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Home»Fan Fiction»The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Rain-Part 06)
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The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Rain-Part 06)

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Hey Guys! Sorry for not commenting on the last part. Actually I had some work. So here is the last part Rain. After this spring part will start.

Adarsh bhai returned after 4days. He directly went to his room and laid on the bed. His body was as hot as boiling water..
Parineeta bhabi: Swara, You go and sit near your Adarsh bhai. He is suffering from high fever. Go and change the water cloth on his head. He will feel better. I am just coming from the kitchen.
Swara silently went to his room. Adarsh bhai was sleeping on the bed at that time. She went near him and placed her head on his forehead. It was very hot. Swara changed the water cloth. Adarsh bhai did not open his eyes.
Swara: Is it paining?
Adarsh bhai: Swara?
Swara: Yes.
Adarsh bhai: Have you not gone?
Swara: No!
Adarsh bhai: But why?
Swara: Why should I go?
Adarsh bhai: Why should you not go?
Swara: My wish.
Adarsh bhai: Not wish, sympathy.
Swara: Sympathy? Huh! Why you scolded Parineeta bhabi unnecessarily? Why you argued with her? You know very well why was I going?
Adarsh bhai: Were you waiting to fight with me?
Swara: Yes!
Adarsh bhai: Now go.
Swara: No, I will not go. Who are you to say me to go?
Adarsh bhai: This is my house.
Swara: Adarsh bhai.
Adarsh bhai: Yes this is my house and I am saying you to go.
Swara: I will go and you will again fight with my innocent Parineeta bhabi?
Adarsh bhai: Oh! Then you are not going for Parineeta?
Swara: Yes! I am not like you. I cannot kick your love and go.
Adarsh bhai: What about my love?
Swara: Stop! Don’t argue. Fever is increasing.
Adarsh bhai: Let it increase.
Swara: why?
Adarsh bhai: I want to die.
Swara sat silently.
Adarsh bhai: Will you not ask why?
Swara: I know the reason.
Adarsh bhai: You are very clever.
Swara: Yes! Now eat this fruits.

After 2-3 days Adarsh bhai was completely fine. All because of Parineeta bhabi. she stayed awake late night in spite of being pregnant for Adarsh bhai. She did all his work. Do Swara too have to do all this work??
That day Parineeta bhabi’s labor pain had stated. Adarsh bhai took her to the hospital. Swara was alone in the house waiting for good news. Adarsh bhai returned in the evening with a smiling face.

Adarsh bhai: Parineeta gave birth to a boy.
Swara: Congrats. I need sweet. You became father for the first time.
Adarsh bhai: Give me tea. My head is paining.
Swara brought tea and snacks for him.
Adarsh bhai: Press my head. It’s paining a lot.
Swara: Parineeta bhabi had said to call Sulagna bhabi. Why didn’t you inform her?
Adarsh bhai: I am here with you. Am I an animal who will eat you up?
Swara: No! I am okay when will Parineeta bhabi come?
Adarsh bhai: after 3-4 days.
Adarsh bhai saw Swara. she was wearing a salwar. Her dupata had slid a little down. Adarsh bhai kept staring her body. Adarsh bhai got up and hugged Swara pressing her body on his chest. Then he placed his hot lips on her soft lips and Swara pushed Adarsh bhai away.
Swara: What are you doing Adarsh bhai? Will you kill me?
Adarsh bhai: You wanted to eat sweet nah? I am feeding you sweet.
Adarsh bhai took his steps towards Swara. Swara’s body started to tremble. Even she beginned to cry.
Adarsh bhai: why did you asked for sweets?
Swara: Because you became the father of your first child.
Adarsh bhai: If you will also become the mother of your first child… then… it will be great.
Adarsh bhai’s hand begined to move towards her waist. He encirciled his hands around her waist and grabbed her close. His warm breath fell on the nape of her neck. Adarsh bhai begined to move his hands on her neck. Swara stated crying and pleading him to let her go.Adarsh bhai made her sleep on the bed forcefully and pressed her hands. He wanted to push his body inside hers. Swara’s eyes widened.
Swara: Why are you doing this?
Adarsh bhai: I will make you the mother of my child. I will make you mine.
Adarsh bhai’s eyes became red in passion. He wanted to touch every part of her body. He bigmed to touch her arms.
Swara: Afdarsh bhai,please leave me.
Adarsh bhai: If you wil become mother nobody can sepate you from me. You will be mine.
He said the last line in the devilish tone.
Swara: EnoughAdarsh bhai.
Swara slapped Adarsh bhai and pushed him off the bed and opened the door and went out.
Swara was runnig alone on the dark deserted road alone. She started ho hate adsrh bhai. The girl who feared darkness was running on the road confidently. The only fear she had was-Is Adarsh bhai following me?
