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Home»Fan Fiction»The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Autumn-Part 07)
Fan Fiction Swaragini

The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Autumn-Part 07)

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HEY GUYS! So I AM here with all your double dhamaka! Read it and you will get your shamaka!! So excited about it?? 😛
Swara opened that letter with her heart pounding. It was written.
Dear Tanya,
I cannot live even a second without you. I will marry only you. You say this to your daddy and mummy. We don’t need to wait till our studies to get over. We can marry after reaching America but we have to wait till me attain the eligible age for marriage. I will say all these to daddy before leaving for America. I don’t need my mom’s opinion. I will go there after two days. You say all these to your mom. I think that a lovable,caring and broad minded lady like her will not object our relationship. Love you and always will forever.
Yuvraaj
Swara shaked like a powerful earthquake. Someone pulled the rug beneath her legs. Her body was drenched in sweat. Now she cannot keep Tanya’s past in darkness. She have to disclose all these to Yuvraaj. But what will be Tanya’s state after that? Swara was confused what to do. She then decided that she will show the letter to Sanskar and seek his help. But no! What will Sanskar say? He will mock her. He will say that Tanya is her daughter and is walking on her path.
No! She will solve this alone. She doesn’t need anyone’s help. She don’t have anyone to pick up the stones from her path. She have to pick it up on her own or else she will be injured.
Swara was sitting alone these 2 days. Faking her illnesses she asked everyone to leave her alone. She was thinking what she will do next.
She heard a car’s horn from outside. Swara came outside with trembling legs. She saw Yuvraaj getting off the car. His face was shining. Swara’s blood was boiling. Son is more dangerous than father. After all fooling innocent girls in his blood. Yuvraj was walking just like Laksh. He was going directly into Tanya’s room.
Swara: Stop there.
Yuvraj stood there. Swara went to her room and brought the letter. She handed the letter to him.
Swara: Have you written this?
Yuvraj: Yes
Swara: What is your age?
Yuvraj: Running sixteen.
Swara: Don’t you feel shame?
Yuvraj: There is no reason to feel shame.
Swara became angrier. How shameless is this boy!
Swara:I am warning you. Stay away from Tanya. She is like your sister. Don’t keep any bad intentions.
Yuvraj: Bad intentions? You don’t know anything about us. She is my sweetheart. I love her. Yes! I will marry her. Nobody in the whole world can stop it.
Swara: Get out from my house. You are saying to marry my daughter in front of me? Besharam.
Swara’s eyes were red in anger. Yuvraaj’s eyes were even more red. His eyes were like burning balls.
Yuvraj: Aunty I am also warning you as you are Tanya’s mom but you will repent for this.
Swara:Get out.
Swara was screaming. Yuvraj went out without looking back even once. Tanya and Sanskar came out listening to Swara’s scream. Tanya was screaming and running behind Yuvraj.
Tanya: Listen Yuvraj. Have faith on me. I will not care anybody. I am yours.
Yuvraj started his car and waved his hands bidding bye to Tanya.
Yuvraj: We will talk in America, not here.
Yuvraj increased the sped of his car. Tanya sat at the entance of the house crying. Then she got up and went near Swara.
Tanya: Mumma!What you did? You don’t know Yuvraj is very sentimental and emotional. I can’t live without him.
Tanya said in between her sobs. Swara had not expected this from her. She became angrier. She slapped her furiously and continuously. (Remember once Sumi had slapped Ragu after ahe kidnapped her and forced swasan to marry)
Swara: Shameless girl. You should die. Yes I will kill you before marrying Yuvraj.
Sanskar pushed Swara and hugged Tanya. Swara’s hand marks were on Tanya’s face. Blood was oozing out from her lips.
Swara:Leave her. Today I will kill her.
Sanskar: Tanya will only marry Yuvraj. Who are you to touch her?
Swara: I am her mother. I have given her birth. I can kill her,slap her. I can do anything thatbI want. And if u will support you I will give poison to you.
Sanskar: You are not Tanya’s mother. You don’t have any right to touch her. She is my daughter. Ragini died after giving birth to Tanya. This is the truth.
Sanskar took Tanya and went inside. Swara cooled down like a ice. Few seconds ago she was crushing herself to have given birth to Tanya and now this have turned into the truth. She have been cheated her whole life. Adarsh bhai,Laksh and Sanskar-everyone have cheated her. The feelings which she had developed for Sanskar faded away. She saw Sanskar was applying ointments on Tanya’s wound.

