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Home»Fan Fiction»I really love you (a twinj story) chapter 9
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I really love you (a twinj story) chapter 9

Fatimaa.By Fatimaa.March 16, 201739 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hello everyone….
I m back wid my 9th episode..
Firstly sorry for nt posting bt m happy now coz physics exam is over…
Well thanks to all who commented…and silent readers too…
Ok soo lets start wid d epi..

???????
It was morning and today all were going from jaipur…they decided dat they will visit fatehpur nd den will go to home..
So it was actually last second day of the trip..
All were ready n headed towards d car after breakfast…
It was going to b a long journey from jaipur to fatehpur..they started for d journey…
Twinkle mahi chinki payal all were playing games in d car nd enjoying…..
Aftr sometime it was noon..so dey decided to stop for lunch..
As they came out nd went in the hotel..

Mahi seemed angry so twinkle went to her..
Twinkle: heyy mahi kya hua..
Mahi: yaar my phone is gonna dead…nd i dnt hav any means to charge it..
Twinkle: ohho car me charge kar lena..
Mahi: no yaar twinkle rt uncle has kept his phn to charge..
Twinkle: ohh..achha haa kunj is having power bank…use dat..
Mahi: yeah i thought bt bhai wont give me na…u ask him na..dat u want to charge ur phn…plzz
Twinkle: aree yaar….achha ok i ll try..

This way they went for lunch nd after lunch all were again heading towards car..just den twinkle came to kunj..
Twinkle: umm kunj listen na..
Kunj: ha bol
Twinkle: voh my phns battery is dead…can u give me ur power bank for sometime…jaise hi mera phn charge ho jayega..i ll give it back to u..
Kunj: ok here take it..but now dnt give to everyone q ki fir isko charge karna bhari pad jayega..
Twinkle: ha pakka..thank u..
Kunj: its alright..ab chalo..
Dis way all sat in d car nd twinkle gave d power bank to mahi…..after half n hour they stopped for a while as usha nd leela wanted to buy the traditional things frm the stalls…

All went out nd were roaming…jyst den rt asked kunj to bring his phn from d car..
Kunj went to car nd was taking rt’s phn jus den he saw dat mahi’s phn was kept to charge in the power bank..
Kunj was angry bt dint say anything..
After a while they were again starting journey…mahi’s phn was charged so twinkle went to kunj to return his power bank…she went nd said

Twinkle: here ur power bank ..thnk u..
Kunj took it frm her nd dint say nything…nd left to his car..twinkle felt weird bt she let it go…
After a tiring journey dey reached fatehpur at 9 pm..
They were tired so first dey went to hotel nd had dinner…twinkle felt something weird abt kunj..
She thought to ask him once dey were in d room..

After dinner all went to der rooms..
In the room…all went inside chinki mahi and twinkle went to balcony as it was a big room….payal went to change…kunj was in d room..he was sitting idle…
Twinkle saw him nd she excused herself for a min..
She came to room nd asked kunj..

Twinkle: kunj what happened…
Kunj: what..
Twinkle: y r u behaving weird..did i do something…
Kunj: u know better..
Twinkle: wat tell me clearly..
Kunj: u asked power bank for urself or mahi…
Twinkle was scared as she was caught(yaar uss time to pasine chhot rahe the mujhe???)..
Twinkle: voh kunj…see i ll tell d truth..nd she says him everything…
Kunj: cant mahi ask me directly if she wants..he shouted..
Twinkle: i told her bt she told dat u wont give her…
Kunj: no twinkle i wud nt hav refused her..bt she always think dat nd assumes..i donno y….nd now u too..
Twinkle: no kunj its not like dat…i m srryyy i shd nt hav lied to u…she said crying..

Kunj: arre yaar stop crying now…its fyn….now i dnt care coz mujhe adat ho gayi hai mahi k behaviour ki..(u know guyzz i really feel bad for my kunj..i dnt understand y mahi do this way….nd i really cant help it…coz my kunj dont wnt me to interfere????..so helpless i feel..)..
Twinkle: so srry kunj….plzz dnt feel bad…
Kunj: its ok twinkle…tujhe bimari hai kya srry bolne ki….
Twinkle laughed at his statement…nd then kunj said..
Kunj: now leave all dis…bt nxt time dnt lie to me..
Twinkle: ha pakka…..
Dis way dey smiled nd den all went to sleep….
???????

Preacap-last day of trip..

Hope u liked it…
Plzz comment karna…
Love u all❤❤❤❤???..

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    I LOVE MY LIFE BECAUSE IT GAVE ME YOU.....I LOVE YOU BECAUSE YOU ARE MY LIFE ???????????????????

    39 Comments

    1. Anayaali on March 16, 2017 2:32 pm

      Hey fatima epi was superb…
      And plzzzzz reply to my msg i have msg u on whatsapp

    2. Anayaali on March 16, 2017 2:33 pm

      Plzzzzz i am waiting for ur reply and i am from pakistan…

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 4:59 pm

        Thank u soo much anayaali…
        Thnx for d commend..
        Nd dear i hav closed my watsapp just till 31st march..exams r der soo..
        As i will onn my watsapp..i ll surely msg u…

    3. Sohi on March 16, 2017 2:38 pm

      It was very cute di

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 4:59 pm

        Thnk u sohi..
        Love u

    4. lovey on March 16, 2017 3:04 pm

      Awsome and thora emotinal bhi agli dafa thora long plz love it

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 5:00 pm

        Thnks lovey…
        I ll post soon..
        Love u

    5. Cp on March 16, 2017 3:08 pm

      ????lovely episode dii……and jigs ?and you are really adorable ☺☺
      Post next when you get time????

