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Home»Fan Fiction»Are we really Married ? OS by TRISHA
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Are we really Married ? OS by TRISHA

Trisha139By Trisha139October 1, 201755 Comments7 Mins Read
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Hey guys
Guess who ?
Trisha here ! Oops ? really sorry for bkwaas in last post !
And literally I have NO words ?…. to describe how I felt after reading your comments ! Seriously guys …. I was dumbstruck I mean so much love so much support me to pighal gyi (I just melted …)!
Thankyou will be the smallest word for all the people who showed such support !
So finally I am not going anywhere for next ***** years hehe ? jyada hogya shayad !
(Overacting )

Neha, anonymous, khamoshi, niyati, vrushti, tania, neha, vrushti, prema, Priyanshi, ruwani, riya , amnaa, dhruti, Anuradha, alia, nkh, sanyukta, palak, tumpamoni, yaashi, anu, sanu, negisanyukta, abhilasha
Thanku guys!

I will just stay keep showering your love and support guys ! That is on the top !

So here I am back with 101th post or you can say Shagun !
An os !
After this I will start another ff !
Which will be uploaded daily !

“Are we really married ?”

“Eeee” she shouted at the peak of frustration and anger ; when at the same time loud sounds of throwing utensils were heard !

How could he be quiet ?
He shouted from his room “atleast spare the utensils; angry bird” !

Saachi(murmured)- what the hell ? What he thinks himself to be …..! Even mom is gone out of station atleast now ? No ! For god sake what I am expecting from a workaholic ….! I still remember our wedding day !

FLASHBACK ;

Wedding night …!

Kabeer- hope you are comfortable after changing the heavy dress !

Saachi- yeah ….a hectic day right !

Kabeer- hmm anyways love uh baby… u may go to sleep I have some work at laptop I will come asap after that !

Saachi- Kabeer ? at least today skip your work !
(she said with a helpless face )

Kabeer- ….?! I am really sorry I could even talk wd u today !

FLASHBACK end !!

Saachi (still in the kitchen)- i really hope I could add green chili to this sweet dish ! Huh !

She angrily made the dishes nd carries serving plates upwards in their room .

Saachi-dinner is ready Kabeer come fast !

Kabeer- thanku so much for bringing upwards love uh !

Saachi- nd I hate you !

Kabeer- Saachi ??

Saachi- pls now don’t behave like I am lying !

Kabeer- but….

He stops at first seeing her deadly glares !

She serves both the dinner murmuring …..”ofcourse see truth! Truth ! Infact Kangana Ranaut was right in her movie …. these men ….huh….always be the same just tooooo much romantic before messing nd then suddenly ….. tooo much workaholics …. infact govt should make some rules for such irritating husbands ” !

Kabeer – did you said something ?

Saachi- no ! (Still giving furious looks) I said whole Ramayan and she’s saying who was Ram ji ?

They ate the dinner in middle he was stealing her angry but cute looks !

Saachi- till u complete your work …. I am looking forward to a movie !

Kabeer- what ? I send mom at relatives just to spend time with you !

Saachi- seems your brain back from a long holiday of one month !

Kabeer- Saachi ! (He gives her glares )

Saachi- no use me khduus kapoor… I am not at all afraid !

Kabeer- huh !

She teasingly starts “Tabu weds Manu returns ” in between the start of the movie she was constantly rolling her eyes upon him ; he was aware of that still engrossed in laptop !

Kabeer- see Saachi I really wanted to spend time wd u bt you know Na this work….

Saachi (interrupting)- no problem pati dev ! I never complained ….. actually you know when on the first day after wedding I specially made all dishes for you and you left for hospital without even praising me ….. kasam se that was too romantic !

Kabeer- (mind) uff ! Don’t know when these tauntrums will end …!

Kabeer- u remember our first date … before mrrg too romantic !

Saachi- yeah my first nd last date !

Saachi- anyways I just want a bath else my head will burst !

Kabeer- ofcourse ! That too with cold water. !

Saachi gave him a smirk nd left for bath while he was too engrossed in his laptop !

