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Home»Fan Fiction»Raanjhanaa-The beloved one (Episode 16)
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Raanjhanaa-The beloved one (Episode 16)

ManjuAkalyaBy ManjuAkalyaJune 14, 201724 Comments8 Mins Read
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So…after the call the Maheshwaris and The Gadodias were in the hospital.The dr said Ragini need to be treated to get her proper vision and hearing abilities. Every body rhanked Rivanya from their heart.Every body asked how Ragini was bfr their arrival. ..to which rivanya said she was at rest completely due to the med effects.

SanLak and Swara were on a side standing while others were seated on chairs u

Swara:I told u Sanskar…Ragini will be fine (she glared)

Laksh:Even I told u. …(he kept his right hand over his left chest where his heart was.(he smiled)

A flash back….

Laksh was lying on his bed in a manner…his head was hanging from the bed.He was looking at the ceiling with a liquor bottle in his hand.That hand was also hanging down.

He gulped the bottle..He looked at the ceiling.Ragini was flashing there..m(gosh ..this lucky. ….)

Laksh:Mera bachcha..where have u gone..I…I (he pointed himself with his other hand)…searched u down the cliff with the rescue team..(he gulp d again) But u didnt..didn’t come to me…where are u tell me…

Ragini:Laksh..I am fine…but Idk where am I…pl L dont dink..plz…

Laksh:No…(he said like a kid) Until u dont come. ….yeh…yeh Laksh (he pointed him) Will drink. ..more…more…. more (he gulped the bottle)..and more…(his bottle was
Snatched abd thrown away from him on the floor)

Laksh stood on the floor and looked Sanskar.
He kept both his hands on his head and looked at the floor where the glass pieces were scattered.

Laksh looked his brother:what the hell boy…whats wrong with u…u are…u are mad (he pointed Sanskar) and walked near his wadrobe.(he was nt able t walk properly)
He stumbled once…sanskar stepped forward but laksh pushed him..”I am ok (attitude)”
He opened it nd took another one and gulped it.

Sanskar was frustrated.

He again did the same.

“Sanskar..”, laksh shouted a little

Laksh:U are mad really mad…

San:Oh. ..really Laksh…arrey pagal…whats all this…do u know what were u doing…hosh mein aao..(he poured water on laksh from a water jug that was on the night stand)

Stop it sanskar….said laksh.

Laksh:what.. what was I doing. …I was talking to ragini (he said casually)

Sanskar was frustrated more he didnt want to say this and hurt his brother. But…lavish was gone beyond limits..in this twi days..just in two days of Ragini’s incident. ..It was not even a cmplt two days.

Sanskar:kya Ragini Ragini Ragini…she won’t come to u…she is dead…(he shouted)

Laksh held Sanskar’s collar and he raised his hand to punch him. He stopped…

Sanskar:come on lucky(he got back from laksh)y did u stop…(he moved to him hand held his hand to slap him.But Laksh took his hand back.)

Sanskar held Laksh’s shoulders:whats still making u believe Ragini is alive lucky…

Laksh smile amongst his tears, “even u believrd Sears will come back… ..now y r u against me”

San:Laksh…

Laksh:sshhh(he kept his finger on his lips)…kuch at kaho

He then took Sankars hand that was on Laksh’s left shoulder by his right hand and Laksh placed sanskar’s hand over his left chest.

Laksh:(lubb dubb lubb dubb) can u hear it sanskar…

Sanskar looked his brother with his teary eyes.

Laksh:If lakshya’s heart beats….(he was teary)……its bcoz of Ragini..

Flash back ended

Sanskar smiled seeing Laksh.He hugged his little brother.

Finally…the dr came out…

All gathered around him.

Laksh:Dr. Ragini…

Dr:She is ok now but there is a chance for memory loss.(he mentioned the height that ragini fell down) and as I said bfr…she is paralysed…when she opens her eyes we will make sure of her.

After times…Ragini Opened her eyes.She found a crowd standing bfr her.She tried to get up.Swara stopped her.

Ragini saw swara and smiled.Even she said her name,”swara”.All had a satisfied face that she remembers swara.

The dr pointed every one and asked Ragini to identify them.Ragini named every one.Rivanya greeted her.But they didnt mention that they saved her.Before ragini opened her eyes dr asked not them not ti mention anything related about that incident.Ragini even identified Akansha as her elder sister.

But Lakshya was not their all that time.Just then he opened the door. He excused every one for being late.He was gone to get her medicines.

The dr went near Laksh and asked her to identify Laksh.But she was speechless.

She didnt identify him.

Ragini:idk…

But bfr anyone could react. …

Dr:ummm….Ragini..u plz take rest.(He turned towards all) can u all plz come with me(he pulled laksh along with him)

Swara made Ragini to lie down and she came out.

Outside,

Dr:(He made a sigh)…she knows everyone and she rembrs every thng…but nt u Mr.Lakshya(he lkd laksh)…well Its a vry rare kind of amnesia….s its amnesia (he repeated this to lakshya who was looking him shocked)..Its called seletive amnesia…(guys guys its really a kind of amnesia)well…as the name indicates the patient will forget selective person and the incidents related to them.

All looked the dr shocked.It was Lakshya who was beyond shock bcoz it was him whom Ragini had forgotten.

