Fan Fiction

RagLak OS-Nee thane en pon vasantham By Anaz

Nee thane en pon vasantham … ??

(New os )

Guyz # anaz here came with new raglak os” Nee thane en ponvasantham ”

I put this title cz its will suit to our royal couple raglak only… spl dedicating for all

The sceen begins in the ambulance …with syrun sounds

Attender calling others to help him carry that patient to inside

Before that one person lift that person in his hand nd rushed inside the hospital nd admitted that person their…

Nurse asked to that person who carried that person nd admitted to the hospital… wt is her name ??

Raginii laksh maheswari… yes that patient was raginii…

Ok whom she is to u ??

She is my wife … he said with teary eyes… his face revealed to be laksh…

In hospital ::….

Laksh is waiting outside with teary eyes… his face turns to pale

He is standing outside lifelessly by placing his head on the wall…

He is often banging his back head on the wall nd keeps murmuring…

Its my mistakes raginii… its my mistakes only i wont leave u alone in such situation i did a big sin tears rolled down frm his cheeks

He slowly slips down in same position…

Nd remembered raglak beaitifull moments … her pretty face only flashing on his mind …

Mr.laksh maheswari … thats sounds makes him turns to aside he rushed near to the doctor

Doc hw is my raginii ?? Is she is ok ?? I wanna see her once he is asking too much question to him in one go

Mr.maheswari cool man… see first let me allow to speak first … see mr.laksh

Ur wife raginii is in critical position … she is in last stage …if u didnt take care her she will slips into comma …

A big thunder effects fell on his face … he is shocked to listen this ..

Immediately he hold his hand doc… plz plz dont say like this i need my raginii back plz rescue her at anycost i need her …he is begging to him…

See mr.laksh she was in stress for last few months y dont u take care her in this state… u knew na she is 5 mnth pregnant ..

Then y did u so careless in her health …nw see wts happend to her… plz take care of her here after…

Lsksh nodded… he again asked doc to send him inside to see raginii once

U must wait for sometimes laksh till she is responding to the medicine….

Laksh sat on the bench brokenly…

Laksh held his head on the wall nd shut his eyes tightly for not allowing to see this sin world without his pure love ….

Third person pov :

Its all started after ragini’s fake pregnancy drama… everyone turns against to raginii nd trying to threw her out… swasan also stands for MM … here laksh only supporting raginii here parinitha didnt changed to negative… cz raginii truth revealed unexpectedly

But ap nd sujji hating raginii as hell for her deeds nd also cursing her to makes them ashamed infront of others… no one tried to understand raglak circumstances… ap allowed raginii to stay in MM for laksh cz he said if raginii dont have place here he wont…

……….

Some one sound interrupts laksh silent laksh comes to the present ..

Laksh sir she is responding to the medicine nw… once go nd meet doctor first then i will allow u to see ur wife ..

He wiped his tears in happy when he heares she is responding to the medicine…

He rushed to doc room…

Doc advised to laksh…plz dont give anymore stress to her…

He nod i will doc … i will try my best to save my raginii…

Ok mr.laksh plz pamper her dnt scold her anymore she needs love nd care dnt allow anyone to disturb her…

He nod hmm… plz makes her comes out frm her comfort zone…

U can discharge her when she will open her eyes…but mr.laksh one more thing dnt forget to take her to attend counsiling regularly…

He nod nd moved frm there…

He is staring raginii with teary eyes he slowly pick her hands nd makes her slaps on his cheek for his deeds…

I am really very very sry raginii … its my mistake… i knew it

I failed to rescue frm all situation…. i allowed u alone to face everything.. i am really sry bacha forgive me….

Laksh pov :

That day totally changed my life when raginii rescued me frm kavya…. i fell in love on my raginii… i promised to her i will always with her in every circumstances nd will keep love her till my last breath…

Thats y i support her to play that fake pregnancy drama… cz we knew how much daadhi hates that pure soul who didnt even come to the world yet….

