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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 12
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 12

nupurboseBy nupurboseAugust 5, 201727 Comments8 Mins Read
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RECAP- Avni looks at Neil who’s sleeping n gets thoughtful….
Avni-Why can’t my heart accept dat u r WRONG wen I saw all dat wid my own eyes… Why is den..dat I still feel u can never do dis … Y such dilemma… Y!!!

Fresh episode starts wid Avni still in her thoughts…Wen she sees her Alterego or conscience standing infront of her….

Avni’s conscience- Avni. … Jus look beyond what u saw… The way he cared for u…got tensed wen u fainted…. Did sooo much effort to gain ur consciousness back… Who does so much for someone????

Avni-But, he made Luci cry… And I saw Luci pleading wid him saying she doesn’t wanna abort their child!!

Conscience- Avni, Dat might just be a misunderstanding….

Avnii-Really!! I accused him soooo much yesterday…. Told him sooo harsh stuffs… If at all he was innocent, y didn’t he take a stand for himself… Y he didn’t speak anything in his favour???

Conscience- Wen did u let him speak… U kept pricking him wid ur words… Didn’t even give him a chance to him to prove dat ur allegations wrong… And u questioned his self-respect…. Hurt his ego…

Avni- Ohk, and what about d way he talked wid his mom… Were my ears defective too??? He doesn’t respect Women…

Conscience- Well, if dat was so… He wud have not let u go easily after u insulted him so much in front of sooo many ppl…Seeing ur tears.. he let u go… He cud hv taken his revenge.. he had a gud opportunity… U hurt his EGO… Still den…U r safe… Still u think…. He doesn’t respect WOMEN…. Open ur eyes Avni ….See d fact…. Har baat boli nai jaati …. Bina bole b kuchh baat samjhi jaati Hai…

Avni-(to herself)- That’s right… Y dint I think of it before… He dint do any harm to me..Rather took utmost care of me inspite of all dat I said to him…. Didn’t even touch me …. Agar wo chahta toh…. … Par usne….. Par kyun??? Kya would sachme…..

(Avni recalls abt d prev night’s incident when Neil was about to kiss her to teach her a lesson…But stopped seeing her tears n walked away from her)

Avni-Ohh God!!! I’m sooo confused right now…. (Looks at Neil Who’s sleeping …..) Neill… Y u soooo confusing…. Kabhi itne bure lagte ho… Kabhi itne pyaare…. Ho Kya tum???
I think… I shud go deep into dis matter…n find out fr d truth myself!!

Neil gets up n sees Avni talking to herself….

Neil- Tum ladkiyon ki problem Kya Hai??? Subah-Subah koi company nai mili, so u started talking to urself… Now dis is heights Avnii…

Avni-U mind ur own business…n kis problem ki baat kr rhe ho… Meri sabse badi prob to tum ho… Only bcoz of u we r trapped in d mid of dis jungle… Huh!

Neil-Oh hello… Had u not spoken doz stupid stuffs infrint of sooo many ppl, I won’t b dis irritated ..n u n me would hv bn now in our tents enjoying our breakfast….Huh!! Baat karti Hai…

Avni-Breakfast!!! Usse yaad aaya… Neil, m hungry .. … I need something to eat…

Neil- Kya!! Bhookh… Kal Puri raat Mera dimaag khake bhookh shaant nai Hui…Dat u still need food… ????

Avni-??Stop sayingg LAME jokes …n go find me something to eat… Else I might die of hunger…n u will be responsible fr my DEATH!

Neil-Well, Even m hungry!!

Soo both sets out in search of some food…
On d other side,All students including Prof Rajat, Prof Malini..Ali Siddhi n Daksh r searching for Avneil…

Avni-Where cud Avni go.?? M so worried… That moron Neil is also missing… Hope he doesn’t hurt my Avni… Else I m gonna beat d shit outta him….

Siddhi-Ali yaar… Relax… Neil is wid her…. I m sure he won’t even let her get a scratch… Keep faith… We will find Dem soon…

Ali-I dun trust Neil….Not even a bit…If Avni is hurt, Neil is Dead…..

