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RagLak- Ready to breakup-episode 11

AstraBy AstraMarch 6, 201755 Comments9 Mins Read
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Ready to breakup 11

Ragini feels guilty with her behavior towards Laksh. She falls on her knees and cries. On that whole day Laksh has not even entered in that room even Ragini didn’t came out.

Sujatha and others understands something wrong has happened in between them. Ragini feels even more ashamed to face Laksh.

At last at late evening Laksh returns to room. Ragini, who was sleeping on cot from morning with tearful eyes, sits as soon as he entered the room. But Laksh goes into the balcony without looking at her. he was holding the railings. Ragini goes slowly beside him.

‘Laksh, I’m sorry….’ She says with cracking voice. But Laksh seemed not effected with her voice.

‘I never felt this much guilt in my life… bcz, I strongly believe I have never done any mistake. Understand me how much ashamed am now.. if I’m saying sorry..!!’
She says in tearful voice.

Laksh rubs his face among his palms. He won’t answer anything and he is about to go into room silently, she holds his hand.

‘Laksh….’ When Ragini is about to say something. Laksh removes her hand and walks in. she comes back of him.

Laksh silently sleeps on the bed at other end.

Ragini: laksh, did you eat anything from morning..?

He won’t answer but he closes his eyes.

Ragini: don’t ignore me like that Laksh… it’s hurting. I said sorry know..!!

Still, Laksh won’t respond.

Ragini: yes, I have done a blunder. But, understand me in my pov…

Laksh then sits. He looks at Ragini.

Laksh in upset voice ‘How long I have to understand you Ragini..? can’t you understand me once..? In fact, I’m fed up understanding you always..! it’s over for now..!! leave me alone..!!’

Ragini: laksh, don’t be angry like that…

Laksh: you can see only angry right..!! but, it is hurting Ragini..!! it’s hurting here..!!

He places his hand on his chest.

Ragini bends her head in tears.

Laksh: you are thinking that I’m angry on you because you slapped me..!! I’m not angry on you..! and, I’m not upset because you slapped me…

Ragini looks at him. Laksh moves near her and holds her shoulders. She keeps looking deep into his eyes.

Laksh: I was hurt..! I was hurt because you said me as a ‘cheater..!’

Ragini closes her eyes.

Laksh: open your eyes and look at me..!!

But she was not dared enough to open being ashamed.

Laksh: and, I clearly understood that you hate me.

Then Ragini looks at him and nods her head negatively.

Laksh leaves her shoulders.

Laksh: I’m sorry.. I won’t tie you in this relation for more time. Still six months left know. Let’s take divorce as soon as possible. And you can get freedom from my clutches.

Ragini: laksh… I don’t want divorce.. I.. I love you..

Laksh: love me as a friend right.!

Ragini looks on…

Laksh gets off from bed.

Laksh: the one and only one feminist girl.. raise up..! fly away in the ways of your freedom.. go ahead…

Ragini::: feminist doesn’t mean that they hate men Laksh. Yes..! I’m such a girl. I have my own thoughts of freedom. But, I still respect relations. I still have respect on our relation. Marriage is not a joke to take divorce whenever one of us is angry. We have to overcome everything discussing. Crossing all the misunderstandings. Till now in our relation, only misunderstandings are left… and, I know it’s me who misunderstood you always. mistake is mine… why don’t you excuse me once..?

Laksh wipes his tears.

Laksh::: because, ‘once’ is enough to break a heart. Ragini, I was not hurt when you banged my head on first day. I felt you were childish. I got a little anger on you. I kept divorce in between us to teach you a lesson. But, you too agreed for it seriously and increased my ego. Yes, 2nd time I have kissed you being lost my control over you… bcz somewhere deep in my heart, I felt you loved me. But, I was happy that you have excused me easily. There won’t be any obstacles in our relation more. And, you confuse me again that you love me and I’m only a friend to you… I thought you need still more time… I waited. I wanted to wait for you patiently again. But, this slap…

He touches his cheek. Ragini looks on…

Laksh: it’s not paining. But, it’s hurting. You don’t have inch trust on me. And, where there is no trust, there is no love. When there is no love, it’s meaningless to stay in a relation. Let’s breakup..!

Ragini gets tears and she sits on bed sadly. Laksh turns his face away and leaves room. Ragini sits like that only all the night.

Next morning, she opens her eyes. She understands that she slept like that only. She sees, Laksh was packing his clothes in his bag.

‘we are leaving. Get ready..!’ he says in serious tone.

Ragini feels bad and she too packs her stuff. After getting set they both comes out of room.

Sujatha, Rp, nikil and Tanya were also ready.

Laksh: ok, shall we start now.

Nikil: yup..!

Laksh: chachi, Ragini will come in your car. Chote papa, you come with me…

Ragini looks at Laksh sadly. But, they have to change Laksh mind now.

Sujatha: no Laksh… I can’t travel without your chote papa..

Laksh: then, you also come with me chachi..

Nikil: no..no.. Tanya is pregnant now. she needs maa’s care. So…

Ragini smiles in herself.