Sanskar: Tanya have patience. You get well and then we will go to Yuvraj.
Tanya: Daddy you don’t know but he will never come here.
Sanskar: But after knowing that Swara is not your mother,he will definitely come here.
Tanya: Daddy don’t say like that. Mummy is now angry but later she will agree.
Sanskar: Tanya this is the truth. I married Swara after 1 month of your birth.
Tanya was crying while Swara came to her
Swara: Tanya, I am sorry. If I would have known that you are not my daughter, I would never have slapped you.
Swara ran to her room and cried lying on her bed.
Where is her child? Who will say her? From where will she get her child? She wants to hug her child just once.
Sanskar felt restless after listening Swara’s cry. Sanskar had kept her in darkness and she did not ask him why he did like this?
If she would have asked him,Sanskar would have said the real reason. But Swara had no complaint for Sanskar. Sanskar went near Swara. Swara got off from the bed seeing him.
Swara: Sanskar I am sorry to slap your daughter.
Sanskar: Swara,let me explain why I have done this.
Swara: No need to think about the past. I have no complaints against you. You go to your hospital, it’s very late. Even I am going to “Bachpan”. I have not gone there since 2 days.
Without waiting for Sanskar’s answer Swara went out. The next day Sanskar took Tanya and went to Uttara’s house. There they meet Yuvraaj. Sanskar decided to bring Uttara to their room so that she can explain everything to Swara. Uttara came to their house but Swara was not there so she decided to drop a letter for her. Swara opened that letter after returning and read it.
Swara,
Now it is very important to say you everything. After returning from you Yuvraaj is very sad. He is saying that if he will not marry Tanya he will not return from America. I thought after bringing the child away from you, you will live happily. I thought after marrying Sanskar you will get back your lost love. After all one day he was your dream man. Tanya is not your daughter. Now do you have any problem? Will you spoil Yuvraj’s life just to take revenge from Laksh bhai? Yuvraj is your son. I didn’t feel like giving him to orphanage. I kept him in my house. After 5 years of marriage medical reports said that bhabi can never become a mother. After that I said everything to Laksh bhai and handed him Yuvraj. But Yuvraj don’t know anything. He thinks that his mother left him with me and went. I also want to say something to Sanskar. I know you must never have said him that he is your Mr. Sweet.
Swara closed the letter.She hated herself for slapping her own son. She desired to hug him but now she can never do that.
She looked at her reflection in the mirror. She wiped her tears. She packed her own bags and went out. This world is very big. There are many children who are fighting for their life. There are many more unfortunate people than her. She will also live. But not for her. for others. For helpless children.
Today she aims to build the life of thousands illegitimate children. With this aim she was walking on Delhi’s highway all alone. The sun rays was falling on her. The autumn season was bidding bye to her. She shadow led her way- but where is the end?

#The_end!
So guys how was the end? Hope I have proved that this is a pure Swara ff! 
How was the double dhamaka? The first dhamaka is that Yuvraj is swalak’s son and the second dhamaka is that this chappy is the end.
Silent readers I want to make me feel your existence! Thank you everyone for your unflinching love and support. You all mean the world to me. I am nothing without you! 😉
A new ff is coming soon!!! 😀
THANK YOU!
Love you all forever! 😉

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110 Comments

  1. Dhara on May 19, 2016 12:17 pm

    Sorry to say but didn’t like the end 🙁 Swara still didn’t got her real happinness…

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:00 pm

      Dhara di! Never mind! I will write one happy epilogue.?

  2. anu on May 19, 2016 12:26 pm

    Good.but i expected that ine whole life swara face so many problems.sanskar love wara.both are love each other but cannot but cannot express thier feelings.i hope there live together.

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:01 pm

      Sorry Anu! I could not stand up ur expecations!?

  3. ria on May 19, 2016 12:33 pm

    i was literally crying how can anyone be so cruel to her. they all cheated her made her life miserable 🙁

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:02 pm

      Thanks for being connected!

