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RagLak- Ready to breakup-episode 7

AstraBy AstraFebruary 20, 201756 Comments8 Mins Read
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Ready to breakup 7

Laksh wakes next morning. It was already 10. As it was Sunday he woke up late. He looked for Ragini, but she was missing on her bed. She is not there in room too. He feels a bit nervous. ‘Did she go away to her house being angry on him..?’
He runs into hall. She is not there still.

He goes near dining. Then he hears sounds from kitchen. He takes his breath she was preparing coffee. She looks at him as he came. She presents a smile,
‘Brush teeth and come until coffee gets ready..!’

He makes his eyes big. Coffee…?? For him..?? is he not dreaming..?? he pinches himself. And feels pain. He goes to wash room in same confused state.
After a while he comes out. She bringing two cups near table.

Laksh sits in beside chair of her. she is just drinking what’s in her cup. Her wet hair is showing that she has just taken a shower before he woke up.

Laksh sipping his cup and looks at her. but she was enjoying her own cup.

Laksh: what are you drinking..??

Ragini: boost..! boost is the secret of my energy..!!

Laksh is really amazed with her normal behavior.

Laksh: yes, but yesterday you became very weak.
Her smile disappears.

Laksh: how are you feeling now..?
Ragini: I said, don’t ask about it. it is really a common thing..!

Laksh keeps his cup aside.

Laksh: a common thing..? this pain is a common thing..?

Ragini looks at him.

Laksh: bearing this much of pain..! this stress..! but, this is just common..! how can we praise a girl..??

Ragini was just looking at him.

Laksh: girls bear this much and they smile hiding all these worries. Girls are really great. And boys simply hurt them..!!

Ragini turns away her eyes. Laksh holds her hand which is on table. She looks at him.

Laksh: are you really not angry with me..?? for what I did yesterday..?

Ragini: I got that much of anger that I wanted to break your head again..!!

Laksh gulps.

Ragini: but, suddenly I felt dizzy. I wanted to kick you still, but I was feeling weak. Later on… you taking me to hospital. Taking care of me, some what made me to lose my anger. I felt, ok.. this boy is good.

Laksh smiles.

Ragini: and, what can I do more than that…simply remaining as a prey..!

Laksh smile disappears.

Ragini: so many questioned me, what did I do to you..? why did I bang your head..?? but, that night if you have done something to me, nobody would have questioned you..!

Laksh looks on..

Ragini: same here also..! if you kiss me, all say you are a romantic fellow..! but no one understands my heart… how deeply I was hurt..!!
She says this looking at him in red eyes. Tears are rolling in her eyes.

Laksh feels extremely guilt and bends his eyes as he couldn’t make eye contact.

Ragini: if then, I bang your head or stab you, someone will say ‘I’m mad..!’ but no one understands that you are mad..! a man’s life is that important than a women’s feelings. A man can do anything with woman.. but, a lady can’t stand upon her rights..?

Ragini turns away her face and wipes her tears. Even Laksh wipes his tears.

Laksh: Ragini, I know.. a sorry can’t make your heart fixed again. My sorry can’t stop your tears. But, still… I’m sorry. From today, I will never touch you again..!! or I even don’t look at you..!!

Ragini looks at him. He was not looking at her. he was looking somewhere.

Laksh: Ragini, I was foolish for not understanding your feelings. On first night, I thought you are making fun. I just felt, that you like me… but feeling shy to accept me. Same yesterday also..! while I was setting the light for your study, and I was explaining you the syllabus… I saw some shine in your eyes. I thought, you were liking me again..! and, you came in a run near me yesterday, I looked at lots of happiness in your eyes. Then, I wanted to initiate our relation again..!! I thought, it would make you happy… but…

He gets up from his chair.

‘My thoughts and my own feelings have been hurting you a lot Ragini. And, I can’t bear when you are hurt. I was not even feeling Ok, when you were suffering with the pain which you say common..! then, how can I bear your tears..???”
Laksh says painfully.

Ragini looks at him amazed.