She turned and saw no on.e She understood that Adarsh bhai did not wanted her love. He only carved for her body Faking his love he wanted to achieve her body. Swara stooped when she saw the big gate of her hostel.What will she say the reason of her arrival? Shall she say them about adsrh bhai? No!
She adjusted her hairs and knocked the gate.
Watchman: who is there?
Swara: Me! Swara.
Watchman: Oh Swara! You here at lso late night?
Swara:actually Parineeta bhabi had given birth to ababy boy and Adarsh bhai is at hospital so I came here.
Watch man: Congrats I need Sweets.
The wor”Sweet” from the mouth of a man made her heart pund. she ran quickly to her room. she closed the door and cried her heart out.Then she wiped her face and stood in front of the mirror.
She felt that she had gained maturity. Swara,like the fickle rain died thatnight. The shabby spring entered in her life!!
~~~~~~
End of Rain part!
THANK YOU!
Love you all forever!

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67 Comments

  1. anjali on April 18, 2016 4:03 pm

    oh. . poor swara.. superb part dear.. loved it

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:22 pm

      Thanks!!

  2. IREENA on April 18, 2016 4:18 pm

    awesome n rain part ends feeling bad for swara will adarsh come back in her life.

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:25 pm

      Thanks! No Adarsh ll not come back!!

  3. Dhara on April 18, 2016 4:21 pm

    Awesome chap Jyoti. I was crossing my fingers that nothing should happen to her..

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:40 pm

      Thanks yaar!!

  4. Smily on April 18, 2016 4:30 pm

    Give ur prev link pls its nyc yaar

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:21 pm

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=The+Rain%2CThe+Spring%2CThe+Autumn

  5. Sparkle on April 18, 2016 4:45 pm

    Thank god nothing happened to swara. Hope adarsh will not follow her now. Good update post next one soon.

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:35 pm

      No yaar! Adarsh’s chap ended here!

  6. Jwala on April 18, 2016 4:55 pm

    dear please don’t stop this in 18 episodes.. i love this ff lot.. please make it a long one

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:41 pm

      No yaar! Not 18. It may end before it or may end after it. No surety!

  7. diya on April 18, 2016 4:56 pm

    awesome.. continue soon

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:42 pm

      Thanks but I am taking a break!

  8. diya on April 18, 2016 4:57 pm

    amazing part

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:46 pm

      Thank uh very much

  9. neenu on April 18, 2016 4:59 pm

    nice one yaar

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 10:46 pm

      Thanks a ton!!

  10. heart on April 18, 2016 4:59 pm

    Feeling sorry 4 swara poor girl……….poor bby I just waana slap adarsh ……..it was awesome keep it up

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:05 pm

      Thanks for getting emotionally connected wid my story!! 🙂

  11. Anu Ann on April 18, 2016 5:04 pm

    Awesome dear

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:13 pm

      Thank ew! 😉

  12. ruby on April 18, 2016 5:04 pm

    if you can please give link of previous parts

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 5:41 pm

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=The+Rain%2CThe+Spring%2CThe+Autumn

  13. mitti on April 18, 2016 5:18 pm

    Ohh wow. ..It really touched my heart dear. …its an amazing ff. …s*xual harassment of girls is soo heaping now a days …no one thinks of the girls condition….n sadly 90% are of the family members only…

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:20 pm

      Yaar I m inspired from current situation!
      n yes thanks!

  14. Ptiyanka on April 18, 2016 5:31 pm

    Finally Swara is safe. Eagerly waiting for Spring part

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:29 pm

      Thanks a lot. but uh have to wait.

  15. JANVI on April 18, 2016 5:32 pm

    woooow dear….. ur writing skills r just amazing dear….
    i litreally cried after reading this part…… i felt really bad fr swara…
    the rain part was amazing dear…
    i am eagerly waiting fr the spring prt…

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:30 pm

      Thanks yaar but I am taking a break!

  16. Laksh on April 18, 2016 5:35 pm

    First ff based on s*xual harassment. Hope spring nd autumn parts are as good like this part.

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:33 pm

      Thanks. I ll try my best to stand up uhr expectation! 🙂

  17. Laksh on April 18, 2016 5:38 pm

    First ff on s*xual harassment. Waiting for the next part. Please make it a little lengthy. Amazing.

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:36 pm

      Commented above

  18. Jyotii on April 18, 2016 5:43 pm

    Sorry guys! Cannot reply to everyone! I am busy! I am in a IT buzz! I cannot post for 2-3 days! But I ll find tym n reply to everyone!! 🙂

  19. sumeeta on April 18, 2016 5:45 pm

    nice.waiting for winter

    • Jyotii on April 18, 2016 11:39 pm

      Thanks

  20. sumeeta on April 18, 2016 5:46 pm

    sorry waitting for spring

  21. Needhi Singh on April 18, 2016 5:56 pm

    Superb dear. As usual amazing and my heartiest congratulations to u for coming forward with a social problem , that too in a form of beautiful and heart touching story.Loved it. Love u dear for this genuine and true story.