I cant see my bacha worriying for her maa…infact i am the one who asked her to act like that … but when that bitter truth revealed infront of all everyone starts to hate my raginii nd wished to threw her out of this house… how could i can allow this…no i wont …

She is my raginii, my wife, my love, my world ,she is everything to me… so i stood for her … i never thought it was wrong… however raginii is responsible for this likewise i am also equally responsible for this … i still cant remember whatever i said to my family in angry ?? cz on that time my full concentration is on raginii only…

When i rushed to my room i saw my world sitting in bed nd crying badly…

I was broken….fully broked ???? though i compose myself cz i wanna console my raginii she needs me ..

I gently touched on her shoulder she hugs me immediately nd clutched my shirt tightly….her face were hided on my chest… she will do like this only two times whenever she is shy nd she is in pain…

I wrapped her waist nd makes its an bone crushing hug when i understood she is in deep pain… i patted her back in consoling way …

Likewise some days passed like this .. i took some days to get her back to normally … i personally felt she is happy ..

We were spend too much time alonely… thats helps us to move in next level of our life… yes we were intimated…. she gave herself thoroughly nd makes me feels happy that i am the most happiest person in the world…

I am happy that my family behaving nice to my raginii she confessed it to me happily…

That good news comes to know me… parinitha bhabhi is pregnant ….my family were celebrated that…same day my raginii makes me happy by saying she is also pregnant…

I felt goosebumps when i heared it first…

That feeling its really fantastic one in my life… i felt proud second in my life when i heared i am going to be a dad..

4 months passed peacefully… i tried my level best to makes my ragu happy… but she starts to behave strangely frm her last days of 4th mnth…

When i asked abt this to doc she said its quite normal for some persons during preganancy time ..

So i didnt bothered that though i am scared of it

Day by day my family starts to complaint me raginii is behaving weired …

They starts to blame her for silly things… but i wont believe it cz i trust my raginii i kept my promise

One day sujji aunty warns me to makes raginii stay away frm parinitha…

I asked y ??

Her reply makes me shocked ??

She said raginii jealous of parinitha baby… nd she is using all way to harm parinitha…

I fought to aunty for my raginii cz i trust my raginii …

One day my maa complaint she saw raginii with another man in somewhere…

I hold my fist in anger nd shout on my maa … cz i knew well my raginii cant betray me… she loves laksh only…

But my bad time i saw raginiii with that person one day accidently… that person who was the same person my mom said…

When i asked abt this to raginii she hide abt it frm me …. be honest i didnt suspect my raginii i cant even in my dreamz too…

But it was hurting when comes to knew my raginii hiding something to me… i am her world right… i repeated this to me often…

That anger hanged on my mind ….. i starts to observe her slowly… she is behaving weired… dont know y ??

I already late to notice my raginii wts happend to her ??

I stucked inbetween my inportant wrk nd this prblm… i wish to take a week to finish my wrk first nd wished to spend my rest of time with my raginii nd my baby…

During this day that bad news reached to me that parinitha bhabhi child got miscarriage…

Everyone felt broken…cz MM lost their heir… everyone crying for that…but my raginii lost in her world….

Everyone blaming raginii for killing parinitha child … i burtsted out in anger ??? when i asked abt this to raginii she replied she did it … with happy smile…

I was freezed for an sec… ap comes forward nd slapped raginii tightly…she faints down…

I shout raginiii…. she fell down placing her back down… i takes her in my arms nd patting her cheeks …. my gaze turns towards my maa…

I shout in anger ??? how dare u to do like this ..

Then i took her to hospital nd admitted her their…

Present :

I am sry raginii really very very sry….i knew u lied u cant do this to anyone… cz u spoiled ur image nd name to save ur maa’s baby…then how can u kill that unborn baby… no u couldnt… though u said y ??

Y my raginii behaved weired ??