“If I was the only reason for your tears, I won’t repeat these things again..! but, what to do..? If I look into your eyes I feel a pull towards you. That has become my weakness..! I’m sorry again..!!” says Laksh and leaves to his room.

Ragini keeps her cup aside. She goes to the room. Laksh was taking clothes for going to bath.

Ragini: shall we go anywhere..? today is Sunday right..!

Laksh gets amazed. He looks at her but, soon turns his face away.

Laksh: no..! I have some works.

Ragini: please…

Gosh..! what is she doing. The way she is asking ‘please..’ is making him pleased. If she asks,
what going out..? he will even do world war 3.

But, just now she said that she is hurt. Then, why is she asking again..?

Ragini: please Laksh…

Laksh holds cupboard strongly to suppress his feelings. Why is she asking that cutely. If everything was normal in between them, he would have now kissed her again. He rubs his head back to control himself..

Ragini: we shall go please Laksh…

Laksh feels his heart melting.

Laksh: don’t ask like that many times. Ok, let’s go..!!

Ragini jumps in happiness. Laksh soon goes into washroom and pours cold water on him.
‘Shh..! no..! don’t believe her..! this is not love..!! laksh, control… if you do something again… this time it becomes the Trojan war..!’

He calms himself and takes bath.

When he came out, he looks at Ragini who was getting ready.
She is wearing purple chudidar, and her hair is free.. the best thing is her back. Which is exposing to some extent.

‘is she mad..? why is she attracting him like this..? whatever, if he is a man, he has to control. And he shouldn’t hurt her again..!!’

Ragini: I’m ready..!!

Ragini turns to him in brilliant smile. The radiance in her eyes is melting him as ice. He was feeling like to kiss her a 1000 times. He slaps himself.

Ragini: what happened..?

Laksh: ok, wait in hall. I will come..!!

Ragini nods her head and leaves to hall happily.

Laksh: I do not understand this girl..!!

Laksh later goes out. They are going in car. But, she is singing songs. Laksh really don’t understand what’s wrong with her. he thought, she won’t talk with him… she will do something to him again.. but, she has asked him to take out..??

Laksh: where shall we go..??

Ragini: amusement park..!

Laksh: ok…

Ragini first takes Laksh to roller coaster. Laksh doesn’t get excited anything, as he was confused by Ragini’s actions. But, Ragini was enjoying like anything.

After getting down…

Laksh: are you ok..? you were not feeling well actually know..!!

Ragini: Ferris wheel..!! (giant wheel)
She shouts and takes Laksh even there.

After that ride, another one. The whole day passes like that.

By night, they reach home. All family members will return next day.

Ragini goes into hall and sits in sofa panting… ‘wow..! enjoyed a lot today..!!’

Laksh who was still confused goes into room. Ragini goes into kitchen.

Half n hour passes Ragini is still not coming…
‘Ragini…’ he is about to call…
Ragini just comes into room. She is looking at him in anger.

Laksh: Ragini…??

Ragini: I wanted to control my anger..!! what to do..?? it’s still not controlling..!! I asked you to take to amusement rides.. so, that I will forget about it..!! but, still… it’s making me wild..!!

Ragini says heading towards him.
Laksh: ragini..???

Ragini takes out the iron rod which was heated and it’s red in color.

Laksh makes his eyes big…!

Laksh: what are you going to do Ragini..???

Ragini: teaching a big lesson to you..!! how dare to mess up with me…!!

She nears him holding the rod… he stuck to wall…

‘with this lips only know, you have kissed me…!!!’
She nears the boiling rod to him…

Screen blanks……

‘ahhhhhhhhhhhhh’ Laksh’s shout.

To be continued….

/*guys, worried that I haven’t given any shock yesterday..? enjoy this one today..! haha, hope you all understood the reason for Ragini’s normal behavior till now..!! */

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    56 Comments

    1. Follybraverl on February 20, 2017 4:13 pm

      Whoops she is really dangerous

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:55 pm

        hah..yes she is…

    2. Sindhura on February 20, 2017 4:19 pm

      Oh my god she is touring him

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:56 pm

        hehe..he deserves it…

    3. Mintu on February 20, 2017 4:26 pm

      Amazing sis….ohh noo.. Poor laksh… He is going to take another punishment…hehe… Ragini way of method to teach him is excellent..!!! Can’t wait dear.. Post it soon

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:56 pm

        thank you mintu..

