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Our Relation – Shot 3

Urvi_shahBy Urvi_shahDecember 10, 20177 Comments3 Mins Read
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Kabir came home
Kanchi – papa u know i want to telll u today what happen today after so many days we went to a party… And she continues..
Kabir got irritated
Kabir – should i enter my house.. (angrily)? Now don’t disturb me.. Got it.
Kanchi – sorry dad..
He walks to his room
Kanchi – dadi i hurt papa
Kusum – koi baat nhi kanchi.. Abhi gussa dhanda ho jayega.. U just chill
..

Kanchi.. – dadi how can i chill.. I should convince dad…
She goes to her room…
She dress like joker…
She do many things but kabir ignored her…
Now kabir ‘s temper was high..
Kabir – enough! Kanchi… What nonsense is this… Kya hai yeh sab i don’t like this all… U r foolish girl.. u don’t have sense… I said u don’t disturb me but no.. U want to disturb.. U don’t have any manners… U r bhoj on me… I don’t want u in my home.. Get lost from my home… Get lost…
Kanchi – but dad…
Kabir – i think tum aise nhi manogi…
He goes to her room.. Than comes with a bag..
And holds kanchi hand and push her out of the gate.. And says
Kabir – security… Plzz take her out and don’t dare her to enter our house without my permission…. And close the door ??
Kanchi takes her bag and goes outside… She sits outside of house.. And cries…
Kanchi – mumma mumma.. She was crying bitterly……
Then she was walking with bag in her hand… What happen why he is acting like this.. She was crying..
She was just walking.. She didn’t know where she was going…

Then some goons came and blocked her
K – plzz let me go plzz…
G – kaise tujhe chod deh
K – help. Help…
One goon was coming that… A boy came and hit him..
(Guess who was the boy)
Boy was aryan
A – don’t dare.. Isse chedne ka hak sirf mera hai got it…
Kanchi was looking at him…
Then all goons went..
A – tum yeh sunsaan jagah meh kya kar rhi ho..
K – whats ur problem..
A – oh hello… Main nhi aata na toh tum… Kaha hoti… Say thank u to me…
K – sakal dekhi hai…
A – haa… Itni bhi buri nhi dikti..
K – u r half minded or what…
A – hehe.. Very funny..

Precap – riya and kabir r married…

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    7 Comments

    1. Lahari on December 10, 2017 10:13 pm

      It is amazing. Hope Kabir realizes his mistake. Precap is interesting. Post next one asap

    2. riyarocks on December 10, 2017 10:14 pm

      precap padhne ke baad, I was like…….WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!…..really urvi dear, u r an amazing writer………luv u a lot sweety & eagerly waiting for the nxt epi

    3. Aafiya on December 10, 2017 10:52 pm

      Nice.

    4. Amnaa on December 10, 2017 11:04 pm

      Its amazing….. After reading the precap i am also shocked

    5. Anu88 on December 10, 2017 11:33 pm

      I hope kabir realized his mistake and I am worried about the precap……nice story yaar……keep it up…….

    6. Dhruti on December 11, 2017 12:25 am

      amazing ff but precap give me a shock…………..post next one asap and please write little recap so i know what happen in previous part…………….tc………..

    7. swethaa on December 11, 2017 8:18 am

      amazing but precap is shocked and please write a little recap if possible

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