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Home»Fan Fiction»Raglak the time to change [part 11]
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Raglak the time to change [part 11]

harinipriyaBy harinipriyaJune 9, 201737 Comments9 Mins Read
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I am really very much sorry for the late update. I have no ideas now, how to continue it further. That’s why I am very much late this time. Also thank u so much for ur lovely comments so here is the next part…

At night, in MM, Uttara’s room,
Uttara switched off the lights and was about to sleep but she found something near her window. She went close towards the window and found some person was standing there. She was shocked and was about to shout but that person closed her mouth and pinned her towards the wall. She saw that person’s face by the moonlight. It was Arjun. For a second she lost herself in his eyes and looked at him intensely. Suddenly she broke the eye lock and pushed Arjun who too was seemed to be lost somewhere. Both composed themselves and started to speak…no… no! Fight!
Uttara: Oye Camel! How dare u to come to my room that to at this time? What will happen if bade papa or bhai had saw u? Omg I can’t even imagine. What…

Arjun interrupted: Oye fatty! Wait! Wait! First breath and fight with me. Also look Ms. Fatty note a point that, I am not Mr. Romeo who would sneak into his Miss. Juliet’s room at night time and u r also not a Juliet which this Romeo likes.

Uttara gave him a ‘whatever’ expression but Arjun was having a smirk on his face. Uttara then cooled down and asked ‘What’s the matter?’
Arjun: Fatty! Did u notice one thing?

Uttara looked at him confused: Which thing Camel?
Arjun took a deep breath: Have u noticed that Lucky some feelings on Ragini?
Uttara was shocked and said: What bhaiyya has feelings on bhabhi?
Arjun nodded and said: I have noticed him from the start he was really caring for her, admiring her, getting jealous to see her with me or any other men, feeling hurt when he sees her tears. Can’t u say that these r all symptoms of Love?

Uttara was now hell confused and doesn’t know what to say. Arjun looked at her confusion and said: Look Fatty, I know everything about Ragini and Laksh’s past. I can see Ragini’s love even now in her eyes. At the same time I can feel the same effect of Ragini on Laksh. Maybe he feels pity seeing her condition. But I am dame sure that there is no such pity feelings on his eyes. To be frank fatty, I want my Ragu to be happy. She is really such a wonderful girl. Everyone wants Ragini to be in their life. But ur brother is the lucky one to get Ragini in his life. I have decided that I will unite Ragini and Laksh as Raglak along with Swasan. But I need ur help fatty. What u says?

Uttara was thinking that his point was correct at that time they heard: May I also join?
Ajjuttu were shocked and they turned to see who that was. They were even more shocked to see Sanskar standing near the door with his arms on his chest and having a positive look on his face.
Sanskar come inside and locked the door: First of all, Ms. Fatty and Mr. Camel, u should lock the door before speaking any secrets or putting some plans. And secondly, u should talk in simple whisper not like dinosaurs tone. (Ajjuttu looked at each other and felt embarrassed.) Actually I have noticed Lucky’s behavior in Baadi today (Did u guys remember, someone had noticed Laksh’s jealousy and Laksh separating Ragarjun while talking, it’s Sanskar!). It was totally different from his usual behavior. I thought to ask him. So I was going to his room and at that time I heard everything. I have heard everything what u both has talked. It means u both along with Ragini and Laksh had planned to unite me with Swara. Interesting! But I am thinking to make this operation more interesting by uniting Ragini and Laksh along with me and Swara. What u says guys?
Ajjuttu looked at each other and nod their head and the three joined hands saying: Operation Swasan and Raglak on!

Then Arjun bid bye to Sanuttu and they both went to their respective rooms and slept.
Around 1:00 am, at Laksh’s room,
Laksh was sleeping in the corner of the bed, he was about to turn but he fall down from the bed. He jerked and woke up from the sleep.

Laksh shouted: Ragini!! Ragini! Ragini!! Ragini! Just then he came to reality.
Laksh (in mind): OMG! What happened to me? Just in an overnight, I am completely changed. This is really very over Lucky! What happened? Why I have called ‘Ragini’ even I know that she was not here? Laksh, really something had happened to u. I think u r becoming mad like a love sick puppy!! (Laksh laughs) Wait!! Wait a second! What did I thought now? I thought that I am doing like a love sick puppy? Which means I love Ragini? (His eyes widens in shock.) Oh shut up Laksh!! Just shut up! First I should put some gate to stop these extra imaginations. How can I love Ragini, that too within a single night? Oh God!! Why r u torturing me by bringing Ragini’s thoughts in my mind? Why can’t I feel peace? Why can’t I feel happiness? Why am I feeling incomplete when I have everything? Why???

