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Home»Fan Fiction»rab ne bana di jodi (part6)
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rab ne bana di jodi (part6)

Anu88By Anu88December 26, 201721 Comments5 Mins Read
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Thanks a lots friends for responding in my story……..I am very happy to know that you are all read this fs………merry Christmas to all my dear friends

So let’s start the story

Recap: everyone know about kabir truth.dr.sunil mishra is alive .but kabir gets shot by malhrota.

Today start from there

Kabir operation is going on.its spend 2hours but the operation didn’t end.everyone looking very sad and tensed.
Sabitri,jaya and dadi console kusum.sanchi sitting besides her papa and she put head on his shoulder.she crying and her papa (dr.sunil) console her.

Then karan and police came with gayatri.they arrested her.gayatri tell everyone that she sends goons for killing veer.savitri slapped her.then police took her from there.

After 10min

Doctor came out from ot.then everyone going to him and asked about kabir condition.but he can’t speak any words.then he say……
Doctor:i am really very very sorry………..hum log to dr.kabir ki body se bullets bikal diya ……agar 1hours ki under unko sense nahi aya to kuch vi ho sakta hae……sayad o coma me chali ja sakte hae or mar vi sakta hae…….. saying this he going from there

Hearing doctor words sanchi came out from hospital.she going towards this temple where her and kabir marriage happens.she quickly going to mata rani idol.the temple is empty.no one present there.

Sanchi:maa aj mae tumra pass apna pati ka zindagi bhik mange ayehihu……..mae bhot bari vul kya hu iss vul kohi mafi nahi hae……app mujko jo saja dene hae do……. please mera kabir ko bacha lo……mae uski pyaar ko nahi samaj paya…….usko bhot kuch bol diya………usko hurt kiya…….mae khud apni ae hatho se apna suhag ka nishan k mitta diya maa……aj mae ae hatho ko jala dunga…….maa tu meri kabir ki raksha karna usko thik kar de maa…….

Saying this she put her hand on diya.her hands burned but she did not care for that.mandir ki ghanti bajne lagi…… suddenly sindoor dropped from mata rani hand on Sanchi’s hairline.then Sanchi’s phone bumped.this time pragya call her,seeing pragya call she got more tensed.but she picked up the call.

Pragya:sanchi tu kaha hae……jalse jal aja hospital me….oooo kabir sir……..

Sanchi:kabir ko kya hua……baya pragya bata na jalse

Pragya :he gets his conscious………

Hearing pragya words tears came out from her eyes this time the tears of joy came from her eyes.she said her that she came in 10 min and cut the call.
Sanchi:maa aj tum mere baat manli…….app ka bhot bhot sukria maa……..maa mujko asirbad karna after kabir recovery we came there together maa……..

Saying this sanchi take some flowers from mata rani idol.

Scene shift to kabir ward
Kabir gets his conscious.he lying on bed.everyone present there.eveyone say sorry to him.kusum and Mr.kapoor sit besides him ad kisses on his forehead and say sorry beta.the karan came and put his hand on kabir head and say

Karan:mera golu itna bare hogae….jo apna problem apna bhai se share vi nahi kar sakte…….

Kabir: sorry bhai…

Then nurse came and say…….
Nurse: please app log abhi ki liye bahar jaiae…….. patient ko thora rest karne do…..

Saying this nurse goes from there and everyone follow her.

Kabir: sab lok mujko dekhne ayae par sanchi mujko ak bar vi dekhne nahi aya…….o abhi vi mujse gussa…….aj me sab ke samne hamara divorce ki baat karen gae or uske but sanchi or veer ki shadi…..

Then veer came to his ward.kabir tried to sit but fall then veer helps him to sit.

Kabir:i am sorry veer…..

Veer:kyu dr.kabir …….

Kabir: aj mere baja se tum or sanchi alag ho…….

Veer: iss me app ki kohi faltu nahi hae dr.kabir……..ae sab to kismat ki khel……

Suddenly sanchi came

Seeing sanchi a smile appeared in kabir face.

Kabir:ayao sanchi…….mujhe tumse or veer se kuch baat karne ……….app to sab problem solve hogaye …………app hum dono ka divorce ho jae or tum veer ka ho jayogae…….then mera sab kam complete ho jayae ga……….

Hearing kabir words both sanchi and veer shocked.but suddenly the heard some sounds(jasse kuch grine ka sound).then they all turned to back and saw pragya standing there and tears dropped from her eyes.then she run from there and veer run behind her…….

