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Home»Fan Fiction»The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Spring Part 04)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Spring Part 04)

administratorBy administratorMay 1, 201628 Comments6 Mins Read
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HEY GUYS! SORRY FOR BEING IRREGULAR! YOU ALL KNOW M VERY LAZY!! ACCHA GUYS PLEASE BE CALM! AFTER WRAPPING THIS I WILL START MY ANOTHER FF. SO HERE IS THE 4TH PART OF THIS FF.
While opening the cap of the bottle Swara injured herself.
Swara: Ahh!!
Swara screamed in pain.
Uttara: What happened? Cut your finger?
Laksh came inside the room worried.
Laksh: What happened? Blood? Swara are you fine?
Swara: Yes I am fine.
Swara was about to wipe her hand with duppata when Laksh forwarded his hanky.
Laksh: Take this don’t spoil your duppata..
Swara took the hanky and pressed her right hand with right hand. The white hanky became red due to blood stains.
Laksh: Wait. I am bringing the dettol bottle.
Swara: What? Dettol?? Nono!! It will pain…
Laksh: Sit down. I am bringing.
Pal do pal ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Is pyar ko hai sadiyan kafi nahi
Toh khuda se mang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tum mera humdard hai
Suhana har dard hai
Laksh brought the dettol bottle and placed it in Swara’s finger. Swara screamed. Laksh blowed air on her finger. Swara smiled and looked at Laksh lovingly.
Teri muskurahatein hai taqat meri
Mujhko inhi se hai ummed mili
Chahe koi sitam je jahan
Inme hi hai sada hifazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai

Swara was staring at Laksh. Laksh was applying ointment in her finger. Laksh too looked at Swara. Swara’s hair fell on her face. Laksh tossed her hairs behing her ears. When Laksh’s hand touched her face , she closed her eyes. Her heart begin to beat faster.
Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan
Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Swara kept that hanky on the table but Laksh picked it up.
Swara: Let it be. I will clean it and return it.
Laksh: No need!
Laksh kept that hankyin his pocket and left that room.
Swara: Strange!
Uttara: Not strange,different!
Swara: Means?
Uttara: I mean to say,if any other boy would have been here,he would have definitely taken advantage of this situation!
Swara: How?
Uttara: He would have tried to feel your hand. And have even tried to put your finger in his mouth to soak blood.
Swara: bass bass!
Uttara: am I lying?
Swara: Now, I have to go! Its too late!
Swara walked out of the room. she too realized that Uttara was saying the truth. She saw Laksh was sitting on the sofa staring at her blood stained hanky.
Swara: I am going.
Laksh: No,you cannot go without answering my question.
Laksh came close to Swara. He took her hand in his grip. Swara did not protest.
Laksh: Can you not love me? am I not capable of you? Say swara!
Laksh shaked Swara.
Swara: If your love is true then I am ready to sacrifice anything.
Swara freed her hand and went!
“`
Laksh was all set to leave for Banaras. Uttara requested Swara to come to her house once before Laksh leaving for Banaras.
Swara: Uttara was saying that you are going?
Laksh: Yes! I am going today. I don’t have any idea when will I return. What is your plan after this?

Swara: after what?
Laksh: After this exam.
Swara: Marriage!
Laksh: Seriously? Whom?
Swara: Who will become my husband?
Laksh: Wahh! I heard something new! Have you fixed everything?
Swara: That work is not mine.
Laksh: Have you got any news about it?
Swara: Nothing will happen without my knowledge!
Laksh: Ohh! Swara I think your father wants to do your marriage quickly!
Swara: Yes! why should he delay? after my studies which work is left?
Laksh: But I will marry late.
Swara felt uncomfortable to ask why! So she remained silent.
Laksh: It’s true that I am joining a job but I have to give amny interviews. Even I am giving bank exams. I cannot marry till I am settled. what do you think?
Swara: I agree with you. Without standing on your own feet you should not marry.
Swara was thinking that will she wait for Laksh? Laksh was thinking that will she have to wait for Laksh? both were thinking about each other.
It was getting dark outside. the room was dark and silent.Uttara came with a coffee tray. shw switched on the lights. Swara came back to her senses.
Swara: Areey! Its evening. I have to go. Its too late.
Uttara: You drink the coffee. I will call the auto.
Uttara went out of the room. Without waiting for Laksh,she drank the coffee in one go. the coffee was very hot. Her eyes became red.
She was tensed about being getting late. She got up and looked at Laksh. He was staring her shockingly. The cup is kept there untouched.
Swara: Its eveing. I am going.
Laksh: will you go? But shone…
Swara’s heart beat became faster when she heard the word shone from his mouth for the first time.
Swara: Will you say something?
Laksh: yes!
Swara: Say!
Laksh came near Swara. He placed his hand on her shoulder and with the other he upped her chin. Swara looked into his eyes and tried to understand him.
Laksh: I have saved your beautiful face in my heart. I will remember this face everyday. But I have a request for you. Promise me that you will wait for me and not become anyone else’s.
Swara placed her hand on his hand. she looked into his eyes. She signed in his heart that she is his forever. Laksh hugged Swara nd left that room..
Swara had fully surrenederd herself to Laksh. Laksh went to Banaras that night. One beautiful story have started without saying anything.
Love never needs words to convey. It just needs two hearts and two eyes to communicate!

