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Home»Fan Fiction»Relationship of our’s (episode 1)
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Relationship of our’s (episode 1)

reethuBy reethuJune 10, 201722 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hi guys I’m back with the first episode.this is a story in which u can see love,emotion,sentiment,action.it’s mainly swasan. So lets start
A bright morning welcoming the sun rays to peep in everyones window and wake up the people.Here is the girl who is getting ready for her office.By seeing her we can say she is not a sleepy head.She is very punctual. Lets see who is she? She is none other than our beautiful swara.
At the same time a girl in her early 30s is doing pooja she is revealed to be the house owner oops sorry she is jeevika praying for her husbands safety

Swara’s office cab has been arrived so she is running down to get it .
Jeevika on the other hand tries to wake her sleepy husband.Actually the time is 8’o clock.But viren being naugty tries to pull jeevika and he succeded in it and wat they did their romance
Two men jumped the wall of a mansion and entered into the house their face was covered with mask
There are four ladies doing aarthi after the completion of their aarthi they dismissed.these two men took their knives one among the two held the knive and got the hold of on lady
Old Lady: please save me from them

All others:please leave her please
Otherman:we won’t leave u
All others:wat u want?
Man:we want your entire property
Old man :acha u want entire property.if we din’t give wat will u do?
Man:we will take her
Old man:please take her with u please atleast we will be happy’you know wat she is a nuisance over here please take her we won’t give u the property

Old lady:wat rubbish are u speaking?
Like this they were continuously fighting atlast a man came and got the hold of them and removed their face mask they are revealed to be sanskar and laksh.all are shocked to see them .ap and sujata got hold their ears and twisted it.
Sanskar:aah ma please leave me it’s paining please
Ap :this you should think before doing this
Sujata :wat is this choree?

Sanskar:chachi it’s laksh idea.sachi I didn’t do anything
Sujata:I know this.laksh only can do this type of pranks.wat is this laksh?
Lucky:mom I didn’t do this.this is bhai’s plan only
Sujata:don’t lie sanskar will not do like this .he is very sanskari not like u.
All this time sanskar is laughing silently
Lucky :adharsh bhai it’s all because of u.why did u catch us.(yes adharsh was the one who caught them)

Dadaji:acha kia tume adharsh warna yeh laksh ka tho activities bohot hogaye
Dadi:kya laksh.tum bhi na
Lucky was fuming in anger and he thougt of a plan and smirked
Lucky:I did right only dadi because of me only you got to know how much your husband loves u.(he says in sarcastic tone)
Dadi:(turning towards dadaji)what did u say ?i am a nuisance to this house .
Dadaji:no I didn’t say like this I was trying to save you only.this idiot brainwashed u
Lucky :(with innocent face )I didn’t dadi.dadaji only said ki we can take u .just think wat would have happened if original thieves came think of it.

All others where enjoying it.
Dadi:han laksh has a point tell me wat would happen to me if they were real thieves? What would happen if they really kidnap me?
Dadaji:nothing will happen to you if they kidnap you also they will return you to me
Dadi:why so?

Dadaji:because they cannot handle you as I do.
All were laughing because of the sudden outburst of dadaj.here dadi is fuming in anger.
Dadaji:I’m sorry jaanu I didn’t mean it please maaf kardo please with puppy dog face
All laughed seeing including dadi.then sanskar and laksh hug everyone and took their blessing.
At that time dp&rp came out
Dp:are sanskar laksh when did both of u return from us
Sanskar and laksh took blessing from dp&rp
Sanskar:now only dad.

Dp:how was ur business over there ?
Sanskar: it was success dad
Ap (interrupting them):ji suniye this is house no business talks and they have returned from us after 2 long years please let them take rest
Dadaji:bilkul sahi kaha beta .let them fresh and come for bf
Ap:pari beta ,sujatha come lets arrange the bf
Sanskar and laksh went to us for 2 years

Precap:may be swasan meet

Pls comment guys put ur suggession and views.criticism is also welcomed .till then bye

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reethu

    i'm a die heartfan of swasan and love helly shah and varun kapoor.bookworm to the max

    22 Comments

    1. Swasan on June 10, 2017 10:08 pm

      Awesome

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:01 pm

        thank u

    2. kumu on June 10, 2017 11:07 pm

      nice..if its swasan story then add it in d title so swasan fans can knw about it..
      and plz change d cover photo..

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:02 pm

        yes sure,i would do it in the upcoming episodes and thank u

    3. Mithu on June 10, 2017 11:56 pm

      If its swasan to photo bhi unka lagao na plZ

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:02 pm

        yeah sure ,i will post it

    4. ritu on June 11, 2017 5:41 am

      pls add swasan in tittle…i thought to skip but seeing swasan,i read

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:03 pm

        okay,sure i’ll add it in the title and thank u

    5. Seebu_s on June 11, 2017 5:59 am

      Swasan ff means…pls keep swasan pic..

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:04 pm

        yeah sure seebu,i’ll definitely do thatand thank u

    6. Sus on June 11, 2017 6:20 am

      wll its nyc starting would love to see more swasan how love woll bloosm in them

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:06 pm

        thank u so much dear and you can see it in the upcoming episodes

    7. IQRA222 on June 11, 2017 7:11 am

      awesome

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:06 pm

        thank u so much dear

    8. Ammu on June 11, 2017 10:01 am

      Interesting episode and eagerly Waiting for Raglak scenes??????

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:08 pm

        thank u ammu. i hope i ‘ll give raglak scenes,basically it’s a swasan ff,so i have changed the title too,but i’ll give my best to raglak too.and sorry

    9. Malu on June 11, 2017 11:29 am

      Nice

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:09 pm

        thank u dear so much

    10. Monisha on June 11, 2017 1:01 pm

      Awesome

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:09 pm

        thank u dear

    11. Vini on June 11, 2017 2:07 pm

      Awesome

      • reethu on June 12, 2017 5:10 pm

        thank u so much

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