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Home»Fan Fiction»(RagLak) Storm of love part 10
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(RagLak) Storm of love part 10

AstraBy AstraMarch 12, 201744 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hai guys… missed me..?? I too missed you a lot… let’s jump into imagination now… welcome to imagination world of Astra….

Story till now: raglak Are married already but separated by fatal attack of terrorists. They both forget past. They meet again as teju and namish. They know who they are… now story continues…

All parts: http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Storm+of+love

Previous: http://www.tellyupdates.com/raglak-storm-love-part-9/

Part 10

Laksh has opened the book, “Storm of love”…

The book follows like this…..

I’m Laksh Maheswari, the only heir of Maheswari estate. Shri Durga prasad ji and Annapurna are my parents. We three are the lovely family. And, my mom does puja to god everyday to add a new person in this family…

That’s the bahu of this house…

She always says, “my bahu should sing songs, she should be traditional, she should be this that..”

I don’t know what kind of wife I get, while my parents are in bahu hunt, I was happened to go to Araku with my love.

Don’t get shocked.. my guitar is my love..!! And, I’m going there to give concert in a music show in an resort. Aaraku… it’s a beautiful place that we can never imagine.. but only we can see.

The train was already moving, but I didn’t go yet..!!! I’m going to miss the train… I was running behind it. Then near a door, a girl came and stood.

I saw her feet at first. Her feet were covered with sports shoes. Then, I can see her white legs as she was wearing a pink capri. My eyes still proceeded up, the designer belt around her waist.. then still up, with a white shirt in, covered by a lite blue over coat. And a long chain is swinging in her neck… the locket is probably letter, ‘R’

Then proceeded till up to see her thin soft neck, which is sometimes covered by her wavy hair due to air… her slender fingers are setting that hair back of her ear, those fingers have many funky rings, and her ear has modern hangings. Then I saw her face, which is luminous than than sun, her smile is equal to 1000 watts of current….

I just observed all these in fraction of seconds, then she forwarded her hand, her wrist have many bracelets. She probably forwarded to help me.

“Come on..!” She gave a shout…

Then a kinda melody started in my heart as a song….

‘A soothing feeling,
A fragrance…
Till there is no flower garden…’

“Come fast…!!” Her voice is over coming the melody.

‘The heart beats increasing..
The sweat kept flowing …
Then it started…..!!!!!!’ (The guitar sound becomes fast here)

Their both hands are joined.

In loud voice of Laksh in background song…

“The storm of love..!!!” (Guitar music)

“It’s storm of love..!!”

That girl pulls Laksh and he gets into train,

That girl smiles and goes in. Laksh closes his eyes leaning to wall…

Imagining,

“He was playing the guitar and singing… “The storm of love”

She was dancing in a pink long frock among the flower garden….,,”

The music keep continuing in bg..,

I (laksh) went and sat in a seat, where she was sitting next to window. We were alone in that separate six seats.

She removed her legs which were kept on the front seat as I sat opposite to her.

*(They are sitting on three berth seats)*

I saw her completely now. I kept looking at her eyes, which are filled with kajal. I removed my eyes as she looked at me.

“Are you a guitar seller??” She asked.

I was shocked, “pardon..??”

She:: how much does it cost??

Me:: I’m not seller.. I’m guitar player..!!

She:: ohh… i know, you boys simply hang guitar to shoulder just to show build up..

Me:: hey miss..!! I will prove what am I now..!!

I was about to play, a man from other seat sneezed. She kept her hand on her mouth to stop her laugh.

Then I played just one string, then a baby started crying. Now that girl laughed out.

I too smiled looking at her laugh, then I saw an ID card in her hand bag, her name is Ragini..

“Miss Ragini..” i called her, she looked at me.

Me:: are you from xxx music academy??

She:: oh, did u see my ID..?

Me:: hey, you don’t know me..? I’m laksh.. the famous rock star of academy..

She: no.. I don’t know..!!

I was getting annoyed as she was saying that I don’t know. How can I not known to her?? I’m the very well known guitar artist. I looked at her, I observed she is controlling her laugh. Hmm, I understood. She was hiding this matter. She know me. But why is she hiding???
Hmmm…. I will make her tell that she know me very well..!!

