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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 11
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 11

nupurboseBy nupurboseAugust 4, 201725 Comments6 Mins Read
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Guys… Thank u sooo very much for ur terrific response…. Totally unexpected dat was… And sooo…. Here’s a small surprise for u all… I have merged 2 episodes…. So dis one’s gonna be a long…. Many of u have bn requesting fr a long update … Sooo guyss…. Here it is…… ?
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The episode starts wid Neil letting Avni’s hands loose seeing her tears… He knew he couldn’t see her like dat…And dat he LOVES her a hell lot…. He feels a sudden urge to wipe her tears n let her know dat watevr she has thought of him was a mere misunderstanding … But he was soooo hurt…Dat he doesn’t say a word…. Turns his back towards Avni…..And starts walking away from her…. Avni opens her eyes n sees him walking away…. She doesn’t understand anything ….. And tries to call him…but her heads starts reeling…n she calls Neil in a very faint voice…. Although Neil was at a distant…he felt something​ n looks back only to see Avni going to faint…. He rushes to her..n holds her in his arms…..Avni looks in his eyes…N den faints in his arms….

Neil- Avniiii.. Avnii… Get up Avni… Plz open ur eyes… God!! Kya karu ab main… Avnii… Plzz uthh jaao… Maaf kardo mjhe… M sorry… Plzzz just once open ur eyes….I can’t see u like dis…. Ek bar…N he breaks down..

Neil shakes Avni….Tries every way to bring her back to sense..but all in vain…. Neil panics a bit… Den he lifts Avni in his arms… Looks for water… Fortunately finds a pond nearby… Makes her rest on d ground…n makes her drink some water.. Avni is half conscious now…. Neil smiles a bit…Seeing her n thanks God…

Avnii starts hitting him on d chest…

Avnii- y u did dis to me… I thought u might b a flirt but u r gud at heart… But u broke my trust… I had started….(before she could say loving u…She faints again)

Neil- OMG… Avniiii… Not again… How do I tell u… U r mistaken… I..

Neil is sad…Then he sprinkles some water on her face…And Avni gets back to her senses…

Neil- R u ohk??? Feeling better now…

Avni- As if u care… How does dat matter to u whether I live or die…

Neil- Shutup Avni( he couldn’t hear Avni talking if dying)

Avnii-U only know how to inflict pain..Bas Dil todna jaante ho…

Neil- Dil todna.. !!!!

Avni- I was not not bout myself…But about Luci…(but actually her heart was broken seeing Dem)

Neil was totally shattered….He knew explaining anything to Avni would b meaningless…Since she wud never believe on his words….So he doesn’t say anything on dat topic…

Neil- I think we should leave now…It’s too risky to be here…

Neil gives Avni his hands to get up but Avni gets up herself…

Neil- Dis way Avni… Come…

Avni- Not a chance… I will die rather dan going wid u… And she goes d odr way…

Neil keeps walking for he knows she would come back… Truely enough… There was a huge thunderstorm…and lightning…. And added to dat was bonechilling voices of wild animals…. It was enuf to frighten Avni to heights… She rushes towards Neil….

Avnii- Neilllll… Stooopppp….

Neil- what???

Avni-Uhh… Uhmm.. Aaa.. Actually.. I..I.. uhm… I think u r right…the jungle is not safe… I might b hating u but… I dun want anything to happen to u… ?

Neil- LOL.. Really!! U care sooo much for me!! I didn’t know about dis…

Avni-Look, u r wid me now… If anything happens to u… People shall doubt on me… So… It’s better we walk together…So follow me…

Neil(to himself)- She is just impossible!!

Avni and Neil after walking in jungle for sometime realize dat dey r LOST!!!Avnii panics…

Avni- Ohh God… We lost our path… Ugh… It’s all coz of u…

Neil- Ohk Sorry..But chill … M here … We will find a way out…

Avni mutters something under her breath…

Avni- U r here… Dats y I fear even more…

Neil- what!! U said something…???!!

Avni- Nothing… Ignore…

It starts raining… Both starts running to save themselves from getting wet….But dey get completely drenched… Thankfully dey find a lil cottage…

Neil- Thank God!! See ders a cottage… I think we should spend d night in here…We r lost n itss raining heavily… Only choice we have….is dis…

Avni-Whaaaat… Have u lost it?? One whole night!! Dat too wid u… And daaat too under d same roof… Noooo way… NEVER!!!

Neil-Avnii… Dun argue.. I said we dun have a choice….

But Avni is obstinate…Neil is left wid no option… He forcefully lifts Avni n takes her inside d cottage…

Avni- Lett me down …. Neil .. … Leeeeaaave me…

Neil puts her down once dey r inside d cottage…

Avni- I sooo hate u..

Neil-I don’t love u either… Stop arguing for no reason…Go n find some woods…We have to make a bonfire…Else we shall collapse fr sure…

Avni searches n finds some straw inside d cottage… They make a fire out of it… And Avni finds a box too… Some clothes were inside it… Since both of dem were drenched…Both decide to get into doz clothes changing d ones dey were wearing…..