Somewhere i failed to notice something … i wanna found it…

I will prove my raginii innocence i will never allow any evils comes near u…

I will reveal all puzzles…

I trust u raginii… i am gonna starts this game with the support of ur love… by saying this he kissed on her hand…

He touched her belly…lil bit of tears escaped frm his eyes…. bacha trust me ur mom is innocent…

He touched on her woomb nd said…i am promising u i will never leave the person who is behind this all…its an promise of ur dad…

I will cure my raginii … he kissed on her forehead…

Two days later :

Laksh took raginii to MM.. no one is ready to take arathi on raginii…

Raginii is not speaking to anyone …she is moving on with laksh instructions…

Always she is looking on the ceiling nd not even uttering any word …

Laksh cant see her like that… he knew very well no one gonna take care raginii anymore so he starts to stay with raginii all time…nd pampering her

On another side his eyes were scanning whole MM… he is hiddenly searching any hints abt it… but he failed cz everyone stopped talking with laksh too for supporting raginii…

He is murmuring to god…hw i gonna find all truth… plz god help me to revel all truth plz….

Chotti malik…

He turns back nd found his one of the servant ( laila)

Haan tell

Chotti malik i wanna share something to u… it was very important one…

Means ??

Abt raginii maa

Raginii ??

Yes … chotti malik…

After that fake pregnancy drama … u were with raginii maa… so she didnt felt anything bad…cz ur maa nd aunty jii is behaving very kind to raginii infront of u …

But when u were left …

Sujji maa triggered ur mom… nd turns her against to raginii maa ..

By saying she is abashakun of this house …cz of her we spoiled our image diidi… this girl is characterless… she is using some black magic on our laksh thats y he is supporting her blindly…

Ap took sujji words as vedhas… nd starts to torture raginii after laksh went to office….

Always scold her badly …they always planned to separate raginii frm u … by creating silly prblms…

But raginii maa tolerated everything … she tackled every situation for u chotti malkin…

Parinitha maa who was the only person always speaks with raginii without anyone knowledge…

Even swara didnt speaked with her…

His eyes turns to teary….then he asked

Then parintha maa got pregnant na…same day raginii maa too…

I felt very happy… i knew u too na chotti malik…

He nod haan…

But ur aunty was not happy… cz ap gonna be a dhadhi soon…

Her two sons gonna be a father… ap changed her mind nd wished to take care raginii…

But ur aunty jii brainwashed her… nd said raginii not gonna give birth to laksh child.. its an abshakun…

Once think dhii… the trance changes of rahinii…she will never hesitate to kill anyone for her selfishness. …her child will also resemble her na… so u better give more attention to our parinitha … she turns to maa after some yrs…

She too nod haan…

They take cared parinitha very well.. but didnt take cared raginii maa…

I saw her happy whenever she is near u… she is satisfied with u chotti malik…

U were the backbone of her… parinitha maa who hiddenly advice raginii to follow something while her starting month…. ( she is an advicer of raginii )

See chotti malik…like this many things happend… sujji intentionally makes raginii separated frm parinitha… nd starts to blame her…

I dont knew y suddenly raginii maa starts to behave weirdely last few days…

Wt r u saying laila… weired means ??

Like she always stay away frm all… everytime looking on the ceiling… lost in her world…

Do u knew more abt this ??

Noo malik… i can understand nw… raginii ma didnt shared abt this to u till…

May she didnt wish to hurts u… plz take care of her… by saying she left…

Laksh punched on the wall in angry ???? i will never leave anyone… whoever tortured my raginii everyone must pay for it… without partiality…

He is moving to his room while he saw ap nd sujji speaking each other … parinitha sitting beside them with teary eyes…

Laksh controlled his emotions nd rushed to his room…

Raginii is looking on the ceiling nd placing her back on the bed…

Laksh sat beside her nd warapped his hand around her shoulder …

She turns towards laksh within sec she turns to the same position without uttering any word…

Laksh felt hurt… he makes her face off him…though she is avoiding his eye contact nd looking on the ceiling again..

