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Raatan lambiyan OS by Real@kriti

Real@kritiBy Real@kritiAugust 21, 202148 Comments4 Mins Read
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So nowadays I am listening to this Ramayan lambiyan song . everyday night I just connect my headphones to mobile phone and listen that and time goes and i sleep at 12 or 12:10 .
I am in love with this sing so I am gonna write a one shot  in this. 

The OS  starts

A girl is seen talking to someone on video call in her laptop .

Boy – Ridhima , i am missing you very badly .

The girl was Ridhima .

Ridhima – vansh , after 1 day we are gonna marry each other so patience pls .

So the boy was vansh .

Vansh – that I don’t know

Ridhima giggled .

Ridhima – vansh tomorrow is our sangeet then after that only we will marry na .

Vansh – hmm

They talk with each other all  night .

Teri Meri Gallan Ho Gayi Mashhoor
Kar Na Kabhi Tu Mujhe Nazron Se Door
Kithe Chali Ae Tu Kithe Chali Ae Tu
Kithe Chali Ae Kithe Chali Ae

Next morning
Sangeet ceremony

Ridhima in pink lehenga came to her sangeet party . She was looking breathtaking . Vansh came and looked at her and was lost in her beauty .

Jaanda Ae Dil Yeh Toh Jaandi Ae Tu
Tere Na Rahun Mere Bina Tu
Kithe Chali Ae Tu Kithe Chali Ae Tu
Kithe Chali Ae, Jaan Chali Ae

Vansh moved closer to her .

Vansh – you are looking beautiful .

Ridhima smiled .

Then they started to dance .

Kaatun Kaise Raatan Oh Saawre?
Jiya Nahi Jaata Sunn Baawre?Bin Main .

Ke Raataan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re

Night

RiAnsh were again talking to each other in phone .

Vansh – finally tomorrow we will be one , we will marry each other .

Ridhima – hmm

Vansh  – vaise ,are you excited for your
  First night ?? (Teasing)

Ridhima – vanshh shhhh

Cham Cham Cham Ambran De Taare
Kehnde Ne Sajjna
Tu Hi Chan Mere Is Dil Da
Mann Le Ve Sajjna

Tere Bina Mera Howe Na Guzara
Chhad Ke Na Jawin Mainu
Tu Hi Hai Sahara

Vansh – I love you ❤️

Ridhima – I love you too ❤️

They spend their while night with their jokes and silly talks .

Kaatun Kaise Raatan Oh Saawre?
Jiya Nahi Jaata Sunn Baawre?

Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raataan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re

Next morning

Ridhima was thinking about their journey . She was thinking  that how she and vansh became friends and then lovers .and now she is going to be officially his wife . She was very happy

Teri Meri Gallan Ho Gayi Mashhoor
Kar Na Kabhi Tu Mainu Nazron Se Door
Pichhe Chali Ae Tere Pichhe Chali Ae
Tere Pichhe Chali Ae

Jaanda Ae Dil Yeh Toh Jaandi Ae Tu
Tere Bina Main Na Rahun Mere Bina Tu
Kithe Chali Ae Tu Kithe Chali Ae Tu
Kithe Chali Ae

Then it was time for her to go to mandap . She with her mother went there in bridal attire .

Vansh looked at her and passed a smile . Then she sat beside vansh .
They both looked at each other and smiled .

They fulfilled all the rituals , they took all the promises .

Then it was time for them to click down pictures . They looked at each other .
Vansh side hugged her and . They smiled  .

Kaatun Kaise Raatan Oh Saawre?
Jiya Nahi Jaata Sunn Baawre?

Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re

Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re
Ke Raatan Lambiyan Lambiyan Re
Kate Tere Sangeyan Sangeyan Re

And then they lived a happy life .

                      THE END!!

So I wrote all my imaginations , this is love .

Thank you

Regards

“Kriti”😊😊

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    48 Comments

    1. Tanya K on August 21, 2021 9:42 am

      Awesome loved it…❤

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:11 am

        Thank you

    2. Prabhleen 😊 on August 21, 2021 9:53 am

      Wonderful OS ✨. Loved it😘. Amazing song 💕

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:12 am

        Thank you

    3. Aishwarya Wanjari on August 21, 2021 9:56 am

      Awesome
      Really yaar that movie and its songs are awesome

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:12 am

        Thank you and yes the movie and it’s songs are amazing

    4. Akshara on August 21, 2021 9:59 am

      Nice

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:12 am

        Thank you

    5. Ruhiii on August 21, 2021 10:02 am

      Pretty 🦋💛

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:13 am

        Thank you

    6. S_SC on August 21, 2021 10:06 am

      Amazing!

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:13 am

        Thank you

    7. Aisha08 on August 21, 2021 10:18 am

      Amazing dear 😍

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:35 am

        Thank you

    8. Sheen shaikh on August 21, 2021 10:23 am

      Wonderful os, amazing song , awesome

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 10:35 am

        Thank you

    9. Rianshlover.13 on August 21, 2021 10:57 am

      Awesome dear
      Am in love with this song like you yrr

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 11:10 am

        Thank you. Ohh

    10. Acchu on August 21, 2021 11:24 am

      Wonderful😍

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 11:28 am

        Thank you

    11. Zara on August 21, 2021 11:46 am

      Amazing ❣️

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 12:07 pm

        Thank you

    12. SUMISHA on August 21, 2021 1:43 pm

      Nowadays I’m addicted to this song
      Awesome dear

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 1:59 pm

        Thank you and ihhh

    13. Thakur Priyanka on August 21, 2021 1:48 pm

      Amazing

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 2:00 pm

        Thank you

    14. Angel Rose on August 21, 2021 2:34 pm

      I first heard Raataan Lambiyan Song In Lakshmi baghyia serial yesterday.I was just singing this song. when I read 📖 the heading I got surprised 😮.this os is amazing super fabulous, wonderful. I like it 😍 sorry I love it.

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 2:37 pm

        Ohh . Thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️

    15. Palak on August 21, 2021 3:20 pm

      Same pinch I also love this song
      Just amazing Os ❤️

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 4:56 pm

        Thank you and ohh

    16. Alisha Roy on August 21, 2021 4:09 pm

      ❤️❤️

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 4:56 pm

        ❤️❤️

    17. Parita on August 21, 2021 4:31 pm

      Amazing OS!!
      Lovely❤

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 4:56 pm

        Thank you ❤️❤️

    18. Varshini on August 21, 2021 4:38 pm

      Amazing 😍❤️

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 4:57 pm

        Thank you

    19. AarushiSoni on August 21, 2021 4:38 pm

      Wow it’s damn amazing one shot… I loved it

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 4:58 pm

        Thank you so much di ❤️❤️

    20. Jayashree on August 21, 2021 11:23 pm

      Wow amazing 😍🤩🤩🤩🤩
      Thanks for updates 😊❤️
      Keep rocking 🔥🔥🔥

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 11:41 pm

        Thank you so much

    21. Priyadarshini on August 21, 2021 11:23 pm

      Super 💖💖💕

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 11:42 pm

        Thank you

    22. JJ on August 21, 2021 11:23 pm

      Wonderful 💗😊❤️💗😊

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 11:42 pm

        Thank you

    23. Vkjhp on August 21, 2021 11:24 pm

      Wow fabulous 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 11:43 pm

        Thank you

    24. Sree on August 21, 2021 11:24 pm

      Fantastic episode 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

      • Real@kriti on August 21, 2021 11:43 pm

        Thank you

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