Hii…guys This is Mahi back with nxt chappy…. it is also short one so sorry for that but nxt one will be surely long….
Thanks for commenting in last part….and also thanks to my silent readers….let get started now…
Chapter 5
My Last L?ve…
it was between all these and that monsoon arrived and it started raining…
And i realized that my broken heart can’t be healed and i can’t forget my first love…
Each time it rained…her memories came along with it…the smell of rain was her’s…the rain had her Voice…
As every rain drop breaks..it breaks my heart too….
My tears made competition with rain…
I started forgetting the time…when i was happy…
The rain just got stronger day by day…
To get myself away from the rain..i decided to go to Banglore..।n the name of company tour…
I never thought how would i live there without money…I just decided to go away…to escape from the rain…
While i was standing infront of the mirror counting new wrinkles on my face…my wife came into the room.. after some movements of silence….
Ragini:-“I will miss u…”
I got angry but didn’t replied…
Ragini:-“u look really handsome…”
I felt she was mocking me…still kept my nerves down…
The rain seems to distroy the world….it really got stronger…
She came near me…stared at my eyes for some time…and kissed me…i was shocked at her this action…that i could not react…
Soon i realised what she has done…and for the first time in my life…i slapped someone…. i slapped her…
She was broken into tears…
I threw my packed bags away….
Running away from that house…madly drenching in rain
Each rain drop pierced through my body and cut my heart even more…
I was running aimlessly but my foot make me reach my house…
I went in rage…and shouted angrily….
“I just can’t go through this…i hate her…I want to live alone…I want divorce or I will die…it’s first love it just don’t go away…u can never understand that….”
My father came to me and took me to study room….
He calmed me and made me sit…
Dp:-“OK…we will go through the divorce procedure….but i have to say something…..
_______________________________________________________________________
To be continued..
A/N:-ok guys how was the chappy… short na…but i don’t want to drag it more that’s why kept it short…..thanks for giving ur precious time and reading it…nxt will last…will try to clear all ur doubts ..i hope u will like…sorry for mistakes….keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc…?
I have 3 more ideas in my mind….hope u will like it too…after completing this i will start one of them…if u want any other couple do tell me…
Vote for the story which u want…
1.- The Coffee Love..(2 shots)
2.- Love After Death…(maybe 4-5shots)
3.-One And Only Love..
Link for chapter 4:-
http://www.tellyupdates.com/last-love-shots-swasan-shot-5/
19 Comments
It’s really tough to tolerate laksh behavior towards ragini
Agree with u lovely…. but it was last….now he will not be able to torture her any more…
Thanks for reading… be happy…stay blessed….tc..?
Amazing xx
Thank you… very much dear….it means alot ….keep reading…. be happy… stay blessed…. tc?
This is really bad ok.Where Ragini should have slapped him for ruinning her life ulta she got slapped.I will never forgive Laksh now.I hope Ragini throws the divorce paper on his face now.I really don’t like female characters whose life’s mission is to win their dog husbands’s black hearts even after bearing physical & mental abuse.I am sorry if u felt bad but I can’t bear this.
I agree…with u….And i totally understand ur POV dear….
I didn’t felt bad dear….i would have felt bad..if u had not shared ur view about the story….readers views is what matters most….thanks for reading… be happy… stay blessed…tc..?
I want all of that ff but it based on raglak plzz
plzz guys try to give more raglak ff ts os see Na guys swasan ff are so much and raglak is so less and getting decreasing day by day plzz raglak ff writer or the raglak fan is lesser in swasan fan plzz write more raglak ff ts os as plzz Its a request to all raglak or temish fan
Amazing
awesome dear….oh my poor ragu…how can u tolerate laksh…laksh u r too much….u r heartbroken means what the mistake of ragini…y u hate her thz much….what the mistake she did to u…infact u only did a mistake…she have a full rights to slap u hate u and divorce u…u don’t have that rights to slap her….sry dear if I hurt u…am so sry…..tkcr dear….
Amazing…..I vote for 1,3
Ragini should literally throw the divorce papers on his face and walk away………if Laksh doesn’t want her why did Ragini take initiatives to bring him out of his past??????? He should be slapped…..no other girl would try this hard to relieve someone’s pain…..honestly if I was in Ragini’s place I would have definitely ignored him….he is so harsh to her……plzzz make Ragini a strong character by divorcing him and living her life peacefully without that psycho……
AWESOME
amazing
Nice
hell man poor rgini
Interesting episode and feeling bad for Ragini. Please make Laksh realize his mistakes and fall for Ragini
Laksh is so rude. He should realise his mistakes soon ,also this is a awesome update
awesome loved it