Fan Fiction

RagLak SS – Feel my Love (Part 9 & 10) By Anaz

Feel my love ❤❤ (ss)

Final parts (9 & 10)

Recap ( ragini ignoring laksh…uv informed to laksh wt was actually happend…laksh realized his love on ragini…laksh confess his love towards ragini )

Laksh left baadi with heavy heart…here ragini hugging pillow nd crying badly…

Next day :

Laksh getting ready for his office unintrestedly…ap noticing his changes…she realized he is changed lot…cz of her missing…she felt happy…but she didnt speak with him….yet

He reached to office…his PA informed to him sir …everyone waiting for ur conference…he nod nd moved to there…everything going smoothly…but his mind lost in somewhere…yes his heart is fully filled with her memories…he cant able concentrate on anything…. he excused all in the middle of conference..nd stepped out…he felt very lonely…

He moved to coffee shop…in that shop..they r providing privacy to each nd every members ..only for rich peoples…

Laksh sit there nd sipping his coffee…he remembered how ragini prepares coffee for him…his eyes turns to teary ??

Hey swara whose this diary ?? This sound makes him turns aside…

Swara ?? He saw swara sitting opposite to him…may everyone have privacy…but they can hear clearly wt others saying ….( but guyz u know na rich people always keep silent ?? ) lets comes to the story

Haan riya this is ragini diary ….

Laksh said in mindvoice…she said she is shifting to london…but still she is in india something wrong… nd wt she saying abt ragini…i wanna hear it…i know its not manners to listen others private chat though i want cz they were speaking abt my ragini

He moved lil close to her table…nd hide him…

Haan riya that stupid ragini diary …
Laksh hold his fist in angry ???

She is ur sis na. Then y did u calling her like this

Oh riya…may she is my sis…but she dont desrve even my friendship too

Y swara ?? Y did u saying like this ??

Oh god how could i explain this ?? Ok i will said one incident then u say Is she is stupid or not

Laksh didnt like that swara calling his wife as stupid ?? how dare she…

Haan swara tell me na

Riya u know very well abt me na…i’m modern….take it easy type…my imagination is another level…

Did u know my mrg fixed with the great business man laksh maheswari

U mean mr.laksh really….

Haan riya same guy….then wt hpnd swara ??

Dont expect too much…he is not my type yrr…he is very rude…nd arrogant too..who gonna mry him

Perhaps he have rich life style but he dont know to respect woman…

His house had certain rules nd regulations…wanna wake up in early morning…do pooja…wanna take care of husband…nd doing households…

God…i cant imagine…i cant be a slave of anyone…

Laksh felt hurt by her words…nd thinked abt ragini…how she did everything to laksh without complaining anything…

Do u know riya ?? That laksh saying he is modern…but he is not…i found out that when our engagement done….i found something in his eyes while he saw ragini in treditional dress…

Laksh remembered that sceen how he looked ragini without blinking…

Ok ok swara …still u didnt come to the point…y did u calling her stupid…

Wait riya…did u know

Fb

Swalak mrg day… .

Ragini is in her room…she is burning something…..but shomi knocked her door…she hide everything under her cupboard…..

Her badtime i saw that …..i stoled her diary…rest of others fully burned…no idea abt that….

Almost muhurth time…ragini come to pick me to mandap…she cant found me there..

Actually i tried to elope from there…but before that stupid ragini stopped me…nd questioned me…

I said frankly…i cant marry laksh…nd my pov too…

She blamed me…first to betrayed him nd his family…then she starts to plead me …to marry him…how could i…?? I reject it..

Did u know riya…next drama queen entered..ap…

Ap ?? Whom swara ??

She is laksh mother…emotional fool…

Laksh fold his finger nd grinned his teeth..in anger ???

She heared my all coversation with ragini…she asked ragini to allow me to leave…actually i felt happy for that..though i’m confused …

Suddenly ap starts to plead to ragini to marry laksh….

I just shocked ??? i dont like her one side…though she is my sis so i warned her dont marry laksh…

She didnt replied…later huge drama ..with shomi aunty nd shekhar uncle…they forced her to marry laksh…that stupid ragini acpt to marry him…

Nw tell me riya she is so stupid na…

Laksh turns to anger ??? …still he is controlling himself…

So she married him na…yes riya…she hurts my ego…thats y i spoiled her life..

Wt do u mean swara ??

The real fun is…uv

Uv ??whom

Uv is ragini childhood frd … but uv loving ragini from her childhood ….still he didnt confess his love towards her….