    4. Darshini on February 20, 2017 4:32 pm

      Omg asthu…
      Shocks queen…u gonna get arrested for attempting murder…ha ha…
      Shocking twist uh…
      Enjy every RagLak moments and the best thing is laksh’s dialogue about girls…
      Atlast u gave a reason for ragini’s behaviour…
      U r not at all failing in giving shocks…
      Take care dear…

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:57 pm

        haha..thank you darshu…

    5. Aishu08 on February 20, 2017 4:45 pm

      That was awesome… Ragini and her punishment.. Poor Laksh…

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:57 pm

        thank you aishu…

    6. jazzy on February 20, 2017 4:53 pm

      awesome ab agge kya kya hoga

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:58 pm

        thank you dear… have to wait n see…

    7. Mickey on February 20, 2017 4:59 pm

      Niceeee astra diii?

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:58 pm

        thanks dear..

    8. Ashnoor on February 20, 2017 5:02 pm

      Amazing dear……I always read ur story , I loved all of them……but ur 2 ffs are my favouriteeeeeeee one …….. first this one & second one in marriagemarriage life…….gosh astra u r soooooo talented . Update soon haan……

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:59 pm

        thank you so much ashnoor…

    9. Asw on February 20, 2017 5:14 pm

      Nice is laksh safe?? Keep going

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:59 pm

        hehe..have to see in nxt part.. thanks dear..

    10. MEGHA on February 20, 2017 5:14 pm

      amazing waiting to know what happens next

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 5:59 pm

        thank you megha..

    11. lovely7 on February 20, 2017 5:15 pm

      Awwww?
      Baboi nvu shocks tho champestnav sis

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 6:00 pm

        haha… last lo shocks iste.. aa kick ye verappa… aa..! hehe..thanks dear..

    12. Ammy on February 20, 2017 5:36 pm

      Oh noooo Ragini is really dangerous

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 6:01 pm

        yes ammy…

    13. IQRA222 on February 20, 2017 5:42 pm

      awesome
      so finally laksh asked forgiveness from ragu
      raglak moments were nice
      but god please save our lucky

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:38 pm

        thank you dear.. yes..God have to save him…

    14. baabu on February 20, 2017 5:44 pm

      awwww……. hahahahahaha…… waiting for the next

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:39 pm

        thank you babbu..

    15. Affaa on February 20, 2017 5:50 pm

      Ya Allah laksh… What’s her problem… If laksh can control his feels why can’t she… Yaar I’m really feeling bad for laksh… Kissing is normal… Why she reacting so much… I met Ragini I would have made her understand.. Damn seriously laksh understands her pain… Her tears… But she is not understanding his feelings…astuu tussi great ho yaar… How u manage to write amazingly… If one day I met.. Definitely I’ll ask for autograph…. Yesterday night I was thinking what will happen next… Just now when I opened my tu… I thought no ur ff will be not there…. But I saw ur ff… Do I didn’t believe frist… Hahaha u know nah I’m mad on ur ff… Lots of love.. Take care

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:40 pm

        haha..dear..thank you so much… I’m so glad..

    16. Shraddha on February 20, 2017 5:52 pm

      Awesome …eagerly waiting for next part 🙂

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:40 pm

        thank you shraddha…

    17. Jaan on February 20, 2017 5:58 pm

      awesome. Loved it. Poor lakshya,hope at least this one is dream.

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:41 pm

        thank you jaan.. yaa…lets hope..

    18. Akshata on February 20, 2017 6:15 pm

      NOOOOOOOO no no no dont ragini…. stop there otherwise you will face my anger. everybody knows that i love you more than laksh and sansku, even Astra also knows this. whatever the situation came i always took ur side but today you r wrong, you cant just burn him, he already asked sorry and felt guilty. you have already broken glass vase on his head not now, stop ur inhuman behavior. otherwise ???? let me think…… ha otherwise i will…… what will i do now to save my poor baby laksh????
      ha i have Astra na…. she will understand his problem….. let me call he Astraaaaaaaaaaa just come her and stop her otherwise she will hurt my laksh. pls stop her at any cost.
      hahahahaha Awesome update.

