RagLak-Our Cute Love Story (Part 11)
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Sun starts to rise and the first sun rays fall on beautifull sun flowers which turn to east immediately showing their happiness to see their best friend after a long dark night. Next slowly the sun rays fall in a lake making it beautiful with its rays falling on the lotus flowers in the lake. Slowly the sun rises completely and the birds starts to chrip(kooo kooo beautiful sound made by koko bird, kaw kaw sound made by crows and parrots, sparrows ect birds are chirping and flying happily in the sky enjoying the beautiful and calm weather of the beautiful and peaceful morning).
Then the sceen sifts to the entrance of the beautiful village where we can see a mini bus entering into the village. Suddenly a voice shouts to stop the bus and the bus stops immediately.
A beautiful girl wearing a red salwar suit comes out of the bus and steps on the land making the mother earth to get overwhelm by the touch of her feet. Slowly the girls neck is shown which has a beautiful mangalsoothr around her neck and then her lips which are just like rose petals which are adorned with the beautiful smile. Then her eyes which can make anyone drown into them and can perfectly show the feelings of her heart. Now her whole face is shown and she is none other our ragini. (I know you would have guessed by now)
She closes her eyes and spreads her arms on either sides and smiles whole heartedly feeling the cool breeze and the smell of mud of the beautiful village her hair is moving due to air and making her more beautiful. Well all this while a pair of eyes are staring her lovingly and you know who it is it is none other than our laksh on whose face there is a bright and loving smile seeing his love, his wife smiling whole heartedly…. All the family members who are inside bus smiles seeing her. At that time they heard a huge happy shout of three or four voices.
Voices÷ (happily)Ragu di
Ragini opens her eyes and sits down on her knees allowing the four kids to hug her happily.
Bunny÷ di we missed you a lot.
Sunny÷ di how are you?
Chutki: di what did you bring for us?
They speak continuously with out letting her to speak.
Choti÷ (hits her forehead herself) arey buddhu log if you give time to speak then only she will speak na
They three bites their tongue and holds their ears and mutters sorry cutely while ragini laughs out loudly and hugs them tightly.
Ragini: i am fine and I also missed you guys a lot and I brought these chocolates for you (she forwards chocolates for them and they takes them and jump in happiness) she stands up and they drag her.
Chutki: chalo di let us play.
Ragini÷ (while running) bye ma i will come later and jelly come fast with di and jiju (she goes away from there along with those kids)
Laksh shakes his head and smiles and goes back of ragini along with swasan, aakash, riya and priya informing elders that they will come later and asks driver to bring car to a specified place after sometime.
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{Gilehriyaan from dangal is playing in back ground.}
Rang badal badal ke
Kyun chahak rahe hain
Din dupehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Ragini runs along with the kids and they take her to the play ground.
Ragini÷ tho what shall we play.
Chutki: Pittu garam.
Ragini smiles brightly and nods her head as ok and then kids bring stones and ball by the time laksh, swasan, aakash, ritu and priya come there and they all start playing.
They all are enjoying to the full while laughing, teasing each other. While playing priya intentionally throws the ball on ragini very hardly and ragini winces in pain.
Laksh÷ (worried) duckling are you fine?
Ragini÷ (smiles) ha jelly i am fine it is just game.
Priya fakely apologizes to ragini and they continue to play. But all the kids who observed priya hitting intentionally plans something evil through their eyes and they hit priya frequently for three times and appolozise to her saying that they did in game…. She gets irritated by that…. After playing for some more time they again starts running.
Kyun fudak fudak ke
Dhadkano ki chal rahi gilehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
While running they come across a beautiful garden where there are many types of trees among them there is a mango tree ragini winks at the kids and they jump into the garden and stand in front of the mango tree and looking at it with a pout face. Ragini looks at laksh making a puppy face while he smiles and climbs the tree and starts plucking the mangoes. (He knew how to climb a tree). Ragini winks at kids and they all hide while ragini also pulls swasan and others and hide and she intentionally makes a sound so that the owner of the garden comes there and sees someone stealing his mangoes. He could not see who the person is so he comes there and beats him with a stick.
Laksh÷ (shouts) ouch kaka it is me laksh
The man immediately stops being shocked while ragini and others come out laughing and laksh gets down wincing in pain.
Owner÷ sorry sorry laksh beta i thoughtsome one is stealing mangoes. But what is the need you to climb the tree i would have sent to home if you would had asked me na
Ragini÷ (laughing) arey kaka i only asked him to do it and I intentionally made the sound (laughs again along with kids and gives hi-fi to each other)
Laksh glares her while that owner smiles looking at them.
Owner÷ ragini beta may i send mangoes to home.
Ragini÷ (snatches mangoes from laksh and gives to all) no kaka it is enough bye for now
She says this and again runs while the kids follow her. While all smile seeing her craziness and follow her. Ragini after coming out bites the mango and immediately her eye winks due to the sourness of the mango.
Ragini: (enjoying) hmm… Yummy sour mango. Again they start running.