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 5:00 pm

        Thnk u cp…
        Love u??

    6. Presha on March 16, 2017 3:34 pm

      Hey did its just awesome…..
      Loved it to core yaa…. ????

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 5:01 pm

        Heyy presha..
        Thnk u dear..
        Love u

    7. maha on March 16, 2017 4:20 pm

      nice..epi
      post..soon

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 5:01 pm

        Thnx maha..
        Luv u

    8. Sameera on March 16, 2017 4:39 pm

      Wow yaar sooo cutee loved it sooo much yaar hayeee ye siblings nah ????
      Pity on u how will u manage them both ,??????do cont soon plzz

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 5:02 pm

        Aww sameera thnk u yaar..
        Really this siblings…uff i always get trapped in them?????..
        Well love u dear

    9. adeeba_zain on March 16, 2017 4:56 pm

      Hey fatimah..its amazing..fantastic fabulous…
      Post soon..
      Luv u..
      Bye..

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 5:04 pm

        Heyy addu..
        Thnx dear..
        Love u

    10. SidMin on March 16, 2017 5:28 pm

      Aww…. so sweet year it was just fun….. you wet scared of him … and sorry bolne ke Bimari ?
      Love you post soon ❤

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 6:19 pm

        Thnk u soo much sidmin..
        Hehe..yaar i was really scared of him???…but now toh i m d boss..???..
        Love u dear..

    11. anshikajainn on March 16, 2017 6:33 pm

      Yrr it was soooooooooo cuteeee

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 7:18 pm

        Thnk u anshika…
        Love uh???

    12. Anayaali on March 16, 2017 8:24 pm

      Hey fatima thanks for reply and yeah i’ll surely wait for ur msg on whatsapp and best of luck and plzz must repply to my msg whenever u open ur whatsapp

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 9:51 pm

        Suree my dear…i will reply…???

    13. Maggi on March 16, 2017 9:03 pm

      Loved der argument.. Too good…☺☺☺
      CNT soon

      • Fatimaa. on March 16, 2017 10:35 pm

        Ohhh thnk u soo much for d comment..
        Glad dat u commented…
        Thnk u dear nd well i wanna say dat its my own real love story..
        Love uh dear

    14. Purnima.agrawal30 on March 16, 2017 11:47 pm

      Awesome amazing

      • Fatimaa. on March 17, 2017 10:50 am

        Tysm purnima..
        Love uh

    15. Sidhant on March 17, 2017 1:28 pm

      Nice

    16. Fatimaa. on March 17, 2017 1:41 pm

      Thnks for d comment Mr RJ..??..

    17. Ramya on March 17, 2017 6:41 pm

      Hi Fatima
      I have waited for ur ff alot
      It’s lovely n yaar kunj tumpe gussa hua tho tujhe bura laga
      But it’s awesome
      Love u keep smiling

      • Fatimaa. on March 17, 2017 8:13 pm

        Thnk u soo much ramu..
        Ha yaar jab mera kunj mujhse gussa hota hai toh muje boht bura lagta nd i cry alot…
        But then he comes to pacify me wid gifts nd sweet talks….so i melt…haha..
        But i love him..????
        Well thnx again nd luv u dear..❤❤

      • Ramya on March 17, 2017 8:28 pm

        Awwww dis is so sweet gesture of jiju
        Love u

      • Fatimaa. on March 17, 2017 8:41 pm

        ????? yeah he is really sweet..

    18. Nisha on March 20, 2017 4:36 pm

      Wow nice one nd ur kunj is so sweet

      • Fatimaa. on March 20, 2017 7:54 pm

        Thnks dii..
        Love uh

    19. Amaya Bhardwaj on March 20, 2017 11:15 pm

      Sabse phele Toh sooo Solly Solly Solly yrr for commenting late….
      Epi was amazing awsm…..BT yrr jiju Tere SE gussa ho gye…. Tujhe Bura laga…..Yrr Sachi M mahi aisi hi h …
      Love you sweetie ….??????

      • Fatimaa. on March 21, 2017 10:02 am

        Its ok but thnk u soo muchh for commenting..
        Ha yaar wen he gets angry on me i feel bad…
        Mahi actually boht achhi hai bt vo zara ziddi hai…soo unn dono ki nai banti???..
        But agar mahi k samne uske bhai ki burai kare to vo usko nai chhodti…??….both kunj nd mahi r crazy…nd mujhe b pagal kar denge

    20. baby on March 24, 2017 12:46 am

      Awww….ohhh god fatimaa dii really too cute… 🙂
      Angry shit…srsly well mahi or chinki ko awaaz nhi sunaayi di thi kya kunj ke chilaane ki…..or aapke pasine chut rhe the srsly….n dats really sad dat mahii aisaa sochti hai kunj ke baare mei khaer bhai behan hain samj jayenegee…. 🙂
      Loves it…. 🙂
      Lods of love…srriee m late…

      • Fatimaa. on March 24, 2017 10:43 am

        Thnk uu soo much baby…
        Well jab me aur kunj baat kar rahe the tab mahi nd chinki balcony me the nd me jab room me ayi tab i closed d door(smart??)…
        Loved too see ur comment nd hope ye mahi aur kunj sudhar jaye???…
        Lovee uu too sweetheart…❤❤❤❤

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