THEME 2: A boy, Rudra wakes up from coma, after 6 long months. He has no memory of what had happened to him, except for the fact that he has been wronged by a girl. The word ‘girl’ reminded him of revenge. His friend and colleague, Aarav, brings him to his home. Aarav, who was happily married to Swadheenta, 3 months ago, brings her to introduce her to Rudra. Rudra meets Swadheenta calmly, unable to recognise her, while a shocked Swadheenta breaths of joy as she realises he could not identify her.
Rudra leaves the house unable to tolerate a ‘girl’. Rudra tries hard to find out who the girl was. He only remembers her face when she was much younger and only in his dreams.once he is awake, he cannot remember. He begins painting everything possible f what he faintly remembered or thought he remembered. Arohi was a bubbly girl, who loved Rudra deeply. The moment she knew he was out if coma, she decides to leave her favourite village, to meet him up. But as she enters his home, she notices the paintings he had made after. She leaves heartbroken about the fact that he was still into Swadheenta, and that he chose Swadheenta, upon her. Rudra notices her leaving, and stops her, questioning, who she was. Arohi just cries and replies, she was nothing but a faint impulse, covered in flesh and blood. Rudra was left in wonder.
Here Rudra is Veer
Aarav is Dr kabir
Aarohi is Pragya n
Swadheenta is sanchi
I would like to give it title
OUR LOVESTORY WITH UNHAPPY ENDING
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Thunderstorms are heard
Its raining extremely heavy
A magnificent hospital is shown
CITY HOSPITAL
ICU ward is shown
A young patient is lying on bed surrounded by machines
Patient is moving
He is scared
Sound of gunshot is heard n patient reacts
Nurse notices she rushes
A cabin is shown
A handsome man is sipping hot coffee and going through some files some light music is playing
Man looks outside window
Man’s pov-Music, hot coffee and rains remind me of u Sanchi, should I call her will she take me wrong
Man is lost in thoughts
A nurse comes rushing
Nurse-Dr Kabir Dr coma patient is reacting
so that man is our Dr Kabir
Dr Kabir (pleased)-veer has come to senses he is reacting woooowww six months have passed lets go sister
so that icu patient is veer
Dr Kabir is checking veer
veer’s eyes r shut but he is restless n making movements
Kabir-sister please close windows something about this thunder is troubling veer.
Kabir gives him injection
He helds his hand n sits besides him
Veer gently opens his eyes
Kabir (smiles)-Veer
Veer is confused
veer presses his head-where am I? who are u?
Kabir is dumbstruck
Kabir pats him-Veer, veer veer
veer is still confused-who is veer?
Kabir is taken aback
A doctor is going through some reports Kabir is standing there
Doc-Dr Kabir It seems Veer had a memory loss due to deep injury please dnt force him more as any stress could deteriorate his condition n take him back to coma
Kabir feels bad
Kabir looks at veer who is looking at ceiling of ward
Kabir’s pov-Veer, Dr Malhotra has done alot for me I cannot let anything happen to you I will take u home
Kabir calls somebody
A beautiful lady dressed in anarkali picks call
Kabir-Hello Sanchi there is one good news my that friend who was in coma since past six months has gained senses
Sanchi-ohhh woooowww
Kabir-Sanchi can I please get him to our home for somedays he needs attention please
Sanchi gets thinking-Kabir u neednot ask me please get him
Kabir (happy)-Thanks Thanks Sanchi
Sanchi’s pov-Kabir u r a kind heart a sweet heart
Kabir is driving car
Veer is on backseat
veer with moist eyes looks outside