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 10:38 am

      Thank you for praising my writings! 😉

  22. Kritika on April 18, 2016 6:04 pm

    Awesome di!! As usual…proved it…its a pure swara ff!! Lots of love, hugs n kisses…

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 10:40 am

      Chotu! Thank you! N lots of hugs n kisses from me too!! 😉 🙂

  23. Sanky on April 18, 2016 6:34 pm

    Speechless. Take your own time but do post.

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 10:43 am

      Thanks!

  24. Priya on April 18, 2016 6:36 pm

    Fantastic di. Awesome!!!!

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 10:44 am

      Thanks Priya!

  25. kriya on April 18, 2016 6:56 pm

    superb……waiting for spring part……

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:33 am

      Thanks a ton! 🙂

  26. sethooty on April 18, 2016 7:04 pm

    Superb Dr…thank god didn’t happen anything….waiying for spring.

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:36 am

      Thank you very much Sethooty! But I am taking a long break because of study pressure!! 🙁

  27. Karishma on April 18, 2016 7:52 pm

    Very nice. Will wait for 3-4 days!! No problem! But on one condition! Next part should be very long. Lyk never ending. 😉

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:08 pm

      Thanks! I ll try to make d next part long but never ending?? Hahaha!! 😉

  28. Tanya on April 18, 2016 8:06 pm

    No no girl! No way!
    You cannot take so long break! Not fair! 🙁 I ll kill you if you will not be back after 3days. 3days means 3days not 4days,else I ll reach Cuttack and will surely kill you.
    And yes dramebaz! Why were you saying this is uhr last ff?
    Guys she had written another ff. And its fantastic. I have read its prolouge! But she is saying she will not continue it just because the fear of getting bashed. Everyone plz say her to continue. Its worth reading.
    #Joe I plead you to continue it after this!!

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:13 pm

      Tanya!! Kill?? Itni si cute ladki ka murder?? 🙁 Telly update walo dekho iss rude ladki ko jo mujhe dhamka rahi hai!! 😉 Anyways I am safe! Cuz m not in Cuttack! Out of station for some college work! IT buzz! I ll return after 3weeks! Next post after 4weeks cuz 1week ka rest!! 😉 🙂 😉 🙂
      N haan I ll not continue that ff!! Nonono!!

  29. Shagun on April 18, 2016 8:11 pm

    Awesome
    Adarsh should be exposed soon infront of everyone

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:16 pm

      No dear! Swara wants to forget that anyone named Adarsh was in her life! Adarsh’s chap ended here! 🙂

  30. Anjali on April 18, 2016 8:31 pm

    Woahhh

    Amazing….

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:18 pm

      Thank you! 🙂

  31. aashi on April 18, 2016 11:36 pm

    Amazing dear!! Out of the box!!,?

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:21 pm

      Thanks a lot

  32. Jyotii on April 19, 2016 10:36 am

    Thanks a lot! But to be frank when I gave its intro n when I thought of writing it I thought no one will like it! But you guys proved me wrong!! 🙂

  33. Kaku on April 19, 2016 2:13 pm

    When will u update the next part pls update soon m dying to read next part

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:24 pm

      I ll update it after 4weeks! Thanks a lot!!

  34. Bisha on April 19, 2016 7:20 pm

    Jyotii, i was really very busy. Hence couodnt read or comment. Just now I read all the missing chapters and I should say its such a wonderful story. I can remembrr a poem BREAKING OUT after reading this part. She gained maturity. Its like innocence lost. You rocked it so wonderfully! Even handled the bashers with care. I love this part. And this part is a very good social message. Really we tell our daughters to keep away from from outside devils. But sometimes that devil is inside your own home, among your close peopke only. Finally Swara could strongly fight her fears and the devil inside Adarsh and emerge strong and found herself mature. TONS OF APPLAUDES DEAR. You have written this with so much perfectness and realistic. I too felt stronger with Swara. Each turn of the story made me turn and feel the feelings of Swara. Keep writing girl and start the spring soon.

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:28 pm

      Woowww! Thank you!! You readers are the one who make me write! Without you all I am nothing! Thanks a lot of ton!! 😉
      I ll update the next after 4weeks cuz m busy in college work!! 🙂

  35. Nive... on April 19, 2016 8:57 pm

    Superb yaar… waiting for spring…

    • Jyotii on April 19, 2016 11:48 pm

      Thanks

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