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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 13
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 13

nupurboseBy nupurboseAugust 7, 201722 Comments6 Mins Read
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Sorry for d late update guys….Before I start, Lemme inform u guys dat I will be busy for 3-4 days wid my assignments.. so, will update the 14th part on Thursday…

The episode starts with Avni shocked as hell..after learing about Neil being innocent from Luci….

Luci-Tum bhi na Avni, Kuchh bhi soch let ho .. Now, Come now else we’ll miss d bus…

Avni- Uhm Luci, U go,… I will catch up wid u in a
bit… ?

Luci goes…Avni stands there still…nd recalls about the jungle scene..

FLASHBACK OF JUNGLE SCENE-

Avni- Wat was my fault?? I spoke d truth… Ask urself Neil… could u be a gud SON, a gud FATHER??? U don’t even deserve to be called a MAN.. U left Luci helpless…Asked her to abort ur child… Shame on u, Neil…. And how Neil was hurt deeply…

FLASH BACK ends…..
(PRESENT)

Avni-Ohh God, Ye Maine Kya krdia…What do I do now??? I accused him wrongly…. I thought he played with her emotion wen actually he was helping her out… How do I face him now???…

Avni was guilty as hell… She decides to tell NEIL sorry…n starts rehearsing….

Avni-Neil… Am SORRY … Actually I thought u misbehaved wid Luci… And so… I… I… Soo . … U… Uffff… Avnii focus… (To herself)

Avni (take 2)- Neil, Wo main…. Actually I wanna say… SORRY…. for misunderstanding u…U really sweet….
SWEET???No no… Sounds like m flirting ??….

Avni(take 3)-Neil… I’m SORRY to have misunderstood u… I am an idiot… Dats y I didn’t think of knowing d truth nd straight away insulted u infront of everyone…
Wait!!! M Kyu Idiot??? I ain’t an idiot… Ohk.. I misunderstood him .. but yesterday he could have told me d reality… But No… Y would he!! Ego Jo bhara pada Hai …. Huh!

Again she thinks to herself,

Avni(to herself)-Oh God, Iss Neil ko SORRY bolna kitna difficult hai…Isse easy to mere board exams the… But I have to….. Chal beta Avni, go n tell him SORRY… U can do it!!

Avni Finally goes to tell Neil Sorry fr d prev night’s incident…After rehearsing about 40 times….(LOL)

In Neil’s Tent…

Neil and Daksh were packing der stuffs…

Neil- Everything is here right… Or is something left out??

Daksh- Yes Bhai, I checked… Uhmmm Bhai actually I forgot to tell u something… Kal wo tum dono jab kho gye the…

Neil-Hann den???

Daksh-Neeraj uncle had called u for something…. U had left ur phone in d tent… So I picked it up… He wanted u to know dat….

Neil- Daksh, We r getting late… Bakwas ki baaton k liye, I dun have time..

Daksh- But Bhai, he sounded very tensed… May be he needs u… He was so concerned… So, I…

Neil-Daksh, Meko nai Janna…About what he wanted to tell me… And y is even concerned now??? When I n my MOM actually needed him, he didn’t show up on us …. He is d reason I LOST my mom… I had not even gotten over her death, her memories, when Dad brought a NEW WIFE…He wanted me to treat her like my MOM… I tried..But failed miserably… How could I call her mom wen she tortured me so much… I wanted my DAD… But he had no time for me… Baap hote hue bhi I was Orphan… He never had time for me… All he cared about was his reputation, his WORK n his WIFE… (Not my mom)…

Daksh- I understand Bhai… I Kno it must b tough on ur part to forgive him …. But at least try… It’s been 12 years since…….n he pauses…. but u ..
Still…

Neil-No… I still can’t forgive dat man… He doesn’t deserve to be called my DAD… I hate him… The day I LOST my MOM, he lost his SON too…

Avni overhears der conversation from outside d tent. … She was sorry to hear about his Mom’s death…n how he had to face d ugly torture of her step-mom…

Avni-(to herself)- I didn’t do right thing by insulting him… He has such a pathetic story hidden deep inside his heart …. But he never shows dat outside… How could u do dis, Avni…. Damn… I m even more guilty now….

