Fan Fiction

raglak ff : HUM TUM -episode 3

after 3 years……
laksh has become a famous cartoonist and lives in new york with his father.his mother is in india handling her wedding planning business with sanskar.his parents are separated due to some misunderstanding but both of them miss each other a lot.sanlak have tried a lot of ways to patch them up but to no avail.
new york……..
l:dad i have to go to frankfurt…
dp:why is that?
l:i got a mail from my boss that their publishing house want me to write a book on my cartoon characters ‘hum tum’ .isn’t great????
dp:it’s mindblowing but why frank furt?
l:well i have to write their based on some foreign city so i thought frankfurt….
dp:arre u fool then go to the most romantic city of the world…….paris
l:paris?????
dp:obviously…..u have to write a love story right? then what will be better than going to paris and taking an idea from there…
l:great dad…..u are the best love u..
dp:love u too beta….book ur tickets now itself
l:yes dad
—-x-x-x-x-x——–

after one month
laksh reaches paris and is on a train to reach his office. an attendant comes to him
a:sir would u like something ??
l:no thank u
the attendant goes to another passenger who is sitting on the seat infront of his and asks the same question.that passenger is a girl
g:yes i will have a coffee.with very little sugar …brown one and about a tablespoon of milk…thank u
laksh feels that he has heard that voice somewhere else .he tries to ignore it but can’t hold any longer so he goes towards her seat..
l:excuse me madam
the girl was reading a magazine .hearing him she puts it down and her face is revealed
l:ragini???
r:laksh??? what are u doing here
laksh looks at her face it had lost its glow and her voice had lost its charm.he felt something was not right but then he didn’t say anything about it
l:u remember my cartoon characters hum tum??
r:haan
l:its crazy ragini…they have become so famous yaar.u know my boss told me a book on them in which i have to tell their love story(ragini started collecting her things and put them in her bag)…..and is it so boring that u are getting impatient??/
r:no its not that ….actually my station has come so i have to go ……bye
l:bye…and ragini say hi to kartik from my side
r:kartik is not there in my life any more
laksh gets confused but before he could say anything she deboards the train and the train starts moving
laksh goes to his head and gets thumbs up from him to start his work…..
——x-x-x-x-x——-

laksh and dp are at their home making food.(dp also came with him and have rented a flat for them to live)
dp:if she means so much to u then go help her .stop eating my brain
l:dad i am telling u there is something which is bothering her.she is not that ragini whom i saw 7 years befor.she has lost her jolly nature….
dp :i will suggest that u go and help her..take the phone directory and get her no.
laksh finds her no. in the phone book and calls her mother.she gives him her address and calls him to her house……
laksh is now sitting with ragini’s mother and chatting
l:aunty can i ask u something?
j:yes beta sure
l:aunty i met ragini the other day and i felt with her way of talking that she has changed a lot
j:beta i will not lie to u but the ragini whom u knew back then is not the same she has become very quiet
l:aisa kya hua aunty and where is kartik?
hearing kartik’k name janki’s face turned pale which laksh didn’t notice
l:i asked her but she gave a very confusing reply that he is not with her anymore…..
j:she said the truth
l:what r u saying aunty?
j:kartik left my laado after and year of their marriage
l:what???how is this possible…..where is he now?
j:i don’t know where he is .all i know is that he broke laado’s heart and left her shattered.
l:aunty please tell me everything…
j:as u know they went to usa after their marriage as he had got a job with a good package.his boss was malika taneja ………a divorcee and a very manipulative girl.she was stubborn who wreck havoc if anyone doesn’t do as her wish.she was very beautiful and kartik and malika used to spend a lot of time with each other due to their work.their close proximity used to make laado insecure but kartik assured her that there is nothing going on between the two.but one thing led to another and they both fell in love.on their first anniversary laado found them together on the same bed in their own house.she was so broken i can’t even explain her situation.when she confronted him that shameless creature admitted that he was having an extra marital affair with his boss.laado was broken .when i came to know about it i rushed there and took laado with me and we both came to india.she became so quiet that even being in the same room sometimes i had to confirm that she was there or not.one day i had to go to the market when i returned i saw that laado had tried to commit suicide by cutting her nerves (janki was crying recalling the horrible past and lucky was listening to it speechlessly)i rushed her to the hospital and the doctor there told me that she was 2 months pregnant but she had lost her baby due to excessive blood loss.that was final blow for us .a relative of mine even suggested remarriage but she didn’t agree because she loved him still.so to avoid all these topics she came here to paris with me.i don’t know what to say ?i have heard her sobbing all night long many times.
janki finished telling ragini’s past to him and she wiped her tear stricken face
l:aunty she had to go through so much.that cheapster how can do that to ragini.she loved him.
j:he not only hurt her heart but even tore her very being,her soul.she stayed mentally depressed for months so to deviate her attention i told her to start her own business.
l:u did right aunty and as for kartik i will hunt him down and force him to apologise to ragini.
j:no laksh i don’t want that even that animal’s shadow fall on my laado.we have come a long way now.there is no need to dig the past
l:if u say aunty but i promise that i will bring our old ragini back.
j:thank u beta
l:bye aunty take care of urself and ragini
j:yes beta bye
laksh went out of the house.janki failed to notice as a drop of tear fell from laksh’s eyes which he hastily wiped.
laksh(to himself):i promise ragini that u will smile as before .its lucky’s promise to his laado……what ??? laksh are u mad did u just say my laado????just shutup and start your mission.
laksh goes away
next day
laksh is speaking to ragini over the phone
l:ragini will u come for lunch with me?
r:why?
l:actually i am hungry and bored so i want u join me
r:sorry laksh but i have lots of work so can’t come
l:ok no problem
ragini cuts the call
——–x-x-x-x-x————

