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Home»Fan Fiction»RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 13 – By Ria
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RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 13 – By Ria

RiaBy RiaJanuary 12, 2017Updated:May 11, 201755 Comments6 Mins Read
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Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 13

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support everyone! I’m sorry for the late update. I had one of my eyes swollen up and I couldn’t afford to edit the article. Sorry, again!

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Segment 12

HAPPY READING!

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I opened my eyes in the morning with a really bad headache. I wondered why when I saw Mr. Maheshwari sleeping on me. I was shocked to see him sleeping like that and tried recalling what had exactly happened the previous day. I looked around the room and found it out to be Mr. Maheshwari’s room. I moved to comfort myself when Mr. Maheshwari woke up. “Good morning”, he greeted me with a bright smile and cheerful voice. I ignored him and held my head which was paining. “I’ll get you some lime water”, Mr. Maheshwari said. I looked at him in confusion while he rushed out of the room. I wondered why he was behaving so different for the past few days.

I came out of my thoughts as Mr. Maheshwari said, “Here. Your lime water.” I took the glass from his hand and said, “Thank you!” He took the glass from my hand and said, “Thank me politely.” I rolled my eyes and murmured, “As if I was rude.” “Yes, you were”, he replied while I looked at him. “Can I please have it?”, I asked. “No”, he replied. “Mr. Maheshwari, if you don’t want to give it then please don’t spoil my mood early in the morning”, I said. “Ahh..my head”, I added holding my head. Mr. Maheshwari moved closer to me as I moved back. “Wh..What are you doing?”, I asked while I was stuck by the headboard. He made me drink the lime water and moving back said, “Ragini, I know you won’t remember anything that happened in the party yesterday but, I hope you remember what happened before you entered the party.” “No, I don’t remember anything Mr. Maheshwari”, I replied and got down from the bed. I was about to go away when Mr. Maheshwari held my hand and pulled me back as my front touched his chest. “Mr. Sar”, I was about to complete when he kissed my forehead. “Lakshya”, he said. “Mr. Maheshwari, don’t”, I said as he kissed my cheeks. “Lakshya sweetheart”, he replied. I looked at him shockingly as he addressed me as ‘sweetheart’. I was lost in his deep brown eyes when he said, “I know you still love me. You’re just scared to express it.” “Lakshya, leave me”, I replied looking away. “You proved it all yesterday darling. You need not ignore me”, he said and moved back.

I turned and walked towards the balcony. “I hope you’ve applied for the divorce”, I said while looking outside. Lakshya walked over to me and holding my hand said, “I’m sorry Ragini. I really didn’t know bhai wasn’t behind all this.” I looked at him and was again lost in his eyes. After a fraction of seconds I looked away and pulling back my hand said, “Lakshya, apply for the divorce soon.” “Ragini, I’m seriously sorry”, he said. I walked away and turning around said, “It’s better if we stay away from each other.” Lakshya walked towards me until I was blocked by the wall. “Don’t you love me?”, he asked. I closed my eyes and said, “Move. I need to go.” “First answer me”, he said. “Lakshya, I need to go”, I said and tried to move away when he placed his hands on the wall preventing me from escaping. “Don’t you love me?”, he questioned me. “No”, I said looking away. “Ragini, you can lie but, not your eyes”, he said and moved away allowing me to go. I walked out of the room and went to di’s room.

“Good morning di!”, I greeted as I entered the room. “Good morning Ragini!”, replied di and giggled to herself. I went and sat beside her. “I’m sorry di. We couldn’t catch the culprit yesterday”, I said holding her hand. She looked at me confused and said, “What do you mean? We caught Kabir. Oh! You weren’t in your senses right!” “Kabir bhaiya was behind all this. But, why? Also, what do you mean by I wasn’t in my senses?”, I asked at a go. “Relax Ragini!”, Di said holding my shoulders and continued, “Kabir loved me. Actually, I was his obsession so, that’s why. Also, about you losing your senses. Kabir made you drink something and then wanted to take advantage of the situation. But, Lakshya saved you.” I widened my eyes as soon as I heard Lakshya saved me. “Di, did I tell him anything?”, I asked. Di smiled and said, “I can’t tell you. You go, ask him.” “Di, please tell”, I requested. “Are you sure?”, di asked and I immediately nodded my head. “I think he was supposed to..hehe..kiss you”, di said as I looked at her shocked. “What? He kissed me?”, I asked. “He didn’t want to but, you wanted him to. He told you to come back home but, you said unless he kisses you, you won’t move”, said di. “Why do you look so shocked? Lakshya is your husband only”, added di as I got up and rushed inside the washroom.

I stood against the door as a faint smile covered my face. I touched my lips and looked at myself in the mirror. “It was our first kiss and I wasn’t even in my senses”, I murmured. I closed my eyes and imagined Lakshya’s face. I smiled but, soon shouted, “No!” “Ragini, what happened?”, screamed di from outside. “Nothing di”, I shouted back and looked at the mirror. “I need to go from here soon. I can’t let myself fall weak. Maybe I still love you Lakshya but, after what you’ve done with me I can’t think of spending my life with you.”, I murmured splashing water on my face and later, freshened up.

