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Home»Fan Fiction»Raglak- This is my land- part 3
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Raglak- This is my land- part 3

AstraBy AstraJuly 14, 201759 Comments6 Mins Read
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Part 3

The bus stops at a place. All gets down..
“Hey miss.. plz tell your name..”
Laksh follows Ragini again..

Rag: are you going to follow me like this always???

Lak: at least plz tell me where you stay..
Laksh asks very pleasingly. Ragini looks at him and thinks,
“Ok, listen. I stay in the place where it is surrounded by greenery, where the birds chirping is filled as melody… where the flower garden has bloomed… where the fragrance of passion is overflowed…”
Ragini says these words as if she is enjoying each and every word.. Laksh could clearly see the excitement and he could imagine the place in her eyes.

“That’s where I stay..!!” says Ragini and keeps going away.

“Hey..!! tell your name at least..!!!” shouts Laksh from far.

Ragini turns back, “my name is music..!!!” she says and keeps going away.

“wow, miss nature is miss music..! I like it..!!” thinks Laksh and he too goes away.

In MM,

Sanskar reaches house.
Ap: sansku beta.. you came..!! I have prepared kheer from you come..!!

Sanskar smiles and hugs Ap.
“I missed you mom.”

Ap in tears: missed you too beta… come on.. say “aa..’
Sanskar opens his mouth to eat the spoon of kheer which Ap is about to feed.

Then Ap feels a pull on her hand, and that spoon goes into Laksh’s mouth. Sanskar looks at him in anger.
Ap: lucky beta..!! (Ap happy)

Laksh winks his eye at Sanskar(in sarcastic way)

Sanskar: it’s your passion to steal away whatever that belongs to me..!!

Laksh: chill bro..! I have learned that from you..!!

Sanskar looks at Laksh in red eyes.
“Lucky..!” he says biting teeth.

Laksh: whoever deserves what, they only get that Sanky..!!

Sanskar and Laksh are about to get into a fight,

“Laksh and Sanskar..!!” shouts Dp.

They move far from each other glaring at EO.

Dp: Laksh, as soon as you came, you started the war..?

Lak: nahi papa vo…

Dp: learn something from your brother..! he has become a great scientist. And you are his twin. Still no success in your life..! always go around trees and animals..!!

Sanskar smirks at Laksh.

Lak: it’s my passion dad.

Dp: then use it for your career just as your brother…!

Laksh bends his head as Dp is comparing him with Sanskar.

Ap: leave it naa ji.. this is common for us. Congratulate Sanskar.. his experiment was success…!!

Dp: I never get happy from my both of sons. They always disappoint me..!!
Says Dp and leaves home.

Sanskar: that’s why maa, I don’t like to come home. Papa never appreciates me..!

Laksh: then go out, we can stay peacefully here..!!

Sanskar goes straight to Laksh and both are facing EO, in ready to fight mode.

San: this is my house Lucky..!
Lak: and mine too..!!

Sanskar goes away to his room in anger and Laksh too leaves to his room.

Ap remains sad in hall.
“I do not understand to feel happy that my both sons came at same time to house or to still feel sad they still fight as kids..!”

————————
Shekar: Ragini beta, listen to me..
Ragini: no papa. I don’t want to join in any lab. I want to be free from now.
Shekar: so, don’t you have any aim for ur career?
Ragini in shining eyes: I want to join in green army..!
Shekar in anger: you want to run back trees again..?
Ragini: papa..
Shekar: no..! you are joining in the lab. That’s it. you will be a good scientist if you take training there. Let me talk with Sanskar..

Ragini leaves a sigh.

Shekar and Ragini go to the laboratory of Sanskar. Shekar is talking with sanky and Ragini is roaming here and there.

San: join Ragini here for sure uncle. I will give her training.
Shekar: thank u sanky…
San: no thank u uncle.. u r my dad’s friend..
Shekar: ragu beta.. come and meet Sanskar..!!

Ragini just comes inside from door, Sanskar looks at her.

He makes his eyes big. Sanskar is flattered as soon as he looked at her. her big eyes, chubby cheeks, small pinky lips, thin nose.. over all a cute face who is bearing the whole beauty on herself. Her hair is waving on her shoulder proudly.

Shekar: she is my daughter Ragini…
Ragini forwards hand to give shake hand to Sanskar.. Sanskar smiles looking at her and about to join hand with her..

“thaaaappp..”
A glass braking sound. The trio shocks and looks aside, a glass was broke due to a hit of stone.

Sanskar shocks and runs there. It’s green army batch.

“The things which are polluting the nature..!” one boy shouts.
“Have to be stopped right now..!” other boys and girls says in unison.

Those slogans continue. That batch was leaded by none other then Laksh.

“Lucky..!!” Sanskar tights his fists. He goes down and with him Shekar and Ragini too comes. Ragini looks at Laksh, but Laksh doesn’t see her.

San: what’s the problem..?

Lak: our green army got information that your lab is doing experiments which are polluting a lot than minimum limit. If this lab is not closed, this city has to face so many problems..!

San: what non sense..? this city was polluted by factories and vehicles. Go behind them, why are you behind me..???