Guys! Please don’t think it is a swalak ff! this is a swara ff!
THANK YOU!
Love you all forever!

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28 Comments

  1. Anjali on May 1, 2016 7:45 pm

    Awesome……
    Waiting for each other…. such a romantic concept…???

    • Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:35 pm

      Eeeee!! Anju!! Let me call uh Anju!! You r so cute! Kash main ladka hota! I would definitely asked uh for a date!!! 😉
      Thank uh Anju! 🙂

  2. sethooty on May 1, 2016 7:59 pm

    Wow superb.. Jyoti.. Loved it…no words…
    Awesome…awesome…mind blowing..

    • Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:29 pm

      Seethoty! Thank uh very much!
      M glad that uh lykd it!!

  3. ria.. on May 1, 2016 8:05 pm

    lyk d story line..very NYC…

    • Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:26 pm

      Thank youuu!!!! 😉

  4. Needhi Singh on May 1, 2016 8:06 pm

    Hi Jyoti ,
    Finally finished reading previous episode.
    U write so beautifully.Your descriptions , dialogues and convos r so well written ,that i can easily picturise everything.It feels like i am very much part of the story rather being a mere spectator.
    Awstruck……..

    • Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:34 pm

      Thank uh!
      I feel that m not so good writer but uh guys encouraged me a lot!!! 🙂

  5. Kittu on May 1, 2016 8:13 pm

    Super…waiting nxt nd make bit long nxt 1

    • Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:35 pm

      Thank uh! I ll try to upload next a bit long!!

  6. IREENA on May 1, 2016 8:38 pm

    awesome no words to describe ur ff. plz tell me is spring part is also ended. i mean Autumn part is going to start.

    • Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:37 pm

      Thank uh Ireena! No its not d last part of Spring! I ll mention when it ll end!! 🙂

  7. Aashi on May 1, 2016 9:26 pm

    It was fabulous…but dear it was short… Please update longer….and overall loved it…?

    • Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:38 pm

      Thank uh! But uh knw m too lazy! It iz difficult for me to type long!! :p

  8. Jyotii on May 1, 2016 10:16 pm

    Eeeee!! Anju!! Let me call uh Anju!! You r so cute! Kash main ladka hota! I would definitely asked uh for a date!!! 😉
    Thank uh Anju! 🙂

  9. Priyanka on May 1, 2016 10:42 pm

    Just loved the last line. Swara waiting for Lucky. Awesome.

    • Jyotii on May 2, 2016 3:29 pm

      Thank uh very much

  10. Laksh on May 1, 2016 10:45 pm

    Woaahh. Fantastic. Post next soon.

    • Jyotii on May 2, 2016 3:27 pm

      Thanks Laksh! 🙂

  11. Priya on May 1, 2016 10:50 pm

    Wow dii. Lovely. Truely love it. Hatss off to u.

    • Jyotii on May 2, 2016 3:30 pm

      Thanks Priya! 🙂
      Love uh!

  12. Meher on May 1, 2016 10:56 pm

    Just came here as I was bored n saw ur ff. I jumped in excitement. This part ll remain my personal favorite.
    Post next quickly.

    • Jyotii on May 2, 2016 3:35 pm

      Thanks for being such a wonderful support.

  13. Sanky on May 2, 2016 10:44 am

    Superb. Speeches.

    • Jyotii on May 2, 2016 3:58 pm

      Thanks dear

  14. Karishma on May 2, 2016 11:55 am

    Amazing. Next part…. Post next quickly. I cannot wait.

  15. Manisha on May 2, 2016 12:38 pm

    Brilliant. Loved it. Post next asap.

  16. Tanya on May 2, 2016 12:41 pm

    Was this that you were saying? Thanks a billion tym for adding my fav sing. This is d best part of this ff. Love this n u. 😉

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