Rp: so, there is no way… as Nikil can only drive, we four will come in one car and you and Ragini come in your own car… ok…!!

Laksh leaves upset. All of them will smile. Laksh will be starting the car, Ragini enters into car looking at him in smile. He starts the car and they leave. Back in other vehicle, rest all will be coming..

Ragini was still looking at Laksh, but he never looked at her. and, he knows very well that she is seeing him. But, he was silent.

Then Ragini takes her phone out. She calls to Mansi.

Ragini: mansi, you are looking handsome today…

Mansi: handsome..?

Laksh listens her words, but remains unreacted.

Ragini: you are looking great in that white shirt and orange over coat…

Laksh grips steering tightly to avoid his smile. And, Ragini observes it.

Mansi: ..?? but, I’m wearing anarkali yar…

Ragini: your beard and thin moustache making you more manly…!!

Mansi shocks: manly.. mee..??

Ragini: aww.. I feel like kissing you..
She says and kisses the phone. Mansi shocks and cuts the call.

Laksh rubs his nose to control his smile.

Ragini: you need not control your laugh…

Laksh looks at her.

Ragini in phone: mansi…

Laksh looks straight.

Ragini: come on.. laugh out…

Laksh stops the car. Ragini pretends to talk in phone. However, the phone was cut.
Laksh takes his phone and calls to Ragini and it rings. Ragini says, ‘shh’ and turns her face away from him and covers her face with her palm.

Laksh: Ragini, may be these kinds of things make me laugh for a while, but they don’t paste my broke heart again. So, stop playing pranks.

Ragini remains silent. He starts the car.

She messages to Mansi, ‘princess of mad kingdom..! y did u cut the phone..!!’
Mansi scratches her head.

They all reach the home after a long silence in between them.

Ap feels happy Sujatha and Ram has come. They can together make all arrangements for Uttara’s marriage now. but, all observes the distance between Raglak.
They have sent them to get together. But, their distance even more increased.

Laksh used to not take Ragini to her college. She used to go in other car with driver. However, Ragini was hurting with ignorance of Laksh.
He used to come to room late at night, so that he can skip talking with her. and, he goes away early in morning. They never get chance to have face to face at least to have an eye lock.

In his ignorance, Ragini started realizing his love. She was missing him badly. It’s he, who have dare to flirt her till now. and, he was no more even looking at her. she started feeling depressed. Her depression is shown in her eyes clearly in form of black circles. Even here Laksh was upset. It has been one week he talked with her. he can’t even stay for second without her and it has been a week..!! he didn’t even smile all these days.

Now… the family has taken charge on this case..!!

Ap: we have to do something now…!!

Tanya: but what…??

Adarsh: whatever, we have to make them together..!!

Pari: yes..!!

All the family joins their hands and all have a smirk.

—————————–
Next day, Uttara forces Laksh and Ragini to come with her to shopping. They both goes with her. but, she takes them into a lonely area.

Laksh: where are shops here uttara..?

Uttara: I have to meet a friend wait..!!

Uttara gets off from the car.

Ragini: uttu.. wait..!!
She too gets off.. Laksh stops car aside.

Suddenly, some goons surround Uttara and hold her.

‘Bhayya..!!’ Uttara shouts. Laksh shocks and about to run near her.

‘Stop there..! otherwise I will kill her..!!’ they threatens.

Raglak looks on……..

To be continued…..

———–
Hey there guys… for next one week or 10 days I may not update this ff, not only this.. storm, married life too… bcz… we are going out of station. I may give any of ff update tomorrow.. but next a slight break for 10 days.. sorry for this guys.. and, later I will be regular…
Bye dears…
And, how is the shock of the episode..?? hehe, I think it’s not like shock…

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    55 Comments

    1. poonam on March 6, 2017 2:17 pm

      awesome hope ragini realises her love soon

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:04 am

        thank you poonam..

    2. Ammu on March 6, 2017 2:38 pm

      Awesome yaarrr…..☺?

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:04 am

        thaanks ammu..

    3. lovely7 on March 6, 2017 2:50 pm

      Awesome but 10days gap is huge , try to upload whenever you’re free

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:05 am

        hmm.. i will try dear… free ga unapudu pakka update chesta…

    4. Sindhura on March 6, 2017 3:00 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:05 am

        thank you

    5. raglakholic on March 6, 2017 3:08 pm

      awessome chappy …..n miss u….loved this raglak vry mch….

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:06 am

        thank you

    6. Sinni Sinnni on March 6, 2017 3:10 pm

      Wow gr8 episode pls update soon

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:06 am

        thank you.. i will try..

    7. IQRA222 on March 6, 2017 3:13 pm

      Awesome episode
      I am waiting to see how ragini will convince laksh
      But astra di you know 10 days is so big gap ypu know na that i am a great fan of tour ffs but no problem i wil afterall its your ff but after your holidays u will have to be regular promise me
      And do enjoy your holidays ?