Laksh comes towards Sankar,
“Your experiment of a rocket yesterday Mr. Sanskar. On whose permission you took it up..? it has polluted the sky beyond the limits..!!”

Laksh is pointing out Sanskar.. Just then, Laksh turns his eyes to look at Ragini and he amazes and even Ragini too keeps looking at him..

——————–

Guys, I have started a new ff on pehredar piya ki. Open the PPK forum too in sony Tv’s list to read my ff.
This was link of the 1st part I published..

Princess Diya Swayamvara- Pehredar piya ki. (part 1)

and, keep opening that forum for being in touch with my new ff.

no one has commented in the previous part, i don’t you guys missed it or didn’t like it?
but, this will be my last post in TU if no one gives me response there.

i don’t know i was rude or not. but it hurts to see nill comments.

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    59 Comments

    1. kitkat on July 15, 2017 12:07 am

      hey sweetheart posted after a long…. loved it n yadid u read my os bliss????

      • Astra on July 15, 2017 9:12 am

        i didn’t know about it dear, I will read now..

    2. Aim on July 15, 2017 1:20 am

      Asthu??????
      But can you erase this annoying sanki soon?Ragini ka bada bhai har jagah uske hero Laksh ki jagah lene ki koushish karta hai??

      • Basu on July 15, 2017 9:07 am

        I agree with you… We want more raglak scenes

    3. Elizabethlovely on July 15, 2017 7:21 am

      Awesome

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:17 pm

        thank you..

    4. Arjuna on July 15, 2017 7:24 am

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:20 pm

        thanks a lot

    5. Sindhura on July 15, 2017 7:41 am

      Nice

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:20 pm

        thank you

    6. Thahseem on July 15, 2017 8:04 am

      Very nice

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:20 pm

        thank you

    7. Sherin on July 15, 2017 8:25 am

      Awesome dear

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:21 pm

        thanks dear

    8. Vini on July 15, 2017 8:30 am

      Superb one, keep going

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:21 pm

        thanks vini

    9. ROJARANI on July 15, 2017 8:40 am

      Nice after a long gapppp

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:21 pm

        thanks roja.. yes.. 😀

    10. avika on July 15, 2017 10:24 am

      Super

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:22 pm

        thanks avika

    11. Rehna on July 15, 2017 11:11 am

      Awesome dear

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:22 pm

        thanks rehna..

    12. aleeza on July 15, 2017 12:31 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:23 pm

        thanks aleeza..

    13. asra on July 15, 2017 2:08 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one…
      i didn’t read bcz of person problem dear….sry for that dear( holding my ears)…plz don’t say like that…plz update ur ff’s dear….tkcr dear…

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:24 pm

        thank you so much dear.. sry 4 saying like that… i won’t stop dear..

    14. Ammu on July 15, 2017 2:51 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and loved Raglak scenes a lot. I’m really really really sorry for not reading previous part, I don’t know how I missed it. Truly it’s a mistake. I don’t want to miss your stories, because you are one of my most favorite writer dear. Please don’t say that u will stop posting ffs in TU. Nowadays number of Raglak stories are decreasing dear, please continue all your stories. It’s a huge request.

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:26 pm

        thanks a lot ammu.. i won’t do it dear. i will continue… thanks for the love n all..

    15. Malu on July 15, 2017 4:18 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:27 pm

        thanks malu

    16. Asw on July 15, 2017 4:54 pm

      Nice keep going

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:27 pm

        thank you

    17. Vennila on July 15, 2017 7:24 pm

      Awesome episode

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:28 pm

        thanks vennila..

    18. Jiyani on July 15, 2017 7:33 pm

      Awesome dear

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:28 pm

        thanks dear

    19. Anju on July 15, 2017 7:52 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:29 pm

        thanks anju

    20. Pearly on July 15, 2017 8:15 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:29 pm

        thanks pearly

    21. Soumya on July 15, 2017 8:26 pm

      Superb di…post next soon

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:29 pm

        thanks dear

    22. Ashly on July 15, 2017 9:10 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:30 pm

        thanks dear

    23. Laashya on July 15, 2017 9:25 pm

      Lovely episode and cute Raglak

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:30 pm

        thanks dear

    24. Monu on July 15, 2017 9:37 pm

      Interesting dear

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:30 pm

        thanks dear

    25. Monisha on July 15, 2017 10:01 pm

      Superb part

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:31 pm

        thanks dear

    26. IQRA222 on July 16, 2017 12:44 am

      di it was wonderful episode
      loved it
      god sanky and lucky fight was ruthless!!!

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:31 pm

        thanks dear

    27. Aamy on July 16, 2017 7:51 am

      Awesome

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:31 pm

        thanks aamy

    28. Raglak_fan on July 16, 2017 10:25 am

      I’m a silent reader and Awesome

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:32 pm

        thanks a lot

    29. shashi on July 17, 2017 5:19 am

      Superb. Waiting for next epi .

      • Astra on July 17, 2017 12:32 pm

        thanks a lot

    30. hemalattha on July 26, 2017 4:16 pm

      Nice

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