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Home»Fan Fiction»Revenge to love by Fatima (part-1) “The first meeting”
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Revenge to love by Fatima (part-1) “The first meeting”

Fatimak18By Fatimak18October 13, 2016Updated:October 13, 201611 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hi guys It’s Fatima here so many of you know me……

                         

1.SANSKAR MAHESHWARI

He is 26 years old.
Handsome,dashing, kindhearted,little arrogant and top business tycoon of Delhi,love his family a lot.he can do anything for his family.

2.SWARA GADODIA

She is 23 years old.
Educated,sweet,bubbly and bold type girl.who love her family a lot,enjoy her life with her craziness and do some crazy things to make other laugh.

3.ANSH MAHESHWARI
(Sanskar’s brother)

4.RAGINI GADODIA
(Swara’s sister)

Hello everyone I’m new here….
I’ve never written a story…
its my first try ……
Sorry for mistakes because I’m not at all good in English grammar?……

The story starts with a girl standing near the window,she is wearing a red and cream combination lehanga with heavy make up and heavy jewelry. She is crying for her fate. She’s so worried about her new life which’ll change because of her husband Sanskar Maheshwari, the top business tycoon of Delhi,she recalls her moment when they met.

Swara’s p.o.v:-

She is educated, bubbly type of girl who loves her parents so much. She has one cute sister Ragini, She went to mall to buy a gift for her sister

Suddenly she collided with a boy and they both fell on ground. The boy was angry because of her only he fell on ground! he stands up.

Swara also stood and said “sorry” to the boy and was about to go from their boy started accusing Swara.

Boy – can’t you see? Are you blind ?

Swara:- I said sorry na.then why are you shouting, its was not only my fault but also yours  Mr.

Sanskar – It was your fault girl,saying this he went from there.

Swara Starts mumbling angrily.”what does he think of himself kahin ka laad governor hain Kya.next time I’ll not leave him. and she left from there.

She Starts searching a gift for her sister then her eyes fell in a watch which was so pretty, when she was about to take that watch someone ask the shopkeeper to pack that watch.

but a voice interrupted them. yup it was Swara’s voice. She said, “first I saw this watch.

Hey mister don’t dare to take this watch because it’s mine.

Swara -please pack this I want this, saying this to shopkeeper then started scolding the boy,”you are the one who collided with me na and didn’t even said sorry.And now also “you want what I want”how dare you?”

shopkeeper – its only one piece mam and Sir, who want this? plzz tell I’ll pack!

That time the boy also said ” I want that ” and they start arguing with each other.

That time someone else comes there, take the watch, pays the Bill, and goes from there without their notice because they were so much involved in their fight that they didn’t notice.

Boy – pack this!

Swara – I want that watch and first I saw that!

Boy – you only saw it and didn’t say anything. I told him to pack dear,then he took his card from his wallet and was about to give shopkeeper.

That shopkeeper said it was already sold when you both are arguing.

Swara didn’t say just left angrily from there and started cursing the boy,”laad governor”.

Then she went to her home by her scooty. when she entered in her home she saw her dad talking to someone. just she was about to go in her room.

Suddenly her dad ask her to come and when she came, her dad said to the man “she is my eldest daughter Swara”.

Then Swara smiles and takes blessings from the man.

Man – “she is so sweet shekhar and God bless u beta”.

And Swara went to her room where her sister was smiling seeing her.

Swara – Ragini why are you smiling anything special ?

Her sister nods in yes.

Swara – what?

Ragini – “my Di is going to marry  Sanskar Maheshwari,”the top businessman” she said these lines with a smile.

Swara – what nonsense! You are joking na marriage and me nope.

Then a voice intruppted them and said “yes Swara you are going to get married to my friend’s son.

Swara – Mama I don’t want to marry so soon and don’t wanna leave you three.

Sharmistha – It’s final Swara .Your marriage is fixed next month and I don’t want to hear anything!

saying this she went from there and said come to hall with Ragini. I am waiting.

Swara said Ohk.I’ll talk to Dad saying this she came from her room with Ragini and sat in dinning table with her family.

Shekhar – Swara I wanted to tell you something.

Swara – I know Dad What you want to say. I am OK! I’m not saying no for this marriage but I want sometime itni jldi nhi krni mujhe shadi.(I don’t want to marry so soon)

Shekhar – You have one month Swara! enjoy your time

Swara didn’t said just nodded and started having dinner with family because she wanted her family’s happiness.

So guys I”ll post next part today only……… I have you all will like my story and i edited my story and changed the name also……….

Di – sister

Jiju – Brother in law

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    11 Comments

    1. Mahjabeen on October 13, 2016 4:49 pm

      Nice starting dear…interesting…post soon

    2. Sara on October 13, 2016 5:14 pm

      aswm and nice concepts!!!!!
      but dear i have read this same concept a long back. is that concept is written by???
      anyways post next part asap

    3. Sara on October 13, 2016 5:16 pm

      aswm and nice concept!!!!
      but dear sry to say this but i have read this same a long back is that was written by u and nw ur continuing this ff??? anyways plz post asap and also plz dont feel hurt i thougth to share this with u that’s y

      • Sara on October 13, 2016 5:18 pm

        and also i think i was read in fb and also i think it was u only dear

    4. vyshu10 on October 13, 2016 5:30 pm

      hey…why posting it again from beginning? and y did u change d name?

    5. Afra96 on October 13, 2016 6:24 pm

      Nice

    6. Arshaanya on October 13, 2016 6:27 pm

      U ve alrdy posted it na wid other name?

    7. s on October 13, 2016 7:18 pm

      nice..continue soon..

    8. tani on October 14, 2016 12:01 am

      Fab chappy

    9. Kakali on October 14, 2016 12:03 am

      Nice… edited by u rit??
      love it deAr.. thank u.. 🙂

    10. Febi on October 14, 2016 8:53 pm

      Nice….keep going dear

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