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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha-(Avneil) Part-5
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha-(Avneil) Part-5

nupurboseBy nupurboseJuly 25, 201712 Comments4 Mins Read
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Hey guys… Thanks for ur love n support… Means a lot to me…
So let’s start wid today’s episode!!

The Episode starts at Avni’s terrace where Neil and Avni’s nokjhok continues……

Avni-Neil, Tell me honestly… What r u upto??Why u here…Else I will shout….

Neil comes closer, Avni takes a step backwards…. Neil holds Avni’s arms n pulls her closer to him… sees in her eyes… cups her face n says,

Neil- I am here coz I was missing u… I dun Kno wat magic have u done on me…. I can’t live a moment widout thinking of u….U captured my heart… I lost my heart to u d day I saw u….??

Avni- (lost in his words)What r u …. I mn…

Neil keeps his finger on her lips…. The touch of his sends shivers down her spine….
It starts raining heavily…
*Yeh mausam ki baarish plays in d BG*???

Neil- Ssshhh… Don’t u feel gud wen m around u?? Didn’t u feel gud today wen u were in my arms?? Ain’t I d one whom ur made fr?? U keep thinking of all d tym???

Both share a romantic eyelock….

Avnii- But, Neil… I … I… It’s lyk…

Neil looks at Avni’s shivering face n shivering lips… n bursts out laughing..

Neil- haaahhhaaahhaa… hehhhe…

Avnii- What?? Y u laughing?m

Neil-Lyk wat??? R u like kidding me??? U actually thought I was …. hahhhhhhhaa . …. (but even Neil knew d words dat he said were not completely fake… He was still to realize of d soft corner n his growing feelings for Avnii)

Neil- Kabhi shakal dekhi h apni aaine main??? Look at urself in mirror fst…..

Avni- Hawww!! What d…. I dint even think anything like dat… Am not blind to lyk a monkeyfaced JERK like u??Atlst I look better Dan u.. ?

Neil- Yea.. Dat was evident today…How u were lost in d words of dis JERK!!?

Neil- Well, Ur pakodas taste better Dan u… I mn.. dey r bit less spicy!!!

Avnii- what… u tried on my pakodas ….Now u justify d tag *pakoda chor*….

Neil- Eeewww… That’s sooo tacky…???

Avnii- Why r u here????

Neil- Obviously…. to spoil ur mood ???…. Is dat even a question….
Chalo miss nakchadi …. I gotta take ur leave now… m successful…

Avnii-Successful???

Neil- uhmmm.. yea… uhh.. I mean… in spoiling ur mood…
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Take care miss Nakchadi…. see u in clg tomorrow… all d best fr ur presentation… Sayonara!! Sweet dreams of me… *winks at her*???

Avnii-Get lost u idiot… I soooo hate u…ughhhh??

Neil- As if I love u??LOL…n leaves….

Siddhi was witnessing all of dis from a distance… After Neil left…

Siddhi- Someone told me… she doesn’t believe in prince charming concept n all… and now is busy romancing wid his Prnc charmng…Ahem Ahem!!

Avnii- Siddhi… U n ur fairytale thoughts… huh…

Siddhi- Something’s​ brewing between u guys… M confirmed now dat u guys surely share a sparking chemistry!!???

Avnii- Liiikkee srsly?? Kuchh bhi matt soch tu!! U kno na I hate him lyk helllll…

Siddhi- Tu TV nai dekti… Hatred is d fst step towards LOVE!!!
And wait, if ders nothing btwn u both… what was he doing here???Dat too at dis point of tym???

Avnii- Obviously, he was here to spoil my mood…n he did it successfully… ???????

Siddhi- Well, the weather seems romantic… so is d couple… *AVNEIL*.. ??

Avnii glares at Siddhi…n runs after her….

Avnii- Siddhi ki bachchi… Aaj tu gayi… U r dead… Ruk tu…

Siddhi- Truth seems bitter… but truth is truth…?( n keeps running)

They both enter Avni’s room n hv pillow fights… Talks endlessly …. dance on *Mera saiyan superstar*…n finally lay flat on d bed…. It indeed was one hell of a night for both…..

(Precap-Avni starts her presentation…. Whole class bursts out laughing…. including Neil n Daksh…. Avni turns back to see d presentation n is shocked….)

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So, Was all of what Neil said … jus to tease Avni?? Or did he blurted out wat he actually felt??? Leave ur comments below…. you will know all of diz in d upcoming episodes…. till den… keep supporting guys !!!

If u hv any suggestions… or u want any change… u may comment … Love u all?

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    12 Comments

    1. purnima on July 25, 2017 3:05 pm

      Waiting for d upcoming episodes..❤

    2. Shibani Behera on July 25, 2017 3:10 pm

      Interesting..??
      Loved the name ‘AVNEIL’❤

    3. sehrish ww on July 25, 2017 3:23 pm

      its just amazing…….. is anyone from kashmir.. next week i am going to kashmir

    4. sehrish on July 25, 2017 3:23 pm

      its just amazing…….. is anyone from kashmir.. next week i am going to kashmir

    5. guna cotton on July 25, 2017 4:08 pm

      Very nice.waiting for d next episode.

    6. Suchismita on July 25, 2017 4:24 pm

      ????pyaar to ho jayega bht jald i think
      Lets see.. …??

    7. Ankita Sahoo on July 25, 2017 11:19 pm

      ??Loving it..
      Waiting for the next episode

    8. Kash on July 26, 2017 1:29 am

      Just woww… Neil n his antics… drama king.. n Avni wooww… waiting fr next episode.. ?

    9. Fatima on July 26, 2017 2:11 am

      Awesome
      Loved it so much
      Read all parts on one ☝️ go
      Your story is interesting

    10. nupurbose on July 26, 2017 3:20 am

      Thanks everyone…. Thanks for supporting ?

    11. zain on July 26, 2017 6:13 pm

      plzzz update d next part

    12. nupurbose on July 26, 2017 10:45 pm

      I will update tomorrow for sure…. Sorry got a bit busy wid my assignment ?

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