being couldn’t balance on those wheel shoes.

“ahh,..” she shouts again and about to fall.. now, Laksh holds her from front.

Laksh:: easy.. easy..
He says.

As there is no other option, that girl stands holding Laksh’s hand, she removes the choli on her head now.

Laksh gets mesmerized to see that face which was hidden under the choli till now. Her face is revealed as Ragini. She was seemed annoyed with everything.. but, her face is looking even more cutest.
Laksh was just looking at her being lost.

Ragini removes her shoes in annoyance.
“I will never ever get skating again..!!” she sighs. And then, looks at Laksh who was looking at her.

“Hey, who is this??” she asks looking at him. Laksh then comes into world,

“Laksh.. Laksh Maheswari” he says.

Ragini bulges her eyes as soon as she hears that name.

“Damnnnn…!!” she says and runs back holding her lehenga a little up.

Laksh was still looking at her in enlarged smile.

Ap from inside,
“Laksh, come here..!! swara has come..!!”

Laksh then goes inside. He was just a little surprised to see swara who was sitting before them wearing a modern dress.

Ap and Dp are seemed not pleased at all. Janaki and Shekar were also looking at her in upset.

Swara was not even paying attention towards Laksh. Laksh was lost at the girl whom he bumped.

After sometime having a little talk, Dp and his family leaves.

Janaki:: swara, why are you doing like this?? See, they will not come back to us to marry you.. if you behave like this.

Swara: maa plz, i wanted to select a groom on myself. Please, give me freedom..!

Janaki sighs. Shekar looks at Ragini who was looking everything silently.

“Ragini, swara never listens to us. At least you listen to us. Promise me, that you will marry a guy whom we choose.”
Shekar says.

Ragini smiles,

“Yes Papa.. I will marry the guy whom you see.” Ragini says.

Janaki too smiles. Then, swara hugs Janaki..

“Maa, now are you happy..??” she asks. Janaki smiles.

Screen zooms to Ragini’s face with a fast guitar music in back ground.

The screen shifts to a girl who is playing guitar on stage madly…, her friends are closing their ears.

“Ragini… stop..!!” they shouts.

Ragini stops the guitar with a high pitch tone. Her friends sigh.

Friend 1: arey, what happened 2 u yar??

Ragini sings in rhythamic way..

‘why always Ragini has to adjust?’
(a guitar sound)

‘why Ragini has to sacrifice..?’
(a guitar sound)

Now Ragini in high pitch… “Have i born to sacrifice..????”
(guitar music follows)

Friend2: dude..!! now stop the drama and say what happened??

Ragini then sings,
“Sonuuu… it’s a big story..!!”

Her friends corous, “story..??”

Ragini:: sonu, i was modern..!!

Friends: modern..!!

Ragini:: sonu, i act traditional..!

Friends: to make your parents happy..!!

Ragini:: now i gave a promise… that i will do shaadi, on their wish..!!

(Guitar music turns into a tragic music)

Her friends become calm and look at her.

Ragini: why are you silent?

Then her both friends laugh.

Ragini irritated:: don’t laugh yar. I wanted to be modern always, but sacrificed for swara as my parents asked at least one girl should listen to them..! today, i have sacrificed my wish to do love marriage again for her.

Friend2: why are you interested in love marriage?? You will get love in arranged marriage too..

Ragini keeps the guitar sadly at a side.

“You guys don’t know my story. My story is different from you all. You will understand once if you see my parents..!!” Ragini says and silently goes out.

Friend1: what happened to her??

At MM,

Laksh was checking one file. Ap brings a cup of milk to Laksh.

Ap: Laksh, have you not slept yet?

Laksh:: i was checking for the project file maa. I will sleep later.

Ap smiles and sits beside him.

Ap:: think about you sometimes Laksh. Always only work??

Laksh smiles.

Ap: what do you think about swara?

Laksh: maa, nothing on my side. Your wish is my wish.

Ap:: but at least tell me, what kind of a girl do you want?

Laksh puts file aside and he keeps head on Ap’s lap.

“Maa, whenever i see you and dad i feel so admired. I want a wife who takes care of her husband just like you maa. I want my and my wife’s relation just sweet as yours and dad’s.”
Laksh says. Ap smiles.

Laksh: i will marry the girl whom you show maa.

Ap smiles and goes out. Laksh grabs his comfortor to sleep, and then he looks at Jhumki which is stuck to his sherwani.

Laksh takes to his hand. Ragini’s shining face comes into his mind.

“who is she?” Laksh thinks.

At Gadodiya house,

Ragini was holding Shomi’s picture.

“Maa, if you and papa would have married.. your love would have been successful..!!”
Ragini cries looking at her photo.

She is thinking Shomi is her real mother. Just then, Janaki enters the room.. Ragini hides that photo.

Janaki: what are you seeing beta?

Ragini:: nothing maa.. I love you..!!

Ragini says and hugs Janaki. Janaki kisses her head.