Rang badal badal ke
Kyun chahak rahe hain
Din dupehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Kyun fudak fudak ke
Dhadkano ki chal rahi gilehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na
While running ragini and others reach a house. Ragini signals all of them to keep quite and slowly goes to a woman who is sitting on the chair and doing something she closes her eyes.
Woman÷ hmm…. Who is this?
Ragini÷ (changing her voice) guess karo
Woman÷ hmm…. I think it is our ragini
Ragini÷ (removing her hand from her eyes) chachi how can you guess all the time.
Woman÷ (caresses ragini’s cheek) because u are our sweet child and where is that idiot bunny ha morning before me he woke up and came to see you.
Ragini÷ hahaha standing behind lucky
That woman looks at him angrily
Laksh÷ chachi leave na
Woman smiles.
Ragini÷ where is chachaji?
Woman: in pottery area
Ragini immediately runs to that area and sees a man doing arrangements to make pots. He is filling a small pit with clay and water to mix clay with his bare feet. Ragini sees this and looks at laksh and he nods both run there and jumps into the pit and starts jumping and dancing in the pit of clay which makes the clay to get it mixed well.
Man÷ (surprised) laksh, ragini
Raglak÷ (busy in dancing in clay) hai chachaji today we are going to mix ur clay.
Ragini÷ and I want an awesome pot made by you i will take that home.
Man smiles.
Ragini÷ shona di, ritu come it is awesome the others also join them and while enjoying in clay priya places her leg near ragini’s leg making her to slip but laksh holds her at the nick of time preventing her from falling.
This is also observed by the kids as they are suspicious towards priya and observing her… And again plans something and smiles evilly.
Chutki÷ ragu di come i want to show something for you all. They nod and follow the kids.
Kyun zara sa mausam sirphira hai
Ya mera mood maskhara hai, maskhara hai
Jo zayka manmaniyon ka hai
Wo kaisa ras bhara hai
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Kyun hazaare gulmohar se
Bhar gayi hai khwahishon ki tehniyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Kyun fudak fudak ke
Dhadkano ki chal rahi gilehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Ha… hey hey ho…
Kids take them to a pond where there are beautiful lotus flowers filled in that pond. Ragini goes near to the pond and takes a lotus and smells it and a beautiful smile crept on her lips.
Ek nayi si dosti aasmaan se ho gayi
Zameen mujhse jal ke
Munh bana ke bole
Tu bigad rahi hai
Zindagi bhi aaj kal
Gintiyon se oob ke
Ganit ke aankdon ke saath
Ik aadha shair padh rahi hai
Main sahi ghalat ke piche
Chhod ke chali kachehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Kyun fudak fudak ke
Dhadkano ki chal rahi gilehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na
They reach a field. Ragini stands in between the field and touches the paddy crop with lots of affection and joins her hands closes her eyes and thanked to the god for the beautiful paddy crops given by him.
Kyun zara sa mausam sirphira hai
Ya mera mood maskhara hai
Mahkhara hai..
Jo zayka manmaniyon ka hai
Wo kaisa ras bhara hai
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na hazaare gulmohar se
Bhar gayi hai khwahishon ki tehniyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Kyun fudak fudak ke
Dhadkano ki chal rahi gilehriyaan
Main jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na, jaanu na
Oo.. haan…
All are walking after visiting many places. While walking all the kids start to run suddenly and pushes priya intentionally making her to fall in the mud making her clothes fill with mud priya keeps the irritated face while the kids giggles silently and give hi-fi to each other secretly and come to her and appolozise to her like innocent kids while others stand there not understanding how did she fall. But then priya smiles fakely at them when the kids apologize to her. At that time car comes and all go to raglak’s dadi’s house except for kids.
Raglak are loved by all the village like their own children. Raglak address all the people with some or other relation like kaka, kaki, chachaji, etc which increases the love between them and always feel like they are their family. Raglak’s dadaji was head of the village when he was alive and their family is well respected due to their simplicity and selflessness.
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@raglak’s dadi’s house
Ap, dp, janaki, shekhar, avantika, harish are sitting on the couch bending their head and dadi is glaring them. (Virika, ayan not came as in ayan’s school there is basketball competition and they will come to village next day.)
Dadi: (Parvathi maheshwari) (angrily) why did you not stop them when they are going to wander in the village? It is been five hours you guys are here but still I did not find even a glance of children till now. How can you be so careless.
But the elders are just bending their heads without answering her. At that time they hear the sound of horn and dadi immediately rushes to the door. While elders releases a sigh.
Dadi÷ (standing at entrance) shyam bring the aarthi taal fast they are here.
A servant comes there holding an aarthi taal and stands beside dadi. Raglak come to dadi by running and kisses her cheeks on either side and hug her shouting.
Raglak: dadi/gf
Laksh÷ wow gf you became more beautiful in these six months.why did you born very early yaar you can born a little late na i would have married you. (He pouts dadi beats on his head playfully)
Dadi÷ stop flirting with me i am angry on you both.
Raglak÷ (holding their ears) chorry
Dadi smiles and caresses their faces lovingly and kisses their forehead.