I thought he decided to propose her in my mrg day ….but her sudden decision spoiled his plan …his heart too broken ??…i just used that situation…

Nd informed to laksh…that she is in relationship with uv though she married him cz of money…

Is he trust ur words…may be riya…who cares??

Suddenly someone slapped on her cheek…her cheek turns to reddish…yes none other our laksh…

His eyes turns to reddish in anger ??? how dare u swara…y did u played with us…did u know the value of life…u dont know thats y u r living like this emotionless…u dont have heart…

Actually i wanna thank u…for giving such a pretty girl in my life…cz of u she entered in my life nd makes my life meaningfull…not like u damn it…u r good for nothing swara dont u dare to say u r a girl ??? u cant be a good girl ,mom ,wife y even a good friend too…but u r assuming she dont deseve ur friendship…my foot..

U dont deserve her as a sister…go to hell ???? by saying this he picked ragini diary in his hand …nd looked swara again…he warned her…dont ever interfeare in others life…if u again poked ur nose in others life ..u will loss everything i will finish u he left…

Swara placed her hand on her cheek..nd looked around…she is shocked to see uv there…

He walked near to her…nd looked her in disguisting way…he took a glass of water nd splashed on her face…nd left…

In baadi :

Ragini folding her cloths…uv entered nd informed everything to ragini wt was happend…everything was swara plan…( he hide his love story )

She is hurt nd sit on bed….how could she ?? She is my sis na…then y did she do like this ?? She starts to cry badly…shomi consoled her…

In Mm

Laksh starts to read her diary…in that she shared abt her passion ( became a successful woman like lakshmi maam ( who is treditional girl then starts to walk in her dreams without care anything…she succeed lot in her life ) her only one weakness is to meet lakshmi atleast once in her life time…) no one cant meet her easily…its really tough to get her single appointment … Ragini wished to fly like her in her life but shekhar didnt gave her chance to raise her tounge against him.. She dont have rights to take her own decision too that was the reason she admired lakshmi life alot…her boldness nd the way she tackled all alone

Laksh felt guilty to spoiled her dream with the name of mrg

Then she shared abt her crush

Laksh eyes opend widely…crush ??? ragini have crush on someone i cant believe it his heart beats fast

Her pov :

I saw him first time…in park…when i’m studying in school…me nd uv often came to park to eat icecream…their i saw him first..

Something i felt strange ….my heart starts to beat fastly…i used to eat strawberry flavour…but he said he hates that flavour …from that day i avoide to eat that nd changed to chocolate flavour…cz he like to eat that…

Day by day i wished to meet him…atleast want to see him from far…still i dont know his name…but his innocent face stoled my heart from me…

Days passed…after a long time i saw him unexpectedly…on play ground…yes that same boy who i wished to meet …who stoled my heart…little changes…he turns to even more handsom then…i asked to someone who r they ?? He replied they r engg clg students…nd that clg name too..

I waited eagerly to finish my schooling nd worked hard to score gd marks…cz they will give seats only for high percentage ..

By god grace i got good marks…i joined the same clg wr my crush studied…but my bad luck his study over…i felt hurt…i slowly tried to forget him…nd tried to concentrate on my passion…

Pov ends..

Laksh eyes turns to teary ??? he felt hurt…nd guilt to spoiled her life…

Ap touched his shoulder…he jerked her hand nd stepped out…she is confused ??

Laksh drunk badly he is out of controll now…his car losing balance…nd hitted on tree…crowd gathered there…uv comes from that side ..he found laksh…thank god nothing happend to him…

He is often murmuring ragini name…nd said abt his feelings towards raginii…uv makes call to raginii..

She rushed to there…both ragini nd uv take him to MM..uv waited outside…ragini makes him lay on bed…she losted her balance nd fell on him…she can hear his heart beats clearly…she heard his words…i’m.sry ragini…i need u ..i luv u..swara cheat us…something like that…

Her eyes turns to teary nd stepped out…ap looked ragini…plz ragini come back to his life…he is changed lot…he needs u ragini…

But maa still his words hurting me….i need time maa by saying this she left with uv…

Ap looked laksh…nd caressed his hairs…sry laksh i stayed away from u betta…she kissed on his forhead..nd moved back to her room…she felt pain in her chest…she faints down…

Next day :

Laksh wakes up with hangover….he freshup…nd starts to search ap everywhere…cz she didnt lighted infront of idol…she never fail to do that…

Maa wr r u ?? He searched while nd found ap lay on floor without concious…he turns to shocked nd shouts loudly maaa…

Yes she is no more…every final rituals going on ragini reached there nd cried badly by hugging ap..she remaind her words he needs u ragini…her eyes starts to search laksh automatically…..laksh..laksh..

