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Home»Fan Fiction»Pyaar (Ragsan) Part 4 by Aliya
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Pyaar (Ragsan) Part 4 by Aliya

A12345By A12345January 29, 201827 Comments7 Mins Read
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Let’s begin….

 

And it was sanskar’s football match

Rag was somewhat excited bt didn’t show it!

Avni:oh..ho looks like someone is excited to see …….

Rag:i m not!
Avni:wn did i say its you!
Rag:and waise bhi..i m busy you know!
Avni:wat sort of work you hv?
Rag:i..i hv to prepare for exam!
Avni:oh really!
Rag:yes!
Avni:so you aren’t coming to see Sanskar’s match
Rag:hmm…i….
Avni teasing:oh so you can’t come! that’s fine i vl tell sanskar that you cant come
Rag:bt..i
Avni:you study!i vl go from yours and mine side!
Rag:ok go!
She goes from there

Avni:arey!(she laughs)i know Ragini how much you deny bt you started liking Sanskar!and you vl come to match definitely!

 

Here there was 20 mins for match!

Sanskar sees all around!
He sees avni..he signs avni abt Ragini…
Avni makes a sad face..telling him that she didnt came!

Sanskar immediately goes from There!

Sw sees Sanskar:oh… Sanskar!
San smiles:hey.. Swara!
Sw:all the best for your match!
San: thankyou swara!
Soniya dreamily:all the best Sanskar
San: Thankyou..by the way can you tell me where’s Ragini if you know her!
Son:why u want to meet that behenji
Sw stops her
Sw smiles:i guess..she went to library sanskar!why?
San:oh thanks Swara…i was searching for her!

He goes

Soniya:swara..why you..!
Sw glares her:nobody dared to question swara!swara knows wat and why she is doing
Soniya:bt Ragini dared na!
Sw glares her:wat did you say!
Soniya:woh..woh.. actually i said that …
Sw:stop now… I don’t want to listen your rubbish!

She goes.. soniya runs behind her!

 

Here sanskar goes to library
And sees Ragini alone was sitting and reading a book

He goes to her
San:tell me damn…did i do anything that you want to take revenge on me!
Rag looks at him!

Librarian:shhh…silence!

San:madam..is there anyone reading so that i should maintain silence!

Rag:sanskar
San:you tell me!
Rag:wat?
San:why didn’t you come?
Rag:oh don’t tell me that without me you wont play football
San:you r challenging me!then no i vl not if you won’t come then i vl not!

Librarian:shhh…
San:madam 2 mins

Rag:oh come on sanskar!you should go now!your match is gonna commence in 5 mins
San loud me:you tell me you r coming aur not!wat and all i tried to be friend with you!but you r always rude to me!now seriously i m telling you i vl not play if you will not come

Rag loudly:you think yourself as Christiano Ronaldo or Lionel Messi that i vl come to see you half an hour before!i would hv come on time!
San smiles:that means you r coming!
Rag fake anger:ha bcs of your stupidity!i hv to go with you!
San rolls his eyes:oh really!

Rag:if you want to join you can join with me!and dont think i m coming for you! actually i love to watch football
San held her hand …ragini gives him a scary look…san immediately leaves her hand

San:hmm..ok..you r coming that’s enough for me!

Rag places her book in the bag!
Rag starts to walk!
San to librarian:thankyou madam!for bearing us

Librarian smiles: lover’s?even i had love marriage!

San:is it mam!wow in college
Librarian:yes..even i had the same attitude like her(looking at Rag)and my husband was a lover boy like you!
San forwards his hand for hifi! librarian hifies!
Rag was like ??????

Librarian:for seeing ppl will find how much they fight..bt to the reality the silly fights will only increase our love to the partner!

Rag?:mam..we aren’t lover’s
Librarian smiles:even i was saying this??
San and the librarian again hifies
Rag stamps her foot and storms out

San checks the time:my match!
He runs….

Rag laughs seeing him running like a maniac
Rag loudly:all the best
San smiles and turns while running: i won’t say thankyou Ms.tigress!

Here everone were searching for sanskar

San reaches there breathing heavily

San friend samay:wr were you man?bcs you we would hv got penalty!
San:sorry sorry!

And the match begin

Rag goes and sits next to avni
Avni gives her a teasing smile
Rag:i know that you r going to give audition for close up add…dont show everyone!
Avni hits her playfully:you had to prepare for exam ryte
Rag:i had..bt i love football
Avni:u love football or….u love the player in…..
Rag???:avni!pehle woh librarian ab tum!

Avni:wat?wat librarian!did i miss something!
Rag:avni do you want to reach hospital?
Avni:yes..??if i get to know wat hpnd?
Rag fake anger:pagal..

They sees the match

In the front seats of RagNi..swara and her gang comes and sits there

Sw and her gang were screaming: Sanskar Sanskar Sanskar

Avni:Ragini…kaali billi ne Raastha kaatli hai..bandha haar na jaye bass
Rag laughs:ha!

Soniya who listened this:whom you comment kaali billi?
Avni burst into laughter confusing everyone including Ragini

Avni: hahahaha ????????

Rag hits her through elbow

Rag raises her eyesbrows asking her wat?

