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Raglak- mom’s kid (part-1)

AstraBy 65 Comments3 Mins Read

check teaser if u missed.
 Introduction

chapter 1

XYZ engineering college….

The students are coming into new acedamic year.
Innocent students are becoming victims for raging.
Not cruel raging.. but silly ragging..

Laksh and his batch is busy in bullying juniors. They are making them sing songs, say biodata, etc..etc…
But only for fun….

then  a chocolate color car stops in front of gate. All seniors shift thier gaze to gate,

who is that junior coming to college in car the first day..!!!

Laksh keeps looking playing with a chain in hand.

Then a thin leg which is covered by yellow legging steps out. Then a pink and yellow combined frock. Her hair is free.

Laksh chain falls from hand as soon as he looked at her.

Her face is revealed as Ragini…

In Laksh pov a song plays… (Anjali movie song)

(in telugu)

Ammamma bangaru ve..
Andala chinari ve…
muddula chitti thalli navvula paalavelli
challani chupula na thalli
vannelu virisina sirimalli
chukkala pandiri nee muchatale
aamani shobhalu nee muripale

Anjali Anjali Anjali chilike navvula puvvula jabili
Anjali Anjali Anjali merise punnami vennela jabili

(IN TAMIL)

Ammamaa Pillai Kani
Angamthaan Thanga Kani
Ammamaa Pillai Kani
Angamthaan Thanga Kani
Ponmani Chinna Chinna
Kanmani Minna Minna
Konjida Konjida Oru Kanmeni
Ponthamizh Sinthida Oru Ponmeni
Muthangal Thanthidum Thiru Poomeni
Kanpadum Kanpadum Intha Ponmeni

Anjali Anjali Anjali…….
…….______________________

Enjoyed the song guys..?? who else love this song a lot…??

In bg in laksh pov.. this song was running.

Ragini was walking into college looking innocently in all directions.

Then, one of thier batch member calls Ragini near.
“hey yellow dress..!! come here..!!”

Ragini looks at them and takes out her phone. Laksh looks on…

“mom, here some one are calling me. shall I go or not..??”

those batch shocks. they surround Ragini. Laksh tries to stop them.

A bad guy,

“oh baby, are you mom’s kid..??” he grabs phone from her hand.

Ragini keeps looking that guy in big eyes.. but no fear at all..

Laksh:: avi, stop it and come back right now..!!

Avi:: chup bey..! I know what to do..!! come on propose me junior..!!

Laksh tights his fists to beat him.

Ragini:: my mom comes now…

Whole batch look at each other.

“one..” Ragini starts counting…

Laksh looks on…

“Two…” she counts.

Batch scratches thier heads.

She is about to say three… a line of cars suddenly stop in front of college gate. All shock and look at gate.

Driver opens the back door of car. A lady with cream cotton saree steps out.

A boy in that ragging batch shocks,

“Mrs. Sharmista devi, the collector of this district..!!”

Now whole batch shocks. But Laksh smiles, “shomi aunty..”

Ragini smiles looking at Sharmista.

“Mummy….!!!!” shouts Ragini as a kid and runs to her.

All gets even more shocked now.

Shomi smiles and hugs Ragini.

“This new junior is kid of collector…!!” avi takes a gulp.

Sharmista gives a glare at ragging batch giving them shivers of fear.

To be continued….

Stay tuned…. to face mom’s kid…

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65 Comments

  5. Mintu on

    Amazing sis…really interesting!!!! Anjali papa song u put it on laksh bgm is nice..!!!! I think laksh know shomi?? One Guy ask ragz to come.. Bt she ask her mom… Hehe.. She is really moms kid..!!! Waiting for next part.. Post it soon

    • Astra on

      thank you mintu.. yes laksh knows her and even ragini too.. how..u will know i nxt update..

  9. Asw on

    Astra Dr this song is suitable for little baby ?? no hard feelings Dr amazing yaar I too love song keep going

    • Astra on

      hehe.. yes dear.. and ragu is small baby here.. why laksh got that song as soon as he saw her.. u will know later.. thank you dear…

  11. aadhya on

    Hi Astra
    Epi was amazing loved this shade of ragini sry I couldn’t comment previously on any of ur ff as I was busy.
    But I was on cloud 9 reading ur ff as today there has been no raglak ff postedposted in which they are leads

  12. a on

    Awesome and l love that song and movie too and i like not like love baby shamili acting during my childhood. Not only in that movie in every movie which she acted.
    I love her acting and calling cheeranjivi as raju cutely in jagadeka veerudu atilokasundanri movie.
    Do you like her in that movie?

    • Astra on

      thank you so much a… yes.. jagadeka verudu is also my fav movie… i love her there too… shz so cuteeee….

  13. Akshata on

    loved it, i loved it, i just loved it, really loved it, only i can utter these words not more than that becoz you know i do love it. so update soon

    • Astra on

      Anjali anjali anjali
      Pyari anjali anjali anjali
      Anjali anjali anjali
      Meri aankhon ka tara anjali
      Ratno sa tera badan
      Pyare se tere nayan
      Ratno sa tera badan
      Pyare se tere nayan
      Dhire dhire haule haule
      Dagmag tu to dole
      Tutla tutla kar tu bole
      Phulo jaise tu murjhaye na
      Dar lagta hai har pal humko
      Nazar hamari lag jaaye na
      Anjali anjali anjali
      Pyari anjali anjali anjali
      Anjali anjali anjali
      Hamari anjali anjali anjali

      hahah… thank you dear..

  19. asra on

    fabulous astu dear….anjali papa song amazing dear….i love thz song dear….Ohhh my ragu s really sooo kiddo…she asked her mom….someone call can I go…..Ohhh so cute na….
    laksh know sumi already….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…..

    • Astra on

      ya… she is cute… she asks her mom everything… that’s why she is mom’s kid… thank you dear…

  27. Aim on

    Wow Awesomeeee but I would have been happier if you made Janki Ragini’s mom.I don’t like Shomi!