Hii guys , hope u remember me . A big thanks who comment on my previous post .Here is the first shot.
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A girl is sit alone in a dark room . She has tears in her eyes which shine in dark like pearls. Her glowing face become pale. Her eyes are redshot . Suddenly , the door bell rings & she is shocked . She take steps toward door & open with lot of courage.
A girl is standing there.
Megha : Rati, What happen to u ? Why u called me urgently?
Ratri : I saw something in this house. It is very foggy.
Megha : Are u serious? You come here only two days ago . Don’t say to me that u again want new place .
Ratri : Megh , There is no effect in this changing the house . It’s another thing.
Megha : Maybe it’s your hallicunations.
Ratri : Am i looking mad to u ? Why I imagine things .
Megha: I don’t want to say that darling .I am with u . Let’s sleep.
Ratri : Hmmm…..thanks . I talk so rudely na .
Megha : No problem,u can give me ice cream treat.
Ratri : You liar . Tu na bas apne fayde ka sochti hai.
They both move to their own rooms.
Ratri is try to sleeping but sleep is very far from her eyes.She close her eyes & tried to brushed out her thought.
The door banged & she is trembled with fear. She is moving toward door slowly & open it . There is no one & she take a deep breath.
Suddenly, Vase which kept on table is fall & broke down.Someone patted on her shoulder . She scream with fear.
Megha : Rati , What happen ? Why are u shouting ?
Ratri : What are u doing here ? U frightened me .
Megha : I just listen some sound .
Ratri : This vase is broke.
Megha : Ohh…but how ?
Ratri : Don’t know .
Megha : May be from wind….
Ratri : But my room’s windows are closed.
Megha : I think we go to sleep. It’s too late & u also appointment in hospital na.
Ratri : I forgot about it . Hmmmm…
Megha : Good night my jaan.
Ratri : Good night.
They both go in their rooms.
On other side –
In a party-
A boy is giving flying kisses to girls.Girls cheer for him. He has beer on his hand . He enjoy late night party with his friends.
PRECAP
Naman & Ratri meeting……
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Hope u guys like it. I already told u that these are short & few shots . Kindly ignore grammatical & spelling errors. Do comments & keep smiling.Be happy & stau safe . Don’t forget to drop down ur suggestions.
8 Comments
Amazing start
Thank u bhai for ur comment. Glad that u like this.
its nice and something different
Thanks for ur comment .Glad that u like this one.
Awesome, marvelous… Please update the next part soon
Thanks dear for ur comment & as well as suport. Glad that u like this one .Ya,will update soon sweetie. Gm.Have a amazing day.
Nice intro and start. Why do i have a feeling that megha is more mysterious than ratri!! Anyway, for the male lead Naman i would like to imagine karan wahi as i think he would suit for the happy go lucky character.
Aww , thank u so much di for ur comment .Your comment really means a lot to me as u are amazing writer. Glad that u like this. I also think that karan wahi is suited on his character . Thank u for sugesting it.