Dr:Everything related to u even if it was a speech where r name is mentioned..the whole incident is forgotten now by her…Mr.Lakshya u r entirely a stranger to her now.She knows Ap Dp and other Maheshwaris as her sister’s in laws…

Guys…ragini knows swara and sanskar are married but she doesn’t rmbrs what all happened related with her and lakshya. Even it was same in case of shekar and shomi.She rmbrs it was swaragini who made thm together she forgot how lakshya helped them…

Dr:Just like partial amnesia, complete memory loss…she would take a day or a month or even years to recover…and s she must take her medicines.Annnndddd….plz dont make her to stress her mind, dint force her to remember anything.

He tapped Lakshya’s shoulde and moved.

Lakshya was standing like a statue.He was freezed completely.Only one thing echoed in his mind,”Mr.Lakshya..u r entirely a stranger to her now”.This was repeatedly echoing in his mind.

The Maheshwaris and Gadodias looked him.Ap came forward and shook him.

Laksh:(with great difficulty he responded with an extreme low toned voice which was cracking) Maa…(no more words came out from his voice)

Lakshya hugged her and he broke down completely.

“Maa…Ragini…”said Lakshya

Laksh:woh mujhe bhool gayi maa.

Swara held sanskars hand tightly.Sanksar supported her.

Akansha asked swara and Laksh to stay at hospital with her.The others were home.That was not that easy for Akansha to send them.

Rivanya was also gone.They were gone like in serial to some where.

Laksh was on a chair outside ICU.He folded his hands and kept his folded hand under his chin.His elbows was on his knees.Swara and akansha were inside icu watching Ragini who was sleeping due to the medicine effect.

Akansha came out of icu and she saw laksh who was sitting lifeless.She moved to him and sat near him.she looked forward.

Akansha:Ragini is so lucky….

Both were looking forward and laksh was still in that position.

Akansha:she is lucky bcoz she got u

Laksh:Its me…(he looked her)

Akansha looked him nw.

Akansha:Haan I know its ur nick name(she laughed a little)

Akansha:I have got u something..(she forwarded her hand)

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

Lakshya’s eyes dropoed his tears.I was Ragini’s mangalsutra and the chain he presented.
He took them one by one with his shivering hands.

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitara

He rmbrd two precious moments in their life.

Their marriage flashed in his mind when he took the mangalsutra.

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaun
Jo tu karde ishara

He closed his eyes tighter.H opnd hs eyes.He took the chain.

He rmbrd the lines he told her

aap hame bhool jao hame koi gham nahi,
aap hame bhool jao hame koi gham nahi,
jis din humne aapko bhula diya,
samajh lijiyega is duniya mein hum nahi

If you forget me, I don’t have a problem,
If you forget me, I don’t have a problem,
The day I forget you,
Understand that I’m no more in this world..

Kahi kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushbu se takraun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwab tu..

How hr tied the chain around her neck and he said perfect.

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu..

Raglak’s lip lock and her smiling face when she kiseed his cheek and ran Into the car and hw she enjoyed Lakshya’s antics.
The song stopped…

Lakshya was shown again.He cried vigorously.

Akansha:Lakshya plz…(she held his shoulder)

Laksh composed himself and stood up.Akansha too.

Laksh walked straight into the icu.He reached near Ragini.Akansha signalled swara to come out with her.

Laksh sat on the stool near her bed at her right side and caught her hand.He saw the holy thread on her hand which he got from pandit.He rmbrd how he tied it when she was asleep.He tought something.

Outside icu,

Swara and Akansha joined their hands.

Swara and akansha:we will unite raglak again fighting with all evils.

The screen freezed on their faces and splitted up and showed determined Akansha, swara, sleeping beauty Ragini and worried Laksh.

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    24 Comments

    1. avika on June 14, 2017 2:41 pm

      nice feel bad for laksh

    2. Aamy on June 14, 2017 5:06 pm

      Awesome

    3. Jiyani on June 14, 2017 5:12 pm

      Awesome episode

    4. lovely7 on June 14, 2017 5:22 pm

      Awesome

    5. Swasan on June 14, 2017 5:26 pm

      Amazing

    6. raguzz01 on June 14, 2017 5:52 pm

      Nice.. ……

    7. Jayanti on June 14, 2017 6:34 pm

      ragini forgot her laksh…..well let’s see what laksh does now to make her remember everything….the episode was fab…2 episodes in one day…it’s a treat

    8. asra on June 14, 2017 7:17 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot….feeling bad for laksh….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    9. Monu on June 14, 2017 7:27 pm

      Awesome episode

    10. Follybraverl on June 14, 2017 8:01 pm

      Awesome

    11. Ammu on June 14, 2017 8:23 pm

      Outstanding episode and feeling really bad for Laksh. His love for Ragini is so pure. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP

    12. Asw on June 15, 2017 10:38 am

      Nice

    13. Malu on June 15, 2017 3:52 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    14. Elizebathlovely on June 15, 2017 4:25 pm

      Awesome

    15. Soumya on June 15, 2017 5:03 pm

      simply superb di

    16. Arjuna on June 15, 2017 5:30 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME

    17. Rehna on June 15, 2017 5:48 pm

      Superb dear

    18. Laashya on June 15, 2017 6:28 pm

      Poor lucky, feeling bad for him, can’t see him like this

    19. Anju on June 15, 2017 7:39 pm

      Awesome episode

    20. Vennila on June 15, 2017 7:40 pm

      Nice

    21. Monisha on June 15, 2017 8:48 pm

      Superb

    22. Vini on June 15, 2017 9:46 pm

      Emotional episode

    23. Sherin on June 16, 2017 8:08 pm

      Awesome dear

    24. hemalattha on June 19, 2017 3:32 am

      Nice

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