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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 7
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 7

nupurboseBy nupurboseJuly 30, 201722 Comments5 Mins Read
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Avni is let free after warning from Principal… She enters d class wid a heavy heart. ..n is all teary eyed….since she never faced anything like dis bfr…

Neil-(seeing Avni)- I shud be happy but Y m I rather feeling upset??Y m I not able to see her like dat?? Y God y!!!?

(Neil feels extremely bad seeing Avni sad..but unaware of his feelings he chucks d matter… )

Few days later,At college….

Prof Rajat- Class, I hv a great news for u.. Clg is planning a forest camp to Rashigarh…. since dis is ur final year… I want everyone to be a part of it….

(Students rejoice in joy hearing to d news…..)

DAY OF COLLEGE PICNIC/CAMP….

(In d picnic bus)..
Everyone busy discussing bout d fun dey r gonna hv at d camp… Neil n Daksh discussing something… when Avni, Siddhi n Ali enters into d bus…
Miss Malini n Rajat advise d students to b careful n not lose coordinatn since it’s a jungle area…n could be risky… Neil looks at Avni who z constantly ignoring him after dat day…

Neil- Yaar Daksh …. Nakchadi is really upset on me… Aise ignore kregi toh kese chalega… Panga lene m maza nai aayega na…?

Daksh- Bhai, U r jus impossible!!
Students r busy playing Antakshri….Neil gets up n announces…

Neil- Guys… It’s getting boring….Itna fika nai chalega… Let’s hv some fun added to it….
I hope u all Kno abt d game *passing d parcel*… So, let’s play dat… 2 groups r made… Avni’s group…n Neil’s group…

Avni- Guys m not interested… U guys can carry on…

Neil- Yes guys, she is right… Anyway, she u would have lost d game…. it’s kinda challenging… not fr ppl lyk u…

Ali- Enough Neil, Avni will play…

Avni- But Ali… He z jus…

Ali- Avni… for my sake…n holds Avni’s hands….Plz Avni… For me… say yes…

Avni-Ohk… m ready …. n she smiles…

Neil feels jealous seeing Ali holding Avni’s hands…

Siddhi- Guys… I shall play d host… I’ll play d music…Wherever it stop.. it will be checked who has d parcel ..n he/she has to perform d dare dat will b alloted…

So… Game begins… Fst it’s Daksh’s turn… He z asked to enact Deepika padukone’s *Ek chutki sindoor*…. he does…n everyone rolls out laughing… Then it’s Arun from Avni’s team… he z asked to do *Naagin* dance…Again ppl burst out laughing… Then it was Neil’s turn… He was asked to propose d most cutest gul according to him in his class…
Neil went ahead n stands near Avni… Avni was clueless…She was showing fake irritation on her face …but was getting butterflies in her tummy..

Neil- Nakchadiii… Would u mind if I say u… dat…

Avni-Neil ….Dun u dare… U…jus …

Neil- Listen to me Avni…holds her hands… goes close to her …looks in her eyes..n says… U r blocking my view …n path both… Excuse me a bit…
And he walks past Avni…n proposes Another girl, Luci… just to add to Avni’s irritation….

Everyone laughs since Avni is highly trolled….

Neil- Hey Luci, U look terrific…Such ravishing look u posses… Ur smile…. one in a Million …. Ur eyes…(He says all day thinking about Avni’s features)….Lastly…. I love u… *winks*… he goes close to Luci n whispers…(dun take it seriously…I was jus doing d dare… I Kno u hv a bf..)…

Luci-I Kno Neil…Ur such a sweetheart…

But obviously… no one can hear dat…n to everyone it looks like Neil gave a peck on Luci’s cheek…

Avni is burning wid jealousy…
Avni- Here too… Moron… Can never change… ugh….

