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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 10

The episode starts with Avni n Neil both seen returning to d camp…But not together … The game resumes… After sometime, it was Neil’s turn again n he takes TRUTH…

Host- Yaar Neil, Tell us, Who is ur inspiration???

NEIL- smiles a bit..N says… My MOM… She is my greatest inspiration… I love her more dan anything else in dis world… He is a bit senti while saying dis since….(Since he lost his mom 12 years back)

Daksh understands d pain Neil going through… He knows how much emotional he gets while talking about his mom… So, he says… Ohk Bhai, we got it… Let’s spin d bottle n see who’s next!!

Avni-(thinking to herself) How can a boy be sooo cheap… On one hand he says he loves his mom… On odr..He shows disrespect to her… Misbehaves wid her… He could neither be a gud SON not a good .. Father…(thinking bout Luci)…
A drop of tear rolls down her cheek… I hate u Neil… I hate u more dan ever… How could my heart develop feelings for u!!! ??

Daksh spins d bottle…n it was Avni again…..

She chooses TRUTH….

Priyanka- Who do u hate d most n y??? It should be someone among our group!!

Avni was still in her thoughts​ n blurted out Neil’s name…Neil didn’t expect dis coming ….His face almost turned pail… He was clearly hurt!!

Avni- Neil it is…. I hate him d most … Reason… I wish der was one reason… But u Kno wat guys… There are millions… Where do I start??? A guy who few mins back answered dat he loves his mom d most …. Disrespected her couple of minutes back…. Like how could someone fake himself sooo damn much ..One hell of a talent… And someone really needs to teach him to respect girls…n was about to tell about Luci…Wen stops…

Neil- (infuriated)-WTH r u saying Avni . …. Do u even know what u saying???? What do u know any me?? My life…

Avni- … Kyun!! Sach kadwa laga!!!U Kno what…. U r a coward… U ain’t a MAN… Such a fake plastic guy u r…. Be a MAN,Neil Khanna…

Neil- Enough Avnii… I said… Just STOP…

Avni- *slow claps* Well, I guess u didn’t except such a surprise… No issues… U will get loads if it later on….

Ali gives a sly smile… Afterall dis was wat he always wanted…..

Everyone was shocked hearing to Avni ….Daksh n Siddhi tried to stop Dem. .But both were in no mood to listen…. Finally… Neil gets up..n goes inside his tent….The game ceases. Everyone returns back to der respective tents…..

Inside NEIL’s tent …

Neil is seen breaking his stuffs…n throwing stuff here n der.. In d process…Hurts his hands…Daksh tries to calm him down….

Neil-How dare she say like dat??? What does she Kno bout me???My life??? Who is she to judge saying I dun love my MOM….n breaks down…crying hard remembering bout d day he lost his MOM….

Daksh- Calm down Bhai..I think Avni misunderstood u …. I will talk to her… Dun wry..

Neil-No Daksh. ….. Now… Only I will deal wid her….She has to and me …n he says wiping his tears…

Inside Avni’s tent….

Siddhi-Yaar Avni… I think..U shudnt hv said such harsh stuffs to Neil…. Dat too infront of soooo many people….

Avni- Siddhi, U dun Kno wat kinda jerk he is…. I did right… He deserves dat… And I m sleepy…. And puts on her blanket…n pretends to sleep…

(At about midnight)…

Night was cold n chilly… Wind blowing at its loudest….And moans of wild animals was audible….Since it was silence all around…..

Avni was upset n was unable to sleep recalling about all that had happened…. She hears some noise from outside…n goes behind it… Someone holds her from behind…. And putting her on his shoulder…Carries her deep into d forest…She couldn’t see his face in d dark…

Avni(shouting)-Who r u?? Why u doing dis to me??? What have I done to u… Leave me.. please… Let me go….

But her voice is paid no heed….
After some time…. The man stops at a point ..N puts her down…Avni is shocked beyond words…. It was none odr Dan NEIL…..

Avnii-Sooo u stooped dis low….. How much more disgusting can u get????

Neil- laughs… U have not seen d level of my cheapness yet…. Yes…I am disgusting…And u will see what level of disgust u face today….

Avni- Y u doing dis??? Jus becoz I spoke d truth….Ask urself….R u a gud SON??? And u even played wid Luci’s emotion…Made her pregnant…N left her helpless n now u intend to abort ur child??? Pity on u… Such a disgrace u r…

Neil was irritated n shocked hearing to dis…. But he was soooo angered…n disgusted he didn’t even care explaining Avni d truth….His ego was highly hurt…But Avni kept accusing him fr all dat he had never done…. He was angry beyond limits…

Neil- Well.. u r right… I din’t do right… But now everything shall fall in place… I will show y what a Real MAN is. ….He holds Avni’s arms tightly..N forcibly…N pins her to a tree…..

Avni-Wat r u doing Neil…. Stop… Plzzz… Stop…Else I’ll shout…

Neil-No one can hear u here…. Try shouting… And he goes closer n says… U said I don’t respect women…. I will tell u how a WOMAN is respected…Miss Avni Mehta……

Avni closes her eyes…Neil goes close to her n was about to kiss her wen a drop of tear rolls down her cheek… Neil sees dat…N stops… N lets her arms loose…. He knew he couldn’t see her like dat… He knew he LOVES her….

(Precap- Avni meets Luci..Who says… Neil just helped her get out of depression…N nothing such between them…Avni is guilty….)

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