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PyaaraSa Rishta-Savitri Devi-epi 33

Good Morning Lovely Readers Thanks dear Riru,ishi, alia, Niyaa, dhruti, Amnaa, sanu, riya, kajal, dharani for ur lovely comments
Dear Readers if u feel am unnecessarily prolonging ff or if its boring please let me know I will end it
actually this my longest ff n am going slow because many of u had commented u like this ff n want me to continue
so now also please let me if u all r enjoying current track n speed any changes? any suggestions?

Recap-Savitri has come to senses her bonding with kabir, Sanchi n Anmol is shown
kanchi make abhita patch up

Savitri is looking at veer’s cute photo teareyed
Anmol enters with Sanchi
Anmol wipes Savitri’s tears lovingly
Anmol-dadi papa gets upset when we cry please dnt cry please
Savitri tries to smile
Anmol-Dadi its late u shd sleep now

Savitri-I was sleeping from past 7 years am tired of sleeping I dnt want to sleep I want to talk u will talk to me? tell me about ur friends school

Anmol is excitedly describing something n Savitri is patiently listening
Sanchi notices Kabir standing out n observing
she goes to him
Sanchi-y r u standing here?
u should have come inside na
Kabir-Sanchi Anmy n Ma r happily talking I dnt want that because of me Anmy gets uncomfortable n leaves
Sanchi-Amnot able to understand Anmol has accepted mummy jii as dadi then y is he behaving like this with u
Kabir-may be he feels I knew truth but I didn’t care for u all see ma was in coma so he has forgiven her but cannot forgive me because I left u all alone n actually he is right, I deserve this
I deserve it am such a fool I cdnt help my veer

Sanchi nods no-Kabir thinking about past n regretting is a worst thing to do. u r with us now in this difficult situation n this really is what matters most now so let past be kept aside

Sanchi looks in Kabir’s eyes
They r lost in eachother’s eyes
Savitri while talking to Anmol notices all this from inside

In morning
Kabir is making Savitri eat breakfast
Savitri-Kabir I wanted to talk something with u if u have little time
Kabir-ma am always free for u say na
savitri-Kabir dnt u feel we have done wrong with Sanchi n Anmol After veer they have faced so much alone
Kabir-yes ma, this thing bothers me lot I feel extremely hurt that I could not understand veer, I want to help Sanchi but dnt know how?
Savitri-Sanchi n Anmol both need a constant support will u give it Kabir?
Kabir-Ofcourse ma am with them
Savitri-not this way Kabir I want u to bring my Sanchi n Anmol in Malhotra house
Kabir-yes ma I would help Sanchi get respect n place she deserves in our house
Savitri-Then marry Sanchi

kabir is dumbstruck
Anand is standing on door with bouquet
Savitri-kabir Anmol needs a father n Sanchi a husband
Kabir-ma this isn’t possible I cannot take veer’s place I will support as a friend n uncle
Savitri-Kabir Anmol needs father not uncle u love him u can shave ur head for him but cannot marry Sanchi y y?

Bouquet falls from Anand’s hand
Anand (yells)-Savitri have u gone mad will somebody tell me whats happening here Where is veer? n Kabir y did u hide from me that Anmol is Sanchi mishra n veer’s son
tell me

Kabir is telling something
Dr Malhotra gets teareyed he cannot stand he losses balance Kabir supports him
Anand(breaksdown)-veer our veer
Savitri hugs him both cry
kabir looks on teareyed

Precap-Savitri-Anmol u wanted Kabir to be ur papa na? Anmol beta no problem if he is ur chachu he can still become ur papa but only thing u have to convince both ur mummy n Kabir for this marriage
Anmol smiles
Anand-Savitri this is wrong we cannot let that middleclass girl enter our family
Savitri (yells)-Enough Dr Malhotra enough

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