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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 10
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 10

nupurboseBy nupurboseAugust 3, 201735 Comments5 Mins Read
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The episode starts with Avni n Neil both seen returning to d camp…But not together … The game resumes… After sometime, it was Neil’s turn again n he takes TRUTH…

Host- Yaar Neil, Tell us, Who is ur inspiration???

NEIL- smiles a bit..N says… My MOM… She is my greatest inspiration… I love her more dan anything else in dis world… He is a bit senti while saying dis since….(Since he lost his mom 12 years back)

Daksh understands d pain Neil going through… He knows how much emotional he gets while talking about his mom… So, he says… Ohk Bhai, we got it… Let’s spin d bottle n see who’s next!!

Avni-(thinking to herself) How can a boy be sooo cheap… On one hand he says he loves his mom… On odr..He shows disrespect to her… Misbehaves wid her… He could neither be a gud SON not a good .. Father…(thinking bout Luci)…
A drop of tear rolls down her cheek… I hate u Neil… I hate u more dan ever… How could my heart develop feelings for u!!! ??

Daksh spins d bottle…n it was Avni again…..

She chooses TRUTH….

Priyanka- Who do u hate d most n y??? It should be someone among our group!!

Avni was still in her thoughts​ n blurted out Neil’s name…Neil didn’t expect dis coming ….His face almost turned pail… He was clearly hurt!!

Avni- Neil it is…. I hate him d most … Reason… I wish der was one reason… But u Kno wat guys… There are millions… Where do I start??? A guy who few mins back answered dat he loves his mom d most …. Disrespected her couple of minutes back…. Like how could someone fake himself sooo damn much ..One hell of a talent… And someone really needs to teach him to respect girls…n was about to tell about Luci…Wen stops…

Neil- (infuriated)-WTH r u saying Avni . …. Do u even know what u saying???? What do u know any me?? My life…

Avni- … Kyun!! Sach kadwa laga!!!U Kno what…. U r a coward… U ain’t a MAN… Such a fake plastic guy u r…. Be a MAN,Neil Khanna…

Neil- Enough Avnii… I said… Just STOP…

Avni- *slow claps* Well, I guess u didn’t except such a surprise… No issues… U will get loads if it later on….

Ali gives a sly smile… Afterall dis was wat he always wanted…..

Everyone was shocked hearing to Avni ….Daksh n Siddhi tried to stop Dem. .But both were in no mood to listen…. Finally… Neil gets up..n goes inside his tent….The game ceases. Everyone returns back to der respective tents…..

Inside NEIL’s tent …

Neil is seen breaking his stuffs…n throwing stuff here n der.. In d process…Hurts his hands…Daksh tries to calm him down….

Neil-How dare she say like dat??? What does she Kno bout me???My life??? Who is she to judge saying I dun love my MOM….n breaks down…crying hard remembering bout d day he lost his MOM….

Daksh- Calm down Bhai..I think Avni misunderstood u …. I will talk to her… Dun wry..

Neil-No Daksh. ….. Now… Only I will deal wid her….She has to and me …n he says wiping his tears…

Inside Avni’s tent….

Siddhi-Yaar Avni… I think..U shudnt hv said such harsh stuffs to Neil…. Dat too infront of soooo many people….

Avni- Siddhi, U dun Kno wat kinda jerk he is…. I did right… He deserves dat… And I m sleepy…. And puts on her blanket…n pretends to sleep…

(At about midnight)…

Night was cold n chilly… Wind blowing at its loudest….And moans of wild animals was audible….Since it was silence all around…..

Avni was upset n was unable to sleep recalling about all that had happened…. She hears some noise from outside…n goes behind it… Someone holds her from behind…. And putting her on his shoulder…Carries her deep into d forest…She couldn’t see his face in d dark…

Avni(shouting)-Who r u?? Why u doing dis to me??? What have I done to u… Leave me.. please… Let me go….

But her voice is paid no heed….
After some time…. The man stops at a point ..N puts her down…Avni is shocked beyond words…. It was none odr Dan NEIL…..

Avnii-Sooo u stooped dis low….. How much more disgusting can u get????

Neil- laughs… U have not seen d level of my cheapness yet…. Yes…I am disgusting…And u will see what level of disgust u face today….

Avni- Y u doing dis??? Jus becoz I spoke d truth….Ask urself….R u a gud SON??? And u even played wid Luci’s emotion…Made her pregnant…N left her helpless n now u intend to abort ur child??? Pity on u… Such a disgrace u r…

Neil was irritated n shocked hearing to dis…. But he was soooo angered…n disgusted he didn’t even care explaining Avni d truth….His ego was highly hurt…But Avni kept accusing him fr all dat he had never done…. He was angry beyond limits…

Neil- Well.. u r right… I din’t do right… But now everything shall fall in place… I will show y what a Real MAN is. ….He holds Avni’s arms tightly..N forcibly…N pins her to a tree…..