  4. Shagun on May 19, 2016 12:34 pm

    Plz give proper ending
    We can’t say this ep as a end
    Swara didn’t settle in her life

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:02 pm

      Dear Swara did settle as she found an aim in her life.

  5. momo on May 19, 2016 12:40 pm

    its quite saddening….plzz make a happy endings

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:03 pm

      Will definitely try one?

  6. Priya on May 19, 2016 12:45 pm

    I was a silent reader but seeing ur end I got furious….I don’t like ur ending sorry to say but that’s the truth…this is not the appropriate ending for ur ff…maybe u can think its a correct end but not everyone… Pls. If u can give one more epi with good appropriate ending..let yuvaraj know about the truth..yuvi’s reaction..swara reaction..etc..et..pls. With all this come up with one more epi….

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:04 pm

      Sorry Priya! I could not stand ur expecation. Here I failed as a writer!?

    • Priya on May 19, 2016 9:39 pm

      I asking for one more epi…with yuvaraj coming to know the truth..his reaction..swara’s reaction hearing that yuvi came to know that she is her son…and many more happenings….pls. I request u to write a epilogue…

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:45 pm

      Priya! I will write an epilogue regarding this.

  7. sherin on May 19, 2016 12:46 pm

    yes i too feel like we need justice for swara…..make her happier pls..

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:05 pm

      Sherin I ll try!!

  8. Eva on May 19, 2016 12:53 pm

    Jyotii…i think i hardly commented in this ff….but i never missed an episode of this ff….this was one of the best ff i have ever read…i loved all the part…Rain,Spring and Autumn….but everywhere Swara lost..everyone played with her…and her emotions..that’s sad…every story doesn’t have a happy ending…i would love to read some more of this ff….plz plz plz Jyotiii keep writing…and i will read your new ff for sure.. 😀 😀

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:06 pm

      Eva! Commenting is not a big deal! You are reading this n its enough for me. Thanks a lot for boosting my engery

    • Princess on May 19, 2016 9:44 pm

      Hi Eva!! How are you?? Actually you are really an awesome author… And do read my stuff too and comment SAMJHOTA yah pyaar Swaragini

    • Eva on May 19, 2016 11:38 pm

      I’ll read it dear?

  9. liz on May 19, 2016 1:00 pm

    Wow. Dis was. A heart touching ff. Painful.. Feeling bad for swara. Unpredictable one.. Nd different from typical ff’s.. Hope that one day YU write a ff like dis on ragini also since m a ragini fan.. It’s a request. 🙂

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:07 pm

      Liz thank you very much! I will definitely try to write one ff on Ragini! ?

  10. APPI on May 19, 2016 1:01 pm

    PLEASE CHANGE THE END LET SANSKAR AND SWARA BE TOGETHER

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:08 pm

      From d starting I had said that this a pure Swara ff!

  11. Suba on May 19, 2016 1:05 pm

    Everyone deserves happiness in their lifes…. Same with swara you can’t leave the end just like that.. Even the same with sanskar…… Pls we need a happy ending. Like swasan union and they gets Tanya and yuvraj married….

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:09 pm

      Will definitely consider ur suggestion while writing epilogue.

  12. Aami on May 19, 2016 1:05 pm

    i cant belive tht it ended…… really soooo much lve for swara……. evry one she loves just betrayd her……. adarsh bhay for cheap intension ovr her body…. laksh for also same n for a beautiful time pass lvr…. n we cant say tht sanskar betrayd her fully…. he jst covr the truth for her good bu jst hurt at last…..
    yes we can see sanskar lvd her soooo much…… but the swasan nevr united…… really sad for tht…….
    and jyoti i hve a rqst plz update n epilogue or smnthg… bcoz we r eagerly wyting to wht hpn nxt in the lyf of swara, sanskar, yuvraj, tanya n laksh…..

    hope u make it asusual lyk ur wondrful skill ????
    love u lotz….

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:10 pm

      Aami thank you very much! I will definitely write an epilogue with happy ending. And you all will like it!?

    • Aami on May 20, 2016 12:15 am

      wyting for it dear…. ???