Let’s ignore for sometime, she will only talk… I thought and took out a book. She was looking out of window. I was not reading the book, but I was looking at her. Her eyes are lost outside window.

It has been 15 minutes she opened the mouth. I slid my book down, and her face is near to me..!! She was trying to read title of book.

Ragini:: the philosophy..! (She sighed) do you need philosophy at this small age..??

Me:: philosophy is philosophy..whatever..!!

Ragini keeping her hand on head:: I can’t even concentrate for a minute on book. How all people read always..??? They read in libraries, in home, in trains, before going to sleep… even in bathrooms..!! Are you a book worm..?? In academy also I saw you with books always..!

She bit her edge of tongue realizing what she spoke out.

Me smiling::: so, you know me right..!!!

She trying to cover up situation:: no no no..!! I think, that’s not you. It was someone else…!!

Hmm…she is a cute liar..!!

Precap:: fb of storm of love continues….

Sorry for small part guys…

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    44 Comments

    1. Sindhura on March 12, 2017 7:16 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 8:41 pm

        Thanks dear…

    2. lovely7 on March 12, 2017 7:31 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 8:41 pm

        Thank you dear

    3. dharani on March 12, 2017 7:42 pm

      awesome

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 8:42 pm

        Thanks dear..

    4. Ammu on March 12, 2017 7:44 pm

      Awesome episode dear and I think fb of storm of love is very interesting. Loved Raglak meeting and Ragini’s intro is cute

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 8:43 pm

        thank you ammu..

    5. Jaan on March 12, 2017 8:18 pm

      nice ?

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 8:43 pm

        thank you jaan..

    6. Sinni on March 12, 2017 9:00 pm

      Amazing…

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:08 pm

        thank you sinni..

    7. Sayana on March 12, 2017 9:03 pm

      Woow…

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:08 pm

        thank you sayana..

    8. Arjuna on March 12, 2017 9:07 pm

      AWESOME

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:29 pm

        thank you

    9. jazzy on March 12, 2017 9:09 pm

      amazinggg

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:29 pm

        thank you dear

    10. Sherin on March 12, 2017 9:15 pm

      Superb

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:50 pm

        thank you

    11. Akshata on March 12, 2017 9:20 pm

      You know what when i was reading ragini’s description somewhere i felt i was seeing my own reflection in terms of clothing. i love Capri so much and designer belt too, except funky rings i love everything in her attire.
      wow i loved this ragini and laksh too awesome, aww ragini is so naughty and cute.
      update soon

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:51 pm

        hmm..so u have enjoyed her appearance… I’m so happy i made my aksh happy… thank you so much dear…

    12. Sharanya on March 12, 2017 9:26 pm

      AMAZING

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:51 pm

        thank you

    13. asra on March 12, 2017 10:11 pm

      awesome astu dear…..loved it alot….

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 10:17 am

        thank you dear..

    14. Mintu on March 12, 2017 11:23 pm

      Amazing sis.. I miss u lot..!!!! Ragini know about him.. Bt she hide it nd laksh activities is cute …!!!! It’s superb dear..!!!

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 10:18 am

        thank you mintu.. missed u too dear..

    15. Asw on March 12, 2017 11:54 pm

      Nice just opposite where namish given his hand for her in train soo it’s real ? train sequence are cute keep going

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 10:19 am

        haha.. yes. just opposite. thank you dear..

    16. Sreevijayan on March 12, 2017 11:56 pm

      Nice update dear…

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 10:20 am

        thank you dear..

    17. tëìtō kUn on March 13, 2017 3:57 am

      Loved it….

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 10:20 am

        thank you…

    18. Akankshanna on March 13, 2017 8:39 am

      Adorable… Cute

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 10:21 am

        thanks dear..

    19. saranya on March 13, 2017 9:23 am

      superb awesome

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 10:22 am

        thanks saranya..

    20. Aswathy on March 13, 2017 10:51 am

      Superb

      • Astra on March 13, 2017 12:23 pm

        thank you…

    21. Rehna on March 14, 2017 4:12 pm

      Loved it dear

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 9:09 am

        thank you rehna..

    22. A.xx on March 15, 2017 1:12 am

      nice xx

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 9:09 am

        thank you

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