veer-Dr Kabir I dnt know why am I coming to ur home n giving u trouble
Kabir (lots of genuinity)-Veer I told u several times its no trouble no formality, I have done my internship at ur father Dr Anand Malhotra’s Savitri Devi Hospital n college whatever am today is all because of him, veer I owe him this
Veer (in pain)-y dnt I remember anything y
Kabir-veer please dnt force urself please
Kabir supports veer to walk
A beautiful door with Kanchi written on it is shown
Kabir rings doorbell
Sanchi rushes to open door
Sanchi is dumbstruck to see veer
Flashback Of veer n Sanchi hugging is shown n veer pointing a gun at himself is shown
Sanchi is unable to react
”Hamari Adhoori Kahani”plays in bg
Kabir’s voice brings Sanchi to present-Sanchi meet my dear friend Veer Malhotra n Veer she is my beautiful wife Sanchi
Sanchi is sweating profusely
Veer smiles at her
Same smile that once used to make Sanchi’s day
Veer-Hello bhabhi
Word bhabhi causes Sanchi’s heart to ache
Kabir-come with me veer I will take u to ur room
Kabir takes veer Sanchi looks on teareyed
Sanchi’s pov-No veer no u cannot come in my life again I dnt want Kabir to get hurt because of me
Kabir comes to Sanchi-Sanchi veer was such a bubbly boy actually he has a complete memory lapse
Sanchi though feels bad still takes sigh of relief-Thanks bappa thanks for saving my n Kabir’s relationship
Sanchi-Dnt worry Kabir we will take care of him
Kabir smiles at her
Sanchi looks At Veer
Sanchi-He needs her ,I have to inform her
Sanchi is looking at diaries
Sanchi-I hope she has not changed her no
She dails a no n hopes
A cheerful girl is eating food
Her phone rings
Girl-abhee ruko yaar let me eat kitna ring karte ho tum phone
she picks up
Sanchi-pragya
Pragya with smile-Abhee ooo Sanchi Devijii where were u since one year? how r u?
Sanchi-Pragya I will tell u everything u please come to a place I tell u Veer needs u.
Pragya-veer
Sanchi-yes veer
Pragya n Sanchi r shown to talking in cafe
Pragya-kasamse Sanchi u loved veer so much how could u marry somebody else
Sanchi tells something thats muted
Sanchi-Thats y I married Kabir 3 months ago please take veer away from my life I dnt want to hurt Kabir
Sanchi folds hands
Pragya nods teareyed
Sanchi, Kabir, n Pragya are at Kabir’s home
Sanchi-Kabir, Pragya, I n veer used to study in same management college. Thats y that day I was shocked to see veer. Pragya is veer’s fiance
Kabir-Pragya where is Dr Anand Malhotra I tried alot to reach him in past six months
Pragya gets nervous-actually actually Dr Malhotra wasnt happy with our relationship so he left Mumbai n shifted with Savitri aunty I dnt know where they went Veer n I rented flat .six months ago I went to my village in Rishikesh n when I returned veer wasnt there I dnt know what happened I tried alot to search him I thought I lost him forever
she cries
Kabir brings Pragya to veer’s room
Pragya gets emotional
She runs to veer n hugs him
Veer is confused
Pragya-veer thank god u r safe, Hamari jaan nikal gayi thi in past six months
veer-who r u
Pragya (teareyed)-Pragya, love of ur life ur fiance
Fb of veer pointing gun at himself n a girl walking away is shown
Veer has seen this dream several times
Veer’s pov-is that girl Pragya Am I here because of her?
Pragya shows veer their pics on mobile
Pragya-Veer we met in college fell in love got engaged then started staying together in Mumbai, Chalo lets go home
Kabir-No Pragya u cannot take him to Mumbai His treatment is going on Please let him stay here few days
pragya nods
Sanchi is tensed-what if veer remember’s everything
Veer’s pov-Thanks alot Dr Kabir I need time who is Pragya? y do I feel connection with Sanchi? n who is that girl?