Avni- Neil… Nikal jaao yahan se…

Neil- What… Dimaag kaam nai Kar rha.. Kahan jaaun itti raat m..

Avni- I mn.. Baahar jao thodi der k liye… I have to change… For sometime go out…

Neil goes out n returns after sometime… He comes back n sees Avni in a subtle Lehnga choli… He felt like she never looked dis beautiful n surreal before…For a moment he could not take his eyes off her….
Avni was sitting near d fire..N warming her hands…Neil came n sat beside her… Both shared an eyelock…

Neil-(in his mind)- Y did u misunderstood me?? How cud u think, I cud do something lyk dat??
Ek baar apne Dil se puchho…

Avni-(in her mind) – Dil hi toh nai manta… My heart is not ready to accept dat u r WRONG!! But wat about my eyes… I saw everything wid my own eyes…

Neil-(in mind)- Sometimes it’s more to what meets d eyes… But sadly, u won’t understand dat… I dun wanna hurt u further… Aaj Jo kuch b hua… Meri wajeh se.. U fainted coz of me… I can’t see u like dis… It’s better if I stay away…

And dey both didn’t realize wen dey fell asleep…
Next morning Avni woke up in Neil arms… She smiled seeing him sleeping like a baby ….And suddenly realized something..n gets away from him….

Avni- Y can’t my heart accept dat u r at fault… Y dis dilemma?? Even after seeing everything…Y it feels like…Der is something missing… Y????

And dats all for today!!!!
Will Avni find out Neil’s reality…Or misunderstanding keep growing between Avneil…. Stay updated to Kno more…

(PRECAP- Avni collides wid Luci.. and asks her about her child…She is shocked to learn dat Neil is innocent n was jus helping Luci get out of her depression..n was not d father of her child… Avni feels guilty)

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    25 Comments

    1. Neetu on August 4, 2017 8:38 am

      It’s very good yaar ….. waiting eagerly 4r next one

    2. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 9:18 am

      Thanks Neetu?

    3. Shreya on August 4, 2017 9:43 am

      Wow! Thanks for such a lovely update…. ????
      And do update soon… Too inquisitive to know what happens next…

    4. guna cotton on August 4, 2017 10:08 am

      Still suspense is there.plz update next one..and it’s really superb story..nd don’t write to stop..

    5. zaina on August 4, 2017 10:29 am

      Perfect ff i ever read… No words to say…. U r great… Ur ff made my day ..

    6. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 10:57 am

      Thanks Shreya… ??

    7. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 10:58 am

      Guna… Thanks dear… Dun wry… Misunderstanding will b cleared in d epi 12…

    8. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 11:19 am

      Thanks Zaina… Ur commt made my day too… Thank u fr cmtng… It feels grt wen ppl appreciate ur story…??

    9. shreya on August 4, 2017 12:29 pm

      pls post next update soon plsss just luv it

    10. Kash on August 4, 2017 1:20 pm

      wow wow wow n wow…
      a masterpiece ?
      can’t wait for the next part…
      fallen in love wid ur writing…. it feels soo damn real…. just WOW..
      continue soon…

      • nupurbose on August 4, 2017 4:33 pm

        Thank u soooo much Kash?

    11. TheVariga on August 4, 2017 2:59 pm

      Toooo good, I am even more eager now……PLZ PLZ do update soon and yeah! U have an awesome and amazing style of writing……..hats off ?????

      • nupurbose on August 4, 2017 4:33 pm

        Thank u Variga… ??

    12. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 4:32 pm

      Thank you Shreya… ?✌

    13. Sweetgirl7 on August 4, 2017 6:46 pm

      Nitu , awesome one but u extendedthe chapter last time which was written in preacap . And please also continue with your other ff . A twisted love saga . . . AvNeil

      • Sweetgirl7 on August 4, 2017 6:47 pm

        Sorry nupurbose

      • nupurbose on August 4, 2017 8:43 pm

        Actually I wrote some parts from 10 the epi…So that anyone who reads 11..Fst… can Und widout reading d prev ones….

    14. Pritiyadav on August 4, 2017 6:56 pm

      Nice one yrr ,loved it.waiting for that when avni’s misunderstanding get clear and when they confess their love.

      • nupurbose on August 4, 2017 10:09 pm

        Thank u Preetiyadav??

    15. Ovb on August 4, 2017 7:02 pm

      OMG…It’s just awesome and ur writing skills are just amazing. Wowwwwwww.

      • nupurbose on August 4, 2017 10:08 pm

        Thanks Ovb?

    16. Shibani Behera on August 4, 2017 7:42 pm

      This was just mesmerizing?
      Can’t wait for the next part

    17. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 10:11 pm

      Shibani …. Thanks dear

    18. Saswat on August 4, 2017 11:58 pm

      That was pretty dope. Waiting for the next one.

    19. nupurbose on August 5, 2017 1:01 am

      Thanks a lot Saswat…. Keep reading ?

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