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Home»Fan Fiction»pyar ke juda rang (part-9)
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pyar ke juda rang (part-9)

shivi21By shivi21April 13, 201718 Comments5 Mins Read
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Hy guys its me shivu back again with another part of pyar ke juda rang guys mujhse ek mistake ho gai actually na I forget that I made sanskar lawyer in the ff and I make another lawyer for laksh case sorry now u all read this part and comment also compulsory ok let’s start

Par-9

#shivu

Sanskar think about laksh word than call swara

At sr flat

swara sitting sadly on dining table and ragini is in her room suddenly swara’s phone start ring she pick the call fast

Swa:ha sanskar
San:dekho swara tum ye mat sochna ki i call u for apology its just ki laksh hamesha kehta h ki kisi ki galti ki saza kisi aur ko nahi dena chahiye bas
Swa(wiping her tears):sanskar laksh hamesha sabke liye hi sochta h
San(angrily):unfortunately kuch logo ko uski acchai nahi dikhti and ya swara tumne laksh ki health janne k liye call kia tha na
Swa:ha sanskar kaisa h wo
San told her all the incident what happen after coming home and what doctor tell
San(with attitude):Jan lia na bas
Swa:sanskar aur uska fever ab kaisa h
San(looking toward laksh):abhi bhi utna hi h
Swa:sab thik ho jaega sanskar
San:Maine tumse nahi poocha now cut the call and ya office tum asakti ho I’m not like ur sis swara

And he cut the call then go and lay on couch in laksh’s room only

At midnight

Laksh is murmuring in sleep Continuously sanskar’s sleep gets disturbed by this he wake up and go towards laksh and touch him by this he wake up with jerk sweating badly
Lak(scared):bha… Bhai wo wo mujhe mar denge plzz bhai save me plzz bhai (pointing toward his wounds) see bhai wo mujhe nahi chodenge plzz na bhai save me
San(cupping his face):lucky kuch nahi hoga bacche m hu na dekho
Lak(crying): no bhai wo inspector ne kaha tha wo mujhe nahi chodega
San:lucky see u r in home dekho

Laksh look here and there like kid and then hug sanskar tightly sanskar console him and make him sleep then he also go and sleep

At SR flat

Ragini and swara sleeping peacefully suddenly she wake up she saw swara who is sleeping she get up from bed and go to balcony and stand there

Rag(in mind):itna restless kyu feel kar rahi hu m pata nahi kya ho gaya h esa lag raha h jese koi bohot hi special kisi problem me h

Suddenly she feels someone’s hand on her shoulder she turn and shocked seeing laksh there

Rag(shockingly):la…laksh aap yaha
Lak:ha
Rag:aap yaha kaise aur aap upar kaise aye koi dekh leta toh aur aapko kitni Chot aai h dekhiye
Lak:bas bas m kuch bolu
Rag(emberes):ha ha
Lak:tum mere bare me hi soch rahi thi na
Rag(shy):ha..nahi toh
Lak(with naughty smile):jhoot
Rag(shying smiles):ha but aapko kaise pata
Lak:bas pata h wese kya soch rahi thi
Rag:wo laksh humne aapko kitna pareshan kia h na hamari wajah se aapko kitna kuch sehna pada aapko kitni Chot lagi sirf hamari ek misunderstanding ki wajah se aapki sari khushi chin gai
Put his hand in her shoulder
Lak:hmm toh ye bat h toh iska bhi ek solution h mere pass
Rag(confused): wo kya
Lak:tumne hi kaha na ki tumhari wajah se meri khushi chin gai
Rag(sadly): hmmm
Lak(seriously looking at her):toh ab tumhe hi meri khushi aur muskan wapis lani hogi
Rag(tensed):wo kaise
Lak:ab wo toh tumhe hi sochna hoga
Ragini turns and face her back to laksh
Rag(sadly): par main kaise main kya karu
And she turn and didn’t find laksh any where
Rag(tensed):laksh laksh

At that time swara come there
Swa:kya hua ragu
Rag(pointing toward the place where laksh stand):wo lak..
Swa:what
Rag:nothing di
Swa:wese yaha kya kar rahi ho itni rat ko
Rag:wo hame neend nahi arahi thi toh bas
Swa:m samajh sakti hu ragu tum laksh k bare me soch rahi ho na
Rag:hmm
Swa(cups her face):ragu plzz mujhe maf kar do plzz Maine tumhare POV se socha hi nahi bas us wakt laksh ki condition dekhkar
Rag:Di bas aap sorry maat bolo actually galti meri thi mujhe ek bar laksh ki bat sun leni thi toh ye hota hi nahi
Swa:accha chalo ab bohot raat ho gai chalo so jao
They leave and lies on bed
Rag:Di
Swa:hmm
Rag:Di apne sanskar ko call kia tha na laksh k bare me janne k liye
Swa:ha ragu laksh is not well then tell all which doctor tell
Ragini feels bad for laksh then they both sleep after sometimes

At morning
MM

Sanskar wake up and see laksh who is sleeping peacefully without disturbing him he goes to his room for changing

After sometimes

Sanskar come to laksh room with breakfast here laksh is standing in balcony thinking something

San:Lucky
Then he watch laksh in balcony and get tensed
San:lucky kya raha h waha doctor ne bed rest bola h na
Laksh quietly come and sit on bed
sanskar (with one bite of food):chalo jaldi se khao
Lak:mujhe bhuk nahi h
San:ese kaise nahi h medicine bhi leni h abhi ese toh tum weak ho jaoge na eat like a good boy
Lak:no bhai plzz
At that time ap bring food for sanskar also
Ap:sanskar beta laksh k sath tum bhi kha lo tumne bhi kal se kuch nahi khaya
San(fake anger):nahi khana maa bhuk nahi h

Laksh listen all this
Lak:bhai aap bhi kha lo mere sath
San(happily): ok
San make him eat food and then medicine

Precap:ragini sees laksh first time after that incident

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    Live life whole heartdly Love srk most After him varun dhawan,parth& namish Deepika &alia are my fav I love entertainment world

    18 Comments

    1. Sreevijayan on April 13, 2017 10:01 am

      Nice update dear

      • shivi21 on April 14, 2017 12:09 am

        Thanks

    2. dharani on April 13, 2017 10:05 am

      Awesome??

      • shivi21 on April 14, 2017 12:09 am

        Thanks

    3. Berdilla on April 13, 2017 10:41 am

      Awesome dear friend

      • shivi21 on April 14, 2017 12:11 am

        Thanks

    4. avika on April 13, 2017 10:43 am

      Nice

      • shivi21 on April 14, 2017 12:11 am

        Thanks

    5. Simi on April 13, 2017 7:04 pm

      Good one dear

      • shivi21 on April 14, 2017 12:11 am

        Thanks

    6. asra on April 13, 2017 7:11 pm

      awesome dear…

      • shivi21 on April 14, 2017 12:10 am

        Thanks

    7. Ammu on April 13, 2017 9:46 pm

      Awesome episode

      • shivi21 on April 14, 2017 12:10 am

        Thanks

    8. Sinni on April 14, 2017 12:10 pm

      Awesome

      • shivi21 on April 16, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thanks

    9. A.xx on April 16, 2017 7:52 pm

      Nice and feel bad for lucky xx

      • shivi21 on April 16, 2017 11:13 pm

        Thanks sis and he will be fine soon

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