In kabir ward

Sanchi:dr. Kabir app khud ko kya samaj te ho………har bar app jo chate ho ohi hoga…….jab chaho mujko shadi kare ga or jab chahe mujko chor degae……..app mujko kya samaj te ho

Saying this she hugged him tightly and crying bitterly.
Kabir:kya hua sanchi tum ro kyu rahi ho

Sanchi:mae tumra bina ji nahi sakte kabir ……..
Kabir:par tum to veer se pyaar karte ho…….

Sanchi:ha karti thi ……….but mae ae nahi janti thi kohi mujko apne itna pyaar karte hae………I am sorry kabir me tumko bhot dhuk diya……..mae tumra pyaar ko samaj hi nahi paya………mere baja se aj tumra ae halat hae……..mae bhot bura hu mae kisi ko khush nahi rakh sakte
Saying this she crying more bitterly…..kabir console her
Kabir:ase kohi rota hae pagal……sab dos to mera hae

Sanchi:nahi mera hae

Kabir:nahi mera……..nahi tumra hae……

Saying this kabir hugged sanchi more tightly.
Sanchi:tum mujko kabhi chor kar nahi jayogae to……
Kabir:nahi sanchi ………tum mujko chor kar nahi jayogae …..

Sanchi:mae mar jaungi par tumko chor kar kahi nahi jaungi kabir

Kabir breaks the hugs and slapped sanchi
Kabir:phir kabhi Marne ki baat kiya na iss se vi jor ka chata khaoegae

Sanchi:yes sir…….
(Saying like a little girl who beat by her teacher)

Kabir hugged sanchi and sanchi also hugged him.
Kabir:i love you so so much sanchi
Sanchi:i love u too kabir

They hugged each other more tightly.

To be continued………….

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    21 Comments

    1. swethaa on December 26, 2017 9:44 am

      soooo emotional and lovely

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 1:01 pm

        Thanks a lot yaar……

    2. Risu on December 26, 2017 10:20 am

      Very emotional episode but really nice

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 1:02 pm

        Thanks a lot yaar

    3. Dhruti on December 26, 2017 11:54 am

      so emotional and superb episode but can i tell you one thing please if i hurt you then big wala sorry in advance (holding with ears)but i don’t understand some hindi words or is it typo mistakes ? if it typo mistake then correct them before post otherwise i understand what you write because of i’m your regular reader of your story…………..i’m just giving you suggestion please don’t take it other wise you are one of my favorite writer so just chill and keep writing……………..tc……………………love you…………………..

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 1:07 pm

        Thanks a lot yaar……. actually yaar i don’t write hindi properly so this mistake happens yaar……..yaar i disturb you all towards my hind then please forgive me ……..or teach me some hindi yaar please yaar…….and I am very glad to know you like me this much it is so so much pleasure for me yaar……love u too yaar……

    4. Dhruviii on December 26, 2017 12:32 pm

      Awsmmm

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 1:08 pm

        Thanks a lot yaar

    5. cherry on December 26, 2017 1:38 pm

      amazing

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 3:03 pm

        Thanks a lot yaar

    6. Aafiya on December 26, 2017 1:42 pm

      Superb…Beautiful… one more request please post it in English…. Take care…

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 3:06 pm

        Ok yaar next time I will read this in english……….thanks a lot yaar……..

    7. Kajal on December 26, 2017 2:34 pm

      Very emotional. Waiting for next.

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 3:08 pm

        Thanks a lot yaar

    8. vanu on December 26, 2017 5:50 pm

      amazing update
      lets nacho

      • Anu88 on December 26, 2017 6:57 pm

        Thanks a lot yaar

    9. RuCh23 on December 26, 2017 8:03 pm

      Anu dear Merry Christmas ??? firstly sorry for not commenting on the previous part ??? I was so busy with Christmas so couldn’t read. Now I read both parts together and it was so soo sooo beautiful ???. You made me cry a lot with your dialogues but it was awesome dear!! Loved it a lot and love you ???

    10. Anu88 on December 26, 2017 10:24 pm

      Merry Christmas ruchu dear…… Thanks a lot yaar

    11. Amnaa on December 27, 2017 1:29 am

      So amazing…. It was so emotional

      • Anu88 on December 27, 2017 7:43 am

        Thanks a lot yaar

    12. riyarocks on December 27, 2017 6:49 pm

      first of all, kaan pakad rhi hoon, late hone ke liye….in replying…..epi was really really really amazing……….loved it a lot sweetieeeeeeeeeeeeee,,,,,,,,,,,bye………tc

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