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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 9
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 9

nupurboseBy nupurboseAugust 1, 201723 Comments5 Mins Read
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At d camp,
Everyone is shown busy in setting der respective tents…. Some students r collecting woods to make d bonfire…. FINALLY the bonfire is made…And everyone comes and sits around d bonfire …..And since it was a chilly night…Dey warm their hands against d bonfire….

Miss Malini n Rajat warn d students to return to their tents bfr 11 since it’s a very dangerous area…And early next morning dey will go fr camping…

Students nod..n both d professor goes…

Now everyone decides to pass der time by playing *TRUTH AND DARE*
And so, the game begins…..
First it’s Siddhi’s turn n she is asked- Who was ur first date??
Siddhi- I didn’t find a date yet…. But m sure I will find one soon…n giggles….

Neil- U dun need to find a date Siddhi… AVNI should be enough for u… Y dun u make her ur bf!!???

Avni- Shut up, Neil… Talk some sense…???

Neil-(puts a finger on his lips)-Oohk… Nakchadiii ??…
Then d bottle is made to spin… It stop near Neil….He takes up Dare…..And is asked to play a romantic song….He takes out his guitar…n starts playing… *TUM HI HO*…..

AVNI blushes…But tries hard to hide her blush…. Neil looks at her as if dedicating it to her…. Well he actually was!!!?

Then it was Avni’s turn…. And she chooses Dare…She was asked to perform a couple dance wid d guy sitting opposite to her…. It was Ali …. Avni gets up… Smiles at Ali… And both of them starts dancing on… *Te Amo* song…. Neil is hell pissed off…Seeing both of dem so close…And he could see how Ali tried every way to come close to Avni pretending it’s just a dance move…. He could take dis no longer…. He gets up n goes from der…. Avni sees him going…After d dance, Avni looks for Neil..N goes searching for him….

Siddhi- Avni, where u going…

Avni- Uhmm.. Actually, my network is poor over here…May b thoda aage…It will catch up a better signal…

Siddhi- ooh…Ohk..But return fst…Else u might be d prey of some animal…

Avni- hehhe…Oohk…

Avni searching Neil….
Avni- Where could that monster go?? Am so worried… I hope he’s​ fine… ?

She hears some sound coming from a camp… And goes near n overhears a girl saying….

Girl- I can’t hide it for long….One day everyone will Kno about it… And den… U shall b exposed….

Avni sees someone pushing the girl… It was visible through d shadow…. She couldn’t make out who could dey both be…
Neil too was passing from there n he sees Luci fallen on d ground….N crying…He picks her up n asks..

Neil- what happened???Y u crying???

Luci-Neil … Dat Ronit…n blurts out everything…. And cries hugging Neil…..
(Avni enters at dis moment n sees Luci saying to Neil….

Luci- I can’t abort our child Neil…. I want it to get its father’s​ name…His father’s love…n cries…..

Neil- No Luci… That’s not possible…..

Avni terribly misunderstands Neil..N thinks he is d father of Luci’s child..n wants to abort it…To save his reputation…n goes away from der feeling utterly disgusted…..
..

Luci- But Neil .. u Kno how much I love him… Dun u?? U know everything….

Neil- yes, I do…. That’s y m saying.. He doesn’t deserve u… He never loved u. .. never cared about u… I promise I will find someone for u who will love u n ur baby both ..n will never leave ur side…. ?

Luci-Really Neil….She smiles…N hugs him saying…. Everyone thinks u’re a play boy…. I wish dey could see dis adorable side u posses….. U r a real sweetheart…. May u find d perfect life partner…??

Neil- (thinks of Avni…n smiles)….. I surely will ….. ?