Pragya-Sorry Sanchi I would take veer soon tum tension mat loo I will check veer’s flat in Mumbai
Veer takes paint brush n starts painting
veer -y cannot I remember her face
Pragya opens lock of Veer’s flat she enters
She is stunned to see paintings
These are paintings of Sanchi n Sanveer
Pragya’s eyes turn red with pain anger-Veer still loved Sanchi after whatever she did he still loved her
Pragya throws a glass n breaksdown
Veer dreams of Sanchi hugging him slapping him
He wakes up with jerk
He cannot remember her face
Hamari Adhuri Kahani plays in bg
Pragya is weeping
Pragya-what did I get veer I loved u supported u when Sanchi left n look what I get I always loved y Real love no value
I I I cannot take this anymore Amnot saint
I will ruin everything, Sanchi I will ruin ur married life
U ppl have made my life tamashaa now I will show real tamashaa
Pragya dails Kabir’s no
Pragya-Dr Kabir I think u can allow veer to come with me for sometime I just want to take him to our apartment maybe after being here he recollects
Kabir-ok no problem
Pragya smirks
Pragya brings veer to his flat
Pragya-veer u go inside I will purchase ur medicines
I will come in sometime
Veer enters in confusion
Pragya smirks-veer go to bedroom see all ur paintings u will remember everything
Pragya comes back
She notices veer sleeping on sofa
Kabir also comes
Kabir-veer wake up r u fine
Veer wakes up-ohh I didn’t come to know when I slept
Kabir-veer medicinal effect
Pragya’s pov-Didn’t veer enter bedroom ohh noo
Kabir-Pragya I guess I should take him home now enough for tdy it might be tiring for him to travel
Pragya nods
Kabir, veer n Sanchi r eating food
Suddenly Kabir starts to cough
Sanchi panics n pats his back
Kabir excuses himself n goes to washroom
Sanchi goes behind him
Sanchi-r u fine Kabir
Kabir-Dnt wry I guess it was food poisoning
Sanchi-but food was fresh
Kabir-its ok relax am fine
Kabir hugs Sanchi
Veer looks on from outside
Kabir is getting ready
Fan in his room is getting loose
It appears as if fan will fall down
Kabir is nicely smiling n getting ready
Sanchi comes she notices
She rushes to Kabir she pushes him
Fan falls
Kanchi fall on bed n have intense eyelock
Veer again looks on
m
Veer is sitting on a roadside bench
Its silent night
Light is falling on his face fr single street light pole next to bench n there is a tree
Some insects r making sound other wise there is complete silence
Veer-I remembered everything t Sanchi I tried killing ur Kabir twice but u saved him I mixed poison in his food but he couldnt eat more so he got saved n u saved him from fan but Sanchi I will kill u both of u
U betrayed me, u ruined my life my love Sanchi I will kill u
Flashback
A classroom is shown
Veer is sitting on first bench
N Sanchi Pragya on last bench
Professor is teaching
Veer looks behind
And gives adorable smile to Sanchi
Sanchi blushes
Pragya’s pov-what a romantic smile veer always makes me feel spl
Pragya n Sanchi r in canteen
Pragya-abhee devijii tell me na who is that guy who proposed u
Hamara jiju kon hain please please
Sanchi (blushing)-veer
Pragya is dumbstruck
Veer comes-Excuse pragya can I please take my Sanchi for a little while please
Pragya nods
Veer n Sanchi leave hand in hand n tears drop from pragya’s eyes
Sanveer eat icecream, they hold hands n walk in garden, they r shown hugging
”TUM HI HOO” plays in bg
N sanveer romance is shown
Veer goes to Sanchi
Sanchi ignores him
Veer is confused
Veer holds her by waist n asks her-Sanchi whats wrong y r u ignoring me, my calls, my msgs yyy
Sanchi-veer we r done I cannot be in this relationship any longer
Veer-y y y
Sanchi leaves
Pragya is shown talking to veer
She makes him hear voice recording
Pragya-Sanchi y r u ignoring veer y u want breakup
Sanchi-veer failed in exam his dad removed him from house he is a losser how can I be with such a guy I agreed for this relationship only because he was Anand Malhotra’s son he had money
Pragya-par Sanchi he loves u
Sanchi-pragya love cannot give me lifestyle I want I hate him
Tears drop from veer’s eyes pragya keeps her hand over his
Veer goes to Sanchi-Sanchi I cannot believe u can do this Sanchi
Sanchi-veer get lost
Veer points a gun at himself-Sanchi if u leave me I will kill myself I will kill myself