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    55 Comments

    1. sarayu on January 13, 2017 12:04 am

      loved it

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:32 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

    2. Akankshanna on January 13, 2017 12:24 am

      Abhi nAa jaoo chhod ke..ki …dil abhi bhara nai……ooosmmm update..

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:33 pm

        Haha . . Thank you so much! 🙂

    3. nikky on January 13, 2017 12:31 am

      rag. should not foregive lakshya and now sanskar should get to know what lakshya did to rag he decide to get rag remarry and then we can see lakshya jealousy

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:34 pm

        Thanks for your suggestion. 🙂

    4. nikky on January 13, 2017 12:31 am

      oo its awesome mind blowing outstanding plzz give next part I am unable to wait plzz try post tomorrow next part soon ur brilliant and thanks to all raglak ff ts as is writer who gave precious time and make or feel us connection towards raglak plzz try to give more raglak ff ss ts os bcoz it is decreased day by day so try to write more its a request of crazy raglak fan

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:34 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    5. A.xx on January 13, 2017 12:47 am

      aww loved it and hope ur better now,,xx

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:36 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked the update.

        P.S.: Yeah, I’m better now. 🙂

    6. lisa on January 13, 2017 1:10 am

      really dont want rags to forgave laksh

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:37 pm

        I know, but she has to forgive him. :'(

    7. Shazi.Rajpoot on January 13, 2017 1:15 am

      Thank u so so so much for updating despite being unwell Ria ❤ this was a beautiful update and I love your fanfic. Get well soon love ?

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:38 pm

        Thank you so much Shazi! I’m glad you liked the update and are liking my fanfic. 🙂

        I’m almost fine now. 🙂

    8. MI_MAHI on January 13, 2017 1:18 am

      Awesome….

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:39 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    9. Jaanvi on January 13, 2017 1:51 am

      Awesome

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:39 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    10. Fats on January 13, 2017 5:38 am

      Fabulous update. Eeeks, RagLak are becoming so cute these days. So cute that it’s even left Ragini battling with her self. Can’t wait to read the next part.
      P.S: I hope your eye is better now ?

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:41 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update and are finding RagLak cute. ? I’m going to submit soon. 🙂

        P.S.: Yeah, it’s almost fine now. 🙂

    11. lovely on January 13, 2017 6:54 am

      Don’t want ragini to accept him easily

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:41 pm

        A little more time . . 🙂

    12. Raglakholic on January 13, 2017 9:36 am

      Superb one
      Amazing update
      Naughty raglak
      Loved it
      Please do continue soon
      Eagerly waiting to read more

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:43 pm

        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. I’m trying to post soon. 🙂

    13. Ammy on January 13, 2017 9:43 am

      superb

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:43 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    14. Asw on January 13, 2017 9:56 am

      Nice keep going

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:44 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    15. Ragz_teju on January 13, 2017 10:34 am

      awesome loved it

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:45 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked the update. 🙂

    16. asra on January 13, 2017 12:24 pm

      fabulous dear….Ohhh naughty cute laksh….i loved raglak scenes….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:46 pm

        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. 🙂

    17. neina on January 13, 2017 1:49 pm

      awesome..plz dnt let ragini to forgive him easily..plz maintain cold behaviour of her to laksh

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:46 pm

        Thank you! A little more to go for forgiveness. 🙂

    18. KøMàŁ on January 13, 2017 2:53 pm

      I read it first time it’s amazing…I think ragini should not forgive lakshya easily after wht he did with her….no many torture in 6-7 chapter….N I think sanky should knw abt it…

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:47 pm

        Hey, thank you! I’m glad you liked the update. Let’s see what’s awaiting you guys. 🙂

    19. KøMàŁ on January 13, 2017 2:53 pm

      sry so many torture****

    20. IQRA222 on January 13, 2017 4:52 pm

      awesome

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:50 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    21. jazzy on January 13, 2017 5:46 pm

      amazing

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:50 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    22. Ammu on January 13, 2017 5:53 pm

      Interesting episode and loved it. Eagerly waiting for next

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:51 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked the update. I’m trying to update soon. 🙂

    23. saranya on January 13, 2017 7:21 pm

      superb

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:53 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    24. Aasthu on January 14, 2017 12:57 am

      RagLak hot…..loved Laksh’s statement…..but he should try more……Ragini’s faint smile was cute…but then she came back to senses…….SwaRagini covo was nyc…..get well soon….

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:54 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked the update to go. A little more to go before the forgiveness. 🙂

        P.S.: I’m almost fine now. Also, sorry for not sending you the link. ?

    25. hemalattha on January 14, 2017 1:36 pm

      Awesome dear.

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:55 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    26. SPP on January 14, 2017 8:28 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic
      Loved it
      Now awaiting to see how Laksh is going to convince Ragini
      Waiting for the next one…………..

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:56 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked the update. Let’s see what awaits you guys next. I’ll try updating rather soon. 🙂

      • SPP on January 17, 2017 2:39 pm

        U r always welcome Dear

    27. j on January 15, 2017 2:56 pm

      superb

      • Ria on January 15, 2017 2:59 pm

        Thank you! 🙂

    28. thinesanju on January 15, 2017 9:36 pm

      yr nice update

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