Neil was kind of pissed off after talking wid Daksh n sooo…He storms out of d tent wid a frown on his face( doesn’t sees Avni since she hides behind tent)… Daksh follows him… Both joins d group ….. Avni too joins in later on…

Avni sees Neil …. Neil looks back at her… Avni looks d odr way …. She was not able to face Neil… She was seemingly awkward n guilty since she found it difficult to face Neil after learing about his reality…

Siddhi sees Avni lost in something…

Siddhi- Avni… Avnii…

Avni- Hann.. Hann say…

Siddhi-Where were u lost??? And thi Kahan tu itni der tak??

Avni-I went to… I went to… Charger… I went to get my charger .. .. yeah… I had forgotten it in d tent… So jus went to get it back…

Siddhi-Charger?? Sure na?? But, y r u sweating??? And ye chehre par bara Kyu baje hue h Tere??? Has anything happened??? U ohk??

Avni-Yes… Am ohk… Actually Neil …. (She paused)

Siddhi-Ohh no, Not again… I can’t take it …. Please stop complaining about him time n again…

Avni- No, I actually… Uhmmm… Leave…

Siddhi-Better…

Avni thinks- SORRRRYYYY kese bolu USS idiot Neil se… It’s seems like d most impossible thing for me on dis Earth… Ugh!!

Finally d students gets into d bus…N reaches trekking site ….
.. Avni n Neil crosses path…At d plane … And Avni slips… Neil holds him…n seeing him… Avni gets nervous….

Neil-Humesha girti padti rehti ho( careful)

Avni-( doesn’t find guts to say SORRY) n walks away from Neil…As fast as she could….

Neil- Why does she always runs away from me??? Do I luk like a monster to her???
Ajeeb ladki Hai ….

Neil goes after Avni…Calling out to her..Wen suddenly he gets a call on his cell… His face turns red with anger …. He sees his dad’s no.flashing on his phone… Gets furious….

Precap-Avni tries to say SORRY to Neil… But Neil doesn’t listen to her coz of d misunderstanding caused by Ali…

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    22 Comments

    1. Mehak on August 7, 2017 7:13 am

      Nice.. loved it..
      Not only this chapter.. but also rest of the chapters too

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 8:55 am

        Thanks a lot Mehak… Ur ff is amazing too… I love reading it ..?

      • Mehak on August 7, 2017 3:41 pm

        Thank you so much

    2. Kash on August 7, 2017 8:15 am

      awesome one…
      two jhatkas fr Avni in a single day..
      Great going…
      A misunderstanding again… Aaaannnn not happening.. Bt still ur story line is superb.. continue soon…

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 4:11 pm

        Thanks kash ?

    3. guna cotton on August 7, 2017 8:56 am

      Good one..finally miss understandings cleared..plz update next one..

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 10:56 am

        Thanks guna?… I HV already mentioned dat I will mention d next part on Thursday…. Keep reading!!

    4. guna cotton on August 7, 2017 11:19 am

      Yeah i knew..ok update next one on thursday..

    5. Alia on August 7, 2017 12:58 pm

      Awesome episode
      Clear their misunderstanding as soon as possible.

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 4:08 pm

        Thanks dear… And where were u?? No comments from ur side… I felt… U ain’t reading…@Alia

    6. zaina on August 7, 2017 1:26 pm

      Avni’ s rehearsal was outstanding… Hope everything will get fine soon… Waiting for thursday dear…..

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 4:09 pm

        Thanks Zaina??….

    7. Sweetgirl7 on August 7, 2017 3:54 pm

      Lovely dear. It is ok if you upload on thursday .

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 4:12 pm

        Thanks for supporting sweetie… @Sami???

    8. Shibani Behera on August 7, 2017 6:39 pm

      Finally… Misunderstandings are cleared… Interesting one
      I loved this part
      Waiting fr Thursday fr d next part to come?

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 8:38 pm

        Thanks Shibani… ???

    9. Pragati on August 12, 2017 10:02 pm

      Plz update next episode

      • nupurbose on August 13, 2017 5:20 am

        I’ll be updating soon.. ?

    10. Nidhi on August 14, 2017 3:58 pm

      When will you update the next part ??? Plzzzzz update it soon…….

    11. Mim on August 14, 2017 6:28 pm

      WHEN WILL YOUR THURSDAY COME? NUPUR PLEASE UPDATE FIRST.

    12. Ankita Sahoo on August 16, 2017 11:37 am

      Amazing re..
      I am loving it..

    13. Kriti on August 20, 2017 4:58 pm

      Pls update next episode pls pls pls

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