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:07 am

        i will try to give updates when I’m free dear.. thank you so much yar…

    8. G.Chandu on March 6, 2017 3:16 pm

      Superb!!! Loved it a lott!!! Ragini..realize your feelings soon!!!

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:07 am

        haa..she will realize soon… thank u chandu…

    9. Asw on March 6, 2017 3:32 pm

      Nice in raglak their point of view is correct keep going

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:08 am

        yes yar.. thank you..

    10. saranya on March 6, 2017 3:36 pm

      Awesome
      Hope ragini realises her love for laksh soon

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:08 am

        thank you saranya… ya, she will…

    11. Jaan on March 6, 2017 3:51 pm

      Awesome. Feeling bad for both. Hope ragini realise her love for lakshya soon, but not friendship wala love.

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:09 am

        thank you jaan…yes she will…

    12. Ammy on March 6, 2017 6:31 pm

      Superb

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:09 am

        thank you ammy

    13. jazzy on March 6, 2017 6:47 pm

      awesomee

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:10 am

        thank you

    14. Mintu on March 6, 2017 6:58 pm

      Amazing sis…. Laksh words r correct in his pov nd he is hurt..!!!! ragz dialogues in car nd laksh expressions which make me to smile…!!! It’s awesome scene….I loved it dear..!!! ragz realised his love..!!!Njoy ur vacation sis..Take care..!!!!

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:11 am

        thank you so much mintu…

    15. Ammu on March 6, 2017 8:35 pm

      Interesting episode and loved Raglak scenes. I hope soon Ragini will understand the depth of Laksh’s love. 10 days without ur ffs, I can’t imagine. But it’s ok dear. Have a nice journey and take care. Love u and miss u too

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:12 am

        thank you ammu… if I’m frèe in middle.. i will surely update…

    16. asra on March 6, 2017 10:51 pm

      awesome astu dear…..feeling bad for laksh….he is really soo hurt…..ragini talk to mansi s superbbb dear….and our laksh reaction ohh nooo….he s control his laugh….but i can’t control my laugh dear….now ragu realise her feelings…it’s good dear…but how our ragini s going to convince our laksh….it’s very difficult task na….bcz laksh hurt Soooooooo much na….anyways waiting for ur update dear….tkcr idea bank…

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:13 am

        thank you dear… hmm, now this is really big task for ragini… let’s help her… idea bank…me… haha.. thanks da..

    17. Sreevijayan on March 6, 2017 10:54 pm

      Awesome update dear…loving this story…..

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:13 am

        thank you dear

    18. Priya on March 6, 2017 11:24 pm

      Awesome.. feeling bad for laksh he is too hurt. Can’t wait for ragini to realize her love and pacify him . Enjoy your vacation…

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:13 am

        thank you priya…

    19. Shraddha on March 6, 2017 11:55 pm

      Hope that Ragini understands laksh feelings …& accept him

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:14 am

        yes.. she will realize soon…

    20. gayu on March 7, 2017 9:08 am

      Awesome dear

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:14 am

        thank you gayu…

    21. Affaa on March 7, 2017 2:51 pm

      I’m late ???????????????????????????????….. And 10 days gap so longgggggggggg… How I’ll stay without u ur ff… Tu is going to miss u… Very good I’m so happy he have to teach her lesson… Bechara laksh… Even feeling for ragini..but I’m happy ragini released her feelings…
      Astuuuu I’ll miss you yaar… What raglak do without u….. I have a safe journey.. Take care… Lots of love Affa…
      Epi was outstanding… I enjoyed a lot… Keep writing… I’ll be waiting for u…

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 3:56 pm

        don’t worry dear… i will come whenever i get time… i will try to update then.. thank you so much yar..

    22. Arjuna on March 7, 2017 6:11 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 7:59 pm

        thank you…

    23. Sherin on March 7, 2017 7:58 pm

      Superb

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:04 pm

        Thank you sherin

    24. Akshata on March 8, 2017 11:59 am

      oh my poor ragini, do you know life is full circle, you have to come back where you started. now you are at laksh place and laksh is at yours. but dont worry he still loves only you. he will understand not immediately but eventually. so dont lose hopes and try hard. i am always with you. now smile for me.
      awesome update astra, loved it.

      • Astra on March 8, 2017 1:40 pm

        life is a circle…. wow…!! thank you dear…

    25. Anupa on March 8, 2017 1:21 pm

      Amazing.
      cant wait to knw wat happens nxt.
      plzx post this only plzz plzx

      • Astra on March 8, 2017 1:41 pm

        thank you anupa.. i will try…

    26. tëìtō kUn on March 9, 2017 12:51 am

      Amazing….
      Feeling bad for Laksh…
      Hope soon Ragini realize her feelings for Laksh…
      Miss u alot Come back soon Astra….

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:06 am

        thank you…

    27. tëìtō kUn on March 9, 2017 12:53 am

      Sorry for late commenting…

    28. A.xx on March 10, 2017 12:33 am

      fab and soz for late comment.xx

      • Astra on March 12, 2017 9:05 am

        thank you yar… it’s ok da..

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