Daksh(to himself)Bhaiii was sooo angry yesterday … Hope he doesn’t hurt himself or Avni… Hope both r fine…

Neil n Avni finds some fruits on d way n relishes on Dem..n den drink water from d nearby pond…
Avni although was upset on Neil for d prev night’s incident, she felt good in his company… Although she wanted to go away from him,she was unable to do so ….N was rather attracted towards him…. His magnetic personality didn’t let her stay away from him… D more she tried to HATE him, d more she was falling in his LOVE….
Avni felt extremely good in his company….She dint want d moment to end soon… But also feared as her doubt abt Neil was still intact!!

Avni n Neil were walking when Avni hits upon a big Stone n hurts her foot…She yells in pain…
Neil is worried a bit…
Avni-Ouch… My foot is hurting…I can’t walk any further…. Not even a bit…

Neil-(teasingly)-Thats nice…Yahin padi raho phir… U’ll mk a gud feast for d animals for at least 10-15 days….

Avni-Whaatt!! 10-15 Dinn… Main itni b Moti nai hu ohk??

Neil-Hehehe… When did I say u r MOTI?? Tum khud hi boli .. and Kyu na bolo.. afterall…U r… MOTI….

Avni n Neil were still fighting like Tom n Jerry…Wid Avni in Neil’s arms wen Ali, Siddhi n Daksh who had separately been searching for Avneil saw Dem…n Siddhi waved at Dem… Neil sees Dem n cones towards Dem…

Ali was roasted totally…He was red both wid anger n jealousy seeing Avni in Neil’s arms… Afterall his happiness was soooo short-lived… Only yesterday…Both had a grt fight..N now she was in his arms…Too much for Ali to handle…(LOL)

Ali-Avni.. R u ohk??

Neil puts her down ….Ali hugs Avni tightly….N says…

Ali- I was sooo tensed abt u… Could not sleep properly… Entire night was looking for u …. Kahan thi tu??

Avni-(breaks d hug)-Ali… Relax… M fine… Sahi salamat toh khadi hu Tere aage….

Siddhi-Haan Avni, where were u both d whole night….???

Avni looks at Neil n den looks towards Siddhi…N says…

Avni-I was unable to sleep coz of d sound d animals were making… So went out to inhale fresh air..n was strolling …But LOST my path n shouted fr help… Neil was nearby…So he came to my rescue… It started raining… We ran to save ourselves from getting wet…But ran in d wrong direction…N LOST our path…But thankfully found a cottage nearby…Spent d night in der..N now we r here…Bfr u all..

Ali was furious…He could not take d fact dat both AvNeil were together d whole night under d same roof… His blood was boiling…But he stayed calm… Neil was unable to understand as to y did Avni not soeak out d entire truth…

Siddhi-Ahem Ahem… Whole night… Together… Under same roof… Not baaaaadd… Guys….*winks*

Avni-Kuchh bhi Siddhi…

And dey went back to der tents…

In Neil’s tent…

Daksh-(hugs Neil)- Thank God…U both r safe…. N is everything ok???

Neil-Yea everything z fine….
(Neil still thinking… Y did Avni lie… Kal raat k bare m kuchh boli Kyu nai)

After sometime… The whole group was ready to leave for d camp journey… Avni was in dilemma… She was walking unmindfully wen she collides wid Luci…

Avni-Ohh… M so sorry… U ohk??

Luci-It’s ohk Avni… M fyn.. (wearing a wide smile)

Avni-R u sure?? U ain’t faking dat smile…???

Luci-Yes…But y u asking such?

Avni-Bcz I saw everything wid my own eyes… How he pushed u…n u were pleading wid him not to abort ur baby… Still u r faking dis smile…

Luci-It was my fate Avni… But am not faking my smile… M lucky to have a friend like Neil..For whom m smiling today….