Dadi÷ (caressing ragini’s cheek) you are looking so beautiful with this signs of marriage ladoo
Raglak take blessings from her then dadi looks at swasan and signals them to come near they go near to her take her blessings she look at them teary eyed and hugs them.
Dadi÷ i never thought I would see you both again. I am so happy to see you both (swasan also have tears in their eyes)
Shyam÷ ma ji aarthi
Dadi nods and does aarthi to raglak and swasan. Laksh introduces aakash, ritu and priya to dadi, she likes ritu and aakash a lot but seeing priya fully filled with mud she looks at her weirdly while ragini explains dadi what all happened. Dadi observes that priya looking at ragini something differently but brushes her thoughts and invites all of them inside.
The house is Indian chettinad house, which has an open roof at the middle and surrounded by the rooms in four sides of the house. The house roof is open in the middle and the sun rays, rainfall anything can be fall in that place. If there is rainfall the middle place of the house will be filled with rain water and becomes like a small pond. The sun rays can easily fall in that area. It is really an awesome house which makes easy to feel even the outside atmosphere because of the open roof.
After they enter the house all gets awestruck seeing the house except for raglak as they already have been there many times from childhood.
Swara÷ wow… Dadi this house is awesome.
Ritu÷ i loved it a lot we can enjoy the sun rays, rain everything here only…
Dadi÷ glad you liked it beta now chalo go fresh and come and we will have lunch. Shyam show them their rooms. (Shyam nods and all follow him)
Dp÷ ma now tho forgive us na
Dadi looks at him angrily and then smiles and leaves while all elders shake their head with disbelief.
Shekhar÷ chalo now ma’s anger also gaayab
All laughs
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Priya is in her room and pacing to and fro….
Priya÷ ahh ragini i am going to show you hell… Don’t know what is there in you that everybody show so much love for you. Anyways enjoy all the love before you reach god….. Hahahaha(evil laugh)
She makes a phone call
Priya÷ ji papa you don’t worry i will execute the plan as you say only…. Ok bye love you.
This is all heard by a pair of ears.
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Night
All are sleeping in their rooms while Laksh goes to dadi’s room who is sitting and writing something.
Laksh÷ (from door) dadi
Dadi looks at him and smiles he goes to her and keeps his head on her lap while dadi caresses his hair.
Dadi÷ hmm tell me what you want to talk
Laksh÷ (holds dadi’s hand) dadi i am afraid… Afraid whether will i able to take this responsibility i mean marriage all of a sudden i am not understanding anything when I asked same to ma she said that every thing that happens in our life is according to god and he only will help us in doing the things but still dadi i am afraid.
Dadi: beta i understand your feelings these all happened all of a sudden so you are feeling like that. And what anu said is completely true so it is already decided by god what should happen at what time and we cannot change it we should just follow it and go according to it but always we should try to make things good and try to keep our relations in good terms. And you need not to get afraid of anything because I know my laksh can never do wrong especially when it comes to his duckling. Am i right (laksh nods) so my brave boy how are you feeling getting married ti your love.
Laksh÷ (smiles) very happy gf but would be beyond happy if you are my wife.
Dadi÷ (beats his head playfully) badmash chal
Both laksh and dadi laugh.
Laksh÷ but dadi what is the need to do marriage again i mean with these rituals and all.
Dadi÷ hmm… May be you don’t want lucky but every girl dreams about her marriage like her groom coming to take her on a horse and take her away with all the rituals taking her parents permission.
Laksh÷ ji meri gf now i understand these all for ur ladoo’s happiness and dream and I am ok with this now. And now you keep this work a side and sleep tomorrow morning you should prepare yummy breakfast for me. I missed ur handmade food a lot.
Dadi smiles and laksh hugs her and goes out of the room and is walking towards his room when he finds light on in swaragini’s room. He slowly peeps into the room and sees ragini is reading a book sitting on the bed while swara is peacefully sleeping he slowly enters into the room.
Laksh÷ (whispers) duckling
Ragini who is involved in the book jumps from her place due to the sudden whisper but relaxes seeing laksh there.
Laksh forwards his hand to her and she places her hand on his hand with a cute smile on her face. And they both come out of the room and sneeks out of the house slowly without making any sounds and go backside of the house. Laksh closes her eyes.
Ragini÷ jelly why are you closing my eyes?
Laksh÷ (places finger on her lips) shh it’s a surprise
Ragini becomes quite and laksh takes her near a pool like place and removes his hand from her eyes and asks her to open her eyes. Ragini opens her eyes and her face glow with happiness seeing a pair of ducks walking near the pool. She starts jumping happily seeing them and hugs laksh tightly and kisses his cheek.
Ragini÷ love you so much jelly.
Laksh÷ tell to dadi as well she brought them just for you
Ragini runs to ducks and hold one of the ducks in her hand and kisses it. She starts playing with them after sometime both raglak go back into the house and sleep peacefully with a beautiful smile on their faces.
Screen freezes on the smiling faces of raglak
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