Sanchi walks off-I dnt care veer I hate u
Pragya snatches gun from his hand n hugs him
Veer becomes alcoholic
He becomes devdaas pragya supports him alot
Veer is walking on middle on road His eyes r red with pain anger n alcohol
A car comes near him
Veer does not realize
Car dashes him
N he falls
Blood everywhere
Flashback ends
Veer-I promise Sanchi I willnot spare u
Pragya comes at Kabir’s home
Kabir-Thanks pragya for coming so fast from Mumbai Actually suddenly my mom’s health has deteriorated so I n Sanchi r leaving for our farmhouse to go to mom
U be here with veer I have written his medicines give him on time
Pragya-Thanks Dr Kabir u have seriously done a lot for us
Kabir-pragya veer is like my younger bro I always considered Anand uncle as a fatherly figure so no issues u take care
Sanchi n Kabir sit in car in leave
Veer looks on he smirks
His hands r black
Pragya-veer how come ur hands are black
Veer-I remembered everything I remembered everything how Sanchi betrayed me for lifestyle money
Pragya that day at my flat i went through all paintings n remembered everything but pretended as if i saw nothing I wanted to take revenge, I have finished everything I have planted a time bomb in their car in one hr they both will get finished
Veer’s eyes are red with anger
Pragya is shocked-veer u cannot do this Sanchi never betrayed u
It was her SACRIFICE
Flashback
Veer is hugging Sanchi
Veer-Sanchi did u visit dr? R u still feeling giddy? What had happened yesterday y did u vomit
Sanchi-veer relax dr said nothing to wry it was just some food poisoning am fine
Veer hugs her-sanchi u r my jaan I cannot live a minute without u I got so scared seeing u in that condition
Sanchi is in Dr’s cabin with pragya
Dr-Sanchi u r reports are not normal Sanchi am sorry to say, u r having lung cancer Its second stage Sanchi
Hell breaks loose
Sanchi (teareyed)-pragya please help me take veer out of my life,He will not be able to see me fight this disease I will fight it myself U love him na take him away save him from getting hurt
Veer points a gun at himself
Sanchi with lots of difficulty walks away
Hamari Adhoori Kahani plays
Sanchi is undergoing treatment in city hospital
Dr Kabir is her Dr
He takes good care of her
They soon become friends
Kabir (happily hugs Sanchi)-Sanchi ur reports r so good Sanchi congratulations u have won the battle u will live Sanchi u will live
Dr Kabir’s mom comes-Sanchi will u please be my daughter in law please n marry my Kabir
Sanchi’s pov-How can I marry somebody else
Kabir-Sanchi its no force its ur decision ur wish
Jaya-Beta veer might have moved on in life with pragya beta dr Kabir helped us so much Today u r here all because of him marry him Sanchi u can give this much happiness to his mom she remains sick she willnot be able to listen no from u n beta u cannot get a soulmate as perfect as Kabir
So kanchi get married
N slowly slowly from friendship they fall in love n start living blissful married life until veer returns
Flashback ends
Tears drop from veer’s eyes
Veer-I need to save them
He sits in car pragya sits along
Veer calls them several times but phones are unreachable
He is driving supper fast
His eyes are welled up with tears
Kabir is tensed
Sanchi keeps hand over his hand n leads to romantic eyelock
Time bomb shows 5 mins left
Veer is driving extremely rash
Pragya is worried
2 mins left
Veer’s car comes infront of kanchi’s car it gets jerk
Veer quickly asks them to come out n run
All 4 run
Kanchi r confused
The car blasts
Kabir is shocked
Kabir-Bomb in my car n veer u? ?
Veer (guilty voice)-I did it I tried to kill u thrice
He folds his hands
Kabir is confused
Pragya narrates everything
Veer (teareyed)-Thanks Kabir for saving Sanchi shr loves u alot please always be with her n Kabir my n her love story didn’t have a happy ending in this birth am giving my Sanchi to u for this birth love her take care of her
In next birth she will be all mine
Sanchi smiles teareyed
Kabir hugs her
Pragya looks on
Veer sits on his knees-will u marry me pragya
Pragya is pleasantly shocked
She hugs him
”Janam Janam”plays as Sanchi n Kabir Pragya n veer hug eachother
N they lived happily everafter
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