And walks back to d camp….
On d other side… Avni is seen completely shattered at what she saw…. She thinks Neil to b d father of Luci’s child n gets teary eyed….She had unintentionally started developing feelings for Neil… How badly she wished it was a bad dream… But she believed at what she saw…Her world had come to a standstill… Everything around seemed bitter to her… She started walking wid a heavy heart wid lots of questions running in her mind ….She heard something behind…N turned back to see Neil talking to someone over d call…It was Neelima on d odr side…..
Neil(irritated)- How many times do I have to tell u not to call me??? It’s such a misfortune dat I have to call u my MOM…Dun call me back…. n hangs up d call…

(Neelima ( Neil’s step mom)had intentionally called Neil to show fake concern…And ask him if he reached der safely….Jus to show NEERAJ..(NEIL’s dad)dat she is a caring mom… N she had put in on loud speaker to show NEERAJ how Neil acted rude wid her….Jus to add fuel to d fire n spoil father-son rel even more…..

Avni hears Neil…n misunderstands him even more thinking he doesn’t even LOVE or respects his MOM… (Lil does she know that Neil had lost his Mom long back )…..

So dats for today …. Will Avni get to know about NEIL’s reality…. Will misunderstanding keep growing??? Or will Avneil fight back against all odds n come close???? Well… Read to know more…..

(precap- Neil holds Avni’s arms forcibly n tightly…. Pins her to a tree…. Saying…U insulted me infront of everyone saying…. I ain’t a MAN… I will show you today… What a real man is ….And how. A woman is respected… And was about to kiss Avni…wen he stops seeing her tears….. )

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    23 Comments

    1. guna cotton on August 1, 2017 8:37 am

      Superb story..nice ..keep update

    2. Divya on August 1, 2017 1:07 pm

      Super ?????

    3. nupurbose on August 1, 2017 1:12 pm

      Thanks guna cotton….

    4. nupurbose on August 1, 2017 2:07 pm

      Thanks Divya?

    5. Archisha on August 1, 2017 2:54 pm

      Nice one.

    6. Navu on August 1, 2017 3:02 pm

      superb……

    7. nupurbose on August 1, 2017 6:00 pm

      Thanks Archisha….?

    8. nupurbose on August 1, 2017 6:01 pm

      Navu thanks ?

    9. Kash on August 1, 2017 6:33 pm

      N here’s again a masterpiece by uh..
      just superb… ur writungs jst makes me speechless…Although i knw u myt hv thought of a gud storyline..bt i want d misunderstanding to be cleared.. cz cnt see sch a lovely couple hating eachother..
      continue soon…
      waiting for the next…

    10. Kash on August 1, 2017 6:34 pm

      writings*

      misunderstandings to be cleared soon*

    11. Sweetgirl7 on August 1, 2017 7:54 pm

      Nupur love d to see such an amzing update . Do updated soon

    12. nupurbose on August 1, 2017 9:24 pm

      Thanks Kash ??

    13. nupurbose on August 1, 2017 9:24 pm

      Thank u Sweetgirl7 ??

    14. Ankita Sahoo on August 2, 2017 6:26 am

      Awsm buddy..
      I am loving it but I want the misunderstandings to be cleared soon..
      Wating for the next update..

    15. nupurbose on August 2, 2017 2:43 pm

      Thanks Ankita…. ?

    16. Ovb on August 2, 2017 7:23 pm

      Pls update soon cause I can’t wait anymore. Fantastic episode ???

    17. nupurbose on August 2, 2017 10:41 pm

      Oohk ovb… Actually I thought ppl r not reading… Soo… I didn’t update d next ..

      • Ovb on August 2, 2017 11:03 pm

        People are reading so please update. Please

    18. Nupurbose on August 3, 2017 12:05 am

      Oohk… I will update d next part by Tomorrow​ morning… Stay updated…n dun forget to comment?

    19. Ovb on August 3, 2017 12:35 am

      OK Nupurbose

    20. Saswat on August 3, 2017 1:17 am

      Great work so far. Keep writing. Will be waiting for the next episode.

    21. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 9:10 am

      Thank u Saswat ?

    22. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 9:20 am

      Guys it’s more dan 10 hrs since I posted my part 10… I have no idea y on Earth it has not bn updated…

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