She is unable to control her frustration over dis..n goes to get her wafers.. D bus gets a jerk..n Avni was about to fall… when Neil holds her… n Ali n Everyone watches d scene…
Neil saying…

Neil- Careful Nakchadi… Y do u everytym slip around…

Avni- What?? Wat did u say…

Neil-I said SLIP…not SLEEP…??….n he lets her go…

Avni Starts munching on her wafers… recalling Neil holding Luci’s hands..

Ali- Avni… Have it slowly…Wafers r not running away…??

Avni-Uhmm yea.. ohk.. ?
Listen … we have to win this game…else dat nonsense Neil will keep eating my head…u get it??U r wid me right..?

Ali- Yes Avni …. dun wry… I m always wid u… I will never let u go…

Avni- What!!

Ali- I mean.. I will never let you​ lose…we shall win…?

Then Ali’s turn…He is asked to say something about his dream girl… He describes abt Avni trying to drop a hint dat he likes her a lot..widout taking hd her name… Avni not does und…but Neil gets hint n feels weird…Now d scores r equal at both d ends… Finally only Avni left… her mark will decide as to which team will win d game…..

Neil asks Daksh…to replace her dare..chit…so as to make it difficult fr her to win….

Avni gets d dare…to kiss d cutest boy she finds..in d bus!!

Avni is shocked seeing her dare….

So… dats all fr today!!
Will Avni complete her dare… will she win??? Stay updated to know ….

Precap-Avni misunderstands Neil to be father of Luci’s child

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    22 Comments

    1. Kash on July 30, 2017 12:42 am

      Its jst an amazing part… wowsome..
      u write amazingly… Neil getting jealous n Avni… dey bth r jst wow… cant wait fr more ? ?
      continue fast

    2. guna cotton on July 30, 2017 7:23 am

      It’s really awesome yaaar…plz continue..Neil n avni both are jealous..very nice story..

    3. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 9:22 am

      Thanks Kash… ?

    4. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 9:22 am

      Guna cotton, thanks dear?

    5. shreya on July 30, 2017 9:32 am

      omg luv post next update soon

    6. Saswat on July 30, 2017 9:59 am

      Really excited to find out what happens next. Great story writing so far. Congo.

    7. alia on July 30, 2017 12:03 pm

      Really very excited for next update
      today episode was awesome .show some more jealousy of neel .
      yaa waiting for another episode ..
      plz update longer episode

    8. Archisha on July 30, 2017 1:34 pm

      Cool

    9. Ankita Sahoo on July 30, 2017 2:54 pm

      Seperb re..
      Plz update the next part soon.
      I am eagerly waiting to know what will happen next..?

    10. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 3:38 pm

      Sure… SHREYA…. ?

    11. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 3:39 pm

      Thanks Alia… Alright?

    12. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 3:40 pm

      Saswat… Thank u ?

    13. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 3:41 pm

      Thanks Archisha ?

    14. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 3:42 pm

      Ankita …. Thanks dear ?

    15. Sweetgirl7 on July 30, 2017 7:19 pm

      Update the next part. This one was interesting. And do clear her misunderstanding in the next part only

    16. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 7:25 pm

      hehhe… i will see… Thank u soooo much fr suggesting Sweetgirl7…??

    17. Ananya on July 30, 2017 9:17 pm

      Very nice.I was literally enjoying reading it.hope the misunderstanding brings these two closer.I can’t see Avneil separated.you are so good writer I would like to request you to write another ff if you have time on avneil.don’t make us wait and update soon

    18. Pritiyadav on July 30, 2017 9:42 pm

      Nice one ,continue it

    19. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 11:26 pm

      Ofcourse Ananya… Misunderstanding is what makes a relationship stronger…. Until now Avni is not aware of Neil’s loving side… She has jus seen him flirting…. So after misunderstanding only she will see a New Neil… N u guys will luv it… M sure!!?

    20. nupurbose on July 30, 2017 11:28 pm

      Thank u pritiyadav?

    21. Suchismita on August 1, 2017 11:58 pm

      Kya twist hai????

    22. nupurbose on August 2, 2017 1:56 am

      Hehhe… Thanks Suchismita ?

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