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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyara Dushman – FF (twinj,Rivanya,kaira)~#5
Fan Fiction Naagin (Colors) Tashan-e-Ishq Yeh Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai

Pyara Dushman – FF (twinj,Rivanya,kaira)~#5

Awatif_RahmanBy Awatif_RahmanFebruary 10, 201726 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hii guys.Awatif here.I know bohat late hon, but Kya Karu it’s for a reason,as u all know ki I post my ff on weekends but last week I gave on Tuesday.So the reason is that on Saturday it was my brothers graduation then on Sunday I got sick I was having fever so I was not able to post but today I am here to post my FF hope u guys like it and sorry for not commenting on ur articles guys it was fabulous hats-off to u guys.
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Location:College
Everyone in college was shocked to hear about Twinj,including U&N cuz they never expected it.
Naira:Kunj bhai r u sure ki app ko uos twinkle se shadi karni hai.
Uv:bhai yeh SHADI hai koi mazak nahi.aur tu uos twinkle se shadi kar raha hai.
U&N:Teri tu uose Bantu bhi nahi hai.
Kunj:I know ki humari Banti nahi hai but that doesn’t mean ki woh buri hai.
Naira&Uv were shocked by his statement.
Other side
Chinki was shocked to know that and said the same thing what U&N said
Twi:I know that chinki but i don’t know him properly,i know that he irritates me a lot from childhood but we acted as if we r best friends and this created Siyappa,if we never acted it would have never happened,but know we have to understand each other and what if we start liking eachother by chance.
Then she turned and saw kunj and uv,naira,kartik standing there in shock,especially kunj he then went near her sat on his knees and proposed her
Kunj: I know we r totally opposite,we fight like a cat and dog,u love milk chocolate and I love white chocolate,u hate coffee but I love coffee,u love winter and I love summer but kehte haina OPPOSITE ATTRACTS.So Miss Twinkle Taneja or should I say Mrs.Twinkle kunj Sarna will u accept my proposal??
Everyone was shell shocked including twinkle.She was crying,but then she remembered about Valentines week then she said:YES.
But there they heard a clap they turned to see Rivanyasha and shivika clapping then soon everyone started clapping including principal and teachers,twinkle And kartik went to shivanya and hugged her but then kartik and twinkle angrily stared at ritik.
Rivanya became emotional as they remembered there propose day.
Shivika:are Wah Kya baat ha Kya propose kiya hai kunj.
Shivay:Good good akhir bhai Kiska hai.
Mahi&gayu:obviously humara?.
And all burst out laughing.
Kunj:Are,Are abhi khatam kaha hua hai rukhu.he went to twinkle pulled her towards him then gave her a soft,gentle kiss on her cheeks then gave her some of her favorite chocolate then a huge soft and cute teddy bear. Twinkle was so shocked by the kiss and the presents she went to kunj gave him kiss on cheeks and said thank you so much kunj this is so cute muah she said it in childish way playing with teddy.
All smiled at her behavior including kunj.
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Bas abhi ke liye itna hi kafi ha.
Hope u guys like it,ignore my mistake plz give ur suggestion if any,comment +ve and-ve both.and happy teddy day
Keep smiling?

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    26 Comments

    1. Vinni05 on February 10, 2017 11:35 pm

      Nyc one

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 1:40 am

        Thank you

    2. adeeba_zain on February 11, 2017 12:10 am

      Hey awatif happy teddy day to u too and episode was amazing yrr loved it…
      and now r u fine???
      post soon…
      luv u…
      byee
      …

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 1:42 am

        Hi Adeeba glad u loved it and yes know I am fine
        Live u too?

    3. Purnima.agrawal30 on February 11, 2017 12:52 am

      awesome amazing fabulous

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 1:43 am

        Thank u purnima

    4. Presha on February 11, 2017 1:01 am

      Awatif baby just loved it
      Awesome epi

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 1:44 am

        Thank u Presha ❣❣

    5. SidMin23 on February 11, 2017 1:44 am

      Super episode

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 11:37 am

        Thank u sidmin❣

    6. Aamna_2690 on February 11, 2017 12:02 pm

      Haww!
      Itna cute episode koi kese likh sakta hai yaar??uff… TWINJ’s pov n kunj giving twinkle Valentine’s gift… loved it❤❤post next one soon…

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 3:30 pm

        Aww aamna thank u so much,so sweet of. Love you ❣

    7. RUTU..... on February 11, 2017 1:34 pm

      Awesome amazing fabulous episode dear do continue soon
      Lots of love ???

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 3:31 pm

        Thank you Rutu ?

    8. Purvi128 on February 11, 2017 2:15 pm

      Hi dear,
      I never commented on ur ff but its mindblowing. I loved it.
      Tthe episode was fantastic.
      I enjoyed it.
      Are u fine now?
      Post next soon

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 11, 2017 3:35 pm

        Thank u for commenting on my ff and comment yes I am fine now
        Lots of love?

    9. Simiyy on February 12, 2017 4:27 am

      Hey
      Hope you are well
      I enjoyed your Ff
      Please post soon
      Loads of love

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 12, 2017 1:56 pm

        Hey simiyy
        Yes I am fine glad u enjoyed my ff

    10. SidMin on February 12, 2017 10:26 pm

      Loved it sorry for the late comment …. I missed some pages …..in between…
      Love you post soon the proposal for the sweetest
      Love you ❤❤

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 13, 2017 8:10 am

        Aww it’s ok it happens yes I will post it soon
        Love you ❣

    11. sethidisha002 on February 13, 2017 11:56 am

      swt

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 13, 2017 2:58 pm

        Thank you

    12. Ramya on February 14, 2017 6:05 pm

      Awatif
      Awesome finally kunj proposed twinkle
      Loved IT dear
      Love u keep smiling

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 15, 2017 7:48 am

        Thank u Ramya di
        Love u

    13. Aanya_pandey on February 16, 2017 11:38 pm

      That was an amazing update dear.. n sorry for commenting this late

      • Awatif_Rahman on February 17, 2017 2:27 am

        Thank u and NP^^

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