Laksh became worried and irritated and he placed his head in his palm of his hands. He closed his eyes tightly and opened it. His eyes first fall on the side where Ragini will sleep. His eyes get teary and thought ‘I need to meet Ragini immediately and that too now itself.’ Thinking that, he drove to Baadi.

At Ragini’s room,
Ragini was half lying on the bed by hugging a pillow and lost in her thoughts.
Ragini (in mind): I can’t even sleep without thinking about Laksh. I don’t know that I have loved him this much. Wait!! Not loved, I still love him and will always love him. Yes I know I can’t get my love in this lifetime. But still I love him. Why god? Why have u given such a big punishment to me? Why can’t I live with my love? Why can’t my husband love back me? Even though I know that he won’t love me, then why my heart is always filled with his memories? It’s like hell for me. Though I thought that I should move on and change, I can’t. Unless I am alive, I can’t love someone other than Laksh. (She cries badly. Then she took a deep breath and wiped off her tears with a determined face.) No Ragini! No! U should not cry. U should not cry for not getting something which is not at all meant for u. Laksh is not meant for u Ragini. U doesn’t deserve him and his love. It’s better to stay away from him. It’s better to concentrate only on ur motive now. Now u should only concentrate on Swasan and not on ur love.

(At that time she hears ‘Ragini! Ragini!’ in Laksh’s voice like a whisper. She just turned and slapped her forehead.) Oh come on Ragini, how come he will be here now? U should not think about him like this.
Ragini! Ragini!! She once again heard in Laksh’s voice. But it was like saying with much difficulty. So she gets off from her bed and searched if there is anyone in the room. She once again heard ‘Ragini’ from the window. So she moved towards it and peeped out. She was shocked to see Laksh hanging on the pipe trying to sneak inside her room. She immediately gives her hand and helped him to come inside.

In that process, she falls down and Laksh too such that Laksh was on top of Ragini and Ragini was on the floor. Ragini’s one hand was on his chest and other hand on his shoulder. Laksh’s one hand was on her waist and other hand on the floor to balance him. Both had a beautiful eye lock and forget about everything. A small breeze through the window made the surroundings to look romantic. Ragini was seeing Laksh with all her love on him and Laksh was sunk in her lovely intense gaze. Ragini’s some hairs come in middle to disturb Laksh’s eye lock. He took the hand from her waist and slowly tugs the hair behind her ear. Ragini felt tinkling sensation when he does like that. Her cheeks become lightly pink due to blushing. Laksh smirked at it and moved his hand slowly on her face tracing it. Ragini was lost in his touch and she closed her eyes feeling his touch. Her cheeks now give a cute baby pink color. Laksh was attracted to it. He slowly reduced the distance between them.

His hot breath falls on Ragini’s cheek. Soon his lips were felt on Ragini’s cheek. Even though it was very light it had an intense effect on Ragini. Ragini gasped. Laksh smiled lightly while kissing her cheek hearing her gasp. He moved to her other cheek and kissed like before. He slowly moved up and looked at her face. Now it was in perfect pink color. Ragini opened her eyes as she felt cold air instead of his fragrance. Laksh smirked seeing his effect on Ragini. His gaze now falls on her lips. It was his first time to look at her lips so much closely. He was attracted very much like a magnet to her lips. He cursed himself inside for not noticing these lips before. Once again he bends down. Ragini felt his gaze on her lips. She felt shivers in her spines just feeling his gaze on her lips. Her lips shivered looking at their close proximity. Their chests were merged now and their heart beat were running like a marathon race. They felt their heart beats. Ragini felt butterflies on her stomach whereas Laksh felt an adrenaline rush on his blood.
I stop this part here!! So shall I continue this romance or start their conversation?? Also u wants to know how they unite Swasan step by step or shall I skip that part?

What happened to this Laksh? Did he feel that he loves Ragini? What will Ragini do now? Will she be able to see Laksh’s love on her? Will Raglak unite soon??? Will operation Swasan and Raglak be succeeding???

Please give ur comments!! Once again, I am sorry for the very late update.

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    37 Comments

    1. Monisha on June 9, 2017 3:57 pm

      pls continue their romance

    2. Sreevijayan on June 9, 2017 4:03 pm

      Continue hw u want to my dear..its an amazing story

    3. Monu on June 9, 2017 4:06 pm

      Awesome episode

    4. Arjuna on June 9, 2017 4:09 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    5. rift on June 9, 2017 4:26 pm

      step…by …..step. …… ….in that processs…….we may know Raglak each other…

    6. Sinni on June 9, 2017 4:29 pm

      Awesome keep posting

    7. Vini on June 9, 2017 4:32 pm

      why u stop in middle ????????? continue their romance

    8. avika on June 9, 2017 4:46 pm

      awesome

    9. neha2352003 on June 9, 2017 4:51 pm

      awesome plz b regular and continue the romance n skip the uniting part of swasan as its a raglak ff…..

