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PyaaraSa Rishta-Savitri Devi-epi 13

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Recap-Kabir makes out that Anmol’s father is his younger bro veer Malhotra also jaya tells Sanchi that Kabir is Veer’s bro

Epi starts with Kabir driving car His eyes r red with anger n pain
He remembers time spent with Anmol

Kabir gets down near seashore
Image of veer sitting on rocks flashes before his eyes

Flash Back

7 years Ago

Veer is sitting on rocks looking at sea veer seems extremely upset n tensed
Kabir is sitting next to him

Kabir (softly)-Veer, u always take my advice n opinion in every imp decision of ur life so ……
Veer-Bhai please put urself in my position n see Bhai I love Sanchi alot n I want to marry her
Kabir-Veer since 15 days am listening to this I know u love Sanchi I have come all the way from London to explain u

Kabir keeps his Arm around Veer’s neck
Kabir-Veer this is age to make career u shd focus on ur internship score good then like me u too can get opportunity to do diploma from London n then we can become good drs n make dad proud .Veer see right now dad feels Sanchi belongs to middleclass family so he is against this Alliance.she too can wrk hard, make her career then dad will not have any objection
Am not asking u to leave Sanchi
Both of u get settled then marry whats hurry

Veer is deeply thinking something

Malhotra Mansion
Savitri is sitting tensed on sofa
Anand is extremely angry n Kabir is helpless
Veer (firmly)-my decision is final I want to marry Sanchi n that too now
Anand-God knows what trap that girl has put that my son has lost all his brain
kabir I must tell u these middle class girls know how to trap rich boys they r just talented in this, who wants to work hard such cheap girls want luxurious life without bearing any pain

Veer(folds in wrists in anger)-Enough Dr Malhotra, not a word against Sanchi

Savitri-Veer is this the way to talk to ur father
Veer-is this the way he should speak about his would be daughter in law
Anand-ohhhh shut up veer I cannot accept that middleclass girl as Malhotra bahu
she cannot afford Malhotra surname
Kabir-veer I explained u na focus on ur career
Veer-I have take decision panditjii has said next week is auspicious muhraat am getting married to Sanchi on nxt Sunday n thats final

Kabir n Savitri r shocked
Anand-ok so my decision is final the day u marry her u r no longer a Malhotra for me u will die that day n…..

Savitri weeps-yeh aap kya bol rahe hain

Veer-Fine I too dnt want this Malhotra surname I want just Sanchi am going I dnt want to live here, If I have to make a choice between Sanchi n my family I select Sanchi
Kabir (yells)-Veer r u mad?
Savitri (cries n hugs veer)-no beta u cannot do this beta u cannot leave me n go
Veer (teareyed)-am forced to do so pl pl forgive me ma n bless me n Sanchi ma please

Veer is shown packing things
He is teareyed
Kabir comes-
Veer dnt act foolish for one girl u r sacrificing everything veer she came in ur life few months ago we have been part of ur life since 23 years how can u leave us for her

Veer (teareyed)-Because u all dnt understand my love I have some responsibilities towards her

Savitri is begging Veer to stop she is begging Anand Kabir pacifies her Veer is shown leaving house with moist eyes

Savitri breaksdown
She faints in Kabir’s arms

Fb ends
Tears drop from Kabir’s eyes
Scene Shifts
Drs have gathered in Anmol’s ward
Sanchi n Jaya r tensed
Dr Awasti-His fever has suddenly increased his pluse rate is also very high
Anmol-Kabir uncle Kabir uncle
Dr Awasti-Where is Dr Kabir
Nurse-Sir left early morning
Dr Awasti-Sanchi I have given anmol injections he should sleep in sometime he is remembering kabir alot just call him

Sanchi takes out her phone she hesitates

Anmol suddenly wakes up
Sanchi checks his fever
Anmol-where is Kabir uncle
Sanchi-beta he is busy u rest
Anmol-I want Kabir uncle
Anmol weeps
Jaya-Sanchi call him keep everything aside now Anmol’s health matters most

Sanchi calls him Kabir disconnects

Sanchi tries again

Kabir (angry tone)-Sanchi what more u want from my family y have u come again in our lives u used ur child to play with my feelings u used fake surname to cheat us Go tell veer that his plan has failed since 7 yrs he didn’t bother about us he didn’t contact us once n now he wants to return back in Malhotra family using his own child Same on u both

Sanchi is shellshocked
Tears drop from her eyes

Precap-Sanchi holds Kabir’s collar-veer respected u so much n u doubted us veer is no more he left us 6 years ago n now my Anmol. ……….
All because of u Kabir All because of u

Sanchi breaksdown Kabir is dumbstruck

Ok so Niyaa n Ruch r winners of part 2 of contest they guessed right that Sanchi n veer married against family wishes so congratulations u can demand a scene character or write a scene

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