Avni-Wat r u doing Neil…. Stop… Plzzz… Stop…Else I’ll shout…

Neil-No one can hear u here…. Try shouting… And he goes closer n says… U said I don’t respect women…. I will tell u how a WOMAN is respected…Miss Avni Mehta……

Avni closes her eyes…Neil goes close to her n was about to kiss her wen a drop of tear rolls down her cheek… Neil sees dat…N stops… N lets her arms loose…. He knew he couldn’t see her like dat… He knew he LOVES her….

(Precap- Avni meets Luci..Who says… Neil just helped her get out of depression…N nothing such between them…Avni is guilty….)

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    35 Comments

    1. Ovb on August 3, 2017 11:07 am

      It was awesome. Can’t wait for the next part. ????

    2. guna cotton on August 3, 2017 11:12 am

      Wooow it’s so nice.. can’t wait for the next part..plz update as early as possible..

    3. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 11:36 am

      Thanks guna… ???I will update the next by 11 pm…Today… Stay updated…

    4. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 11:37 am

      Thank u ovb… I guess u r a regular reader…. I m so glad u liked my ff…. And thank u fr commentng dear…

      • Ovb on August 3, 2017 11:45 am

        Yes I’m a regular reader ?

    5. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 11:43 am

      And guys der r some spelling errors like pail instead of pale… And any instead of about… Ignore Dem… my word predictor was on…

    6. Sephali Mishra on August 3, 2017 12:47 pm

      Heyy nupur bose….ur lines of dis serial z really cute..update d next part…hurry up..I m eagerly waiting…

    7. Sweetgirl7 on August 3, 2017 1:01 pm

      Nupur please do update your other ff also . It was awesome and so is this

    8. Kash on August 3, 2017 1:12 pm

      awesome…
      continue soon..
      i hv no words to give in dis comment box… u make me speechless through ur writing skills

    9. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 2:03 pm

      Thanks Sephali… Will update soon… ?

    10. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 2:04 pm

      Thanks Sweetgirl7…. Actually m not getting much time… I will see…If I get tym…I will update anodr ff too… Thanks for supporting me… ?

    11. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 2:05 pm

      Thank u sooo much Kash??

    12. Archisha on August 3, 2017 2:18 pm

      Awesome one dear

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:34 pm

        Thanks a lot??

    13. Ananya on August 3, 2017 2:25 pm

      I love this ff.I love it more than any other ff of this page…please update really very soon.nupur di,are you Bengali and where are you from???

    14. TheVariga on August 3, 2017 3:22 pm

      Too good I can’t wait now till 11 pm ????

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:35 pm

        Thank u Variga…?

    15. Rishab Saraf on August 3, 2017 5:05 pm

      So, Miss. Nupur Bose…..!!
      Already tld Uh…..
      bst luv story writer on my Lyf I hv crossed paths, with…..
      Actually Proud To Be Ur friend……!!??

    16. Rishab Saraf on August 3, 2017 5:09 pm

      So, Miss. Nupur Bose…..!!
      Multi-talented Girl…..
      Already tld Uh…..
      bst luv story writer on my Lyf I hv crossed paths, with…..
      Actually Proud To Be Ur friend……!!??

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:35 pm

        Rishab… Thanks buddy ?

    17. Shreya on August 3, 2017 6:19 pm

      Plz update soon!! And clear this misunderstanding soon… Plz plz

    18. Shibani Behera on August 3, 2017 9:17 pm

      Just speechless
      Outstanding it was
      Pls update soon
      Can’t wait fr the next?

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:36 pm

        Thanks Shibani?

    19. Neetu on August 3, 2017 9:30 pm

      It’s very nice yaarr update next part soon

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:37 pm

        Thanks a lot… Neetu?

    20. Ankita Das on August 3, 2017 9:56 pm

      WOW I have read all the 10 parts……they are simply amazing……superb work!!…waiting eagerly for more updates….

      • nupurbose on August 5, 2017 2:38 pm

        Thank u Ankita…And yes, the 12th n d latest part is already updated… Go n check.. thanks again fr supporting my ff… ?

    21. nupurbose on August 3, 2017 11:04 pm

      Thank u sooo much everyone… Luv u all ?…. And ders a surprise waiting for u all… In d next epi… I think… It will take 8 hrs fr d epi 11 too… Soo… U can read it tomorrow only….Keep reading ..?

    22. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 12:19 am

      Yes Ananya… I’m Bengali… And I m from Cuttack, Odisha…?

    23. Pritiyadav on August 4, 2017 6:22 am

      Awesome yrr.loved it.

    24. nupurbose on August 4, 2017 11:25 am

      Thanks Preeti… Do read epi 11 too… And abt ur ff… Mus say… It’s lovely… Too much of suspense… Looking frward to ur next epi?

    25. Saswat on August 4, 2017 11:53 pm

      Great. Waiting for the next update. Good work nupur.

    26. nupurbose on August 5, 2017 1:03 am

      Thanks a lot for commentng Saswat ?

    27. Ankita Sahoo on August 8, 2017 2:53 pm

      Amazing Nupur…
      Loving It?

      • nupurbose on August 8, 2017 11:01 pm

        Thank u Ankita?

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