i should thank every one for ur love nd support
in d mng
rags cm to laksh room with tea.she doesn’t find him.she keeps tray near d table nd turns. she c laksh cmng frm bathroom half naked. she closes her eyes.he smiles nd cm near toher she steps back.he pins her against d wall.
he appiles d water in his cheek on her cheek by ruubing his cheek to her.his perfume makes her feel smthng special nd she blushes
laksh: blushing haaa
he kisses on her eyes then lips then her neck.she hugs him tightly
pari: laksh
they cm to sense nd cmpose each other.rags is abt to go but he hold her by waist nd hides behind d door with her
pari enters d room but she doesn’t find him
pari: where is he? may be he is not yet cm aftr jogging ng goes frm there.
laksh nd rags r lost in each others eyes.he drags her more closer.
rag:leave me laksh.i have to go to kitchen.
laksh: first u promise me u will spend this evng with me
rag: ya sure now leave me babaaa
she kissess on his cheek nd runs frm there.
laksh: I will take my kiss in d evng
rag@ door step: we will c
@ road swasan walking they r back to hm aftr visiting swara’s frnd place.( they met swara frnd in the park while doing yogaaa.then they went to her hm for a coffee)
swara: sanskar u know I used to share all secret with her.she is my bestiee aftr ladooo
sanskar: mmmm
swara c a panipoori vendor nd say: wawww
lets have it
san: swara no look it is unhygienic
swara: u r so boring nd goes
san: swara
swara: bhayya do plate deejiye .with bhahuth zaraa mirchii
san: no .mere liye meetaaa
swara:( looking surprised) bhaiyya ekk theekha nd ek meetaaa
both eat panipuri nd sanky sees smthng on swara’s face nd removes it
they both share eyelock.they r disturbed by a voices of vendor
vendor: aur chahiyee
san : no bhayyaa nd gives him mny
they r walking with out talking.swara feels cold nd sanky gives his coat to her.while walking their fingers meets.he holds her hand nd she keeps her head on his shoulder they both walk.
screen freezes on smiling faces of swasan
precap:sisilng romace of both raglak nd swasan
17 Comments
Its nice dear..but make it a bit long….other than that its soo good
nice yaar keep writing
very nice…
Awww cute raglak
nice
but tooo short
Nicess
sry guysss for shot update. ystrdy I was busy with my exam preparation.
it’s too goooddd yaaaaaaaar
It’s damn good. .waiting eagerly for nxt epi. ..just awesome
nice… its k after xm u can write longer
Nice
it’s so beautiful waiting for next long update..
Nice
Awsome
Gd lv it
Its good …but I want ur previous links plss send them
Ty for gvng swasan mmnts..?love u ?