Avni-What??? Wasn’t he d one who made u cry??? Left u helpless..n u saying…

Luci- What!!! Ye Kya bol rhi h Avni .. Y wud he do something like dat??? Infact he explained me dat Ronit never deserved me…He just played wid my emotions ….n left me away wid my baby… But Neil … Like an adorable person promised me to find a bttr guy for me who wud accept me n my baby… He z such a sweetheart… He can never make anyone cry…. Any girl wud be lucky to have a guy like him…

Avni-Ronit?? Who??

Luci-The guy who ditched me… The father of my baby….n she explained d entire incident to Avni…N how Neil helped her to get outta depression…

Avni was shocked..n guilty both…

So dats all fr today… Hope u liked it…

PRECAP-Avni not able to face Neil, Neil is not able to understand as to y Avni behaving strange….

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    27 Comments

    1. guna cotton on August 5, 2017 9:21 am

      Awesome episode…I’m so exciting for the next one..plz update today..really nice story..

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 10:45 am

        Thanks guna cotton ?

    2. Neetu on August 5, 2017 10:56 am

      It’s really good ….we r very excited for next one…if possible update it today

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:03 pm

        Thanks Neetu?

    3. Shibani Behera on August 5, 2017 11:48 am

      Woah…finally her misunderstandings were cleared….?
      And Avneil n their cute lil’ fights are quite romantic
      Loved it

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:04 pm

        Yup…. Thanks Shibanii ?

    4. Kash on August 5, 2017 12:19 pm

      wowww…finally misunderstandings cleared… noww lets see hw Avni n Neil come together….waiting fr d nxt part ? continue soon.

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:04 pm

        Thank u soooo much Kash ??

    5. Shreya on August 5, 2017 1:21 pm

      Yay!!! The misunderstanding is cleared….. Now plz do update soon.
      Plz
      Plz
      Plz
      ????u

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:05 pm

        Oohk Shreya…. Will try updating by 11 pm… ??

      • Shreya on August 6, 2017 6:23 pm

        You broke your promise… Plz update naaaa
        I am continuously checking to know whether you updated or not

    6. Resh on August 5, 2017 1:25 pm

      Hi!! I’m commenting for the first time I suppose. I went through all the part of your ff. it’s simply amazing! Just loved the whole plot! I’m loving it! ❤️️ So happy that at last Avni got to know the truth! ?
      Loads of love to you for such a wonderful ff!

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:07 pm

        Thank u sooo much for reading my ff…And I’m glad u liked d storyline… Keep reading … ??

    7. Navu on August 5, 2017 1:42 pm

      wow…….. mindblowing episode…. ??? please update next episode soon

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:07 pm

        Thank u Navu…?

    8. Sweetgirl7 on August 5, 2017 2:37 pm

      At last avni got to know the truth . Loving it . Loads of love loaded with care and chubbyness

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 5:13 pm

        Awweee… Thanks a lot Sweetgirl7 ?

      • Sweetgirl7 on August 5, 2017 8:36 pm

        Dear please call me by my name . My name is Samiksha and call me sami

    9. Ovb on August 5, 2017 3:25 pm

      Wowwwwwww fantastic episode. Finally the misunderstanding is cleared I’m relieved ?. Update soon.

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 5:14 pm

        Thanks dear?

    10. TheVariga on August 5, 2017 4:13 pm

      Too good like always ??

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 5:14 pm

        Thank u Variga?

    11. zaina on August 6, 2017 2:05 pm

      Its great dear…. All misunderstandings got over… Luved avneil’s nok jok. They r so adorable… Waiting for the next part. Post soon…. Luv u nupur..

      • nupurbose on August 6, 2017 5:01 pm

        Thank you sooo much Zaina…. ?

    12. nupurbose on August 6, 2017 9:47 pm

      Sorry Shreya… Got a bit busy coz of friendship day… Will post today….. ?

    13. Shalini on August 6, 2017 11:24 pm

      Plz update nxt part.

      • nupurbose on August 7, 2017 8:58 am

        It’s already updated…. U can check…?

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