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Home»Fan Fiction»(RagLak) Storm of love part 12
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(RagLak) Storm of love part 12

AstraBy AstraMarch 22, 2017Updated:March 22, 201748 Comments7 Mins Read
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Storm of love 12

‘Ragini..!’ Laksh calls again but there is no response in her.
—

Scene shifts to hospital. Swara is operating on Ragini.

Laksh is out of the operation theater.

Sanskar: bhai, nothing will happen to Ragini. Trust me.

Laksh hugs Sanskar and cries..

Sujatha and Ram also with them.

Swara comes out.
‘Nami, I mean Laksh.. operation is done, but the result will be known after 24 hours.’

Laksh: what do mean by 24 hours bhabhi..? she may live or….

Sanskar: nami, cool down..!!

Laksh wipes his tears and goes into operation theater. Ragini was sleeping. Her head has bandage. Her mouth has oxygen mask. Her hand is inserted with saline bottle’s needle. Laksh feels sad looking her condition.

He goes and sits beside her. he holds her hand. He closes his eyes and about to shed tears, then he feels tight grip of his hand. He opens his eyes. Ragini has held his hand and she was looking at him.

Laksh: Teju..

Ragini removes her oxygen mask( this is story right. Let’s assume anything)

Ragini: Nami, I want to marry you..!

Laksh: but, we are married..

Ragini: shh..! this is our second life. We didn’t remember anything. I want to enjoy the happiness of marriage occasion. Nami, I got only 24 hours. Make my wish fulfill…

Laksh hugs Ragini emotionally.

Laksh: Teju, nothing will happen to you..!!! any type of storm can’t separate us..!! I will even fight with this whole universe to save you..!

Ragini: Nami, we are getting out of time. Ask, our new family to arrange our marriage.

She asks with moist eyes. Laksh agrees.

—————-
Family arranges the marriage rituals for RagLak(TeMish)

Ragini is made as the bride. Ragini feels happy looking herself as the bride in red saree, and full of jewelry. Swara and JAnaki comes and takes her to the wedding stage.

Laksh who was wearing sherwani looks at Ragini who is coming as the love goddess. Ragini feels Laksh as the handsome king in the world.

They forget what’s going to happen next, but in that few minutes of time, they both are lost into each other.

Laksh places sindoor in her mang and ties sutr. Ghat bhandhan is made in between them.

Now, Laksh takes Ragini’s hand. They walk around the fire, taking their marriage vows.

Sujatha controls her tears. But, Ragini and Laksh are extremely happy that their love was at last fulfilled.

Night ….. Raglak first night…..

Ragini was sitting on the bed… she was smelling the flowers. She smiles. She knows she can’t see their smell later. She suppresses her pain in herself, because it should be her beautiful night.

Laksh enters. He looks at her through the flower garlands which are hanging. She too looks at him. Laksh daggers of sights are killing her in pain of love. She drops her eyes down as she can’t bear even more love.

Laksh sits beside her. She takes the flower in her hand. He too smells it.

Laksh: it’s beautiful.. isn’t it..?

She won’t answer anything. Laksh bends and smells flowers in her hair. Ragini gets shivers when his hot breath touched her neck.

Laksh: not more beautiful than these flowers.

He cups her face. She looks into his eyes. He slowly kisses on her eyes.

Laksh:: but, this flower is most beautiful than them all..!!

He then again kisses her cheek.

Laksh:: tell me your wish Ragini..Teju… I’m here to do anything for you..

Ragini:: gift this night with beautiful memories Laksh…which could I never forget…

Laksh smiles:: Ragini, you are the beautiful gift for me I got ever..

He starts removing her bangles. She keeps looking at him. He moves his hands to her neck.

Laksh:: every day and night is always a beautiful dream for me when you are with me.. and it’s a big gift for me..!!

He removes all he jewellery from her neck except mangal sutr.

Ragini was just looking at him. Then his hands move to her head to remove mang tikka.

