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Home»Fan Fiction»Raglak- This is my land- part 1
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Raglak- This is my land- part 1

AstraBy AstraMarch 5, 201743 Comments3 Mins Read
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Guys, check out the teaser I gave already…

Teaser

This is my land… part 1

A boy is planting a small plant in the mud with his small palms. Then he waters that plant.

“My dear plant, I will save you always till you grow up. When you grow up, you can save us..!!”
He says to plant in cute little smile.

Then a another boy comes with a plough,

“Lucky, why did you plant this here? I will remove it..!!”

“Why sanky..??”

“I have to set up my mini experiment area here..!! Move..!!”
Says Sanky and tries to remove plant with plough.

“No bhai..!!” Says Lucky and pushes him. Sanky falls down.

Sanky removes dirt on his shirt and then both fights.

“How dare you to push me..??”

“How dare you to remove my plant..!!”

Both keeps fighting.

“Laksh..!! Sanskar…!!” Shouts Dp.

They both stands and clean dirt on their shirts.

“What’s going on..??” Dp questions seriously.

Laksh:: papa, bhai is removing the plant..!!

Sanskar:: papa, I took permission first from mom that here i will set up my experimental place.

Ap just comes. Then Dp goes near plant.

Sanlak looks on…

Dp draws a round around that plant.

Dp: sanskar, you shouldn’t enter beyond this circle. And laksh, your plant grows within this circle in few years.

Both nods their heads.

Ap:: so, both give shack hands now.

Little sanky and lucky looks at each other. They go away without giving hand shakes.

Ap Dp looks on..

———

In other town, a small girl gets off from a car and she runs into green fields.

She raises her hands and inhales the fresh air deeply…

“I love you nature…!!!” She shouts.

“Ragu beta.. come let’s go..!!” Shouts shekar from car. Baby Ragini runs back to the car laughing.

She keeps looking at the green fields in smile..

“Maa, papa.. I will marry a boy who own these all fields..!!” She says childishly.

Shekar and shomi laughs.

————–

In a big mansion,

“Sir, if we dig all these lands, we can construct a huge factory here. And, the outlet water will be mixed in river beside.” A man says.

A middle aged man, “let’s start the work soon. Sahil beta, you will be the M.D of this factor after some years..!!”

A small boy who is sitting in a grand chair smirks.

————–

Then a digging vehicle arrives at the green fields… that vehicle raises it’s trunk to remove all fields.

The screen freezes at the green lands…….

—————-

Hey there guys,

You all said… sanky would be nature lover and lucky is techno lover..!! But no…
In any case opposite attracts …. but only in the case of nature…. only nature lovers love nature lovers…

So…. now feedback time..!

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    43 Comments

    1. Mona on March 5, 2017 2:42 pm

      Interesting

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:55 am

        thank you

    2. IQRA222 on March 5, 2017 2:49 pm

      Awesome astra di
      Loved the first part
      Baby ragu was so cute
      Waitinf for the next episode
      And pls post samragini , storm of love soon

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:55 am

        thank you dear…

    3. lovely7 on March 5, 2017 2:53 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:56 am

        thank you…

    4. Tigeress on March 5, 2017 3:00 pm

      Wow dii it is really , only I read the teaser , story is really different and amazing

      • Tigeress on March 5, 2017 3:04 pm

        Today * only I read it

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:56 am

        thank you dear.. i will try..

    5. Tigeress on March 5, 2017 3:03 pm

      Dii please update your ff my married life , I’m eagerly w8ing for the next part

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:02 am

        i will try 2 update dear..

    6. Mintu on March 5, 2017 3:06 pm

      Superb sis..interesting plot..!!!! Waiting for ur ready to breakup story.. Plss post it soon..!!!

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:56 am

        thank you dear

    7. masthi on March 5, 2017 3:07 pm

      very good

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:57 am

        thank you

    8. Asw on March 5, 2017 3:08 pm

      Nice I think first ever u give the triangle love story ? keep going

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:57 am

        thank you dear.. haha.. yes…

    9. Sindhura on March 5, 2017 3:13 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:57 am

        thank you

    10. kitkat on March 5, 2017 3:22 pm

      awesome one dear

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:58 am

        thank you dear

    11. marklotha on March 5, 2017 3:43 pm

      aswme dear plz continue i love nature 2 jst lik raglak loves nature…

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:58 am

        thank you yar… i will try…

    12. saranya on March 5, 2017 4:21 pm

      suprb

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:59 am

        thank you

    13. Anu? on March 5, 2017 4:49 pm

      Nice keep going ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:59 am

        thank you anu

    14. gayu on March 5, 2017 7:27 pm

      Superb dear. Lovely concept. You never fail to impress us.My little raglak rocks. Waiting for the next part

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 9:59 am

        haha.. thank you gayu…

    15. asra on March 5, 2017 7:30 pm

      awesome astu dear…..idea bank Whr u got thz type of ideas….loved it alot….Ohhh my cute baby ragu….love u dear…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:00 am

        thank you dear…

    16. Ammy on March 5, 2017 8:58 pm

      Superb

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:00 am

        thank you

    17. Ammu on March 5, 2017 9:18 pm

      Interesting episode dear and loved it. Eagerly waiting for next episode

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:00 am

        thank you ammu..

    18. Affaa on March 6, 2017 12:30 am

      Astuuuu again u ???????????????????????????????… I can’t believe…. Now half tu is urs… Masha Allah… How ur doing this any tips for this poor writer… When I finished reading this ff I just rushed to see who is the write… I was surprised to see u there… Madam is bzy in writing new ff.. What about my ff… Do to asap OK… Keep rocking like this…. I don’t have words to appreciate u…. Keep writing… Ur a great writer…
      Lots of love
      Affa

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:01 am

        hahah..thanks a lot dear.. hehe.. i have update it.. do check it…

    19. Akshata on March 6, 2017 1:11 pm

      does that mean, all will fight for one beautiful land and that fight will be interesting and worth watching, after all the winner will get ragini also (wink).
      awesome update.

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:02 am

        yes…!! u r right..!! it’s gonna be love war for land….

    20. jazzy on March 6, 2017 8:25 pm

      amazinggg

      • Astra on March 7, 2017 10:02 am

        thank you

    21. Rehna on March 7, 2017 9:58 pm

      Awesome dear

    22. A.xx on March 8, 2017 11:23 pm

      fab and sorry for late comment xx

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