He cupped her face raginii look at me once i wanna talk to u raginii plz broke this silence to me…

I need my raginii …plz speke up

Still her gaze is on ceiling…

He merged his head on her nd patting her back…raginii plz share everything to me… plz… i am pleading to u

Laksh… she wispered…

He saw her with teary eyes… she asked to him..

Who is right here ?? I am damn confused… dont knew whom to believe ??

Laksh questioned wt ?? In confused state

Wo laksh look at their na…

He turns to that side… see laksh these two raginii is confusing me…

This raginii saying laksh loving me alot he will never leave me…

Nd this raginii is very bad… she is saying laksh will leave u forever… cz i am very bad…

Raginii eyes turns to teary… she clutched his shirts… tell me laksh who is saying the truth…

Laksh pulls her for an bone crushing hug… noo raginii dont believe anyone trust me… i will never leave u at any situation… u r mine raginii no one can separate u frm me…

Raginii burst out… promise me laksh u will never leave me…

Promise raginii i never…

He kissed on her forehead…raginii tell me y did u hide this frm me…that maa nd chaachi tortured u hell..

Raginii shocked to hear this… laksh whom told this to u… noo laksh they didnt

Raginii plz dont be lie… look my eyes straightly…

Their pair of eyes met each other… raginii only lips can hide this but ur eyes cant..

Y did u hide this frm me…

She hugged him.. nd burst out… laksh i wont share this to u cz i wont separate u frm ur maa nd ur family laksh for my selfishness..

They treated me badly for my deeds .. i deserved that punishment frm them thats y i accept everything whole heartedly…

I am guilt for betrayed ourfamily…

Likewise i knew if u comes to knew this u will stand for me against ur family..

I wont that laksh… cz i knew the pain when one maa left their children …

I wont give that pain to u laksh …she cupped his cheek… nd do u knew something laksh.. i never took that as wrong infact whenever i enter inside our room i felt like heaven…ur presence is here always.. u r my trust laksh… when ever u r near me i forget those pains nd sufferings ur presence always make me felt bliss laksh .. i love u laksh… luv u too raginii

Laksh kissed on her hand…bacha plz dont tolerate this much pain for me… u r more important to me than my family…

Raginii i wanna ask this to u … y did u lied that u killed bhabhi child…

Raginii shocked to hear this .. wt ?? Bhabhi child ?? Laksh hw ?? I dnt knew abt this ?? She felt breathing trouble… laksh remaind doc words dnt give stress to her… he hugged her tightly raginii plz plz cool down nothing happend to her…

She is fine nd her baby too..laksh lied to her…

Raginii took deep breath.. laksh consoled her…

I just asked u y did u said like that… ??

She hold her head nd crying badly …i dont knew laksh i really dont knew wts happeing to me…

Everyone saying i am mentally sick.. i am trying to kill bhabhi… my baby was abshakun… i cant bear this all laksh…

They were blaming me for some matters but i cant remember anything…

I consult the doc… two or three times but he didnt gave proper explanation to me…

I am mad laksh…. plz q .. i wont be mentally siqck may its affect to our bqà aby laksh…

Raginii stop this nonsence… nothing happend to u… my raginii is not sick… i am saying na nothing will happen to u nd our baby trust me…

I am behaving weired laksh i can feel it… something happend to me… she is crying badly… he warapped his hand around her…nd patted her back in consoling way… noo raginii u r perfectly alright…

He cupped her face nd kissed on her forehead …he makes her take her medicine

She is sleeping peacefully nw… he kissed on her forehead..

He locked the door…nd walking near to the balcony

He closed his eyes nd remaind everything wtever happend… laila statement raginii’s pov….

He is using his fingers to run his forehead…. nd keeps thinking…

So one thing is clear raginii didnt did anything in concious… cz she dont knew wts happening around her ??

Nd maa blamed raginii … cz she saw raginii with someone else… but he is an doctor raginii who went to consult him for her strnge behaviour ??