  13. anshel on May 19, 2016 1:07 pm

    i am always a silent reader nd i agree dat in reality ending mustnt be always happy bt plzzzzzzzzz i want a conclusive end can u just write an epilogue with all loose strings tied up ..plzzzz ….plzzz jyoti

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:11 pm

      Ty! I will definitely tie up all tge looae strings.

  14. Amu on May 19, 2016 1:18 pm

    Please give a appropriate ending yaar

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:12 pm

      Sure

  15. Shine on May 19, 2016 1:21 pm

    Don’t get sad Jyotii. I liked the end. You prooved that this is a pure Swara ff. 🙂
    But if Yuvraaj would have united wid her,it would have great but still this is good.

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:13 pm

      I did not end it in a pair as I always wanted Swara to live her life alone.

  16. Khamoshi on May 19, 2016 1:23 pm

    Different and super ……l am a person reading ffs for stories not pairs ….so luved it …I HV NVR seen original swaragini serial….. Try to give an epilogue…… But life usually s not conclusive….wt next …z always mystery …something always left in complete….

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:14 pm

      You are cent percent correct! I have planned to give an epilogue.

  17. Jenisha on May 19, 2016 1:28 pm

    Plz give a proper end… This is not call an end…. If you can’t give end than atleast give a epilogue…..plz…

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:14 pm

      Yes I ll keep d epilogue tomorrow.

  18. Swasan on May 19, 2016 1:30 pm

    Never had thought this would be the ending. But please write an epilogue with happy ending.

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:15 pm

      I will post an epilogue.

  19. Mugdha on May 19, 2016 1:36 pm

    Please give an epilogue..please please please…

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:15 pm

      Mugdha, i ll give!

  20. Jaf on May 19, 2016 1:37 pm

    Epilogue Pls! ???
    So sad ending…..
    I am crying Pls!!……

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:16 pm

      Jaf, I am giving an epilogue. Don’t worry!

  21. Jwala on May 19, 2016 1:38 pm

    sorry yaar.. i didn’t like the ending.. it was an interesting ff.. but last part something is missing.. it is a swara ff not meant that she can’t live happily or she can’t have a family.. please give her some happiness.. don’t end it like this.. please.. it was my favorite ff.. please don’t destroy it by giving such an unpleasant ending

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:17 pm

      From the beginning I had decided this end. Sorry to destroy ur interest in dis ff. But I am writing a happy ending.

  22. Jwala on May 19, 2016 1:41 pm

    if you are really ending it please come with another ff with swara as lead please.. it is a request..

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:18 pm

      Many have requested to write on Ragini after that I ll write on Swara.

  23. Swati on May 19, 2016 1:42 pm

    Jyotii it is very nice. I love this. Real life is like this . You have depicted emotions very well. N i am with you in this end. Love this nd U 😉

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:20 pm

      You r first one who fully agreed totally wid my end. Thanks a ton for understanding me!!??

  24. Laksh on May 19, 2016 1:48 pm

    I am pissed off with this ending. Please make Swara happy. Write one more epi. Plzzzzz. A request. 🙁

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:20 pm

      I will consider ur request.?

  25. Hannah on May 19, 2016 1:49 pm

    The ending is good but you need an epilogue.. You don’t need to show swasan united or anything… But just like Swara is living happily rather than just wandering on the road.. Also unite Tanya and Yuvraj
    If you can write such a ff on Ragini also
    This is purely my opinion.. You can take it if you want 🙂

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:22 pm

      Swara had got an aim to build d future of many illegitimate children. Shez not wondering on street.
      I will definitely write one on Ragu!

  26. Priya on May 19, 2016 2:01 pm

    Didu
    I don’t like the end. But this is fav. ff. Don’t think that m bashing ew. I am just saying that its very sad. Please I want a happy ending.
    Dii don’t get disheartened. I love ew didu. 😉

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:23 pm

      I know u can never bash me. I will surely give a happy wala end.