Avni waves her hand and sees Sonia and again laughs

Sw:i think she need psychiatrist

Sw turns! And all again gets busy in match

Rag audible to avni:why were you laughing?
Avni:who knows?aivain…
Rag???:u seriously need a doctor
Avni:arey…. actually u know na meri aur us soniya ki banti nahi!
Rag:ha tho!tum has kyun rai thi

Avni: actually i just wanted to save myself bcs i dont want another Ragini and Swara na!
Rag hits ger head plaufully:pagal!

 

They see the match where sanskar’s doing goals!

And finally match ends with sanskar’s team winning and sanskar being a man of the match

 

Sw:yay!

Avni:why this kaali billi is getting so happy?
Sw runs down and hugs sanskar…wch shocks sanskar more

Avni:why did she hug?
Rag:do you love sanskar?
Avni:waaaaaaaaatttt?
Rag:then why r u feeling jealous?
Avni:arey… actually MAYBE (She drags the word)he is my future jiju
Rag sarcastic:arey avni you only hv 2 brthrs na how sanskar will be your jiju?
Avni smiles:if he marries my one and only friend then?
Rag:ahhh..now i feel u r becoming like swara?always annoying me

Avni:aeee… don’t compare me to her..ha..mein kahan aur woh kahan..mein film ki heroin tho woh villian

Rag laughs:and wat abt me?

Avni smirks:Sanskar mera bhai aur tu meri bhabhi film mein reality mein jiju aur dosth

Before ragini could react acni runs down to sanskar…she sees swara and soniya talking to Sanskar

Avni runs fast and wantedly pushes swara and soniya!
San at first gets stumbled

Avni:awww…sorry swara and soni..ya
Both were burning in anger!

But they fakes a smile

Intelligent avni hv found out that swara will not react anything infront of Sanskar ??

Avni shakes her hand with sanskar:congrats congrats congratulations!

San smiles..:cool down cool down
Avni:mein na aisi hi hoon..wn i get excited na..i dont see wheter kaali billi ya chuha khadi ho..mein bhaagti jaati hoon..woh na mere pairon ke neeche kuchal jaaye tab bhi nai dekhti

Soniya angrily:even rat wills na it will hunt your beautiful foot

Avni:that means…you r rat???haha…haha!
San who was controlling his laughter burst into laughter!

Swara and soniya moves from there…

Soniya sees ragini coming
Rag sees her..she felt wierd

Soniya shows her finger like warning ragini☝
Soniya didnt see front..she dashes with a teacher…who scolds her like soniya has tried to attempt murder on her
Swara goes from there giving a look to Ragini

Rag laughs and goes!

 

Rag: congrats!
San:well..thankyou!
Avni wantedly pushes Ragini over san

San held her from waist protectively

Ragsan hv a eyelock!
While acni admires them!

 

To be continued….

 

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A12345

    Fan of drashti&gurmeet and obviously tevar my ragsan???i get new story on them everyday bt too busy to write?

    27 Comments

    1. Manisha on January 30, 2018 1:05 am

      Awesome

    2. Manu on January 30, 2018 1:09 am

      Amazing!!!!

    3. vini on January 30, 2018 6:04 am

      awesome

    4. Divi on January 30, 2018 6:56 am

      That’s superb…w8ing for next

    5. Satya on January 30, 2018 6:59 am

      Nice

    6. RAGSANIAN on January 30, 2018 7:38 am

      Amazingggggggggg

    7. PriyaS on January 30, 2018 8:22 am

      Nice

    8. Ammy on January 30, 2018 11:18 am

      Awesome

    9. sug on January 30, 2018 4:24 pm

      Ossssooommmmmmmmmm

    10. Mk on January 30, 2018 4:32 pm

      Fabulouuuuusssss aliya❤❤❤❤

    11. moni on January 30, 2018 4:39 pm

      Superb. Loved avni scenes

    12. shrilatha on January 30, 2018 4:59 pm

      Guess I am liking Avni more

    13. keerthi on January 30, 2018 5:04 pm

      Awesomeee. It’s really cute update

    14. Anu on January 30, 2018 5:12 pm

      Too good amazing

    15. maha on January 30, 2018 5:24 pm

      Superb. Loved ragsanavi scenes

    16. shalini on January 30, 2018 5:32 pm

      Awesome

    17. nive on January 30, 2018 6:00 pm

      Sissy superb I love avni more than my ragsan in this story.

    18. Rikashini on January 30, 2018 6:00 pm

      Superb beautiful

    19. Ishu on January 30, 2018 6:24 pm

      Nice

    20. Neethu on January 30, 2018 6:42 pm

      In their tashan also lovely. This story is unique one.

    21. vani on January 30, 2018 6:55 pm

      Amazing dear

    22. geet on January 30, 2018 7:17 pm

      Superb ragini also have some feelings for sanskar. Superb

    23. Ria on January 30, 2018 7:32 pm

      Avni love you baby…. superb di…. update pyaar ki daastan…

    24. aditi on January 30, 2018 8:06 pm

      Awesome

    25. Pinky on January 30, 2018 9:01 pm

      Superb. Ragavni were fabulous.

    26. asra on January 30, 2018 9:59 pm

      awesome dear….loved it alot…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear

    27. Rehna on February 6, 2018 10:50 pm

      Superb dear

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