She wiped her tears nd rushed near to him…she saw laksh who was sitting like statue…holding family photo…

Ragini touched him…he looked her back..haan ragini atleast u came…see my maa left me without forgive me

She didnt forgive me…i’m her son na…y dont she forgive me ?? She hates me…

No laksh she didnt hates u ?? She loves u more how could one mother can hate her own child … No way laksh

Really then y did she left me like this…everyone wanna punish me for my deeds na …k do whatever u wants..i’m not gonna stop u everyone ..go ahead…

He forward divource pappers to her..u need this na raginii…atleast i wish to fullfill ur dreams…go nd lead a good future…by saying this he forward her diary too

Ragini who shocked to see that…

He starts to behave like abnormal his mother death made him hurt alot…

Ragini threw that down…nd makes him turns…she cant able controll her emotions

She hugged him tightly…laksh plz..plz dont say like that….

Ragini plz go….ur pasion….she closed his mouth…nd hugged him tightly again…

U r very important to me morethan anything in this world… i love u laksh…i really love u…

He broked her hug..nd pushed her lil…dont lie ragini i knew u r in love with someone since ur child hood…i promise u ragini….i will never disturb u again in ur life…

Can u plz stop this nonsence laksh…haan laksh i loved someone from my childhood…i agreed but thats none other than u laksh…yes its u…

He looked her strangely…me…haan laksh..its u..that boy face reveald to be laksh…did u knoww how much i loved u in my life…i didnt hide anything from uv..but i hide my love from him..

Unexpectedly…i saw my love again with lil difference i saw u as my sis groom..just think abt my position..laksh…i tried to conviced myself nd tried to burn everything before ur mrg…but there destiny again played in my life….i married u …i got my love …but my heart broked cz of ur every behaviours…though i adjusted everything for my love…then wt i got atlast…u called me **** its killed me nd my love too laksh…

Laksh who was hell surpriced to hear that…he is so happy to know ragini loving him madly…another side he felt guilt too for his deed…

He sat in his kneel with broken heart…nd crossed his hand i’m sry ragini….for everything…ragini heart melted..she removed his hand…nd cupped his face…its k laksh..i love u …

He hugged her tightly….she hugged him back too….there is no gap between them..laksh hide his face in her neck curve emotionally…she pampered him..

Everything completed…

Few days passed…

Laksh makes call to ragini ..nd asked her to come down..she is confused nd obeyed him…he closed her eyes nd picked to somewhere…

Then opend her eyes …she rubbed her eyes nd looked straightly…she is shocked to see lakshmi standing infront of her…she is really wondered…she hugged ragini Is this real or reel she cant believe in her own eyes…

She thanked her to meet her…but she asked to say thanks to laksh…cz he tried hard to get my appointment …i thought its for his business but later he said he wished to full fill his wife dreams

U r really so lucky ragini maheswari to get him as ur husband in my life i dont have anyone to support me to reach like this so i starts to fight alone in ur matter ur husband is there for u to fullfill all ur dreams so dont wrry …all the best for ur future ragini smiled nd bid bye to her …by saying she left

Ragini hugged him tightly…thank u laksh for everthing…to treat me like a queen..take caring me like a mom..leading me like a father loving me as a husband /lover…nd

Dont said as a friend ragini that voice makes raglak turns back none other uv

Cz i’m the one nd only friend to her mr.laksh …dont tried to take my place..

Raglak laughed …u crazy….uv

But i’m angry on u uv still u didnt show me ur girl friend yet …

Uv looked laksh …laksh smiled fakely cz he know uv loving ragini …

Uv said no ragini no one is there i just lied u …my heart is empty…so guyz all the best for ur future…he pout nd said dont forget my friendship k …he said bye nd left

Laksh wiped his tears ..she looked him..nd passed beautiful smile towards him

Tq u ragini to fullfill my life nd replaced my mom place…

He shouts loudly i love u raginii…..

She kissed on his cheek ???nd said

Jst Feel my love laksh ❤❤❤

Both shared an beautiful eyelocks…

Scrren frrezed

?????happy end ????

Guyz leave ur cmnts….i hope u guyz like it…i dont know how much its wrkd ??

Share
Published by