After few minutes the door of the bathroom opened nd a girl with wet hairs ….barefoot came out in a long white shirt ….. no doubt she was looking too hot !

Someone was trying hard to concentrate on his work but couldn’t manage stealing constant glances of his lovely dovey wife ! No doubts he was looking super hot in “without shirt looks” ….!

Saachi- stop starring at me !

Kabeer- I am not !

Saachi- lier !

Finding hard to get over her he finally gave up nd closed his laptop nd started starting her with full attitude !

Saachi- what ?

She was drying her hair with hair dryer .

Kabeer- my shirt !

Saachi- find yourself !

Kabeer-don’t change the topic ! Who told you to wear my shirt !

Saachi- my husband my shirt so no more questions !

He rolls his eyes !

Kabeer- I want it back !

Saachi- take it tomoroww !

She ended drying her “still wet” hairs… nd continued to body lotion sitting in front of her mirror !

Kabeer- I want it back now !

Saachi- ok then give me back my pendrive asap !

Kabeer- huh !

He stood up moving towards the mirror where she was done wd her body lotion nd standing adjusting her hairs ….

He came from back nd hugged her from behind rubbing her waist …nd pulling back with her back lying on his chest nd his breaths against her neck !
She could feel his hot breaths … he touched her shoulders measuring down to the fingers which got a sudden electric shock running down her spine….
He kept kissing slowly her neck…. shoulders moving upwards to the earlobe… when she whispered his arm in a seducing voice…”Kabeer….”
He put a finger in her lips ….”sssh” … made her face him … sided tangles of her hair from face…with his hand running back her forehead…….their eyes closing with each passing second nd decreasing the distance between their lips…nd finally they shared a passionate kiss …later he dimmed the light …. picked her in his arms in typical bridal style nd made her lie on the bed…the scene ended with their hands entangled with each other…! The moon that night kept himself awake A little longer …. the sole witness of their love…!

Next day during dinner….!

Kusum- Saachi …. he didn’t fought with you again right ?

Kabeer coughed hard on this !

Saachi- ahm no mom.

Saachi- Kabeer pass on the pickle pls !

Both kusum nd Kabeer were eyeing her suspiciously…!

Saachi- no !

Kusum nd Kabeer- yes !

Saachi- nooo !

Both burst out laughing on this !

Kusum- jokes are good for health beta !

Saachi-(mind) thankgod !

The end !

So this was it guys a romantic OS ! Tumpamoni asked me for this …. Last but not least ….once again thanku so much for all the support guys !
And pls pls drop a comment if you guys like this!
Regards
Trisha

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    55 Comments

    1. riyarocks on October 1, 2017 1:28 am

      Trisha dear………..main vaari jaavan tumhari iss os pe…………..haye……….meri toh bolti band hogayi……..too good dear………….rocking, dhamaakedaar, epic, histoic, mindblowing……….in short……tussi bade kamaal ke writer ho ji…………too good yaara, just too good…………….a big waala teddy hug for u & luv u a lot meri Cutie pie……….

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:39 pm

        Omg tusi vi bde kammaaal ho ji ?
        Such a beautiful comment
        Uff ! Margyi ! Bchgyi ! Thankyou riya u really rocked !
        Love uh loads my chocopie nd a big teddy hug
        Take care

    2. Aafiya on October 1, 2017 2:01 am

      It was awesome…
      I am your silent reader of your ff and os and I have been reading it from first,but I have not commented on your ff and os, sorry for that definitely from now I will comment..
      And congratulations for your 100 posts in telly updates..
      Take care..