    10. Akshitha on June 9, 2017 5:09 pm

      Continue der romance..

    11. raguzz01 on June 9, 2017 5:36 pm

      awesomeeee…..plz skip the uniting part of swasan.

    12. Mintu on June 9, 2017 6:00 pm

      Awesome hari…raglak moments r chooo lovely…continue their romance nd conversation dear.. ?? I want both.. ?? take care da

    13. Vk on June 9, 2017 6:07 pm

      Continue their romance

    14. nymisha281 on June 9, 2017 6:14 pm

      awesome…..eagerly waiting for next part….plz post soon…….

    15. Darshini on June 9, 2017 6:34 pm

      I don’t have issues with ur opinion..it’s upto u da..
      Bt raglak moments daan venum..
      Operation raglak um venum..
      Plz unite them da…
      I can’t wait for the next update..
      Post it soon dear..!!

    16. Anju on June 9, 2017 7:16 pm

      Want more raglak scenes and no swasan scene pls

    17. Rags on June 9, 2017 7:21 pm

      Continue the romance n skip the uniting part of swasan!!

    18. asra on June 9, 2017 7:40 pm

      fabulous dear….loved it alot…continue their romance dear…swasan unite part’a step by step lam kadavenam dear….eagerly waiting for nxt one….
      yean Ipalam rmba late varenga dear….and All the best for ur os competition dear…tkcr dear….

    19. Rehna on June 9, 2017 7:56 pm

      Awesome dear

    20. Follybraverl on June 9, 2017 8:26 pm

      Ohhhhhh Hari Awesome chelakutty

    21. Malu on June 10, 2017 8:03 am

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    22. Ashly on June 10, 2017 9:36 am

      Awesome superb amazing

    23. Sherin on June 10, 2017 10:25 am

      Awesome dear

    24. aleeza on June 10, 2017 10:56 am

      Awesome

    25. Elizebathlovely on June 10, 2017 10:57 am

      Fantastic

    26. Megha on June 10, 2017 11:24 am

      Continue the romance pls. Update soon

    27. Ammu on June 10, 2017 11:49 am

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak scenes are really beautiful. Loved Sanarjuttu scenes too. please continue their romance and also post next part ASAP

    28. Aamy on June 10, 2017 1:14 pm

      Good going dr

    29. Soumya on June 10, 2017 1:57 pm

      Di this is cheating u ended middle….plz continue their romance after romance you can write their dialogue

    30. IQRA222 on June 10, 2017 4:44 pm

      god harru di it was simply fab episode
      didu you know i am so proud to be your sissy and blessed to have an unserstanding and talanted sissy like you!!<3 <3
      the episode in starting ajjutu moments were superb how well ajju understands his sorry lucky's ragu and care for her he is a perect friend
      and sanky has joined the uniting square and is planning to unite my raglak yaayyyy!!!
      and god the best part was the raglak scnes
      they were Umahh!!!!! dont have words
      your way of writing is fantabulous i am in love with the way you express feelings!!
      but didu very bad how could you stop in between huh!!!
      didu pls try to countinue their romance but no problem even if their will be convo cause i just care for raglak moments
      and didu if possible pls try to show how they unite swsan cause now they will raglak with swasan thier will be raglak scnes in that too!!
      waiting fot the nect part
      take care
      keep smiling and writing
      love you to the infinity
      bye bye

      • harinipriya on June 10, 2017 8:15 pm

        I really don’t know how this TU is allowing u to post such a big comment!! (Actually this is the biggest comment for me, so only saying like this) I am the one to be proud to have sisters like u all!! 🙂
        Yes I have stopped the romance in middle, u r small kid naa, how can u read it?? So only I stopped it ;p
        Love too da Iqu dear!!! Take care!! message me when u r free!! Till then enjoy dear!!!! bye!! Ummmaaahhh!!

    31. Pearly on June 10, 2017 6:57 pm

      Awesome

    32. Vennila on June 10, 2017 8:03 pm

      Only one word Amazing

    33. Jiyani on June 10, 2017 8:04 pm

      It’s awesome dear

    34. Bela on June 10, 2017 9:04 pm

      So you didn’t know how to continue is the story? This is called ‘losing the plot’, something from which I suffered myself not a long time back. It happens, just read the previous part and try to recall the purpose of the story.

      Coming to this part, oh baba, this is now going to be so interesting. Mission Swasan with Uttara and Arjun with Raglak while Mission Raglak with Uttara and Arjun with Sanskaar????

      Bechaari Ajjutu! Sandwich ho gaye???

      Loved the part and by god, the romance was HOT!!???

    35. A.xx on June 13, 2017 2:40 am

      Amazing and can’t wait to see how Arjun and Uttjra will handle the double mission xx looks like raglak won’t need much help

    36. hemalattha on June 13, 2017 7:32 pm

      Awesome

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