  27. Apurva Desai on May 19, 2016 2:06 pm

    ooohh dear life may itna struggle kare ke baad end may khushi jarur milti hai……plz yaar yaha end mat karo……swasan ko mila do……really disgusting end

    • Kritika on May 19, 2016 2:30 pm

      Ur every line is correct except the last one yr
      .plz don’t be soo harsh yr

    • Apurva Desai on May 19, 2016 4:03 pm

      sorry dear but itney ache ff ka sad end hona bohot bura lagta hai….life may itna struggle karne k baad swara ko saskar ka pyaar milna chahiye tha

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:25 pm

      Chotu chill yaar!?

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:26 pm

      Apurva, I know u love this ff but u hate this end!

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:25 pm

      Have u read d intro? There I had said this ia a pure Swara ff! I cannot write any pair at d end! But only for all u readers I am writing one!

  28. Meher on May 19, 2016 2:07 pm

    Jyo, its too good. I love the end. Cuz from d ending you have said this will be a swara ff. I knew frm d bgng that Swara ll be alone at d end. But at the end Swara got an aim which is too good.
    Waiting for new ff.

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:28 pm

      Meher! You always understand me!! Thanks a ton for this! New ff is cmng soon!!?

  29. Shona on May 19, 2016 2:14 pm

    Dii the end was good but it can be better. I hope u ll give us an epilogue.?

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:29 pm

      Shona! I ll give an epilogue. Thanks!

    • Shona on May 19, 2016 10:13 pm

      Thank u for giving an epilogue.???

  30. Lovely on May 19, 2016 2:15 pm

    The end was bakwass.

    • Kritika on May 19, 2016 2:30 pm

      Please don’t be harsh dear! She is thinking to change it!

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:31 pm

      Lovely, sorry if u r hurt by d end.

  31. Tanya on May 19, 2016 2:25 pm

    Noddy now I know you must be crying now.?
    Babby chillax!!!! You always say me to chill now its ur duty to say that.
    Baby we expected much from you and we were emotionally connected with this so we want a happy ending. You know Saba was also bashed like this. So please don’t feel bad.
    I love u my noddy?❤

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:35 pm

      Big ears I knew you will always be with me!! I love uh too my Tani!!??
      N yes it hurts when a reader doesnot understand a writers POV but chill m not crying bcz m not so weak! I understood reader’s Pov n ll definitely try to satisfy dem!!

    • Tanya on May 19, 2016 10:10 pm

      How can I not support my better half!_
      Soul sisters!❤

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 11:13 pm

      Frankly say did u like d ending??

  32. Manisha on May 19, 2016 2:51 pm

    Swara suffered a lot in her life and she deserves better in her life. If you want to end as Swara alone you can end it but atleast keep Swara happy.

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:36 pm

      Mani! Will definitely consider ur suggestions.

  33. ❤?Natasha?❤ on May 19, 2016 2:53 pm

    ??????it was emotional……. it was just awesome……

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:37 pm

      Thank u so much sissy!??

  34. Priyanka on May 19, 2016 2:55 pm

    Woowww. The most emotional ending that I have ever read.
    Jyotii I love this end nd this is my fav ff.
    Waiting for -For You!!!?

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:38 pm

      Thank u Priyanka!
      For you is coming soon!

    • Priyanka on May 19, 2016 9:59 pm

      I am eagerly waiting for it.

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 10:14 pm

      Your wait will be over soon.

  35. Crazygirl on May 19, 2016 2:58 pm

    Your ff is amazing

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:39 pm

      Thanks crazy girl.

  36. Sanky on May 19, 2016 3:01 pm

    I was so attached with this ff that I had never thought it will end like this. I m crying right now. Please do write one more part which ll be happy wala.???

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:40 pm

      You cried? That mean I succeeded to depict emotions?
      Will pakka write.

  37. Karishma on May 19, 2016 3:07 pm

    This was superb. I loved it!! But it was emotional.??

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:40 pm

      Thank u Kari!

  38. Nive... on May 19, 2016 3:17 pm

    Jo you nailed it… its the real life … yeah you’re right its absolutely swara ff… I’m literally crying now… she didnt get any bliss in her life… till now i never read sad ending stories its my first one…Story will not end until it get happy endings… According to me its not the end, new begining of her life… 🙂 🙂 you justify your title… I loved the whole… 🙂 🙂

    • Nive... on May 19, 2016 3:20 pm

      and yeah if you’re plan to write epilogue… thn dnt pair yuvi and tanya… bcz they e bro-sis… Its just my suggestion… decision is urs… 🙂 🙂

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:47 pm

      But how are Tanya n Yuvraj bro n sis! Tanya is Ragsan’s daughter n Yuvi is swalak’s son!

