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Home»Fan Fiction»Raglak-pyaar ki bandhan 5
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Raglak-pyaar ki bandhan 5

administratorBy administratorFebruary 2, 201619 Comments3 Mins Read
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Thank u soo much guys for ur comments&supports.I saw many one asked me to post next part soon.but I couldn’t.bcoz my exams r on the way,so have a lot to study&also I have to post my another ff ADHURI KAHANI-PAIN OF LOVE.but don’t be dissappoint dears,I will try my best to give u good chapters.

Scene 1
Coffee shop.Ragini became hell shock to see laksh there!!!.
Aditi didn’t understand wat happend!
Aditi:Ragini,wat happend?
But ragini didn’t respond. She slowly get up from her seat!!
Laksh came near to her&gave her a sharp look.!!
Then he turned to waiter.
Laksh:thanks bhayya…
Waiter:koi baath nahi sir…
He went from there.. then laksh turned to
Ragini.!!!
Laksh gave her a wide smile!!! Ragini felt like a fool her self!!
Ragini:aap..?
Laksh:no..aap nahi!! Fool,stupid,idiot& brain less,he na??
Ragini looked down. Aditi didn’t understand wat is happening there!!
Aditi:guys,wat is happening here?.
Laksh:ask ur friend.
Aditi:Ragini,wat?
Ragini(in a low voice):He.. he,car,car!
Aditi understood&remain silent.!!
Laksh:kyaa tumhari dosth mere bare meim kuch nahi kaha?
Aditi shake her head in “yes”.

Laksh:I know that.because I heared it!! Juat ask to conform.!
Ragini:voh…voh..kyaa he na….
Laksh:no madam,don’t need any explanation.
Ragini:I ..I am really sorry.
Laksh:ohh!! So u know how to ask sorry!
Ragini didn’t tell any thing
Laksh:I just came to tell u some thing! Not any thing about the accident.so be cool.
Ragini gave a question look to laksh!!
Laksh:if we r talking about some one’s mistakes or scolding some one,pls make sure that he/she is not near.! Ok?
Aditi laughed hear this. Ragini gave her an angry look.suddenly aditi stop it.
Laksh:pls remind my words every time,it will help u,I am sure
Ragini gave a normal look to laksh.
Laksh:so I am laksh,Laksh Maheshwari.&u.?
Ragini:Ragini,Ragini Gadodia.
Laksh:ahh…naam toh badi kamal he,but doings…..uff..&u r name?
Aditi:Aditi Mishra.
Laksh:nice to meet u.so by guys..
He turned &go..
Aditi:in ur life it is first time he na?
Ragini:hmmm….
Aditi:but it was really really fentastic..
Said this she laughed…
Ragini:u….
She hit aditi.
Ragini take her coffee cup.&ready to leave.
Aditi paied bill&came out from coffee shop.

Scene 2
Parking area.
Ragini:wat was he thinking about his self? Is he felt I am as an ordinary girl?idiot..
Aditi:oh..stop it Ragini,if he heared this once again,it will not be good!
Ragini:I will never mind that.
Aditi suddenly hit her forehead!
Aditi:ohh I forgot my purse in there. I will come soon.u wait here.
Ragini:ok
She think about laksh’s words&became angry once again.:”idiot..”
While said she turned&collide with Laksh!!!
She lost her grip in coffee cup &coffee fall on laksh!!
Ragini:ouuu God!!
She hit her forehead.
Lakah became soo angry!!!
They were in parking.one one was there.!!
Ragini:I am really sorry.I didn’t see u.
Laksh didn’t say any thing. He started walking near to her.!!!
Ragini became bit nervous!!!
Ragini:w..wat?
Laksh just look at her eyes,with out saying any thing!!!
Ragini started walk to behind!!!!
Laksh didn’t stop!
Ragini started breathing heavily.!!!
finally he pins her to wall!!!
Laksh came very close to her!!!
Ragini breath heavily….
Laksh felt the hotness of her breath!!!
Ragini look in to laksh’s eyes!!
They share an eye-lock!!
Ragini felt something stuked in her throught…!she couldn’t say any thing.
Even she felt laksh’s breath in her cheeks!! Her lips started shivering!!!
Suddenly Laksh….
Laksh:Ragini…..
Ragini look at Laksh with a shocked face..

PRECAP:…..WILL CONTINUE….
guys gave comment pls…..

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19 Comments

  1. rosy on February 2, 2016 6:35 am

    hahah nice one

    • Lakshmi on February 2, 2016 10:13 am

      Thank u rosy for ur cute comment.today I am free so think to replay. ur comments.once more thank u to gave such a great support from the begining.love u dear

    • Lakshmi on February 2, 2016 1:33 pm

      Thank u my dear for a cute comment&keep commenting.love u dear

  2. Kruti on February 2, 2016 6:44 am

    It’s so good

    • Lakshmi on February 2, 2016 1:40 pm

      Thank u my dear kriti for ur comment,keep supporting

  3. manvi on February 2, 2016 6:56 am

    wow superb yaar its superb

    • Lakshmi on February 2, 2016 1:43 pm

      Manvi,love u soo much ur comment thanks a lot dear…

  4. Taiana on February 2, 2016 7:01 am

    Awesome… It’s ok dear concentrate on ur study n post when u get free tym… But pls post a long part…;)

    • Lakshmi on February 2, 2016 1:48 pm

      Thanks a lot dear to understand my situation.I will try my best to post next part soon&a long one.love u lot…..

  5. Rasha on February 2, 2016 7:32 am

    oh baba wat r u doing? giving an fabulous story but with late update its not fair..

  6. ria on February 2, 2016 7:35 am

    wow it’s amazing…please post the next part as soon as possible

  7. Ammu on February 2, 2016 8:14 am

    Superb episode dear

  8. Hayathi on February 2, 2016 8:41 am

    Wowww so nice dr

  9. Aarti on February 2, 2016 10:25 am

    Awesome

  10. aditi syam on February 2, 2016 2:28 pm

    Yaar not fair wat happened next plzzzzz update next part too can’t wait yaaar

  11. cute girl on February 2, 2016 2:47 pm

    its nice….

  12. nisha on February 2, 2016 4:07 pm

    superb plz post ur both ff n as well as concentrate ur studies

  13. meghs on February 2, 2016 7:46 pm

    nice..

  14. Ruhani on February 3, 2016 12:06 am

    Wow superb

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