Fan Fiction

Raanjhanaa-The beloved one (Episode 14)

Laksh was still in that place waiting for Ragini.He had the belief that his wife would return to him.But he had no idea about Ragini.

Laksh:Raginiiii… (he shouted)

Ragini was shown from the glass door…..

Outside the ICU ward,

Dr:Mr.Ritik… (he paused)

Ritik and Shivanya looked at him

Dr:Her condition is really critical…..she can hear u but cant recognise anyone….its coz of her head injury

Shivanya:dr…do u mean its…memory loss??

Dr:well I can’t say that now…she can listen to ur speech but she cant respibd to ur talks..even she can’t recognize who is speaking…I mean…like its a man or a woman.Her Vision an hearing ability aren’t good.And….she is paralysed.

Laksh:Ragini…jab tak tum nahi ayi…I..I won’t go home…..plz bachcha enough of hide and seeks…plzzzz…. (He said like a kid with a cracking voice )

Arjun’s home,

Arjun:I know…how Laksh must be feeling now…I hope garwalon…they will look after him….Haan…yes…I will call sanskar and ask about Laksh

Laksh knelt down putting his hands on the ground and his head was hung down.He waw totally devasted….He was not ready to leave the place without her.

Laksh:Bachchaa…u r scared of dark…I know…I know bachcha…but… u..u.. dont worry I am still here…waiting for u.plz come to me plz (he spoke with his choking voice )

Arjun:Hello Sanskar woh…Laksh….

Sanskar:He has gone there….I don’t know how to make him understand. .. (he took a deep breath) ki….Ragini is dead.How can she come back after falling from such a height.

Sanskar:I can’t see my lucky in this state..(his eyes were red)

Arjun:Sanskar…I know how it feels when…when… (he was in the verge of crying)u loose ur loved ones…I know d pain…

He took a sigh….

Arjun:Take care of him.

Sanskar looked straight…..

Sanskar:I cant leave him like this……

The nxt day….

Shivanya was with Ragini.She was feeding her.Ritik had gone out as he had some work to do.

Shivanya caressed Ragini’s head.

She thought,”Hope….u will be back to ur home soon..get well soon”

Shivanya in her mind,”Hey shiv jii…please get this girl cured soon…Her family must be waiting for her.Until she is fine keep her family strong and not to loose the hope on her.

@MM

All were on the dining table. Break fast was before them but nobody had the mood of taking it…..All had their pale face that was hunging down..their eyes were not even looking the food plate. Pari was feeding Mishka…

But there…two people were missing…it was Ragini and Laksh….

Laksh was not back to home after when he left in the last night.Sanskar tried to call him but swara stopped him and asked him to Let Laksh alone for some time……
Mishka looked hete and thete while pari fed her.She spotted something at asked every one to look at that.All turned their gaze towards….the stairs…

Finally he came…his hair was messed up.His white blood stained shirt was still on him.His eyes were welled up.His shirt was half tucked in.His legs were dancing….all stood up seeing him.Ap put her hands over her mouth and whispered his name,”Laksh”.Dp didnt know whether to shout at him or not.He was drunk….he drank more that he was not even able to stand by his legs….

All rushed to him.When Sanskar moved to catch his lucky….

Laksh showed his palm…

Sanskar:lucky….

Laksh(drunken voice):Yes…..that’s me…..

Sanskar:what is this lucky. .. (little angry voice)

Laksh:mmm…. (he thought)…what (he asked in a husky voice and also he showed his hand action)

Sanskar glared him….

Laksh:Now… I am (he pointed himself) leaving to my room and you don’t follow me (he pointed Sanskar)

And he left….

All looked him until he was gone out of their views

Dp:We have to tolerate all these for days….sirf kuch dino ke liye…

Laksh opened the door.Tears fell down from his eyes.

Kal Meera tadpi Kaanha ko

He remined how Ragini used to cry silently in pain and how she suffered to get his love (a flash was shown…Laksh kisses swara’s forehead, ragini who in her modern attire saw that…she was broken).

Sab laaj samaaj ganwaai re

He remained how he and all showed their hatredness towards her (a flash…he once said even if she was the last girl in the world…he will never love her)

Ab prem mein tadpan tarsan ki

He knelt down and put his right hand over his left chest….he touched his heart

Hai baari Kaanha ki aayi re

He clossed his eyes…he cried really very badly…he was broken completely…..

Mori jaan gayi (mori jaan gayi)

He closed his eyes more tighter.He …with his other hand (the left) made a fist and banged the floor..

O.. tora khel hua (tora khel hua)

He remembered their selfie moment…

Mujh se main rootha
Mujh mein main toota..

He rmbrd the kite scene…

O.. mujh se main rootha
Mujh mein main toota

He rmbd how Ragini fed him Rasagulla and then how she made a cute expression after pouring the sugar syrup on d paper…He smiled n still his hand was over his heart and his eyes were closed. Though they were closed tears came out some how finding a way…

Mujhko maine ishq wafaa mein
Khud hi hai loota (khud hi hai loota..)

He smiled heavily amongst his tears…he rmbrd their marriage moments

Lut-lut ke.. lut-lut ke..

Jeena hai marna baanke yaar bina

He moved near the photo frmaes of him and her.He caressed her pic by closing his eyes.

Saaiyaan.. hunn main kee karaan
Saaiyaan.. jee laan ya maraan
Saaiyaan.. Rab mujhse khafa
Saaiyaan.. (x2)

He rmbrd how he proposed her for the second marriage on the day of urvashi truth.He rmnd her face.still his eyes wete closed n his hand was on d pic.

The music stopped.

He opened his eyes…

Laksh:mera bachchaa… (in a cracking voice)

Laksh:I know u wont leave me alone..and u too know that Laksh cant live without Ragini…come to me…soon..come to me(he spoke in his drunken, choking voice)

The tune cntd when he turned hearing his name

“Laksh”

He found her at the door step with the charming smile..
He smiled heavily amongst his tears like when a kid smiles after getting what the child wants after a long crying…

Laksh:I know my bachcha will come to me…

Both walked towards each other.Laksh was like he was in heaven….

When both were close to each other…

Laksh cupped her cheeks and kissed her forehead simultaneously…..she disappeared like how wind blows away sand…

Ho.. sapnon ke sheeshe toote
Dukh ki daraar se
Chaah ke bhi nikle na mann majhdhar se

His hands were still on that position.

Laksh:mera bachcha… (in his drunken and husky choking voice)

Koi bhi na bole aur koi bhi
bulaaye na

He again heard it “Laksh”

Phir bhi aawaazein sune baadlon ke paar se

He turned back she was not there but he saw the frames again that was infront of hi

Rus-rus ke.. rus-rus ke..
Mann se mann jaana khud hi yaar bina
Saaiyaan.. hunn main kee karaan
Saaiyaan.. jee laa ya maraan
Saaiyaan.. Rab mujhse khafa
Saaiyaan.. (x2)

He now rushed near the bed and threw away the bed sheets and pilliws then he moved to his table and threw every thing..his bag…his laptop…his room was messed up..totally…He sat on his kneel and held his head with his heads.He cried….cried and cried…The screen freezed on his face.
Guys..wt do u feel about our Laksh

Credit – #manju

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