So here i can prove her an innocent… if i found that doctor…

Nw i wanna found the reason y she is behaving weired… wts actually happend to my raginii….

First i wanna talk to bhabhi…

He met bhabhi…nd console her…

Bhabhi did u really thinking that raginii is behind ur miscarriage…

Noo noo laksh… my ragu cant do like this to me…she is an innocent soul…

Thank god bhabhi atleast u r supporting her…

Laksh plz take care of her she is in danger…

Wt ?? He questioned to her ??

Actually laksh did u knew wt was happend exactly ??

Fb :

While raginii nd parinitha pregnancy time… everyone take cared parinitha not raginii…

But parinitha hiddenly adviced raginii hw to follow the diets nd everything …

They shared an good bonding…but dont knew how chachi knew their hidden bond..they kept me stay away frm raginii…

So i cant able to concentrate on her…

I rescued raginii two times while she was in danger … on that time i didnt takes it an serious i thought it was her carelessness…

But on that day i heared an strange voice…..nd one statement…

Plz kill raginii baby as soon as possible… i was shocked to hear this ..

When i moved to find that voice… i failed to catch them… i searched her everywhere few minutes…then

My gaze turms towards raginii… i saw raginii walking near the staircase lifelessly without concentrating down…

I rushed near to her nd push her aside… she dashed on the wall nd turns to unconcious… while moving near to her my legs were slipped… then my ….her voice breaked…

I am sry bhabhi…cz of us u losted ur baby …

Noo laksh its k… atleast i rescued my sister na…

Laksh some one intentionally suffesed oil there… thats y i slipped down instead of raginii…

Our family misunderstood that raginii is the reason .. when they saw raginii on the spot… i was not in the position on that time to explain wt was happend actually i am sry… laksh..

Its k bhabhi …i will found who was that ??

But bhabhi plz help me …did u noticed anything frm that person who tried to kill my raginii…

Noo… laksh… while thinking she remaind…

One different dhaaga placed down… that person pick that in their hand nd moved on…

Did u see that person face bhabhi… noo laksh i saw that hand nd dhaga only… it was different one usually that was cant brought frm temple… its will available in certain temples only laksh…

Tq u bhabhi… its enough …

One week later :

All MM family presenting on the hall…

Swara serving tea to everyone … parinitha is denieying to take food…ap consoling her..

Raginii was in her room … laksh locked her frm outside… nwdays he is doing this only whenever she is sleeping time only..rest of the time staying with her too… he didnt allowed anyone to go near raginii…

Laksh was not in home…

Adarsh nd sanskar discussing abt the new project… uttra sitting beside sujji…

Within sec cop rushed inside the MM….

Everyone shocked to see them there…

They moved inside nd forward the warrant papper to dp…he was shocked…

Police announced…we found the criminal plz surrender nw orelse we will take an severe action…

Everyone looking each othere blinkingly…

Whoever tortured raginii plz come forward.. we got an complaint against u all

Swara confused nd looking all

Sujji nd ap starts to shiver in fear… parinitha smiled lil..

Dp : who gives complaint against my family…

Its me….by saying this laksh entered inside…angrily ???

Laksh wts nonsencs r u doing asked by dp…

I am in my sence pappa..

I knew wt i am doing…

U r an elder to everyone in this home right ?? Did u ever enquired abt raginii till ??

No u r not ?? Cz ur wife is important to u than ur bahu… she is my wife na ..

Did u ever cared abt my baby than bhaiis..