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:42 pm

      Thanks a ton for understanding me!
      Love u a loads!??

  39. IREENA on May 19, 2016 3:19 pm

    oh God. u needed it. that’s not fair. I’m not satisfied with the ending sorry.

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:43 pm

      Irrena! Sorry to dissatisfy u

  40. soujanya on May 19, 2016 3:19 pm

    good..but wanted swasan at the end……….

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:43 pm

      Thanks!?

  41. kumu. on May 19, 2016 3:46 pm

    nice ending..:)

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:48 pm

      Thanks Kumu!

  42. Aish on May 19, 2016 4:42 pm

    superb ending dear

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:48 pm

      Aish thanks

  43. Thamiazh Magan on May 19, 2016 4:50 pm

    U killed me. It’s a story of many girls in our society. Really shattered with the end which is not an end?

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:49 pm

      Yes! This is a common issue now a days!

  44. bisha on May 19, 2016 7:13 pm

    Devastating end! I though I wont comment but had to when I saw the end. ITs realistic and a very special story of many girls n ladies. The way you have described the 3 seasons and with that the journey of Swara’s life… i m out of words. U killed me agaiin

    But I really respect Swara’s final decision. Achha how did this story come to you? The idea is sooo very awesome. This Swara is a totally human character with pros n cons, good n bad parts- very very veryyy realistic story.

    I had guessed Yuvraaj to be SwaLak’s son. My guess came out true. But you know somewhere I found the final story had a lil just lil bit similaritywith the infamous Sheena Bora murder case. Dont mind I just felt. And you nailed. This Swara will surely remain etched in my mind. I will miss it soo soo much. Will miss you too :-* .
    Lotsss of hugs and kisses n chocolates (if u like) for you. I loved the end. It stung my heart. Probably you wanted this. U are successful then. I only wished Swara had understood Sanskar keeping her ego away. Huh!! *sighs* anyways keep it up. Keeep writing. Loadsss of love and waiting for the new story. TC

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 9:55 pm

      Thanks for comenting so dat I could know ur reaction!
      Actually this is normally happening now a days! I thought to pin point those things whch r happening in our society butbus avoided by many. Before writing I had thought of d start n end! The middle part came to my mind while writing.
      Yes u had guessed it correct! Sorry but I don’t know about Shhena’s case in details.
      Why ll u miss me? I am coming wid a new ff. No i don’t like chclts cuz I luv it!??
      Again Thanks dear!!

    • bisha on May 20, 2016 8:06 am

      Tobe frank n true, this is your master piece dear. U totally nailed it.
      When your new story gonna start?

  45. Afa on May 19, 2016 10:00 pm

    superb….jyotii

    • Jyotii on May 19, 2016 11:00 pm

      Thanks Afa!

  46. sethooty on May 19, 2016 10:45 pm

    Darling…love u love u….don’t know what to say…tears are rolling from eyes…this is the reality of our society.. Many girls cheated like this…in their marriage life also they didn’t get love, some people didn’t realised their love bz of ego….its a realistic ending…perfect one..as u said she become
    a bold lady…its a bitter truth of life
    everytime we didn’t get roses , thorns are also there…evey character is well portrayed.. Especially Sanskar different shade… ..swara’s decision was absolutely rite…she didn’t ask any explanation.. And sanskar doesn’t deserve her..he give her everything but not love…
    We can’t simply say this is a fan fiction…its a unique piece….
    Thanku for this master piece …Dr…waiting for ur next dhamakka story…

  47. Aashi on May 19, 2016 10:58 pm

    Jyotii….this journey was wonderful!…..
    Your ff was just brilliant…..I mean which kind of life it was??
    First Adarsh bhai lust!
    Then laksh betrayal n pregnancy!
    N how can they hide the truth that yuvraj was her child!…
    I just loved ur…..
    Gonna miss you dear! ?
    Loads of love…
    Do come back soon with a bang!!…
    ??❤

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