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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar toh hona hi tha-(Avneil) Part-1
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Pyaar toh hona hi tha-(Avneil) Part-1

nupurboseBy nupurboseJuly 23, 2017Updated:July 23, 201724 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hey peeps!! I am new to dis blog… I read some fan fictions and was really amazed seeing the lovely storylines… So, thought of writing one… Hope u guys like it….
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So… The story revolves around d very bubbly n lively character Avnii who’s deprived of all d happiness dat a child requires and is shown as a gul totally into studies unlike d girl next door character…. And she gets affection n love from her mother Neela( her step mom)…
Ashish Mehta is Avni’s dad who is bit strict yet extremely loving towards his daughter… he prefers staying out of d country most of d tym for his work matters…
Neil is d male protagonist who is shown as d most happening and sought after guy in Avni’s college….
Ali… Avni’s best buddy who is a character with grey shades… but is overprotective towards Avnii..
So… The story begins at Avni’s house… where Neela is preparing breakfast for her..

Neela- Avniii… Avnii… Beta have ur breakfast… I have made ur fav Dal makhani and kheer …
Avnii- Maa… I am getting late for college… L have jus a bite.. from ur hands…
Neela- *smiles* Ohk…here have dis… n makes her eat with her own hands….
Avnii- Uhmm.. Wowww… It’s yummy… oohk mom I gtg now… I hv to rush… else dat professor will kill me…
Neela-Ohk….Take care … And have something on d way…
Avnii- Ok… bye…runs…n den returns back… kisses Neela on d cheeks…runs again…

Neela- *smiles*..Dis gul will never change… She has had all d worst times in her childhood… Faced d death of her mother… I hope she finds someone who’s worthy of her love… makes her understand d meaning of love… My bachchi deserves all d happiness… ?

(Scene at college)
Siddhi- Avni, Did u complete d presentation… dat Malini mam had allotted to us a week bfr…
Avnii- No, It’s halfway complt… m gonna cmplt d whole by tomorrow….
Siddhi- Ohk.. Bdw, where’s Ali?
Avni- Dat bhukkad must be in d canteen…
Siddhi- I see… Well…I … I… I…
Avnii- What happened??? y u stammering???
Siddhi- Luk behind… My jigar da tukda …. d most cutest guy of clg… Neil Khanna is here…
Avni- Turns back… shows no expression… ( Hates Neil for his attitude)…and says… I dun find him gudlukn…
(Neil sees Avni n comes towards her)….
Neil- Hey miss??? sorry I forgot ur name..
Avni- Gud for u…
Neil-Whoa dat was rude…
Avni- Luk… am getting late for my class… get away from my way…
Neil- (Thinks..I lyk hr attitude… but have to break her attitude….teach her a lesson)… Well… sure….
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So..dats fr today…. how will love evolve between Dem… stay tuned to Kno more…

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    24 Comments

    1. adi on July 23, 2017 4:40 pm

      awesome

    2. sehrish on July 23, 2017 6:08 pm

      will you post it everyday.. other ff writers donot post everyday.. hope u will post everyday.. its nice but write lil more.. looks beautifull

    3. Kash on July 23, 2017 6:18 pm

      Woww.. superb story line… plzz continue soon… ?

    4. Kash on July 23, 2017 6:19 pm

      waiting for Next

      • nupurbose on July 23, 2017 7:04 pm

        Thanks Kash… ?

    5. nupurbose on July 23, 2017 6:20 pm

      thanks adi ?

    6. nupurbose on July 23, 2017 7:03 pm

      Yes Shehrish… I will post everyday!! I have already posted d second part… Hope it’s updated soon… thanks for commenting?

    7. Ankita Sahoo on July 23, 2017 8:20 pm

      Woooww…
      Its really sound interesting…
      Plzzz continue soon..
      Waiting for the next…?

    8. Suchismita on July 23, 2017 8:24 pm

      Wow superb my mastermind ?My drama queen??eagerly Waiting fr d nxt episode ???

    9. nupurbose on July 23, 2017 9:43 pm

      Thanks Suchismita and Ankita… Second part will be updated by 11 pm… keep supporting guys… luv u

    10. Shibani Behera on July 23, 2017 9:50 pm

      Well..this is just awesome
      Quite impressive
      Loved this
      Eagerly waiting fr the 2nd part

    11. Aiswaryani on July 23, 2017 10:48 pm

      Superb??…

    12. Kadambini jena on July 23, 2017 11:00 pm

      Wow..beautiful re…gud going girl…eagerly waiting for the next one ☺

    13. nupurbose on July 23, 2017 11:20 pm

      Thanks Aish… I hope u will love the next part too

    14. nupurbose on July 23, 2017 11:21 pm

      Thanks Shibani… thanks a lot for supporting…Hope u like d next part too… stay tuned

    15. nupurbose on July 23, 2017 11:22 pm

      Thanks Kadambini… M glad u liked it… stay tuned fr d next part… ?

    16. Saswat on July 23, 2017 11:48 pm

      Good going. Dont go with the stereotypical hate turned love stories… I see potential in your writing. Do something unique with your storyline… So far it luks interesting. Lukn forward to more of it….. Well done?

    17. Anu on July 23, 2017 11:53 pm

      Superb…carry on baby…

    18. Anuprava Routray on July 23, 2017 11:54 pm

      Superb…carry on baby…

    19. nupurbose on July 24, 2017 1:35 am

      I will try not to make it stereotypical … and it has a bit different storyline… It features teenage romance.. And hope u like d upcoming parts.. thanks fr d suggestion Saswat ?

    20. nupurbose on July 24, 2017 1:35 am

      Thanks Anuprava ?

    21. nupurbose on July 24, 2017 2:45 am

      The new episode … part 2 is already updated guys… read n comment… keep loving n supporting ?

    22. purnima on July 24, 2017 10:17 am

      Good work Nupur. I really like it ?

    23. nupurbose on July 24, 2017 12:57 pm

      Read d next part… Purnima… N thank u fr supporting ?

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