r:laksh what are u doing at my boutique?
l:u said that u are busy so i got our lunches packed and i came here.come lets do lunch i am hungry
raglak sit and start having lunch.
r:why are u doing this for me laksh???i don’t need anybody’s sympathy
laksh shrugs his shoulders
l:that i don’t know but i am doing this for my enemy forever
ragini smiles on listening enemy forever
laksh had a sigh of relief on seeing her smile
(so my friends their love story has started :d :d)
after lunch raglak are roaming in the garden
l:ragini why don’t u sing a song
r:me??/song??? why?
l:aunty told me that u sing very beautifully
r:but i have stopped singing now
l:no u have to sing
r:ok i will sing but only on one condition
l:what ?
r:that u will sing before
l:ok….now watch meee……
chak de chak de chak de
chak de chak de chak de
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum

haske to dekh tu ek baar
khudh hi aa jaayegi phir bahaar
haske to dekh tu ek baar
khudh hi aa jaayegi phir bahaar
gaa le nayi sargam
geet ek naya gaa
aaya naya mausam
aaya din naya
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum

chehd de dhun woh aaj cha jaaye mastiya
chod de khulke aaj lehron mein khashtiya
chehd de dhun woh aaj cha jaaye mastiya
chod de khulke aaj lehron mein khashtiya
tokhar mein masti ho
dang kar bhi joomein
mann bhi dirakh jaaye
badal ko chumein
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum

yeh hawa tere paas aake hai beh rahi
chum le mere sang khaano mein keh rahi
yeh hawa tere paas aake hai beh rahi
chum le mere sang khaano mein keh rahi

lehrake balkhake muskarake jee le
peele hawaon ko ghunganake dheele
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
ragini:
sach hai yeh bas ek baar milti hai zindagi
karwatein badal thi hai pal pal yeh zindagi
sach hai yeh bas ek baar milti hai zindagi
karwatein badal thi hai pal pal yeh zindagi
har pal ko ghale se haske laga le
pal pal mein chupi jo khushiya chura le
laksh:
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum

haske to dekh tu ek baar
khudh hi aa jayegi phir bahaar
gaa le nayi sargam
geet ek naya gaa
aaya naya mausam
aaya din naya
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
chak de chak de chak de
chak de saare gham
chak de chak de chak de
tere sang hai hum
chak de…
l:wow ragini u sang so well
r:u were also not bad
raglak start laughing
——–x-x-x-x-x——–
dp:laksh het out of my house
l:but why dad? what have i done?
dp:if u want to live with me u will have to show me ur face everyday.u are spending all ur free time with ragini.i don’t even get to see ur face.i don’t even know how she looks.atleast make us meet
l:arre dad she has called u for lunch tmrw at her house
dp:really?
l:yess dad now can i stay here?
dp ye koi puchne wali baat hai aaja
next day
dp and laksh arrive at their house.they exchange pleasantries
laksh is with janki and dp with ragini
l&j——
j:i want laado to marry
l:who ??? me..
j:i am not that mad that i will tell u to marry her.i just want a person who can take care of my laado and not leave her like that kartik
l:but aunty…
j:do u know anyone???
l:yes aunty but…..
j:but vut nothing i just want my laado to settle down
l:ok aunty but for that u need to come to india
j:india?
l:yes aunty the boy u are looking for is in india
j:but i will have to convince her which is not an easy task
l:aunty u take as much time as u can but come to india
j:thik hai beta
dp&r———
dp:beta how are u?
r:i am fine uncle
dp:don’t be angry beta
r:why will i be angry?
dp:i am going to say something
r:what?
dp:dekho beta ….laksh told me everything.what happened to u in the past doesn’t mean that u forget to live .live your life to the fullest and try to forget him
r:uncle the thing is that i loved him truly and it isn’t easy to forget these things but i will try..
dp:thank u beta…
after lunch dp&laksh leave……..
at laksh’s rented flat….
dp,laksh and ragini are there
laksh is going back to india as his work is complete now.but dp is unhappy as laksh is going back to india now and dp back to usa.both cry and hug each other and leave for the airport
at the airport……
dp has already gone for check-in.raglak are together
r:so…..did u get any story for ur hum tum
l:i have a story in mind.kya pata ki hum tum ke beech mein aakhir pyaar ho jaye
r:all the best for that laksh
l:thank u and bye
r:i never thought that i will say this but i think that i am going to miss u now
l:ragini i will not miss u because we will meet again very soon because this life is very big and our world is too small…
r:bye laksh
raglak part their ways………..

episode ends

so guys how was it???did u people like the twist??its completely different from the movie ……..raglak love story is about to start from the next episode but it will take some time to be posted so sorry in advance and thanks dor all the comments guys
am really happy and will try to post it asap
take care….

Jayanti

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