No one considered my baby is heir of MM… its k fine…

But someone cared abt it morethan u all

He laughed… cop came here to see who was that… his gaze turns towards his maa nd chachii….ap nd sujji is shivering badly in fear

Laksh wt r u doing dp roared

Cool pappa y did u getting angry…see maa nd chachi were sweating badly in this centralized a/c hall…

Dp said sir some misunderstand happend here plz leave frm here…

They will never leave frm here pappa without arresting the criminal…

Laksh u r blaming our family…

Noo mr.dp i am blaming ur family… when everyone shows partiality to me nd my raginii…u losted ur all rights nd tied up with me…

Ap shouts laksh… dont shout mrs.dp…

Laksh shouts uttra… she comes forward nd said wtever happend to cop ( sujji nd ap torture )

Cop moved to arrest sujji nd ap…

Swara shouts laksh…wt r u doing they r our family… dont do like this…

Laksh shout stop inspector… dont arrest them.. my swara bhabhi pleading to me… na

Everyone took deep breath…

Arrest my bhabhi instead if ap nd sujji… he roared…

Everyone shocked to hear this…

Laksh slapped on her cheek tightly… twicely…its turns to three four five…??

She fell down… wt did u thinked abt urself swara…r u genious …

U can escape frm all crime nd me… noo u r wrong…

Some dramas…??? like family asking y did u slapper her like that…

Will u all plz shut up ??

Laksh called someone … doctor( raginii consulted one doctor na ) came inside … laksh pointed him nd said he is the one na ma u saw with raginii… she nod hmm..

He said y did she met him..

Everyone makes her believed that she is mentally sick thats y circumstances forced her to consult him… nd the main reason behind my raginii strange behaviours…he threw some medicine on swara face…she is looking that shockingly..

One of the servant came inside …laksh held his collar nd slapped him badly… he confessed

Hw swara asked him to change raginii medicine …nd tried to kill her but failed…nd finally that oil idea too..

He said swara malkin gave some amount to me to do this…

Everyone turns to shocked …patinitha eyes turns to teary…

Lsksh pointed that dhaaga to parinitha… Is this same dhaaga na bhabhi…she nod hmmm.

Nw tell na doc… hw that medicine will wrk ??

Doc ; it was kind of drugs… very dangerous one..if someone took this regularly they cant be normal…they will loss their conciousness… they will starts to imagine imaginary characters near by…

When raginii came to consult me… swara also followed her nd offered some amount to me… so i counselled raginii through mbl… na makes her believed she killed parinitha baby…

Laksh gave proper treatment to her so she will get well soon…

Nw tell na swara y did u do this ?? Y ??

Sanskar rushed near to her nd slapped her badly…

She burst out….cz of ur maa sanskar… i did this all for ur maa…

Wt ??

Ur maa always scold me for not giving heir to her.. she hates ap turns to dhadhi soon… in certain period my anger turns towards raginii when ur maa compared her with me… so i wish to kill her baby…but pari bhabhi came in it…

Wt will i do ?? She felt tight slap again on her cheek

None other laksh… how dare u ???swara..

Cz of u my raginii suffering this much… did u knew how much i tried to rescue my raginii…

Inspector plz arrest her… puts her in alone cell…cz she is mentally sick…

They arrested swara…. nd abt to arrest ap nd sujji… he stopped it…

He rushed inside nd lift sleeping raginii in his hand… nd came down…

Inspector u can dp ur duty after i went out… by saying this he went …..

4 months leap :

Raginii gives birth to an baby girl… laksh kissed on raginii forehead nd lift his baby on his arms… raginii placing her head on his chest nd smiling…

Shekhar nd shomi came with chottu… nd blesed them.. pari nd adarsh came to meet raglak…

Raginii felt happy to see pari is 2 mnth pregnant…

Adarsh wish to tell abt ap …

But showed his palm… noo bhaiyya i wont hear anything abt them…

Everyone left frm there…

Laksh encircled his hand around her waist… raginii leaning on his chest by holding baby… lil bit of tears left frm her eyes…

Raginii dnt wry … ur maa nd pappa care is enough to our baby …we r here na to love our baby… he kissed on her forehead…

” Raginii is his ” pon vasantham ” …. i thought i gave apt title to it… “nee thane en pon vasantham ”

Screen freezed on their happy face….

Guyz leave ur cmnts… i took lots of time to finish this lengthly os…

#anaz

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