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:40 pm

        Omg thanku so much aafia
        Knowing few silent readers is like getting few drops of water in drought ??(sorry for overacting ) but really thanku so much
        Take care you too dear nd love uh sweetie

    3. Niyati on October 1, 2017 2:13 am

      Aww, di it’s amazing OS . Can’t have words to describe this . I think i start in looking dictionary for u as every word is nothing in fron of your os .Glad that u back with ff & i am dancing with happiess.Lots of love to u . Congrats for your shagun post hehe…..Take care.
      Happy Dussehra di.
      Niyu

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:41 pm

        Awwwww that’s so so sweet of you niyuu! Nd yeah I have submitted next post with a message for everyone nd teaser !
        Take care sweetie !
        Same to you !
        Your Di

    4. Priyanshi on October 1, 2017 3:45 am

      Haye kya mast likhte ho Ji.
      Before marriage date -first nd last date of saanchi nd not praising for food being romantic was hilarious u rocked it dear.
      So post asap

      • Priyanshi on October 1, 2017 3:50 am

        Nd if u don’t mind why don’t you write 2nd part of this os. It’s amazing

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:42 pm

        Sure I will look onto that dear !

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:42 pm

        Thanku so much Priyanshi for such amazing comment ! I am really glad u liked it

    5. Palak.Sharma on October 1, 2017 4:02 am

      The cutest and hottest OS!! Just Speechless!! Hats Off!! Grand Salute!!

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:43 pm

        Omg thankyou so much palak ! Getting compliment from such an awesome writer is like super se bhi upar !

    6. yaashi23 on October 1, 2017 6:52 am

      Haaaye!!! Trishu thanx u shona for coming back and soooooo much congratsssssss for 101th shagun wala post.i wish tum aise hi 1001 post pure karo..love u dear and coming to os ,ab main kya boluu?? And happy waala dasshera

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:44 pm

        Awww your “Shona” directly went to the heart sweetie ! Nd thanku so much I am so happy I liked it dear !
        Same to you too

    7. Neha7873 on October 1, 2017 7:55 am

      It’s the best. ..really liked it …i mean it’s just perfect .

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:44 pm

        Thanku so much neha

    8. Khamoshi on October 1, 2017 8:10 am

      TRISHA !!! TRISHA!!! TRISHA!!
      No words yaar.. it was spellbound.. it was so cute and romantic…utensils and the marital dram was too much realistic.. i fell in love with ur writing dear.. thanks for mentioning my name in ur article..its a big achievement for me to be a part of ur journey. Love u a lots dear..gbu. keep smiling

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:45 pm

        Awwww thanku so much mitali ! Infact I am also a crazy fan of your writings ! Love uh loads dear
        And a big teddy hug too
        Tc

    9. Neha on October 1, 2017 8:26 am

      Congrats for shagun post!!! And i m happy that u r going 2 start a new ff! Yay!! I m sooo excited

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:46 pm

        Thanku neha nd sure dear

    10. Alia on October 1, 2017 9:45 am

      Amazing

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:46 pm

        Thanku

    11. Rajnandini on October 1, 2017 10:29 am

      Omg trishu it was soooooo amazing….. I loved it a lot dear….. My heart is still beating fast and my cheeks have became red reading ur os…. Ittne simple concept ko ittna beautifully kese likh leti ho yaar?? Mujhe ye baat toh pata hai ki har wife ko apne husband se ye complain hamesha hoti hai!! Aur ye baat ittni common hai par tumhare os mai boohat unique lagi!!! And congrats for ur 101 post dear…. I wish ki hamara saat marte dam tak naa choote… Love u loads??

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:47 pm

        Awwww thankyou so much vrushti for this awesome comment dear ! You made my day dear really !
        Ofcourse Ofcourse I am not going to leave you guys so soon ! Hehe ?
        Love uh too dear

    12. Anonymousaa on October 1, 2017 11:18 am

      It was quite funny yet romantic.
      I loved Sanchi’s taunts so much that I was laughing visualizing the scene.
      Plz plz plz post its sequel na. I would love to read more of the workaholic Kabir.
      Congoratz for ur 101th post Trishi.

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:49 pm

        Thanku anonymous I Ann so happy I iiked it ! Infact another reader asked me for the sequel so I will look forward to that read but before that something is on the way !
        “Trishi ” was cute !

    13. Abhilasha on October 1, 2017 11:42 am

      Omg trishu ???????????….what a romantic is..haye mai various jawa is pe…..jaw dropped os yr…loved it to infinity!!!