Laksh:: if you ask me.. I will make this as most precious gift Ragini…
he removes tikka…
Laksh looks into her eyes deeply:: ragini…

He says and hugs her. Ragini too keeps hands around him. He buries his fingers in her back. She too presses his back tightly.

BG plays.. (in male tone)

Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe…

Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe….
(Laksh breaks hug and cups her face, they both have intense eye lock)

Hai rom rom ek tara….aaa….

Hai rom rom iktaara
Jo badalon mein se guzre…eee….
(Laksh moves forward to kiss her, Ragini feels shy and moves away from him and she stands at window)
(song plays in female tone) (Ragini was standing at window taking deep breath with endless smiling face)…
Ye moh moh ke dhage
Teri ungliyon se jaa uljhe
Koi toh toh na lage
Kis tarah girah yeh suljhe…

Music will be playing….
(laksh comes and locks her in his embrace from back and he moves his other hand on her hand, at last they entangle their fingers) (they rub their palms) (Laksh moves near to her and kisses her neck) (Ragini turns back to him and she keeps her hands around his neck)
(song plays in female tone)…
Tu hoga zaraa paagal
Tune mujh ko hai chuna…
(Ragini lifts her legs and kisses Laksh’s forehead)

Tu hoga zara pagal
Tune mujh ko hai chunaa…
(He pulls her ghunghat off from hair… he makes her hair free..)

Kaise toone ankahaa
Tune an-kahaa sab suna
(he moves his fingers sensually on her face)

Tu hoga zara paagal
Tune mujh ko hai chuna…..
(Laksh lifts her in his arms.. and he takes her to bed. Both have eye lock)

Tu din sa hai, mein raat
Aana Donon mil jaayein shaamon ki tarah…..
(he places Ragini down and he comes over her. he plants kisses in her neck..)
Yeh moh moh ke dhaage
Teri ungliyon se ja uljhe..
(they both hug each other)

Koi toh toh na laage
Kis tarah girah ye suljhe…

Laksh covers them in bed sheets. The screen becomes blank.
——————————

Next morning,

Laksh opens his eyes and finds space is empty beside him.

Then he feels his feet are touched by soft hands. he looks down.

Ragini was worshipping his feet. Her hair is tied in towel, showing that she has just did shower bath.
Laksh moves down and makes her sit in his lap.

Laksh: what..? did you already started your wife works…?

Ragini who was bending her eyes in shy..
‘yes, I have to do these things for my pati parameshwar know..!’

Laksh hugging her..
‘Pati parameshwar won’t feel happy if feet puja is done.. he wants…’
Says Laksh and moves his finger over her lips. Ragini smiles and about to go away…
He pulls her and she falls on him. She was turning into pinky pink…

Laksh: Ragini shouldn’t have this much shy. She is bold and dare creature.

Ragini: but, I’m not Ragini. I’m Teju.

Laksh: then, I’m not Laksh to be calm. I’m Nami.. who is crazy..!!

Says Laksh and pulls Ragini on him and both fall on bed. Laksh removes the towel from her head and her wet hairs fall on him.
He smells and gets lost in that aroma.

He moves her hairs back to her ear and pulls her more near. She closes her eyes. He rolls and makes Ragini come down and he makes a passionate lip lock…

Then the clock makes ‘ting’ sound… showing the time as ‘9’ O clock..!’
But Raglak are lost in their kiss…

Still.. 6 hours left for 24 hours to get done..!

Precap: may be epilogue.. or last part.

/* friends, I know… you don’t like that I end this ff, but I’m very sorry. Actually, the story completes when Ragini and Laksh knows their flash back. I extended adding their fb too…
If I drag more, the story won’t look that good. it’s better to end it here. I hope, all will accept my decision… I will come with other ff surely… thank you so much dears… */

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    48 Comments

    1. dharani on March 22, 2017 1:22 pm

      awesome

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 1:43 pm

        thank you dear

    2. lovely7 on March 22, 2017 1:24 pm

      Amazing

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 1:43 pm

        thank you dear

    3. Priya Durai on March 22, 2017 1:39 pm

      Good episode Astra. Please keep raglak united.

