Good Morning Lovely Readers Am so so so excited to write mahaepi tdy finally I will reveal one suspense n then slowly other suspenses wd be revealed
A big wala thanks dear Dhruti, Riya, Amnaa, anee, ruch, khamoshi(am in love wd ur unique guesses ), sanu, niyaa(no more dimaag lago dear n enjoy maha epi now), ruhi, alia, dharani, Anonymousaa,abhilasha, sanjukta, anu, shweta, ashnita(thanks for calling me sissie ty sister love u) for ur lovely words
So I start by declaring winners name
Winners of my fun contest part 1 r-
Shweta,Amnaa, Anonymousaa, Niyaa, ashnita, riya, sanjukta
Now lets start
Recap-Anand too feels some bond with Anmol, Anmol refers Savitri as Dadi this brings about improvement in her health
Kabir had asked Sanchi y Anmol told him he has father n dadi in family when actually they r no more to this Sanchi says she taught him this way as their blessings r wd them
Jaya overhears them n is tensed
Jaya-Sanchi beta Anmol’s Dadaji called up from Australia he was asking about Anmol
Sanchi is confused
Kabir-Australia? ??
Jaya-yes beta Sanchi’s in laws r settled in Australia thats y nobody came here na
Kabir-ohhhkk ask them not to wry Anmol will be fine soon
Sanchi makes puzzled face
Sanchi n jaya r in Anmol’s ward Anmol is sleeping
Sanchi-ma what is this y r u lying to Dr Kabir again n again first u lied about Anmol’s dadi now entire family yy?
Jaya-Sanchi I lied for ur good
Sanchi-what my good ma? how can lie be good for anybody
Jaya-Sanchi am ur mother so please
Sanchi-no ma tell me how cd u say like this for veer’s mum
Jaya-Sanchi I didn’t want Kabir to feel we r alone world is bad what if he takes our advantage? ?
Sanchi-ma u r doubting Dr Kabir ma whats wrong with u? Dr Kabir will take our advantage ma he is god sent angel
Jaya-Sanchi I told u what I felt now forget it if u dnt want to believe dnt believe
Jaya leaves Sanchi is shocked
Kabir is in his cabin,
Kabir is looking at a photograph
Kabir (emotionally)-Happy birthday idiot, I hate u really but still on ur bday am forced to wish u I just cannot control thats my love real love not like urs
God knows where r u
Though feel like cursing u but cannot
After all u were my jaan
Tears drop from Kabir’s eyes
Kabir comes in Anmol’s ward
Anmol is sitting alone
Anmol seems upset
Kabir hugs him
Kabir-Good morning champ what happened y alone where is nani n mumma
Anmol-Tdy is papa’s bday they have gone to temple
Uncle y did papa leave me n go
may be I troubled him lot when I was small
I miss him
Mumma also gets sad n misses him
Kabir is pained He hugs Anmol Anmol weeps Kabir pacifies him
Kabir-bachaa dnt cry mumma will get more upset if she sees u crying no bachaa enough
Anmol(while crying)-omm gan gan pathiye namah omm Ganpathi Namah
Kabir is shocked
Kabir-what r u doing
Anmol keeps saying
Slowly he gets composed
Anmol-when I cannot stop crying I say this mantra
Kabir is puzzled A voice echos
Jab mein emotional hota hun I say this mantra om Ganpathi Namah
Anmol’s voice echos-tdy is my papa’s bday
Fb of savitri reacting to Anmol kissing, Anmol calling her dadi
Anmol playing kuch kuch hota hain
Heart popping out from Anmol’s gift
Voice echoing He is biggest prankster
All flashes before Kabir He is numbed
Kabir (manages to spk)-Anmy do u have ur papa’s pic
Anmol takes out A photo kept under his pillow n gives him
Kabir is dumbstruck to see pic
Scene Shifts
At temple Sanchi n Jaya r praying
Sanchi-I miss u veer happy birthday u made my life beautiful every single second I spent with u I I I I
She gets emotional
I just cannot forget I love u I love u
”Hamari Adhuri Kahani plays”
Sanchi n Jaya r about to leave
Sanchi holds Jaya’s hand-Ma whats worrying Ma please dnt hide now we r in temple
Jaya-Sanchi Dr Kabir is Dr Kabir Malhotra Anand Malhotra’s son our destiny has brought us to Malhotra family again
Sanchi he is our veer’s Kabir bhai
Sanchi is shellshocked
Kabir’s pov-veer?????
Anmol is veer’s son n Sanchi jii is his wife Anmy is my nephew
He is Anmol Veer Malhotra
Kabir leaves ward his eyes r red
Anmol calls him but he doesn’t listen
Kabir is shown driving car teareyed
Sanchi (weeping)-Ma savitri aunty is really Anmol’s dadi ma but Kabir thinks her condition is like this because of me they hate me ma they hate me
She breaks down in Jaya’s arms
Precap-Anmol (seems extremely ill)-Kabir uncle kabir uncle
Sanchi calls Kabir he cuts her call
Ok so kaisa laga pyaara sa rishta reveal hogaya
Ok congratulations winners
sorry other participants very sorry actually those who clearly wrote that Kabir n veer r bros I declared them as winners slowly other suspense would also be revealed n somebody guessed it right (wd reveal latter)
I love u all please dnt feel bad sorry again
Winners ur prize
u can demand any type of scene or character to be added in this ff n I will do it
pl comment
or
u can write a scene direct msg me I add in ff
Love u all