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:36 pm

        hmm… I Will save him… worry not dear… but, i can’t promise.. hahaha… u have to wait 4 nextpart… until then, take care.. bye bye.. hehe… ragu is not that cruel dear..

    19. dharani on February 20, 2017 6:42 pm

      oh god who will save laksh if he continues so he is dead in hands of ragini poor laksh i really pity him awesome shocks queen

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:41 pm

        hehe… I’m there naa 2 save himm.. thank you dear…

    20. neina on February 20, 2017 7:00 pm

      Omg…ragu is too dangerous yar….bechara laksh…hope he is fine

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:42 pm

        yes neina.. let’s see in next part…

    21. asra on February 20, 2017 7:20 pm

      shocks queen now am faint…..omg ragini u r tooooo dangerous girl in the world…..Ohhh my poor laksh…now who can going to save u….god plz save thz poor boy……waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 7:43 pm

        hehe..yes yes… god save him… thank you dear…

    22. Aim on February 20, 2017 7:55 pm

      Laksh is really pathetic.All the time gropping Ragini.Can’t se understand forced intimacy is horrible.What if he was not attracted to Ragini & he forcefully kissed him.First he tried to rape her & now this.And he calls it love??Its lust only.I hope Ragini makes him understand that these cheap things make him bad in her eyes more.

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 10:04 pm

        don’t take a word against laksh understand…!! if he is really such a man as u thought, ragini would not have been like this. and he realized his mistake… stilll he is a rapist for you…?? grow up yar… read the story completly…

    23. Fairy on February 20, 2017 8:20 pm

      Omgggggggggggggggggg!!!!is ragini mad or what???????ragz wt r u upto yaaar…?????rapunzelll m a crazy fan of urs….bt it’s lookng lyk u r becoming crazy day by day!!!!hehehhe bechara lakshh…oh my boy ..m feelng pity on u…i agreed to rags pov…. bt laksh is not dat type of boy…. he’s really sweeet…. rago plz understand him dr plzzz!!!.let’s see wt wl happen in nxt episode…..waitnggg eagerlyyyyyyy….keeep rockng n stay bkessed sweeetheart?????n astra????jst one word love u yaaar???u r jst outstandng???

      • Astra on February 20, 2017 10:05 pm

        thank you so much fairy dear… let’s see what rago will do…

    24. A.xx on February 20, 2017 9:55 pm

      fab and haah love her,,,feel so bad for her,,,has she got some dual personality problem>> xx

      • Astra on February 21, 2017 10:46 am

        hehehe.. u will know.. thank you dear

    25. Jaanvi on February 20, 2017 10:34 pm

      Hehehehe… O God… I m lang honge and laughing only. Seriously loving this dangerous Ragini… Poor laksh…

      You are just amazing dear… Thanku so much for such wonderful update.. Eagerly waiting for next… See still laughing..

      • Astra on February 21, 2017 10:53 am

        thank you jaanvi… yes, poor laksh..

    26. Fats on February 21, 2017 3:11 am

      Great update. Ayyy Haii, Laksh is so in love. He’s finding it way too hard to control ?. And omg, what a huge shock at the end. Eeeks, I wonder what’s going to happen. Can’t wait to read the next part ?

      • Astra on February 21, 2017 10:53 am

        thank you so much fats..

    27. Aswathy on February 21, 2017 9:53 am

      awesome dear…ragu is really dangerous. Laksh is gone ah get good punishment

      • Astra on February 21, 2017 10:54 am

        thank you dear…

    28. Rehna on February 21, 2017 7:38 pm

      Ragini is too dangerous to handle dear. Poor laksh, is he dreaming this. If it’s true God only save him. Next part soon pls

    29. Ammu on February 21, 2017 8:51 pm

      Interesting episode and crazy Ragini

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