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 1:42 pm

        thank you priya. i won’t separate them yar..

    4. Sindhura on March 22, 2017 2:01 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 2:09 pm

        thank you

    5. Mintu on March 22, 2017 2:02 pm

      Awesome sis..!!! It’s sad going to end..!!bt It’s ur decision..v accept it..!!! waiting for ur new ff dear … !!!!

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 2:09 pm

        thank you mintu…

    6. Sinni on March 22, 2017 2:39 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 2:51 pm

        thank you sinni…

    7. gayu on March 22, 2017 3:58 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 4:43 pm

        thanks gayu

    8. aadhya on March 22, 2017 4:05 pm

      Amazing hope ragini will be fine

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 4:44 pm

        thank you aadhya

    9. IQRA222 on March 22, 2017 4:21 pm

      Its awesome di
      Di just pleade don’t separate raglak
      Waiting for the next part

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 4:44 pm

        thanks dear.. i never ever seperate them dear..

    10. Asw on March 22, 2017 5:09 pm

      Amazing I think this kind of romance is first in Astra ff ? I have doubt ragini is died after 24 hrs keep going

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 5:12 pm

        haha.. thank you so much dear. after 24 hours the result will come. so 6 more hours left for 24 hours..

    11. Rinitta on March 22, 2017 6:24 pm

      Chaala Manchu chapter Akka. Waiting for the next update Akka

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 7:34 pm

        thank you dear… I’m happy u r back here…

    12. Follybraverl on March 22, 2017 6:24 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 7:35 pm

        thank you dear..

    13. jazzy on March 22, 2017 7:02 pm

      Superb

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 7:35 pm

        thank you dear..

    14. Vk on March 22, 2017 7:26 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 8:22 pm

        thank you vk..

    15. saranya on March 22, 2017 7:59 pm

      superb

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 8:22 pm

        thank you saranya

    16. Ammu on March 22, 2017 8:08 pm

      Outstanding episode and Raglak scenes are beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 9:14 pm

        thank you so much ammu..

    17. Megha on March 22, 2017 8:38 pm

      Awesome dr

      • Astra on March 22, 2017 9:14 pm

        thank you megha

    18. Arjuna on March 22, 2017 9:25 pm

      AWESOME

      • Astra on March 23, 2017 8:06 am

        thank you

    19. Sherin on March 22, 2017 9:46 pm

      Fantastic

      • Astra on March 23, 2017 8:07 am

        thank you sherin

    20. asra on March 22, 2017 10:59 pm

      awesome dear…. nothing happen to ragini…bcz astu s there na….waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear…

      • Astra on March 23, 2017 8:07 am

        haha… I’m there na..! thank you dear..

    21. Akshata on March 22, 2017 11:08 pm

      ohooo kya baat raglak are high on romance… like it. hope everything will fall into right place. awesome update

      • Astra on March 23, 2017 8:09 am

        thank you aksh… it won’t fall.. it keep raising to extremeties…. haha..

    22. A.xx on March 23, 2017 2:38 am

      fab and i know u wont seperate them right?? xx

      • Astra on March 23, 2017 8:09 am

        thank you dear…

    23. Darshini on March 23, 2017 8:54 am

      Am so chorry asthu for lte cmnt…
      The epi is too good…wow…
      Ur ending it…still I remember the teaser u gve for this ff…ending cme so soon…bt I will accept ur decision…I knw my asthu won’t separate raglak hey na…keeping that in mind I will be waiting for the lst part…tke cre dr?

      • Astra on March 23, 2017 9:22 am

        Its Ok darshu.. thanx for remembering the teaser dear.. i too love the teaser for this ff a lot… i felt very emotional while writing it. yes..u know about me naa..i never seperate raglak.. thank u dear..

    24. Rehna on March 30, 2017 8:06 pm

      Superb dear

      • Astra on March 30, 2017 9:02 pm

        thanks dear

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