“I really love you maa. You gave me the true mother love..!!” Ragini buries her head in Janaki’s lap.

—————————-

Hello buddies, if you like this plot, give a like and comment.. and forget not to stay tuned to Astra’s channel of creation..!!

Imagination is our World.

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    38 Comments

    1. kitkat on September 3, 2017 2:10 pm

      awesome one sweetheart…… I loved it a lot…… I was really missing ur stories dear……

    2. Follybraverl on September 3, 2017 2:26 pm

      Hey astra superb concept yaar
      Waiting for next part

    3. abi on September 3, 2017 2:42 pm

      Seeing your name shocked me and unexpected
      Because whenevr I read your ff
      In the beggining itself I can identify you
      But it totally different from your other ffs
      Your writing style eveything different
      Anyways the ff is amazing astra

    4. Seema on September 3, 2017 2:44 pm

      Swasan

    5. Balaji on September 3, 2017 3:52 pm

      awesome di

    6. Jyo on September 3, 2017 4:17 pm

      Awesome pls continue

    7. aleeza on September 3, 2017 4:34 pm

      Awesome

    8. Aamy on September 3, 2017 5:14 pm

      Awesome

    9. Raglak_fan on September 3, 2017 5:24 pm

      Fantastic dear

    10. Anju on September 3, 2017 5:52 pm

      Superb episode

    11. bushrafaheem123 on September 3, 2017 6:04 pm

      amazing astra always love ue stories

    12. Soumya on September 3, 2017 6:54 pm

      Superb di…post next soon

    13. shrilatha on September 3, 2017 6:55 pm

      Not fair akka janki in the process of giving motherly love to swara made ragini to think that she is the step daughter…loved it akka…

    14. Naymaz on September 3, 2017 7:29 pm

      Awesome di , yes eagerly waiting for raglak

    15. Puni on September 3, 2017 7:33 pm

      Poor Ragini don’t know the truth

    16. Malu on September 3, 2017 7:55 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    17. raksha on September 3, 2017 8:11 pm

      Awesome really a different idea.l read it from wattpad n loved the idea of lakshya as ragu n ragu as lakshya.but sad about -here also swara is getting everything n ragu is still suffering. You are really great.you always comes with unique ideas and I love your all the ff’s..Thanks for all RAGLAK ff’s.n just a request please update ur new ff from wattpad here too like “what are you doing?” I love this ff.

    18. IQRA222 on September 3, 2017 8:17 pm

      asthu di its hell awesome !!!
      loved it totally!!
      raglak meet was magical!!

    19. Vini on September 3, 2017 8:32 pm

      Loved it, keep going

    20. Elizabethlovely on September 3, 2017 8:50 pm

      Awesome

    21. asra on September 3, 2017 9:04 pm

      awesome astu dear….loved it alot…sudden change sumi died…y ragu think sumi is her mother…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    22. Arjuna on September 3, 2017 9:11 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME a

    23. Monisha on September 3, 2017 9:45 pm

      Superb dear

    24. Vennila on September 3, 2017 9:55 pm

      Awesome episode

    25. Akshata on September 3, 2017 10:16 pm

      woah!!!!! this is something really unique in its own way. update soon

    26. Aim on September 3, 2017 11:55 pm

      Wow Astra.Its realky awesome.I realky want Ragini to know how much Janki has Sacrificed.She has loved her husband’s mistress’s daughter more than her own daughter.

    27. Monu on September 4, 2017 7:42 am

      Interesting dear

    28. Pearly on September 4, 2017 8:01 am

      Superb part

    29. Anzi on September 4, 2017 12:43 pm

      woww Astra lubly … loved it ..

    30. lovely7 on September 4, 2017 1:01 pm

      Wow❤?
      Champesav Astra, super undi

      • DivzS on September 4, 2017 3:49 pm

        Really na.. Chimpesindi….

    31. DivzS on September 4, 2017 3:47 pm

      Wowwww!! That’s an already twisted plot.. You gave me high expectations.. Now I’ll be attentive everyday for your update!! And the skating scene was cool.. And beginning was good but a bit filmy-climax kind.. Dying mom asking to take care of daughter.. But story’s awesome

    32. Sherin on September 4, 2017 9:42 pm

      Awesome dear

    33. Thahseem on September 4, 2017 9:52 pm

      Amazing

    34. Laashya on September 4, 2017 9:58 pm

      Wonderful start di and can’t wait for next episode and keep going

    35. Ashly on September 4, 2017 10:04 pm

      Awesome fantastic superb

    36. Ammu on September 5, 2017 8:39 am

      I’m really sorry for the late comment dear, but what to do, I’m busy with onam celebration. Firstly I want to say thank you so much for another Raglak story. It’s really interesting episode and loved it a lot. I’m very excited for next episode. Raglak meeting is awesome dear. Please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care

    37. Jiyani on September 5, 2017 3:07 pm

      Amazing dear

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