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Pyar ki lakeer-Dehleez (Intro and Episode 1)

administratorBy administratorMarch 29, 20162 Comments4 Mins Read
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Well hello to all….
I m gonaa write a small short ff not exactly known of how many episodes can it be.
But its just till Swadarsh unite..
Once they unite the FF go on a close..
Hoping that u all will love my FF..
I ll proceed with it..

Before that a small intro…
All characters are same…
As that of serial….
But their professions are not so same..
N I haven’t decided about it…

Few are illusionary (Usually friends)
Like Riya friend of Swadneetha..(swa)

Now let me begin the story
Episode1 z here…
A girl is seen waking through the corridor of mall..
And searching he friend…
Yeah ladki bhi na..
Kabhi nahi sudregi…
Suddenly a guy collides her…
He was in hurry so she could not see him..
But starts scolding him…
He just waves his hand and says sorry..n goes out..
She notices a bracket in hand..n he wearing blue jacket…
She says duffer..
N moves n colides with riya…

She scolds her for not informing her n making her wait…
She says I was clicking selfies…..
N both goes off…
While driving they dash a car….

Both come out n see her car totally damagedd…
N that side the guy comes n sees his car damaged too..

She started scolding the guy…
The dashing guy is Adarsh….
He too starts..
Their non jok continues…
She says u must pay now…
He says why shd I…actually u shd pay me ..
Or what say of a gift in turn…
She sees a juice shop…
U need gifts ri8..
She goes n takes juice from vendor n pores on adarshs head…
He gets angry..
He too goes n does same…
They give toufff looks n just go off…
Riya takes her from their..
Adarsh too fumes n leaves….

She comes to home..
So does he..
Their respective moms say that..they r invited by their neighbors…
(Its in swaa’z home)
She nods and says she ll just change n come..

Here Her parents welcome adarshs parents..
Swa ke parents asks about their son..
They say he is on way…
They all start chatting..
Just then adarsh enters…
N mean while swa enters wearing a white short top and jeans ..
N on other side adarshs parents start complimenting swa
swadarsh are shell shockedby knowing the truth that they are the neighbors…
All sit to dine…
When adarshs mom ask swa z mom about finding a guy to SWA..
As she is really very pretty…
They then ask SWA which type of guy is she dreaming of..

She nods and says that their is no such demand by me..
They all insist her for which she replies???
well my desire is too simple I want a boy who understands me and my feelings, who appreciates me to continue my dream even after marriage I want a person who doesnt love me because of my beauty or my qualities but the person who loves me only because of my nature I doesn’t matter if he is rich or handsome he should be only good at heart who Respect’s girls..umm..that’s it

Adarsh is mesmarized by her talks…
He thinks of asking her sorry…
He purposefully makes something fall on him and asks for washroom..
Swas mom asks swa to show him washroom..
Swadarsh head towards washroom..
N SWA murmurs abb chain se mein khana b mahi kha saktii…
A- uch kaha tumne…
SWa gives
Him looks…

Precap- not decided as such..but whatever comes to my mind

Hope you like t…
But don’t forget your comments are my motivations…
Positive or negative. .

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2 Comments

  1. #twinj4ever on March 29, 2016 1:27 pm

    Ur ff has the same storyline like tashan e ishq off…my advice is that don’t copy others ff …..write or own…

  2. crazy on March 29, 2016 4:02 pm

    Hai I read this story yar …
    Its copied

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