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:49 pm

        Thanku so much abhilasha! I am so happy u liked it dear !

    14. Amnaa on October 1, 2017 11:50 am

      Amazing…. Loved it very much

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:49 pm

        Thanku amnaa

    15. niyaaa on October 1, 2017 11:53 am

      Hey trishu finally u updated ur shagun post …hehehe.. Short sweet nd hottest realistic os post nxt one nd ur ff chpt too lovvv u tc sona

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:50 pm

        Thanku so much dear glass u liked it niyaa !
        Love uh too sweetie ! Take care

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:51 pm

        Glad*

    16. Divya on October 1, 2017 12:15 pm

      Awesome super fabulous fantastic os Trishu and update ur ff also missing soo much

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 3:36 pm

        Hey dear I have discontinued “connected by birth ” nd started a new one that will be posted soon sweetie !

    17. Sajnana900 on October 1, 2017 12:33 pm

      Ooossssmmmm trishu dear
      U r the os queen
      How these ideas came into ur mind
      That was sprb
      And ya plz continue ur ff (CONNECTED BY BIRTHS)

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 3:36 pm

        Hey dear I have discontinued “connected by birth ” nd started a new one that will be posted soon sweetie !
        Nd thanku so much sweetie !

      • Sajnana900 on October 1, 2017 4:03 pm

        Oww i was waiting 4 that but thats alright
        Excited 4 the new one

    18. Sajnana900 on October 1, 2017 12:34 pm

      And ya also cngrts for ur century
      Lots of kisses and a big wala teddy hug to u
      Keep writing dear luv u alot

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 3:37 pm

        Awww thanku so much dear
        Return teddy hug to you !
        Luv uh loads dear

    19. Tumpamoni on October 1, 2017 12:59 pm

      Soooooo sry [holding ear] 4 late commenting my sweet angel queen.. U know what i lost my words,,nthing 2 say 4 ur outstnding,,super se uppaaaaaar os.. Lots of lv & kisses.. Thnk u sooo much 4 accept my rqst..

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:51 pm

        Awww no need or say sorry dear but yeah I wasn’t waiting for your comment ! Thanku for this amazing comment nd love uh back !

    20. Faria on October 1, 2017 1:03 pm

      Nice epsd.. Waiting 4 ur ff..

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:52 pm

        Thanku faria
        Glad u commentEd dear
        Ff is on the way

    21. Alo on October 1, 2017 1:06 pm

      Amazing.. Ur silent reader..

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:53 pm

        Thankyou alo
        Your commment means a lot keep commenting ?

    22. Sanjukta on October 1, 2017 1:10 pm

      Its awsm..amazing..splendid…tooo gd…nd mny more…write an OS on Kanchi nd Praveer…I like Praveer also…

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 1:54 pm

        Thankyou sanyukta nd I will look forward for your wish

    23. Dhruti on October 1, 2017 2:29 pm

      it was awesome, mind blowing, what i said about your os i have no words i just love your os a big hug for you and congress for 101 (shagun wala 101) post.
      keep writing…..keep entertaining us…..come with new one ff/os….. bye…

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 3:34 pm

        HeheHmm thnku so muchsweetie don’t mind but looks like you commented sitting in metro
        Loads of love
        Take care
        Bye

    24. anu on October 1, 2017 3:40 pm

      So so beautiful and amazing story

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 6:12 pm

        Thanku anu

    25. Anuradha123 on October 1, 2017 7:51 pm

      Sorry Trisha.. I’m the last one to comment.. Actually I was not well…. Coming to your story.. It’s always fabulous, mind blowing, ravishing etc… A song only for u
      O Trisha! Chura liya hai tumne.. Chura liya…

      • Trisha139 on October 1, 2017 9:31 pm

        ? awww thanku so much anu that was so sweet nd not an issue dear u r always welcome !

    26. Jessicca on October 8, 2017 3:33 pm

      Sholly trishu for the late comment… But it was truly fantastic… Amazing… Outstanding… Marvelous… Superb… Brilliant.. You always come with super interesting ideas.. Loved it… And love you too❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

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